Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 6 Prologue - Revision history

Foggy glasses: Grammar changes and restructuring

2018-10-22T08:31:13Z

Grammar changes and restructuring

Zxzxzx: Ceres -> Celes

2016-11-04T04:52:43Z

Ceres -> Celes

Zxzxzx: minor corrections to part 3

2016-11-04T04:50:56Z

minor corrections to part 3

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	“Hey! Oscar!”		“Hey! Oscar!”

	At that instant, a girl wearing a maid attire appeared with a grumpy looking face. Her silver coloured ponytail was swinging around as she was climbing up the hill.		At that instant, a girl wearing maid attire appeared with a grumpy looking face. Her silver coloured ponytail was swinging around as she was climbing up the hill.

	Her maid attire was full of black coloured accessories. It bears a different concept compare to the rest of the maid attires where its colour was a total black. And the short skirt gave her a lively impression.		Her maid attire was full of black coloured accessories. It bears a different concept compare to the rest of the maid attires where its colour was a total black. And the short skirt gave her a lively impression.
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	After he took the documents, the nobleman called Oscar started flipping through it.		After he took the documents, the nobleman called Oscar started flipping through it.

	“…Hmm. So ~~Zacherias~~ had his eyes on Eco now? He probably knew that she is the descendant of the Avalon’s holy dragons' emperor family.”		“…Hmm. So Zacharias had his eyes on Eco now? He probably knew that she is the descendant of the Avalon’s holy dragons' emperor family.”

	“Though he may be old, he is still the king of Chevron. You better not look down on that old chap’s information network.”		“Though he may be old, he is still the king of Chevron. You better not look down on that old chap’s information network.”

Ruifung: Minor wording fixes.

2016-06-02T08:53:22Z

Minor wording fixes.

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TJYYEO: /* Part 2 */

2014-07-08T06:27:44Z

Part 2

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	“Thank you. When I was still in prison… My mind was in a total mess when you first showed up. But, thanks to that, I realized that the person that I swore loyalty to isn’t you, but Milgauss-sama…”		“Thank you. When I was still in prison… My mind was in a total mess when you first showed up. But, thanks to that, I realized that the person that I swore loyalty to isn’t you, but Milgauss-sama…”

	“As that feller’s ex-master, I would like to thank you. Thanks to you, she ~~was~~ never lonely.”		“As that feller’s ex-master, I would like to thank you. Thanks to you, she never had to be lonely.”

	“…Over there, what are you doing! Can’t you be quick!”		“…Over there, what are you doing! Can’t you be quick!”

Yoyoyo5678: /* Part 2 */ typo

2014-07-07T16:11:43Z

Part 2: typo

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	Julius eyes were staring afar blankly under the mask.		Julius eyes were staring afar blankly under the mask.

	“That is why Mordred appointed you as the leader of the Tantalos. Mordred had deceived many people like the Count of the Vandenhaar borders for ~~his~~ own purposes but she was only nice to you. But, it is fate that the ending turned out this way.”		“That is why Mordred appointed you as the leader of the Tantalos. Mordred had deceived many people like the Count of the Vandenhaar borders for her own purposes but she was only nice to you. But, it is fate that the ending turned out this way.”

	“Thank you. When I was still in prison… My mind was in a total mess when you first showed up. But, thanks to that, I realized that the person that I swore loyalty to isn’t you, but Milgauss-sama…”		“Thank you. When I was still in prison… My mind was in a total mess when you first showed up. But, thanks to that, I realized that the person that I swore loyalty to isn’t you, but Milgauss-sama…”

TJYYEO: /* Part 3 */

2014-07-07T15:06:18Z

Part 3

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	“In our country, that rumour had caused a huge uproar, since that was the first time Uriel announced that he had a girlfriend. Some of the nobleman’s daughters even blasted that Uriel was deceived by a bitch.”		“In our country, that rumour had caused a huge uproar, since that was the first time Uriel announced that he had a girlfriend. Some of the nobleman’s daughters even blasted that Uriel was deceived by a bitch.”

	“Huhu. Whatever it may be, nothing can be done since their opponent is Diabolic Belladonna<ref>魔性の妖花, literally means a diabolical flower or a ~~deviling~~ beautiful woman. </ref>, Cassandra Lautreamont. In among the four Lautreamont sisters… In among the authentic gemstones, she is the one who stood out. In another words, she is a witch.”		“Huhu. Whatever it may be, nothing can be done since their opponent is Diabolic Belladonna<ref>魔性の妖花, literally means a diabolical flower or a devilish beautiful woman. </ref>, Cassandra Lautreamont. In among the four Lautreamont sisters… In among the authentic gemstones, she is the one who stood out. In another words, she is a witch.”

