Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume10 Prologue - Revision history

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Prologue

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	«Spirit transfer»—That was a unique «pledge» that came into existence in relation of lord to retainer between the royal family and the nobles.		«Spirit transfer»—That was a unique «pledge» that came into existence in relation of lord to retainer between the royal family and the nobles.

	The six great nobles of the empire including the Elsteins had ~~pledge~~ allegiance to the Ordesia Empire for a long time of several hundred years. To prove their loyalty, they practiced something more anciently traditional, and that was the spirit transfer pledge.		The six great nobles of the empire including the Elsteins had pledged allegiance to the Ordesia Empire for a long time of several hundred years. To prove their loyalty, they practiced something more anciently traditional, and that was the spirit transfer pledge.

	For example, in the case where there’s a demand from the Ordesia royal family, the empire’s six great nobles had to immediately give up the contracted spirit that served their family. This meant that the ownership of the six great nobles’ spirit originally belonged to the royal family.		For example, in the case where there’s a demand from the Ordesia royal family, the empire’s six great nobles had to immediately give up the contracted spirit that served their family. This meant that the ownership of the six great nobles’ spirit originally belonged to the royal family.

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	Contrary to its appearance, it was surprisingly light. On that subject, she recalled Ren Ashbell—Kamito—swinging this sword with one hand three years ago.		Contrary to its appearance, it was surprisingly light. On that subject, she recalled Ren Ashbell—Kamito—swinging this sword with one hand three years ago.

	“You do plan on ~~fight~~ me with that demon sword.”		“You do plan on fighting me with that demon sword.”

	“…”		“…”
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	Fianna widened her dim-colored eyes.		Fianna widened her dim-colored eyes.

	(…A disposition greater that Rubia-sama, who’s famed as once in hundreds of ~~year~~ outstanding talent?)		(…A disposition greater that Rubia-sama, who’s famed as a once in hundreds of years outstanding talent?)

	It wasn’t a story she could believe out of a sudden. However, Rubia calmly continued.		It wasn’t a story she could believe out of a sudden. However, Rubia calmly continued.
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	Cutting off with a dispassionate tone, she pointed her right hand with the blue flame dwelling on it straight down.		Cutting off with a dispassionate tone, she pointed her right hand with the blue flame dwelling on it straight down.

	In its current state, the darkness spirit wasn’t the elemental waffe «Vorpal Sword», it was no more an embodiment bearing the shape of a sword.		In its current state, the darkness spirit wasn’t the elemental waffe «Vorpal Sword», it was no more than an embodiment bearing the shape of a sword.

	The absolute-zero flame she released would annihilate the darkness spirit’s existence without leaving a trace.		The absolute-zero flame she released would annihilate the darkness spirit’s existence without leaving a trace.

Ajmc93 at 08:00, 20 April 2013

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	(…If Claire knew the truth, her heart will surely be unable to bear it.)		(…If Claire knew the truth, her heart will surely be unable to bear it.)

	On the other side of her strong heart and unyielding spirit, she was very delicate girl. It wasn’t like she had socialized with her for a long time like her childhood friend Rinslet, but she at least understood that.		On the other side of her strong heart and unyielding spirit, she was a very delicate girl. It wasn’t like she had socialized with her for a long time like her childhood friend Rinslet, but she at least understood that.

	The moment when the cruel truth was thrust before her and her heart was broken, she might end up losing the power of her spirit contract.		The moment when the cruel truth was thrust before her and her heart was broken, she might end up losing the power of her spirit contract.

KuroiHikari: Reverted edits by Klonoa38 (talk) to last revision by KuroiHikari

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KuroiHikari: I guess king shall stay. Undo revision 236063 by KuroiHikari (talk)

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I guess king shall stay. Undo revision 236063 by KuroiHikari (talk)

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	Rubia Elstein gently opened her mouth.		Rubia Elstein gently opened her mouth.

	“—It's time for the awakening of the demon ~~lord~~.”		“—It's time for the awakening of the demon king.”

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	Claire looked up at her sister and shouted.		Claire looked up at her sister and shouted.

	“I’ll have you be the «Darkness Queen» that serves the demon ~~lord~~.”		“I’ll have you be the «Darkness Queen» that serves the demon king.”

	“Serve the demon ~~lord…~~?”		“Serve the demon king…?”

	“That’s right. It’s the reincarnated body of the «Darkness Elemental Lord» that was once sealed by the «Five Great Elemental Lords». I need a princess maiden to control it.”		“That’s right. It’s the reincarnated body of the «Darkness Elemental Lord» that was once sealed by the «Five Great Elemental Lords». I need a princess maiden to control it.”
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	Rubia coldly nodded.		Rubia coldly nodded.

	“The disposition required for the «Darkness Queen» is having a strong bond with the «Demon ~~Lord»~~. Although, with that meaning, it also means that there’s the possibility for the Fahrengart girl and the Laurenfrost girl and so on to be the «Darkness Queen».”		“The disposition required for the «Darkness Queen» is having a strong bond with the «Demon King». Although, with that meaning, it also means that there’s the possibility for the Fahrengart girl and the Laurenfrost girl and so on to be the «Darkness Queen».”

	“…What do you mean by that?”		“…What do you mean by that?”

	Since, it concerned the bonds with the «Demon ~~Lord»—Kamito—~~ she had no intention of losing to any of her teammates.		Since, it concerned the bonds with the «Demon King»—Kamito— she had no intention of losing to any of her teammates.

