Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume10 Chapter1 - Revision history

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

2015-12-14T02:07:54Z

reformatting + consistency

Weaker: /* Part 1 */

2014-08-03T12:02:50Z

Part 1

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	"You just used a militarized spirit of that level. You can't possibly be not hungry."		"You just used a militarized spirit of that level. You can't possibly be not hungry."

	"Trained combatants from the «Instructional ~~School~~ can execute combat missions continuously for a week without eating."		"Trained combatants from the «Instructional School» can execute combat missions continuously for a week without eating."

	"...That's true. However, now is not the same kind of situation."		"...That's true. However, now is not the same kind of situation."

Royaloyalz: Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences

2013-04-23T01:14:55Z

Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences

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	"If I can't remember, then I won't recall it no matter how much I try. I basically remember nothing from my childhood or when I was first brought to the facility."		"If I can't remember, then I won't recall it no matter how much I try. I basically remember nothing from my childhood or when I was first brought to the facility."

	Indeed, in the dark dungeon where the flow of time could not be sensed, Kamito and others had received combat training nonstop.		Indeed, in the dark dungeon where the flow of time could not be sensed, Kamito and the others had received combat training nonstop.

	Or perhaps, it was precisely the combat training in the dungeon that gradually shaved off Kamito's memories and emotions, destroying them.		Or perhaps, it was precisely the combat training in the dungeon that gradually shaved off Kamito's memories and emotions, destroying them.

Code 06: Just adjusted the image to the right lines.

2013-03-29T16:26:46Z

Just adjusted the image to the right lines.

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	Ellis and Rinslet yelled at the same time.		Ellis and Rinslet yelled at the same time.

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	"...I-I need to feed you, Muir?"		"...I-I need to feed you, Muir?"
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	Kamito scratched his face awkwardly.		Kamito scratched his face awkwardly.
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	"...Onii-sama!"		"...Onii-sama!"

KuroiHikari: /* Part 2 */

2013-03-23T07:54:32Z

Part 2

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	After enjoying a modest yet delicious meal consisting of bread and soup only—		After enjoying a modest yet delicious meal consisting of bread and soup only—

	"...How vexing, Onii-sama really became the Demon ~~Lord~~ of the Night!"		"...How vexing, Onii-sama really became the Demon King of the Night!"

	Muir sulked and said.		Muir sulked and said.

Zzhk: Undo revision 235759 by 120.28.126.90 (talk) as stated previously, images are inserted where pages break in the text

2013-03-21T23:02:01Z

Undo revision 235759 by 120.28.126.90 (talk) as stated previously, images are inserted where pages break in the text

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	"Onii-sama must feed Muir. Or else Muir refuses to believe."		"Onii-sama must feed Muir. Or else Muir refuses to believe."
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	Suddenly, she said something incredible.		Suddenly, she said something incredible.

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	Kamito scratched his face awkwardly.		Kamito scratched his face awkwardly.
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	"...Onii-sama!"		"...Onii-sama!"

120.28.126.90: /* Part 1 */

2013-03-21T16:15:38Z

Part 1

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	"Onii-sama must feed Muir. Or else Muir refuses to believe."		"Onii-sama must feed Muir. Or else Muir refuses to believe."
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	Suddenly, she said something incredible.		Suddenly, she said something incredible.

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	Kamito scratched his face awkwardly.		Kamito scratched his face awkwardly.
	~~[[image:STnBD V10 041.jpg\|thumb]]~~

	"...Onii-sama!"		"...Onii-sama!"

80.223.220.209 at 10:46, 20 March 2013

2013-03-20T10:46:24Z

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	"...Hmph, n-not bad!"		"...Hmph, n-not bad!"

	She offered her comment as she turned her gaze away."		She offered her comment as she turned her gaze away.

	"A-Another, okay... Ah~!"		"A-Another, okay... Ah~!"
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	Muir turned away sullenly.		Muir turned away sullenly.

	"If I can't remember, then I won't recall it no matter how much I try. I basically remember nothing from my childhood or when I was first brought to the ~~faciliy~~."		"If I can't remember, then I won't recall it no matter how much I try. I basically remember nothing from my childhood or when I was first brought to the facility."

	Indeed, in the dark dungeon where the flow of time could not be sensed, Kamito and others had received combat training nonstop.		Indeed, in the dark dungeon where the flow of time could not be sensed, Kamito and others had received combat training nonstop.
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	"...What do you mean?"		"...What do you mean?"

	"Given Greyworth's resources, she should be able to fabricate family registry records for a younger sister. In addition, if I ask Rinslet, you can probably become a maid at the Laurenfrost family. After all, their only ~~requirement~~ for hiring maids is whether you're cute or not."		"Given Greyworth's resources, she should be able to fabricate family registry records for a younger sister. In addition, if I ask Rinslet, you can probably become a maid at the Laurenfrost family. After all, their only criterion for hiring maids is whether you're cute or not."

	"C-Cute!?"		"C-Cute!?"
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	"As a knight, what indecency have I committed..."		"As a knight, what indecency have I committed..."

	~~Finally~~ cleansed their bodies, they now found their minds instantly occupied by these worries.		Having finally cleansed their bodies, they now found their minds instantly occupied by these worries.

	For these sheltered highborn ladies, the "Ah~" act just now was too stimulating.		For these sheltered highborn ladies, the "Ah~" act just now was too stimulating.
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	Wringing the water out of her wet hair, Rinslet spoke up at this time.		Wringing the water out of her wet hair, Rinslet spoke up at this time.

	"That girl who uses militarized spirits. Just a little bit, she reminds me of Claire in the past ~~a little bit~~."		"That girl who uses militarized spirits. Just a little bit, she reminds me of Claire in the past."

	"...In hairstyle?"		"...In hairstyle?"

Zzhk at 07:25, 20 March 2013

2013-03-20T07:25:35Z

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	Muir pressed her index finger against her lips.		Muir pressed her index finger against her lips.

	"Muir and others ~~where~~ gathered for the sake of making Onii-sama awaken."		"Muir and others were gathered for the sake of making Onii-sama awaken."

	"—'Awaken.'"		"—'Awaken.'"
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	...For some reason, the word made him feel quite unsettled.		...For some reason, the word made him feel quite unsettled.

	"So, awakening ~~meas~~... Making me retrieve my past power?"		"So, awakening means... Making me retrieve my past power?"

	"Who knows? Indeed, Onii-sama is a lot more useless than before."		"Who knows? Indeed, Onii-sama is a lot more useless than before."
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	Kamito muttered to himself mentally.		Kamito muttered to himself mentally.

	According to Fianna who was captured by Sjora Kahn once, Kamito was the current reincarnation of the «Demon King» who inherited the power of the Darkness Elemental Lord, «Ren ~~Asdoll»~~.		According to Fianna who was captured by Sjora Kahn once, Kamito was the current reincarnation of the «Demon King» who inherited the power of the Darkness Elemental Lord, «Ren Ashdoll».

	(...Within my body, is that kind of existence really present?)		(...Within my body, is that kind of existence really present?)

143.167.244.151: "—" not needed.

2013-03-20T03:25:45Z

"—" not needed.

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