Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume10 Chapter9 - Revision history

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

2015-12-14T02:21:12Z

reformatting + consistency

Zzhk at 01:55, 8 December 2014

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	—Indeed, you are the one to lead the world towards destruction.		—Indeed, you are the one to lead the world towards destruction.

	—Devour these flames of the ~~mortal enemy~~ and slaughter my enemies!		—Devour these flames of the archnemesis and slaughter mine enemies!<!--in archaic use, "mine" is used as the possessive pronoun before vowels, "my" otherwise-->

	From the demon sword's blade, jet black lightning burst out and smashed the great hall's pillar.		From the demon sword's blade, jet black lightning burst out and smashed the great hall's pillar.

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2014-12-07T15:29:15Z

Part 5

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	—Indeed, you are the one to lead the world towards destruction.		—Indeed, you are the one to lead the world towards destruction.

	—Devour these flames of the mortal enemy and slaughter ~~mine~~ enemies!		—Devour these flames of the mortal enemy and slaughter my enemies!

	From the demon sword's blade, jet black lightning burst out and smashed the great hall's pillar.		From the demon sword's blade, jet black lightning burst out and smashed the great hall's pillar.

Ajmc93 at 08:06, 21 April 2013

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	(It's too early to despair!)		(It's too early to despair!)

	As ~~the~~ the spirit crystal's effects ran out, the flash dissipated.		As the spirit crystal's effects ran out, the flash dissipated.

	There were still six or seven steps left—the altar was farther than imagined. Perhaps Fianna had misjudged the distance visually.		There were still six or seven steps left—the altar was farther than imagined. Perhaps Fianna had misjudged the distance visually.
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	"Leonora-dono...!"		"Leonora-dono...!"

	Ellis ~~exlaimed~~ with surprise. Why would she be here—		Ellis exclaimed with surprise. Why would she be here—

	Leonora turned towards Ellis' side.		Leonora turned towards Ellis' side.

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Part 4

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	Then—		Then—


	"...Princess, you have woken up?"		"...Princess, you have woken up?"

	"...~~mmm~~, Fian...na...?"		"...Mmm, Fian...na...?"

	Claire opened her eyes and—		Claire opened her eyes and—

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2013-03-29T22:35:19Z

Part 3

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	"Started? ...What is going on?"		"Started? ...What is going on?"

	"—~~the~~ «Demon King» awakened. Darkness Elemental Lord «Ren Ashdoll»."		"—The «Demon King» awakened. Darkness Elemental Lord «Ren Ashdoll»."

	"Wha—"		"Wha—"

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	In that instant, Fianna took out a spirit crystal from her bosom and threw it out.		In that instant, Fianna took out a spirit crystal from her bosom and threw it out.

	~~Immediatly~~, a bright flash filled the great hall.		Immediately, a bright flash filled the great hall.

	"...!"		"...!"
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	Claire still remembered «Scarlet»'s name. Furthermore—		Claire still remembered «Scarlet»'s name. Furthermore—

	(The ~~priordial~~ flames had gone off mark on purpose.)		(The primordial flames had gone off mark on purpose.)

	Supposing Claire was really completely devoured by darkness, that could not possibly happen.		Supposing Claire was really completely devoured by darkness, that could not possibly happen.
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	...So hot. It felt almost like the inside of a furnace.		...So hot. It felt almost like the inside of a furnace.

	Her memories ~~was~~ a mess. Currently, where was she—		Her memories were a mess. Currently, where was she—

	(...In any case, I must leave this place.)		(...In any case, I must leave this place.)
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	—Master, please remember! Master's precious comrades!		—Master, please remember! Master's precious comrades!

	The flames ~~begn~~ to burn intensely in her bosom, scorching Claire's chest.		The flames began to burn intensely in her bosom, scorching Claire's chest.

	(...I know this... I know these flames!)		(...I know this... I know these flames!)
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	"...Princess, you have ~~woke~~ up?"		"...Princess, you have woken up?"

	"...mmm, Fian...na...?"		"...mmm, Fian...na...?"
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	"Looking like that... What happened to you?"		"Looking like that... What happened to you?"

	"...It's actually all of your doing, seriously."		"...It's actually all your doing, seriously."

