Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume11 Chapter5 - Revision history

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reformatting + consistency

Zzhk: Undo revision 385416 by 76.246.237.166 (talk) 碧玉 is not emerald

2014-08-25T12:05:04Z

Undo revision 385416 by 76.246.237.166 (talk) 碧玉 is not emerald

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	"Claire..."		"Claire..."

	Rinslet's eyes of ~~emerald~~ wavered subtly.		Rinslet's eyes of greenstone wavered subtly.

	"—About that, let's wait first."		"—About that, let's wait first."

76.246.237.166: /* Chapter 5 - Rinslet's Resolve */

2014-08-25T10:25:17Z

Chapter 5 - Rinslet's Resolve

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	"Claire..."		"Claire..."

	Rinslet's eyes of ~~jasper~~ wavered subtly.		Rinslet's eyes of emerald wavered subtly.

	"—About that, let's wait first."		"—About that, let's wait first."

Zzhk: /* Chapter 5 - Rinslet's Resolve */

2014-08-19T09:38:35Z

Chapter 5 - Rinslet's Resolve

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	Using her fingers to push her neckline open, her black underwear came into view.		Using her fingers to push her neckline open, her black underwear came into view.

	"S-Stop ~~playing~~ with me..."		"S-Stop toying with me..."

	Kamito blushed and turned his gaze away.		Kamito blushed and turned his gaze away.
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	Greyworth laughed in her throat then sat properly on the sofa again.		Greyworth laughed in her throat then sat properly on the sofa again.

	"First, ~~let~~ me praise you. Well done. As expected, summoning you to the Academy was not a waste of effort."		"First of all, allow me to praise you. Well done. As expected, summoning you to the Academy was not a waste of effort."

	"~~Praise~~ from you makes me feel worse."		"Receiving praise from you makes me feel worse."

	While retorting—		While retorting—

Zzhk: /* Chapter 5 - Rinslet's Resolve */

2014-08-19T09:37:39Z

Chapter 5 - Rinslet's Resolve

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	"W-What nonsense are you talking about, how could that be true!?"		"W-What nonsense are you talking about, how could that be true!?"

	"K-Kamito, even towards the ~~Academy's director~~, you..."		"K-Kamito, even towards the headmistress, you..."

	Rumble rumble rumble rumble rumble rumble...!		Rumble rumble rumble rumble rumble rumble...!
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	"Fufu, once you learn this secret technique, all the girls in the Academy will quickly fall. However, if you're the one using it, perhaps they'll lose their minds because it's too intense."		"Fufu, once you learn this secret technique, all the girls in the Academy will quickly fall. However, if you're the one using it, perhaps they'll lose their minds because it's too intense."

	"H-How can you still consider yourself the ~~Academy director~~!?"		"H-How can you still consider yourself the headmistress!?"

	Kamito roared angrily.		Kamito roared angrily.

Zzhk: /* Part 5 */

2013-08-11T10:42:06Z

Part 5

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	Landing on the windowsill—		Landing on the windowsill—

	The darkness spirit ~~in the~~ dress ~~that~~ was colored like night.		The darkness spirit whose dress was colored like night.

	"It's been a while, «Dusk Witch»."		"It's been a while, «Dusk Witch»."

Zzhk at 08:57, 11 August 2013

2013-08-11T08:57:07Z

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	Fianna shook her head.		Fianna shook her head.

	Sjora Kahn was a witch who could not be underestimated. Catching her ~~was~~ probably ~~going to~~ be very difficult.		Sjora Kahn was a witch who could not be underestimated. Catching her would probably be very difficult.

	Besides, it was unknown whether a spirit whose contract was voided could be retrieved in the first place. If «Fenrir» was already stolen completely—		Besides, it was unknown whether a spirit whose contract was voided could be retrieved in the first place. If «Fenrir» was already stolen completely—
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	Kamito could not help but grab Greyworth by the collar.		Kamito could not help but grab Greyworth by the collar.

	"Fufu, once you learn this secret technique, all the girls in the Academy will quickly fall. However, if you're the one using it, perhaps they ~~may~~ lose their minds because it's too intense."		"Fufu, once you learn this secret technique, all the girls in the Academy will quickly fall. However, if you're the one using it, perhaps they'll lose their minds because it's too intense."

	"H-How can you still consider yourself the Academy director!?"		"H-How can you still consider yourself the Academy director!?"

Royaloyalz at 08:50, 11 August 2013

2013-08-11T08:50:11Z

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	The spirit seal that should have been carved on Rinslet's right hand was nowhere to be found.		The spirit seal that should have been carved on Rinslet's right hand was nowhere to be found.

	Claire remembered that back when she was unable to use her spirit, the seal would be in state that was almost invisible to the naked eye. But even so, it could still be confirmed by close examination.		Claire remembered that back when she was unable to use her spirit, the seal would be in a state that was almost invisible to the naked eye. But even so, it could still be confirmed by close examination.

	However, Rinslet's spirit seal had vanished completely.		However, Rinslet's spirit seal had vanished completely.
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	Fianna shook her head.		Fianna shook her head.

	Sjora Kahn was a witch who could not be underestimated. Catching her was probably very difficult.		Sjora Kahn was a witch who could not be underestimated. Catching her was probably going to be very difficult.

	Besides, it was unknown whether a spirit whose contract was voided could be retrieved in the first place. If «Fenrir» was already stolen completely—		Besides, it was unknown whether a spirit whose contract was voided could be retrieved in the first place. If «Fenrir» was already stolen completely—
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	Kamito could not help but grab Greyworth by the collar.		Kamito could not help but grab Greyworth by the collar.

	"Fufu, once you learn this secret technique, all the girls in Academy will quickly fall. However, if you're the one using it, perhaps they lose their minds because it's too intense."		"Fufu, once you learn this secret technique, all the girls in the Academy will quickly fall. However, if you're the one using it, perhaps they may lose their minds because it's too intense."

	"H-How can you still consider yourself the Academy director!?"		"H-How can you still consider yourself the Academy director!?"

Zzhk: /* Chapter 5 - Rinslet's Resolve */

2013-08-11T03:58:21Z

Chapter 5 - Rinslet's Resolve

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	Claire was murmuring when...		Claire was murmuring when...

	The voices of princess maidens could be heard coming from the ~~«Great~~ Shrine»'s building.		The voices of princess maidens could be heard coming from the «Grand Shrine»'s building.

	"—Everyone, the horse-drawn carriage is ready."		"—Everyone, the horse-drawn carriage is ready."
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	(By the way, where did Restia run off to?)		(By the way, where did Restia run off to?)

	After disappearing from the ~~great shrine~~, she still had not returned.		After disappearing from the Grand Shrine, she still had not returned.

	Oh well, since I can feel the connection through the spirit seal, there shouldn't be a problem—		Oh well, since I can feel the connection through the spirit seal, there shouldn't be a problem—

Zzhk: /* Part 2 */

2013-08-11T03:57:20Z

Part 2

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	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

	Rinslet was walking towards the ~~great shrine~~'s garden.		Rinslet was walking towards the Grand Shrine's garden.

	Coming before a spring in the center of the garden, she reached out towards the water surface that was reflecting moonlight.		Coming before a spring in the center of the garden, she reached out towards the water surface that was reflecting moonlight.