Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume11 Chapter4 - Revision history

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

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reformatting + consistency

99.19.93.10: /* Part 5 */

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Part 5

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	Beautiful black wings were fluttering beneath the sunset sky.		Beautiful black wings were fluttering beneath the sunset sky.

	Flying through the air, Restia lightly ~~stroke~~ her gorgeous black hair.		Flying through the air, Restia lightly stroked her gorgeous black hair.

	"How unsightly of me. To think I would be jealous."		"How unsightly of me. To think I would be jealous."

Zzhk at 08:55, 11 August 2013

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	Iseria Seaward.		Iseria Seaward.

	The girl spirit ~~who~~ was sealed underground in the «Abandoned City».		The girl spirit was sealed underground in the «Abandoned City».

	Speculating from the current conversation, she was probably the «Water Elemental Lord»'s consciousness that had split off—		Speculating from the current conversation, she was probably the «Water Elemental Lord»'s consciousness that had split off—

Royaloyalz at 08:25, 11 August 2013

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Zzhk at 19:10, 9 August 2013

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	"«Ren Ashdoll» had awakened before I awakened as the Demon King."		"«Ren Ashdoll» had awakened before I awakened as the Demon King."

	"Yes. Although the «Darkness Queen» was there to suppress it at the time, who knows when Ren Ashdoll's contaminated will~~, would~~ reawaken again—"		"Yes. Although the «Darkness Queen» was there to suppress it at the time, who knows when Ren Ashdoll's contaminated will was going to reawaken again—"

	"In other words..."		"In other words..."

109.154.249.77: "contaminated will", would...

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"contaminated will", would...

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	"«Ren Ashdoll» had awakened before I awakened as the Demon King."		"«Ren Ashdoll» had awakened before I awakened as the Demon King."

	"Yes. Although the «Darkness Queen» was there to suppress it at the time, who knows when Ren Ashdoll's contaminated will reawaken again—"		"Yes. Although the «Darkness Queen» was there to suppress it at the time, who knows when Ren Ashdoll's contaminated will, would reawaken again—"

	"In other words..."		"In other words..."

Zzhk: Undo revision 276701 by D0nut (talk) there's no such thing as "will would"

2013-08-09T17:46:19Z

Undo revision 276701 by D0nut (talk) there's no such thing as "will would"

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	"«Ren Ashdoll» had awakened before I awakened as the Demon King."		"«Ren Ashdoll» had awakened before I awakened as the Demon King."

	"Yes. Although the «Darkness Queen» was there to suppress it at the time, who knows when Ren Ashdoll's contaminated will ~~would~~ reawaken again—"		"Yes. Although the «Darkness Queen» was there to suppress it at the time, who knows when Ren Ashdoll's contaminated will reawaken again—"

	"In other words..."		"In other words..."

D0nut at 17:27, 9 August 2013

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	Inside the mud-like darkness—		Inside the mud-like darkness—

	Kamito finally found signs of the sinking demon sword.\		Kamito finally found signs of the sinking demon sword.

	"Wait up, I'll save you right now..."		"Wait up, I'll save you right now..."
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	"«Ren Ashdoll» had awakened before I awakened as the Demon King."		"«Ren Ashdoll» had awakened before I awakened as the Demon King."

	"Yes. Although the «Darkness Queen» was there to suppress it at the time, who knows when Ren Ashdoll's contaminated will reawaken again—"		"Yes. Although the «Darkness Queen» was there to suppress it at the time, who knows when Ren Ashdoll's contaminated will would reawaken again—"

	"In other words..."		"In other words..."

Zzhk: comprise does not take the preposition "of" (unlike composed of)

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comprise does not take the preposition "of" (unlike composed of)

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	Suppressing chaos required overwhelming military strength.		Suppressing chaos required overwhelming military strength.

