Satsuriku no Tenshi:Volume 1 Chapter 4 - Revision history

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	“Was I useful to you?” Ray asks in a serious voice as she looks up at the man, thirty centimetres taller than her.		“Was I useful to you?” Ray asks in a serious voice as she looks up at the man, thirty centimetres taller than her.

	“Uh…anyway, stop! Stop with that ‘you’ thing. It’s creepy.” *		“Uh…anyway, stop! Stop with that ‘you’<ref>Ray uses a form of “you” that is polite. Zack doesn’t like it.</ref> thing. It’s creepy.” *

	“…Then, Isaac?” Ray tilts her head like a little bird.		“…Then, Isaac?” Ray tilts her head like a little bird.
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			==Chapter 4 - Floor B4==

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	* Note: Ray uses a form of “you” that is polite. Zack doesn’t like it.		* Note: Ray uses a form of “you” that is polite. Zack doesn’t like it.

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	(''Rachel will definitely be mine. After all, I fell in love with her at first sight.'')		(''Rachel will definitely be mine. After all, I fell in love with her at first sight.'')

	Eddie’s voice fades away, and the sound of door opening rings out through the room.		Eddie’s voice fades away, and the sound of a door opening rings out through the room.

	“Shit, that bastard ran away!” Zack stomps the ground. Then he turns to look at Ray, looking slightly angry.		“Shit, that bastard ran away!” Zack stomps the ground. Then he turns to look at Ray, looking slightly angry.

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	“I’m freezin’, so I’m gettin’ out of here!”		“I’m freezin’, so I’m gettin’ out of here!”

	“…Okay.” The girl nods, her expression gloomy. Even though she’s that promise with him, she has no positive proof that he’ll keep it. If he winds up not killing her…she can no longer see any reason to want to leave this place.		“…Okay.” The girl nods, her expression gloomy. Even though she’s made that promise with him, she has no positive proof that he’ll keep it. If he winds up not killing her…she can no longer see any reason to want to leave this place.

	There’s an uncomfortable silence between them now as they leave the storage room. This time, they go down a hallway. There, they find a door with a signboard that states “First Cemetery”.		There’s an uncomfortable silence between them now as they leave the storage room. This time, they go down a hallway. There, they find a door with a signboard that states “First Cemetery”.

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	“Aah…just shut up already. I’m talking to Rachel right now.” Eddie’s voice sounds absolutely disgusted.		“Aah…just shut up already. I’m talking to Rachel right now.” Eddie’s voice sounds absolutely disgusted.

	(…Talking…? ''Yer just ~~threatening~~ her''…!)		(…Talking…? ''Yer just manipulating her''…!)

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	* Note: Ray uses a form of “you” that is polite. Zack doesn’t like it.		* Note: Ray uses a form of “you” that is polite. Zack doesn’t like it.

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	Left alone among the graves, Zack mumbles to himself.		Left alone among the graves, Zack mumbles to himself.

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	For some reason, the thought that she could be killed by someone else irritates him. But when he looks into her eyes, like a still lake – any desire to kill melts away.		For some reason, the thought that she could be killed by someone else irritates him. But when he looks into her eyes, like a still lake – any desire to kill melts away.

			“…Because suicide isn’t allowed.” After a long silence, Ray finally speaks, her words like scatters of rainfall.

			“Aah? Why’s that?”

			“….God…because God said so.” Ray’s eyes grow distant. She recalls the book she had read that moonlit night. But Zack ridicules her serious words.

			“Heh…God, huh. Then put some effort into makin’ me want t’ kill ya.”

			(Effort…?)

			Ray can’t think of anything. After all, to this man, killing someone must be as easy as eating a piece of candy. That was how he had killed Doctor Danny. He’d cut through his body without an ounce of hesitation. But when Ray asks him to kill her, he won’t. And she can’t understand why that is.

			“What should I…?”

			“Huh? Be useful. And if ya want me t’ kill ya, stop makin’ that boring face. If you’re a human…you can get angry, and cry, and stuff like that, right?”

			“Get angry, or cry…?” He probably doesn’t like expressionless faces. Thinking this, she tries to make some sort of face. And though she childishly tries to do so, her eyes remain utterly dead.

			“Do ya even got face muscles…? Maybe yer already dead, or a ghost or somethin’.” Zack seems to come to a similar conclusion. Though a ghost likely wouldn’t wish someone to kill them.

			(A ghost…)

			Ray’s eyebrows lower slightly. It’s rather irritating for him to call her a ghost.

			“…I’m alive, that’s why I want you to kill me.”

			“Argh, I get it. C’mon, try smiling.” Despite her dark expression, the man continues to lightly give her orders.

			(''Smile.'')

			Perhaps that’s proof that she’s alive.

			“…How is this?” The corners of her lips pull up in a faint curve. She tries with all her might to smile. But as Zack had pointed out, it seems like her facial muscles simply don’t respond.

			“Yer eyes are totally dead.” From Zack’s point of view, that was by no means a smile.

			“I see…so it’s no good,” Ray mumbles, feeling discouraged. But that emotion also doesn’t reach Zack’s ears.

			(…I don’t even know if she’s even alive.)

			“But…I’m not a ghost,” Ray continues, as if she had read Zack’s mind. She thinks she won’t be afraid no matter how scary a person she sees. But she absolutely can’t accept that she’s a ghost. She feels so uncomfortable at the thought that Zack might see her as one that she unthinkingly rejects it.

			“Hah? What, I know that! Ghosts don’t exist, idiot!”

			“Eh…? They don’t?” Ray looks utterly surprised. She recalls a horror program she had watched one night when she couldn’t sleep, in a pitch-black room. Even if it had only been a fake ghost – after seeing it, she’d been so unnerved at seeing the strange spirit on the screen that she had thought they might truly exist. Sometimes, it frightened her to the point she couldn’t sleep. She truly doesn’t like ghosts.

			“‘Course they don’t! Yer weird, that’s why I called ya a ghost! If they really existed, they’d prolly be around here somewhere.” Zack is strangely serious in response to her speculative questions about ghosts.

			(Oh…)

			Certainly, it wouldn’t be odd for them to be in a building like this. But, since she hasn’t seen any, it might really be as Zack says…they might not exist…

			(Does she seriously believe in ghosts…?)

			“Anyway, how old are ya?” Zack asks, abruptly curious. He can tell she’s younger than him just by looking at her…but she’s smart, believes in ghosts, and wants to die – he has no idea exactly how old she is.

			“I’m 13…” She answers honestly. There’s no particular need to lie. And Zack had said that he hates liars.

			(13, huh. Still a brat.)

			“And you are?”

			“Ah? I’m an adult,” he replies. He likes saying that – it’s cooler to say he’s an adult than to say he’s 20.

			“…An adult?”

			(Maybe 20?)

			At only 13, being 20 years old seems quite a bit older than her. But the Zack in front of her doesn’t ''feel'' older. Perhaps the only thing that makes him seem older is the fact that he’s taller than her.

			“Ah, but that doesn’t matter. Do something with that mechanism or whatever it is and get back here.”

			(We just wasted time on dumb crap…)

			He can’t just stay in this water forever. He’s getting a little irritated at the cold.

			“Yeah. I’ll go check out the floor in the crack.”

			Zack had been the one to ask about her age first…so, feeling somewhat gloomy, she turns toward the door. They can’t afford to prolong their conversation.

			“And hurry it up!”

			“Okay.” Nodding, Ray leaves.

			As she walks back to the First Cemetery, her heart whirls a little as she recalls the words on the memo – ''I can kill you.''

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