	And then, if the «Darkness Queen» existence held the same meaning as the «Queens» serving the Five Great Elemental Lords, there should be no reason to disqualify Fianna, who was the former Queen candidate.		And then, if the «Darkness Queen» existence held the same meaning as the «Queens» serving the Five Great Elemental Lords, there should be no reason to disqualify Fianna, who was the former Queen candidate.
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	Fianna was in chaos.		Fianna was in chaos.

	This darkness spirit should have had an alliance relation with Rubia. Whether they had a relation like comrades do was questionable, but at least the fact that they had joined forces with the goal of awaking Kamito as the «Demon ~~Lord»~~ was certain.		This darkness spirit should have had an alliance relation with Rubia. Whether they had a relation like comrades do was questionable, but at least the fact that they had joined forces with the goal of awaking Kamito as the «Demon King» was certain.

	“Now that the awakening of the «Demon ~~Lord»~~ is drawing near, this darkness spirit is a hindrance to my plans. Therefore, I shall annihilate it here and now—“		“Now that the awakening of the «Demon King» is drawing near, this darkness spirit is a hindrance to my plans. Therefore, I shall annihilate it here and now—“

	Cutting off with a dispassionate tone, she pointed her right hand with the blue flame dwelling on it straight down.		Cutting off with a dispassionate tone, she pointed her right hand with the blue flame dwelling on it straight down.

KuroiHikari at 05:02, 23 March 2013

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	Rubia Elstein gently opened her mouth.		Rubia Elstein gently opened her mouth.

	“—It's time for the awakening of the demon ~~king~~.”		“—It's time for the awakening of the demon lord.”

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	Claire looked up at her sister and shouted.		Claire looked up at her sister and shouted.

	“I’ll have you be the «Darkness Queen» that serves the demon ~~king~~.”		“I’ll have you be the «Darkness Queen» that serves the demon lord.”

	“Serve the demon ~~king…~~?”		“Serve the demon lord…?”

	“That’s right. It’s the reincarnated body of the «Darkness Elemental Lord» that was once sealed by the «Five Great Elemental Lords». I need a princess maiden to control it.”		“That’s right. It’s the reincarnated body of the «Darkness Elemental Lord» that was once sealed by the «Five Great Elemental Lords». I need a princess maiden to control it.”
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	Rubia coldly nodded.		Rubia coldly nodded.

	“The disposition required for the «Darkness Queen» is having a strong bond with the «Demon ~~King»~~. Although, with that meaning, it also means that there’s the possibility for the Fahrengart girl and the Laurenfrost girl and so on to be the «Darkness Queen».”		“The disposition required for the «Darkness Queen» is having a strong bond with the «Demon Lord». Although, with that meaning, it also means that there’s the possibility for the Fahrengart girl and the Laurenfrost girl and so on to be the «Darkness Queen».”

	“…What do you mean by that?”		“…What do you mean by that?”

	Since, it concerned the bonds with the «Demon ~~King»—Kamito—~~ she had no intention of losing to any of her teammates.		Since, it concerned the bonds with the «Demon Lord»—Kamito— she had no intention of losing to any of her teammates.

	And then, if the «Darkness Queen» existence held the same meaning as the «Queens» serving the Five Great Elemental Lords, there should be no reason to disqualify Fianna, who was the former Queen candidate.		And then, if the «Darkness Queen» existence held the same meaning as the «Queens» serving the Five Great Elemental Lords, there should be no reason to disqualify Fianna, who was the former Queen candidate.
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	Fianna was in chaos.		Fianna was in chaos.

	This darkness spirit should have had an alliance relation with Rubia. Whether they had a relation like comrades do was questionable, but at least the fact that they had joined forces with the goal of awaking Kamito as the «Demon ~~King»~~ was certain.		This darkness spirit should have had an alliance relation with Rubia. Whether they had a relation like comrades do was questionable, but at least the fact that they had joined forces with the goal of awaking Kamito as the «Demon Lord» was certain.

	“Now that the awakening of the «Demon ~~King»~~ is drawing near, this darkness spirit is a hindrance to my plans. Therefore, I shall annihilate it here and now—“		“Now that the awakening of the «Demon Lord» is drawing near, this darkness spirit is a hindrance to my plans. Therefore, I shall annihilate it here and now—“

	Cutting off with a dispassionate tone, she pointed her right hand with the blue flame dwelling on it straight down.		Cutting off with a dispassionate tone, she pointed her right hand with the blue flame dwelling on it straight down.

KuroiHikari at 03:58, 17 March 2013

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	(…I see, she put «word of power» in her words.)		(…I see, she put «word of power» in her words.)

	It was one type of mind manipulation that was the forte of the ~~Elmphin~~ species and high-ranking princess maidens.		It was one type of mind manipulation that was the forte of the Elfim species and high-ranking princess maidens.

	Loading and releasing magical powers into their words, they could control the thoughts of their target.		Loading and releasing magical powers into their words, they could control the thoughts of their target.

KuroiHikari at 03:56, 17 March 2013

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	Rubia gently reached out her hand before Claire, who was plugging her ears.		Rubia gently reached out her hand before Claire, who was plugging her ears.

	“Claire, take my hand.”		“Claire, '''take my hand.'''”

	“…N-No…No, Nee-sama…”		“…N-No…No, Nee-sama…”