	There was the «Murders» organization that possessed extensive networks across the continent, her connections with the Demon King cultist faction in the top echelons of the Alphas Theocracy's military, as well as the private army whose core comprised of «Instructional School» orphans.		There was the «Murders» organization that possessed extensive networks across the continent, her connections with the Demon King cultist faction in the top echelons of the Alphas Theocracy's military, as well as the private army whose core comprised «Instructional School» orphans.

	(I will first use those girls to bring the Alphas Theocracy under my control—)		(I will first use those girls to bring the Alphas Theocracy under my control—)

80.223.220.209 at 13:45, 8 August 2013

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	A miraculous power that even the rulers of this world, the «Elemental Lords», could not control.		A miraculous power that even the rulers of this world, the «Elemental Lords», could not control.

	At the same time, this power would ~~bound~~ the «Elemental Lords», the executors of the miracle.		At the same time, this power would bind the «Elemental Lords», the executors of the miracle.

	Historically, this was an unprecedented «Wish».		Historically, this was an unprecedented «Wish».
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	The elemental lords' death was an irregular «Wish».		The elemental lords' death was an irregular «Wish».

	The miracle's power was not going to ~~the~~ destroy the elemental lords who served as its executors.		The miracle's power was not going to destroy the elemental lords who served as its executors.

	Very likely, the miracle would be interrupted once it judges Kamito's «Wish» to be invalid.		Very likely, the miracle would be interrupted once it judges Kamito's «Wish» to be invalid.
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	"...!?"		"...!?"

	Est widened her violet eyes. The intense lightning strike was nothing but a distraction. Restia instantly ~~circles~~ her way to Est's back.		Est widened her violet eyes. The intense lightning strike was nothing but a distraction. Restia instantly circled her way to Est's back.

	"What about this?"		"What about this?"

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	However, Restia began to speak in a calm voice.		However, Restia began to speak in a calm voice.

	Had she ~~give~~ up already—?		Had she given up already—?

	(...No! Restia intends to make a request to me!)		(...No! Restia intends to make a request to me!)

	Kamito's entire body was enveloped in the glow of the transfer magic and gradually disappearing.		Kamito's entire body was enveloped in the glow of the transfer magic and was gradually disappearing.

	Under these conditions, her voice continued to be heard.		Under these conditions, her voice continued to be heard.
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	"What exactly was the mass of darkness that swallowed us?"		"What exactly was the mass of darkness that swallowed us?"

	The pitch-black «Wish» overflowing from throne of the «Elemental Lords».		The pitch-black «Wish» overflowing from the throne of the «Elemental Lords».

	Was that the true appearance of the «Elemental Lords» who ruled the world—?		Was that the true appearance of the «Elemental Lords» who ruled the world—?
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	"...I see. That «Water Elemental Lord» was like that."		"...I see. That «Water Elemental Lord» was like that."

	Piercing the elemental lord's throne with the «Vorpal Sword», Kamito had ~~saw~~ the young girl's figure.		Piercing the elemental lord's throne with the «Vorpal Sword», Kamito had seen the young girl's figure.

	Iseria Seaward.		Iseria Seaward.

	The girl spirit ~~was~~ was sealed underground in the «Abandoned City».		The girl spirit who was sealed underground in the «Abandoned City».

	Speculating from the current conversation, she was probably the «Water Elemental Lord»'s consciousness that had split off—		Speculating from the current conversation, she was probably the «Water Elemental Lord»'s consciousness that had split off—
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	"«Ren Ashdoll» had awakened before I awakened as the Demon King."		"«Ren Ashdoll» had awakened before I awakened as the Demon King."

	"Yes. Although the «Darkness Queen» was there to suppress it at the time, who knows when Ren Ashdoll's contaminated will ~~was~~ going to reawaken again—"		"Yes. Although the «Darkness Queen» was there to suppress it at the time, who knows when Ren Ashdoll's contaminated will is going to reawaken again—"

	"In other words..."		"In other words..."