Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume10 Chapter7 - Revision history

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

2015-12-14T02:15:06Z

reformatting + consistency

Zzhk: /* Part 3 */

2013-08-14T17:02:44Z

Part 3

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	Holding the shining «Demon Slayer» in one hand, Kamito took half a step sideways.		Holding the shining «Demon Slayer» in one hand, Kamito took half a step sideways.

	The fastest flash. Absolute Blade Arts, First Form—«Purple Lightning»'s ~~form~~.		The fastest flash. Absolute Blade Arts, First Form—«Purple Lightning»'s posture.

	The wind from Leonora's sword swept up debris as she charged. Raising the «Dragon Slayer» overhead in preparation for a downward chop, she intended to decide the victor with a one-hit-kill just as she declared.		The wind from Leonora's sword swept up debris as she charged. Raising the «Dragon Slayer» overhead in preparation for a downward chop, she intended to decide the victor with a one-hit-kill just as she declared.

Zzhk at 16:55, 14 August 2013

2013-08-14T16:55:12Z

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	In that instant, Kamito took action.		In that instant, Kamito took action.

	The secret technique ~~of the Absolute Blade~~ was no ordinary sword counter. One needed to sense the flow of divine power in the incoming attack and synchronize with the flow while engaging in the blade dance—Its true essence could be described as closer to a princess maiden's ritual dance performance in comparison to a blade dance.		The Absolute Blade's secret technique was no ordinary sword counter. One needed to sense the flow of divine power in the incoming attack and synchronize with the flow while engaging in the blade dance—Its true essence could be described as closer to a princess maiden's ritual dance performance in comparison to a blade dance.

	Then—		Then—

Zzhk: Reverted edits by 99.19.93.10 (talk) to last revision by Royaloyalz

2013-07-19T02:03:23Z

Reverted edits by 99.19.93.10 (talk) to last revision by Royaloyalz

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	Holding the shining «Demon Slayer» in one hand, Kamito took half a step sideways.		Holding the shining «Demon Slayer» in one hand, Kamito took half a step sideways.

	The fastest ~~slash~~. Absolute Blade Arts, First Form—~~«Violet Flash»~~'s ~~stance~~.		The fastest flash. Absolute Blade Arts, First Form—«Purple Lightning»'s form.

	The wind from Leonora's sword swept up debris as she charged. Raising the «Dragon Slayer» overhead in preparation for a downward chop, she intended to decide the victor with a one-hit-kill just as she declared.		The wind from Leonora's sword swept up debris as she charged. Raising the «Dragon Slayer» overhead in preparation for a downward chop, she intended to decide the victor with a one-hit-kill just as she declared.
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	Kamito took a step with explosive power from his legs.		Kamito took a step with explosive power from his legs.

	"Absolute Blade Arts, First Form—~~«Violet Flash»~~."		"Absolute Blade Arts, First Form—«Purple Lightning»."

	A flash of the blade akin to lightning.		A flash of the blade akin to lightning.
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	However, Kamito was pushed down by the momentum.		However, Kamito was pushed down by the momentum.

	"...This monstrous strength...!"		"...This, monstrous strength...!"

	"Hoho, I'll take that as a compliment."		"Hoho, I'll take that as a compliment."
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	In that instant, Kamito took action.		In that instant, Kamito took action.

	The secret technique of the ~~Last Strike~~ was no ordinary sword counter. One needed to sense the flow of divine power in the incoming attack and synchronize with the flow while engaging in the blade dance—Its true essence could be described as closer to a princess maiden's ritual dance performance in comparison to a blade dance.		The secret technique of the Absolute Blade was no ordinary sword counter. One needed to sense the flow of divine power in the incoming attack and synchronize with the flow while engaging in the blade dance—Its true essence could be described as closer to a princess maiden's ritual dance performance in comparison to a blade dance.

	Then—		Then—

99.19.93.10: /* Part 3 */

2013-07-19T01:52:14Z

Part 3

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	Holding the shining «Demon Slayer» in one hand, Kamito took half a step sideways.		Holding the shining «Demon Slayer» in one hand, Kamito took half a step sideways.

	The fastest ~~flash~~. Absolute Blade Arts, First Form—~~«Purple Lightning»~~'s ~~form~~.		The fastest slash. Absolute Blade Arts, First Form—«Violet Flash»'s stance.

	The wind from Leonora's sword swept up debris as she charged. Raising the «Dragon Slayer» overhead in preparation for a downward chop, she intended to decide the victor with a one-hit-kill just as she declared.		The wind from Leonora's sword swept up debris as she charged. Raising the «Dragon Slayer» overhead in preparation for a downward chop, she intended to decide the victor with a one-hit-kill just as she declared.
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	Kamito took a step with explosive power from his legs.		Kamito took a step with explosive power from his legs.

	"Absolute Blade Arts, First Form—~~«Purple Lightning»~~."		"Absolute Blade Arts, First Form—«Violet Flash»."

	A flash of the blade akin to lightning.		A flash of the blade akin to lightning.
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	However, Kamito was pushed down by the momentum.		However, Kamito was pushed down by the momentum.

