Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume11 Prologue - Revision history

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

2016-01-01T00:38:38Z

reformatting + consistency

Zzhk: /* Part 2 */

2014-11-20T10:22:28Z

Part 2

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	(…Like I thought, releasing two elemental waffe at the same time was a little too much…)		(…Like I thought, releasing two elemental waffe at the same time was a little too much…)

	«Demon Slayer» & «Vorpal Sword». Both were extraordinary elemental waffe. Even if it was Kamito, wielding them both at the same time would certainly rob ~~off~~ all his divine power.		«Demon Slayer» & «Vorpal Sword». Both were extraordinary elemental waffe. Even if it was Kamito, wielding them both at the same time would certainly rob him of all his divine power.

	The «Spirit Seal» on both his hands lost their glow, and at that moment.		The «Spirit Seal» on both his hands lost their glow, and at that moment.

Royaloyalz at 16:44, 10 August 2013

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	“O’ true flames, carved in blood of ancient times, dwell in my hand and devour flames—“		“O’ true flames, carved in blood of ancient times, dwell in my hand and devour flames—“

	As she quickly spun the words of an aria in the spirit language, crimson flames were ~~cladded~~ over her hand.		As she quickly spun the words of an aria in the spirit language, crimson flames were clad over her hand.

	Kamito widened his eyes. It wasn’t Claire’s specialty of spirit magic flames.		Kamito widened his eyes. It wasn’t Claire’s specialty of spirit magic flames.
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	“…Don’t…get in my way, Claire.”		“…Don’t…get in my way, Claire.”

	~~Leaked~~ out from her lips were dispassionate words of farewell.		Leaking out from her lips were dispassionate words of farewell.

	“I…have to save this world. That’s the responsibility of those knowing the truth.”		“I…have to save this world. That’s the responsibility of those knowing the truth.”

D0nut at 18:45, 5 August 2013

2013-08-05T18:45:39Z

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	(—She wouldn’t get ''another breath''.)		(—She wouldn’t get ''another breath''.)

	The exploding flames ~~was~~ fanned by the wind from the swords and winded into eddies.		The exploding flames were fanned by the wind from the swords and winded into eddies.

	In that instant, Kamito rushed further in—		In that instant, Kamito rushed further in—
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	The moment that air of tension was gone, his vision grew hazy and intense sleepiness came assailing.		The moment that air of tension was gone, his vision grew hazy and intense sleepiness came assailing.

	(…Like I thought, releasing two elemental waffe at the same time was little too much…)		(…Like I thought, releasing two elemental waffe at the same time was a little too much…)

	«Demon Slayer» & «Vorpal Sword». Both were extraordinary elemental waffe. Even if it was Kamito, wielding them both at the same time would certainly rob off all his divine power.		«Demon Slayer» & «Vorpal Sword». Both were extraordinary elemental waffe. Even if it was Kamito, wielding them both at the same time would certainly rob off all his divine power.
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	Looking up at the empty skies, she muttered with a sigh.		Looking up at the empty skies, she muttered with a sigh.

	“I don’t have much time remaining. Now that I’ve failed to ~~awakened~~ the «Demon King» here, the means to kill the «Elemental Lords» no longer exist—“		“I don’t have much time remaining. Now that I’ve failed to awaken the «Demon King» here, the means to kill the «Elemental Lords» no longer exist—“

	(…Time remaining?)		(…Time remaining?)

All Nighter94: /* Part 2 */ it's awkward, so patched 1 line.

2013-08-04T19:13:44Z

Part 2: it's awkward, so patched 1 line.

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	“…Kk….Ah…!”		“…Kk….Ah…!”

	What Kamito let loose was a blow that did not materialize and delivered only mental damage to the opponent. There was ~~not a single~~ damage to her physical body.		What Kamito let loose was a blow that did not materialize and delivered only mental damage to the opponent. There was no damage to her physical body.

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Draconic: /* Part 2 */

2013-08-04T10:16:27Z

Part 2

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	“…Why…didn’t you avoid it?”		“…Why…didn’t you avoid it?”

	“I believed you, Nee-sama, that you really wouldn’t hit me.”		“I believed in you, Nee-sama, that you really wouldn’t hit me.”

	Claire gently held Rubia’s wounded body close to her.		Claire gently held Rubia’s wounded body close to her.

KuroiHikari: /* Part 2 */

2013-08-04T09:32:54Z

Part 2

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	Her muffled voiced changed into a tearful sobbing in an instant.		Her muffled voiced changed into a tearful sobbing in an instant.

	Having lost her ability to move, Rubia stood still with a puzzled expression.		Having lost her ability to move, Rubia stood still with a puzzled expression.

KuroiHikari at 04:00, 4 August 2013

2013-08-04T04:00:29Z

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	~~{{Incomplete\|parts=1/2}}~~
	==Prologue==		==Prologue==
	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

KuroiHikari: pg19.20 d

2013-08-04T03:59:51Z

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KuroiHikari: /* Part 2 */

2013-08-04T01:57:27Z

Part 2

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	Rubia muttered in astonishment.		Rubia muttered in astonishment.

	“…Nee-sama, ~~let’s~~ stop ~~this now~~.”		“…Nee-sama, just stop it.”

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