Seiken Tsukai No World Break:Volume 1 Prologue - Revision history

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172.69.33.146 at 18:02, 25 October 2018

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	Listening to Satsuki’s complains, Moroha is reaching his limits.		Listening to Satsuki’s complains, Moroha is reaching his limits.

	(I’m only 15 years old. It’s a first to be called a heart-breaker….”		(I’m only 15 years old. It’s a first to be called a heart-breaker….”)
	Obviously clueless, Moroha can only sigh in his heart.		Obviously clueless, Moroha can only sigh in his heart.
	Being scolded fiercely for no reason, yet he can’t do anything.		Being scolded fiercely for no reason, yet he can’t do anything.
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	“Don’t go back to sleep!”		“Don’t go back to sleep!”

	I got into trouble because of you. Moroha cannot help but palming his face.		"I got into trouble because of you." Moroha cannot help but palming his face.

	“Hey! Wake up, you succubus.”		“Hey! Wake up, you succubus.”

162.158.122.9 at 19:06, 11 October 2018

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	“I see. Did you call me Onii-sama?” Moroha tried to remember the dream he just had.		“I see. Did you call me Onii-sama?” Moroha tried to remember the dream he just had.

	“I can’t say with that atmosphere…..we're of a pair of siblings.”		“I can’t say with that atmosphere…..we're a pair of siblings.”
	(“I can’t say that given that atmosphere…we were JUST of a pair of siblings.” )		(“I can’t say that given that atmosphere…we were JUST a pair of siblings.” )

	“That’s not true. We were JUST a normal pair of siblings.”		“That’s not true. We were JUST a normal pair of siblings.”

162.158.122.9 at 18:01, 11 October 2018

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	He can only think that the world is playing some kind of a joke on him.		He can only think that the world is playing some kind of a joke on him.

	This is not the time to be fantasizing. But looking at the steaming Satsuki who is covering her mouth with both ~~hand~~ and a look of [Oops, I said it]; he cannot help but recall that scene in his dream again.		This is not the time to be fantasizing. But looking at the steaming Satsuki who is covering her mouth with both hands and a look of [Oops, I said it]; he cannot help but recall that scene in his dream again.

	“………………”		“………………”

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	Moroha is staring fixedly at Shizuno.		Moroha is staring fixedly at Shizuno.

	“Ummm,ummmm, Moroha? This…this girl…….” Looks like Satsuki also noticed it.		“Ummm, ummmm, Moroha? This…this girl…….” Looks like Satsuki also noticed it.

	Both of them concentrated on Shizuno.		Both of them concentrated on Shizuno.

172.69.69.103 at 00:26, 12 July 2018

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	Her eyes are closed, but what’s alarming is that there's totally no breathing motion on her packed chest. It looked like…Moroha forced down his rising panic, and rushed forward to check on her condition. Supporting himself on her chair, he lean down and put his face in front of hers.		Her eyes are closed, but what’s alarming is that there's totally no breathing motion on her packed chest. It looked like…Moroha forced down his rising panic, and rushed forward to check on her condition. Supporting himself on her chair, he lean down and put his face in front of hers.

	Her neck is so white that one could not ~~imaging~~ that there’s blood flowing under the skin.		Her neck is so white that one could not imagine that there’s blood flowing under the skin.

	(You are joking. Tell me this isn’t happening…)		(You are joking. Tell me this isn’t happening…)
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	Gently but firmly his face is pulled right to the front of Shizuno’s face.		Gently but firmly his face is pulled right to the front of Shizuno’s face.

	Having ~~Waken~~ up silently and stealthily, her eyes are already opened.		Having woken up silently and stealthily, her eyes are already opened.

	Those deep dark orbs are concentrated on Moroha’s features.		Those deep dark orbs are concentrated on Moroha’s features.
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	While harmlessly joking around, this is proving to be quite fun. Moroha really thought that.		While harmlessly joking around, this is proving to be quite fun. Moroha really thought that.

	“Why are the two of you ~~looks~~ like you are enjoying yourselves? Even though it’s your first meeting?”		“Why are the two of you looking like you are enjoying yourselves? Even though it’s your first meeting?”

	Moroha heard this very displeased voice. For Satsuki who was temporarily pushed out of the scene, she started expelling her angst as only a young girl could, with tears in her eyes.		Moroha heard this very displeased voice. For Satsuki who was temporarily pushed out of the scene, she started expelling her angst as only a young girl could, with tears in her eyes.

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	“ The principal said this.” Satsuki starts orating with elation.		“ The principal said this.” Satsuki starts orating with elation.

	“ 'We are the <Saviors> specially chosen from everywhere in Japan. Ones who possess power. Thus, we ~~cannot~~ never forget our responsibilities and duties which must be taken up! Our gifts must be used for justice…….' That’s what the principal said. Don’t you think its valuable input?”		“ 'We are the <Saviors> specially chosen from everywhere in Japan. Ones who possess power. Thus, we can never forget our responsibilities and duties which must be taken up! Our gifts must be used for justice…….' That’s what the principal said. Don’t you think its valuable input?”

	Satsuki, who is getting more excited as she goes on, started twisting her body. Originally holding her arms, it became like hugging herself with her face flushing red.		Satsuki, who is getting more excited as she goes on, started twisting her body. Originally holding her arms, it became like hugging herself with her face flushing red.

FallenSky at 12:20, 4 February 2017

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	“It’s not that I have no enthusiasm.” After reflecting, he feels that he should explain himself.		“It’s not that I have no enthusiasm.” After reflecting, he feels that he should explain himself.

	“It’s just that the principal’s welcoming address was too long, and I ~~doze~~ off unknowingly. I will be motivated from now, so please spare me.”		“It’s just that the principal’s welcoming address was too long, and I dozed off unknowingly. I will be motivated from now, so please spare me.”

	“Her speech wasn’t that long.” Although he has already lowered his head, it only resulted in Satsuki’s reproach.		“Her speech wasn’t that long.” Although he has already lowered his head, it only resulted in Satsuki’s reproach.

FallenSky at 10:19, 4 February 2017

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	The supposed kiss, was actually a headbutt.		The supposed kiss, was actually a headbutt.

			[[File:SeiKen_Tsukai_no_World_Break 01_026.jpg\|thumbnail]]

	What was supposed to be lip to lip, was actually forehead to forehead.		What was supposed to be lip to lip, was actually forehead to forehead.
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	Her rare, cute voice rang out like a clear bell. What a waste.		Her rare, cute voice rang out like a clear bell. What a waste.

	~~Holding~~ her arms, the single ponytail tied on the left side of her head swaying around like a whip.		Folding her arms, the single ponytail tied on the left side of her head swaying around like a whip.

	~~[[File:SeiKen_Tsukai_no_World_Break 01_026.jpg\|thumbnail]]~~

	“What are you trying to do all of a sudden…?” Moroha glared at her while holding his forehead.		“What are you trying to do all of a sudden…?” Moroha glared at her while holding his forehead.