	"...This, monstrous strength...!"		"...This monstrous strength...!"

	"Hoho, I'll take that as a compliment."		"Hoho, I'll take that as a compliment."
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	In that instant, Kamito took action.		In that instant, Kamito took action.

	The secret technique of the ~~Absolute Blade~~ was no ordinary sword counter. One needed to sense the flow of divine power in the incoming attack and synchronize with the flow while engaging in the blade dance—Its true essence could be described as closer to a princess maiden's ritual dance performance in comparison to a blade dance.		The secret technique of the Last Strike was no ordinary sword counter. One needed to sense the flow of divine power in the incoming attack and synchronize with the flow while engaging in the blade dance—Its true essence could be described as closer to a princess maiden's ritual dance performance in comparison to a blade dance.

	Then—		Then—

Royaloyalz: Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences

2013-04-23T02:45:39Z

Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences

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	"What are you talking about?"		"What are you talking about?"

	"I am saying that I intentionally allowed Kazehaya Kamito go first."		"I am saying that I intentionally allowed Kazehaya Kamito to go first."

	Snickering—the vivid red lips twisted into a crescent.		Snickering—the vivid red lips twisted into a crescent.
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	(This will work...!)		(This will work...!)

	His gaze met with Leonora who was about to ~~swung~~ her great sword.		His gaze met with Leonora who was about to swing her great sword.

	Turning the hilt that was carved with a dragon towards him—		Turning the hilt that was carved with a dragon towards him—

Ajmc93 at 05:17, 21 April 2013

2013-04-21T05:17:40Z

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	In that instant, the «Dragon Slayer» swung down. The instant the floor made of spirit crystal was struck by the tip of the sword, sparks flew and the floor shattered like glass.		In that instant, the «Dragon Slayer» swung down. The instant the floor made of spirit crystal was struck by the tip of the sword, sparks flew and the floor shattered like glass.

	«Terminus Est» was surely capable to enduring a blow from the «Dragon Slayer», but the wielder Kamito was a separate matter. He had no wish to engage in a battle of pure strength against a dragon elementalist whose body was physically strengthened.		«Terminus Est» was surely capable of enduring a blow from the «Dragon Slayer», but the wielder Kamito was a separate matter. He had no wish to engage in a battle of pure strength against a dragon elementalist whose body was physically strengthened.

	"Kamito-kun!"		"Kamito-kun!"

Shortykilz: /* Part 3 */

2013-03-31T00:48:29Z

Part 3

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	—No, that was not wind. Rather, the burgeoning divine power was being released from all over her body to an extent that was visible to the naked eye.		—No, that was not wind. Rather, the burgeoning divine power was being released from all over her body to an extent that was visible to the naked eye.

	(She's gambling everything on this move to decide the battle huh—!"		(She's gambling everything on this move to decide the battle huh—!)

	The initial exchanges were all undertaken in preparation for this move, because activating the magical equipment release required rousing the elemental waffe through a blade dance.		The initial exchanges were all undertaken in preparation for this move, because activating the magical equipment release required rousing the elemental waffe through a blade dance.

Shortykilz: /* Part 3 */

2013-03-31T00:45:17Z

Part 3

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	As sparks flew and scattered from the exchange of offense and defense, it looked like a magnificent dance to an observer—hence that was why duels between elementalists were known as blade dances.		As sparks flew and scattered from the exchange of offense and defense, it looked like a magnificent dance to an observer—hence that was why duels between elementalists were known as blade dances.

	Then the brief dance finally ~~approahced~~ its conclusion.		Then the brief dance finally approached its conclusion.

	"—O demon dragon «Nidhogg», unleash your wrath in my sword!"		"—O demon dragon «Nidhogg», unleash your wrath in my sword!"

80.223.220.209 at 12:11, 28 March 2013

2013-03-28T12:11:37Z

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	The «Knights of the Dragon Emperor»'s strongest ace—Leonora Lancaster.		The «Knights of the Dragon Emperor»'s strongest ace—Leonora Lancaster.

	Gazing down at Lily ~~collapses~~ on the ground, Leonora shrugged slightly.		Gazing down at Lily collapsed on the ground, Leonora shrugged slightly.

	"Amazing of you to fight me to this extent. Commendable."		"Amazing of you to fight me to this extent. Commendable."
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	An imposed transfer to «Ragna Ys» through teleportation magic.		An imposed transfer to «Ragna Ys» through teleportation magic.

	Without saying a word, Kamito could only ~~watched~~ silently.		Without saying a word, Kamito could only watch silently.

	Because tainting another elementalist's blade dance through interference was contrary to etiquette.		Because tainting another elementalist's blade dance through interference was contrary to etiquette.
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	Rinslet also nocked a new arrow of ice and aimed at the witch.		Rinslet also nocked a new arrow of ice and aimed at the witch.

	"We lost in the past, but given our current selves, keeping you occupied here is within our ability.		"We lost in the past, but given our current selves, keeping you occupied here is within our ability."

	"...Hmph."		"...Hmph."