Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume10 Chapter8 - Revision history

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

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reformatting + consistency

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2013-05-20T01:30:04Z

Part 2

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	Rubia accepted such a gaze from Kamito head on with her eyes of ruby.		Rubia accepted such a gaze from Kamito head on with her eyes of ruby.

	...For an instant, Kamito wondered if he was seeing things when he thought he ~~say~~ the flames in her eyes waver.		...For an instant, Kamito wondered if he was seeing things when he thought he saw the flames in her eyes waver.

	"You have no idea of the tragedies I have witnessed."		"You have no idea of the tragedies I have witnessed."

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2013-05-20T01:14:08Z

Part 2

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	Demonic flames capable of penetrating the «Demon Slayer»'s magical resistance of the highest class.		Demonic flames capable of penetrating the «Demon Slayer»'s magical resistance of the highest class.

	For flames to freeze other objects—this phenomenon completely ran counter to «Astral ~~Zero>~~'s principles.		For flames to freeze other objects—this phenomenon completely ran counter to «Astral Zero»'s principles.

	"This is the primordial flame inherited by the Elstein bloodline—"		"This is the primordial flame inherited by the Elstein bloodline—"

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2013-04-23T03:02:40Z

Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences

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	Completely ridiculous hogwash—dismissing her claim was all too easy.		Completely ridiculous hogwash—dismissing her claim was all too easy.

	However, Rubia Elstein's power was undeniable truth.		However, Rubia Elstein's power was the undeniable truth.

	"Speaking of irony, my existence itself is the most ironic. With the «Demon King»'s resurrection as my goal, intending to destroy the «Elemental Lords», for me to carry the power left behind by the «Elemental Lords». Or perhaps—"		"Speaking of irony, my existence itself is the most ironic. With the «Demon King»'s resurrection as my goal, intending to destroy the «Elemental Lords», for me to carry the power left behind by the «Elemental Lords». Or perhaps—"

Ajmc93 at 06:00, 21 April 2013

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	Even if Claire had fallen and become the «Darkness Queen», so long as Kamito did not awaken as the «Demon King», there was still a chance to save her.		Even if Claire had fallen and become the «Darkness Queen», so long as Kamito did not awaken as the «Demon King», there was still a chance to save her.

	"Claire is ~~you~~ sister, you know."		"Claire is your sister, you know."

	"Indeed. Having inherited the same blood of fire—which is why she is qualified to become a «Queen»."		"Indeed. Having inherited the same blood of fire—which is why she is qualified to become a «Queen»."
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	"—Come out from the gates of fiery hell, scorching hunting hounds."		"—Come out from the gates of fiery hell, scorching hunting hounds."

	Out from a magic circle that appeared in the air, three fiery «Hellhounds» were summoned, pouncing at Kamito from three different ~~direction~~.		Out from a magic circle that appeared in the air, three fiery «Hellhounds» were summoned, pouncing at Kamito from three different directions.

	"—Too slow."		"—Too slow."
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	Kamito's entire body broke out in cold sweat.		Kamito's entire body broke out in cold sweat.

	(...Truly monsters. Whether that spirit there or Rubia commanding it."		(...Truly monsters. Whether that spirit there or Rubia commanding it.)

	The archdemon of flame that singlehandedly destroyed the «Instructional School».		The archdemon of flame that singlehandedly destroyed the «Instructional School».

Zzhk at 06:56, 2 April 2013

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	Infusing as much divine power into the sword as he could, Kamito yelled inside his mind.		Infusing as much divine power into the sword as he could, Kamito yelled inside his mind.

	Rubia Elstein was the one who inherited the «Sacred Maiden»'s power. The ~~proper~~ successor of Areishia Idriss, Est's past contractor. It was not surprising for Est to waver.		Rubia Elstein was the one who inherited the «Sacred Maiden»'s power. The legitimate successor of Areishia Idriss, Est's past contractor. It was not surprising for Est to waver.

	However—		However—

Zzhk at 05:07, 29 March 2013

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	For flames to freeze other objects—this phenomenon completely ran counter to «Astral Zero>'s principles.		For flames to freeze other objects—this phenomenon completely ran counter to «Astral Zero>'s principles.

	"This is the ~~primitive~~ flame inherited by the Elstein bloodline—"		"This is the primordial flame inherited by the Elstein bloodline—"

	Receiving the frozen blade with one hand, Rubia spoke.		Receiving the frozen blade with one hand, Rubia spoke.

80.223.220.209 at 18:46, 28 March 2013

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	"W-Wait up... Humans can't really pass through this kind of place!"		"W-Wait up... Humans can't really pass through this kind of place!"

	However, these restraining words came to late and could no longer reach Scarlet on the other side.		However, these restraining words came too late and could no longer reach Scarlet on the other side.

	Left with no other recourse, Kamito tried to find a way around—		Left with no other recourse, Kamito tried to find a way around—
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	If the power of spirits disappeared from the continent, the world would surely fall into great chaos.		If the power of spirits disappeared from the continent, the world would surely fall into great chaos.

	This was the reappearance of the Ranbal War as Greyworth feared—No, it would cause a great war that no other war in the past could compare.		This was the reappearance of the Ranbal War as Greyworth feared—No, it would cause a great war that no other war in the past could compare to.

	"...How many lives do you think you'll sacrifice if you do that?"		"...How many lives do you think you'll sacrifice if you do that?"

Nukie at 17:04, 28 March 2013

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	However, as if mocking Kamito's efforts, the voice continued to whisper.		However, as if mocking Kamito's efforts, the voice continued to whisper.

	—~~From~~ a contract with me, Kamito.		—Form a contract with me, Kamito.

	—Then I can grant you the «Demon King»'s power, allowing you to rule the world.		—Then I can grant you the «Demon King»'s power, allowing you to rule the world.
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	Kamito yelled as he used the «Demon Slayer» to block the freezing flames.		Kamito yelled as he used the «Demon Slayer» to block the freezing flames.

	"A foolish question. The «Demon King» brings forth&~~dash~~;nothing but the destruction of this world."		"A foolish question. The «Demon King» brings forth—nothing but the destruction of this world."

	"—That's not right."		"—That's not right."

Zzhk: Created page with "==Chapter 8 - Laevateinn== ===Part 1=== In the spiral staircase that rose into the sky, the sound of hard footsteps could be heard. Chasing after Scarlet as she leaped nimb..."

2013-03-28T16:19:35Z

Created page with "==Chapter 8 - Laevateinn== ===Part 1=== In the spiral staircase that rose into the sky, the sound of hard footsteps could be heard. Chasing after Scarlet as she leaped nimb..."

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