	Sighing with exasperation, Fianna held Claire's arm and pulled her to her feet.		Sighing with exasperation, Fianna held Claire's arm and pulled her to her feet.
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	However, the black miasma exuded from the «Demon King»'s body devoured the conflagration within the blink of an eye, transforming them into burning jet-black demonic flames.		However, the black miasma exuded from the «Demon King»'s body devoured the conflagration within the blink of an eye, transforming them into burning jet-black demonic flames.

	"So this the «Demon King»'s power—capable of devouring Laevateinn's «God-slaying Flames» even in a half-awakened state huh?"		"So this is the «Demon King»'s power—capable of devouring Laevateinn's «God-slaying Flames» even in a half-awakened state huh?"

	"...Gah... Oh... Ahhhhhhhh!"		"...Gah... Oh... Ahhhhhhhh!"
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	...Those mutterings could no longer be heard.		...Those mutterings could no longer be heard.

	Clearly he had been swallowed by the «Darkness Elemental Lord», Ren Ashdoll's voice, and fallen into darkness.		Clearly he had been swallowed by the «Darkness Elemental Lord» Ren Ashdoll's voice, and fallen into darkness.

	Clearly he had awakened as the «Demon King» who brought destruction to the world.		Clearly he had awakened as the «Demon King» who brought destruction to the world.
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	Rubia barely blocked the sword. In the instant the blades clashed, intense flames exploded from «Laevateinn»'s body.		Rubia barely blocked the sword. In the instant the blades clashed, intense flames exploded from «Laevateinn»'s body.

	Kamito did stop his series of attacks. Still crossing blades with «Laevateinn» using the «Demon Slayer», Kamito added on top of it a strike from his left hand's «Vorpal Sword».		Kamito did not stop his series of attacks. Still crossing blades with «Laevateinn» using the «Demon Slayer», Kamito added on top of it a strike from his left hand's «Vorpal Sword».

	The spewing flames were suppressed entirely by the demon sword of darkness while the shining «Demon Slayer» gradually pressed near Rubia.		The spewing flames were suppressed entirely by the demon sword of darkness while the shining «Demon Slayer» gradually pressed near Rubia.
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	As the twin swords of light and darkness danced, the flames of purgatory were swept away. Realizing her disadvantage in a close range combat, Rubia distanced herself and raised «Laevateinn» up high overhead.		As the twin swords of light and darkness danced, the flames of purgatory were swept away. Realizing her disadvantage in a close range combat, Rubia distanced herself and raised «Laevateinn» up high overhead.

	Intense, burning, gigantic flames ~~form~~ a vortex with the crimson blade as the center.		Intense, burning, gigantic flames formed a vortex with the crimson blade as the center.

	This was the «Calamity Queen»—Rubia Elstein's full powered special move of the sword.		This was the «Calamity Queen»—Rubia Elstein's full powered special move of the sword.

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Part 8

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	Clearly he had awakened as the «Demon King» who brought destruction to the world.		Clearly he had awakened as the «Demon King» who brought destruction to the world.

	However, Kamito was able to recall his consciousness. As well as the soft ~~sensatin~~ lingering on his lips.		However, Kamito was able to recall his consciousness. As well as the soft sensation lingering on his lips.

	"Why..."		"Why..."

Flamixer: /* Part 5 */

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Part 5

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	"...Gah... Oh... Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh—!"		"...Gah... Oh... Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh—!"

	"&~~dash~~;Yes. This is good."		"—Yes. This is good."

	Swinging «Laevateinn», flames burned in Rubia's eyes.		Swinging «Laevateinn», flames burned in Rubia's eyes.

Flamixer: /* Part 4 */

2013-03-29T10:22:18Z

Part 4

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	"Uh... I was taken here by Nee-sama—"		"Uh... I was taken here by Nee-sama—"

	~~Calire~~ tried to recall what happened after she came here... Then her head began to hurt.		Claire tried to recall what happened after she came here... Then her head began to hurt.

	Speaking of which, why was dressed in this type of ritual outfit?		Speaking of which, why was I dressed in this type of ritual outfit?

	"No time to talk now. We must hurry over to Kamito-kun."		"No time to talk now. We must hurry over to Kamito-kun."