	“That being said, knowing Uriel’s personality, he is never Cassandra’s pet. On the other hand, I don’t think he had the intention of handing over Avalon’s daughter over to Zacherias.”		“That being said, knowing Uriel’s personality, he is never Cassandra’s pet. On the other hand, I don’t think he had the intention of handing over Avalon’s daughter over to Zacherias.”

Bakapervert at 03:15, 7 July 2014

2014-07-07T03:15:25Z

TJYYEO: /* Part 1 */

2014-07-06T06:23:49Z

Part 1

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	The normal Anya would choose to settle it by swinging her whip.		The normal Anya would choose to settle it by swinging her whip.

	Since her ~~hand cuffs~~ had been removed and there were only four soldiers, there were like logs to Anya who had mastered the use of whip.		Since her handcuff had been removed and there were only four soldiers, there were like logs to Anya who had mastered the use of whip.

	“…I understand.”		“…I understand.”

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	Her rude tone doesn’t make her sound like a maid.		Her rude tone doesn’t make her sound like a maid.

	“Thanks for the hard work, ~~Ceres~~.”		“Thanks for the hard work, Celes.”

	After he took the documents, the nobleman called Oscar started flipping through it.		After he took the documents, the nobleman called Oscar started flipping through it.
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	“Though he may be old, he is still the king of Chevron. You better not look down on that old chap’s information network.”		“Though he may be old, he is still the king of Chevron. You better not look down on that old chap’s information network.”

	Oscar continued reading the documents without answering ~~Ceres~~.		Oscar continued reading the documents without answering Celes.

	“Huhu, so Uriel had begun to make his move. Recently, I had heard rumours about him gotten his hands on Lautreamont’s royal family’s second daughter.”		“Huhu, so Uriel had begun to make his move. Recently, I had heard rumours about him gotten his hands on Lautreamont’s royal family’s second daughter.”
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	“That being said, knowing Uriel’s personality, he is never Cassandra’s pet. On the other hand, I don’t think he had the intention of handing over Avalon’s daughter over to Zacherias.”		“That being said, knowing Uriel’s personality, he is never Cassandra’s pet. On the other hand, I don’t think he had the intention of handing over Avalon’s daughter over to Zacherias.”

	“However, ~~Ceres~~, even I wouldn’t hand Eco over to either Zacherias or Uriel."		“However, Celes, even I wouldn’t hand Eco over to either Zacherias or Uriel."

	Oscar stood up and patted his dragon.		Oscar stood up and patted his dragon.
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	Maestro Tristan gave a loud roar.		Maestro Tristan gave a loud roar.

	~~“Ceres~~, would you also stay by my side?”		“Celes, would you also stay by my side?”

	Unfortunately, ~~Ceres~~ wasn’t as motivated as Tristan.		Unfortunately, Celes wasn’t as motivated as Tristan.

	She shook her ponytail and turned her head aside.		She shook her ponytail and turned her head aside.

	“Hey, that isn’t good enough, you know… ~~Ceres~~.”		“Hey, that isn’t good enough, you know… Celes.”

	~~Ceres~~ while still looking aside, mumbled in a rotten mood:		Celes while still looking aside, mumbled in a rotten mood:

	“As fellow outcast, I will think about it.”		“As fellow outcast, I will think about it.”

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	Her opponent was just a mere soldier of the Knight Country.		Her opponent was just a mere soldier of the Knight Country.

	The normal Anya would ~~choose~~ to settle it by swinging her whip.		The normal Anya would've chosen to settle it by swinging her whip.

	Since her ~~handcuff~~ had been removed and there were only four soldiers, they were like logs to Anya who had mastered the use of whip.		Since her handcuffs had been removed and there were only four soldiers, they were like logs to Anya who had mastered the use of a whip.

	“…I understand.”		“…I understand.”

	Anya tried to resist ~~her~~ urge.		Anya tried to resist the urge.

	Right now, Anya doesn’t even have the right to resist.		Right now, Anya doesn’t even have the right to resist.

	Anya who was caught as a terrorist would normally undergo harsh interrogations to force out information from her and after everything is over, she ~~will~~ be sent to the gallows. <ref>It was never specified whether it was to be hung or beheaded.</ref>		Anya who was caught as a terrorist would normally undergo harsh interrogations to force out information from her and after everything is over, she would be sent to the gallows. <ref>It was never specified whether it was to be hung or beheaded.</ref>

	Lautreamont Knight Country ~~who~~ emphasis on the codes of knights had a highly developed sets of laws. However, the way they ~~treat terrorist~~ was no different from the other countries.		Lautreamont Knight Country which placed an emphasis on the codes of knights had highly developed sets of laws. However, the way they treated terrorists was no different from the other countries.

	Anya had prepared herself mentally while she was in the cold cell.		Anya had prepared herself mentally while she was in the cold cell.
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	First, she was released from the dungeon and was relocated to the guest room of the castle.		First, she was released from the dungeon and was relocated to the guest room of the castle.

	The person in charge of ~~surveilling~~ her was Avdocha the Convicted, the person responsible for capturing Anya. Anya wondered if Avdocha was confident in her skill since she did had Anya’s handcuff removed.		The person in charge of watching her was Avdocha the Convicted, the person responsible for capturing Anya. Anya wondered if Avdocha was confident in her skill since she did had Anya’s handcuff removed.

	No, rather than saying ~~surveilling~~ over her, Avdocha had always treated her gently. But Anya could never bring herself to ask her why.		No, rather than saying watching over her, Avdocha had always treated her gently. But Anya could never bring herself to ask her why.

	Later, Veronica Lautreamont, the Iron Blood Valkyrie pleaded in her stead in the judicial department and thus Anya had escaped death.		Later, Veronica Lautreamont, the Iron Blood Valkyrie pleaded in her stead in the judicial department and thus Anya had escaped death.

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	The normal Anya would choose to settle it by swinging her whip.		The normal Anya would choose to settle it by swinging her whip.

	Since her handcuff had been removed and there were only four soldiers, ~~there~~ were like logs to Anya who had mastered the use of whip.		Since her handcuff had been removed and there were only four soldiers, they were like logs to Anya who had mastered the use of whip.

	“…I understand.”		“…I understand.”
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	Anya who was caught as a terrorist would normally undergo harsh interrogations to force out information from her and after everything is over, she will be sent to the gallows. <ref>It was never specified whether it was to be hung or beheaded.</ref>		Anya who was caught as a terrorist would normally undergo harsh interrogations to force out information from her and after everything is over, she will be sent to the gallows. <ref>It was never specified whether it was to be hung or beheaded.</ref>

	~~Lautremont~~ Knight Country who emphasis on the codes of knights had a highly developed sets of laws. However, ~~they~~ way they treat terrorist was no different from the other countries.		Lautreamont Knight Country who emphasis on the codes of knights had a highly developed sets of laws. However, the way they treat terrorist was no different from the other countries.

	Anya had prepared herself mentally while she was in the cold cell.		Anya had prepared herself mentally while she was in the cold cell.
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	“Thanks for the hard work, Ceres.”		“Thanks for the hard work, Ceres.”

	After he took the documents, the nobleman called Oscar started flipping through it.”		After he took the documents, the nobleman called Oscar started flipping through it.

	“…Hmm. So Zacherias had his eyes on Eco now? He probably knew that he she is the descendant of the Avalon’s holy dragons' emperor family.”		“…Hmm. So Zacherias had his eyes on Eco now? He probably knew that she is the descendant of the Avalon’s holy dragons' emperor family.”

	“Though he may be old, he is still the king of Chevron. You better not look down on that old chap’s information network.”		“Though he may be old, he is still the king of Chevron. You better not look down on that old chap’s information network.”
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	“Huhu. Whatever it may be, nothing can be done since their opponent is Diabolic Belladonna<ref>魔性の妖花, literally means a diabolical flower or a deviling beautiful woman. </ref>, Cassandra Lautreamont. In among the four Lautreamont sisters… In among the authentic gemstones, she is the one who stood out. In another words, she is a witch.”		“Huhu. Whatever it may be, nothing can be done since their opponent is Diabolic Belladonna<ref>魔性の妖花, literally means a diabolical flower or a deviling beautiful woman. </ref>, Cassandra Lautreamont. In among the four Lautreamont sisters… In among the authentic gemstones, she is the one who stood out. In another words, she is a witch.”

	“That being said, knowing Uriel’s personality, he is never Cassandra’s pet. ~~One~~ the other hand, I don’t think he had the intention of handing over Avalon’s daughter over to Zacherias.”		“That being said, knowing Uriel’s personality, he is never Cassandra’s pet. On the other hand, I don’t think he had the intention of handing over Avalon’s daughter over to Zacherias.”

	“However, Ceres, even I wouldn’t hand Eco over to either Zacherias or Uriel.		“However, Ceres, even I wouldn’t hand Eco over to either Zacherias or Uriel."

	Oscar stood up and patted his dragon.		Oscar stood up and patted his dragon.
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	Though his words may sound serious, Oscar was smiling the entire time.		Though his words may sound serious, Oscar was smiling the entire time.

	“Nevertheless, I had Tristan my best Pal. Would you stay with me even I had to become my father and brother’s enemy?”		“Nevertheless, I had Tristan my best Pal. Would you stay with me even if I had to become my father and brother’s enemy?”

	Maestro Tristan gave a loud roar.		Maestro Tristan gave a loud roar.