Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume12 Chapter8 - Revision history

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

2016-01-01T01:43:47Z

reformatting + consistency

Zzhk at 09:42, 19 August 2014

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	In combat attire, Virrey Branford was also with her.		In combat attire, Virrey Branford was also with her.

	"D-~~Director~~!"		"H-Headmistress!"

	Ellis instantly straightened her posture.		Ellis instantly straightened her posture.
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	Ellis spoke nervously.		Ellis spoke nervously.

	"Why are you here, ~~director~~?"		"Why are you here, Headmistress?"

	"I have a meeting with the Empire's bigshots. I don't even have the leisure to enjoy the «Great Festival of the Spirits»."		"I have a meeting with the Empire's bigshots. I don't even have the leisure to enjoy the «Great Festival of the Spirits»."
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	Greyworth sighed. Her face looked a bit tired.		Greyworth sighed. Her face looked a bit tired.

	"...It must be tough for you, ~~director~~."		"...It must be tough for you, Headmistress."

	Hearing Kamito's mutterings, Greyworth glared at him.		Hearing Kamito's mutterings, Greyworth glared at him.
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	Watching her leave—		Watching her leave—

	"...The ~~director~~ was shaken. How rare."		"...The headmistress was shaken. How rare."

	Ellis murmured to herself.		Ellis murmured to herself.

99.19.93.10: /* Part 3 */

2013-12-29T22:57:40Z

Part 3

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	On the other hand, Kamito shuddered at the latest revelations.		On the other hand, Kamito shuddered at the latest revelations.

	The Fahrengart daughter was his ~~fiancee~~. He had experienced intimate skin contact with the imperial princess. Now, the Margrave Laurenfrost's daughter was his future wife—		The Fahrengart daughter was his fiancée. He had experienced intimate skin contact with the imperial princess. Now, the Margrave Laurenfrost's daughter was his future wife—

	(...Kazehaya Kamito, who the heck are you!?)		(...Kazehaya Kamito, who the heck are you!?)

88.195.142.91 at 00:09, 16 December 2013

2013-12-16T00:09:50Z

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	When he woke up, he found no change in his condition.		When he woke up, he found no change in his condition.

	His memories ~~remain~~ lost.		His memories remained lost.

	But the pain he felt in his right hand seemed like a lingering part of the dream.		But the pain he felt in his right hand seemed like a lingering part of the dream.
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	On the side of her head was even a weird mask bought from a stall.		On the side of her head was even a weird mask bought from a stall.

	"Dame Lurie, ~~what~~ did you come here without even a bodyguard knight!?"		"Dame Lurie, why did you come here without even a bodyguard knight!?"

	Ellis exclaimed in surprise.		Ellis exclaimed in surprise.

Zzhk at 14:20, 15 December 2013

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	"Virrey Branford also forced her way in."		"Virrey Branford also forced her way in."

	"That guardian spirit has been dismissed. Now, the Knights ~~of the Empire~~ are serving as guards. Mere terrorists should not be able to force their way in."		"That guardian spirit has been dismissed. Now, the Imperial Knights are serving as guards. Mere terrorists should not be able to force their way in."

	"So we need to look out for spirits running amok?"		"So we need to look out for spirits running amok?"

Zzhk: Undo revision 310951 by Nhanbread (talk) you don't capitalize common nouns when they're not used as a title of address (e.g. a king, a duke, a baron, etc); anger is a verb

2013-12-15T12:57:25Z

Undo revision 310951 by Nhanbread (talk) you don't capitalize common nouns when they're not used as a title of address (e.g. a king, a duke, a baron, etc); anger is a verb

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	Kamito concurred.		Kamito concurred.

	"H-How rude, do know that I come from a noble family, that of a ~~Margrave~~'s!"		"H-How rude, do know that I come from a noble family, that of a margrave's!"

	...Even with a face filled with fury, while she was dressed up as a fox-eared maid, she did not seem intimidating at all.		...Even with a face filled with fury, while she was dressed up as a fox-eared maid, she did not seem intimidating at all.
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	On the other hand, Kamito shuddered at the latest revelations.		On the other hand, Kamito shuddered at the latest revelations.

	The Fahrengart's daughter was his fiancee. He had experienced intimate skin contact with the imperial princess. Now, the Margrave Laurenfrost's daughter was his future wife—		The Fahrengart daughter was his fiancee. He had experienced intimate skin contact with the imperial princess. Now, the Margrave Laurenfrost's daughter was his future wife—

	(...Kazehaya Kamito, who the heck are you!?)		(...Kazehaya Kamito, who the heck are you!?)
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	Ellis exclaimed in surprise.		Ellis exclaimed in surprise.

	"~~With~~ something like that ~~happening~~, the neighboring states are not going to remain silent—"		"Since something like that happened, the neighboring states are not going to remain silent—"

	"...Assuredly so. This could very well spark a war."		"...Assuredly so. This could very well spark a war."
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	Hearing Kamito's mutterings, Greyworth glared at him.		Hearing Kamito's mutterings, Greyworth glared at him.

	"Talking like it ~~is unrelated~~ to you. This meeting will also discuss whether to authorize an investigation of the underground facility mentioned last time. Whether you can retrieve your sword spirit or not will depend on this."		"Talking like it's not related to you. This meeting will also discuss whether to authorize an investigation of the underground facility mentioned last time. Whether you can retrieve your sword spirit or not will depend on this."

	"...Will they authorize it?"		"...Will they authorize it?"
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	A whirlwind swirled and started to blow her clothes dry. As a result, her skirt fluttered and exposed white panties, causing Kamito to hastily turn his gaze away.		A whirlwind swirled and started to blow her clothes dry. As a result, her skirt fluttered and exposed white panties, causing Kamito to hastily turn his gaze away.

	"~~Was~~ that spring's spirit ~~angry~~ because I'm male?"		"Did that spring's spirit anger because I'm male?"

	"No, I think it is likely that the spirit was intending to grant my wish."		"No, I think it is likely that the spirit was intending to grant my wish."

Nhanbread at 12:39, 15 December 2013

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	Kamito concurred.		Kamito concurred.

	"H-How rude, do know that I come from a noble family, that of a ~~margrave~~'s!"		"H-How rude, do know that I come from a noble family, that of a Margrave's!"

	...Even with a face filled with fury, while she was dressed up as a fox-eared maid, she did not seem intimidating at all.		...Even with a face filled with fury, while she was dressed up as a fox-eared maid, she did not seem intimidating at all.
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	On the other hand, Kamito shuddered at the latest revelations.		On the other hand, Kamito shuddered at the latest revelations.

	The Fahrengart daughter was his fiancee. He had experienced intimate skin contact with the imperial princess. Now, the Margrave Laurenfrost's daughter was his future wife—		The Fahrengart's daughter was his fiancee. He had experienced intimate skin contact with the imperial princess. Now, the Margrave Laurenfrost's daughter was his future wife—

	(...Kazehaya Kamito, who the heck are you!?)		(...Kazehaya Kamito, who the heck are you!?)
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	Milla remained expressionless but her eyes lowered as though in melancholy.		Milla remained expressionless but her eyes lowered as though in melancholy.

	"...Sorry for not ~~remember~~ you, uh, and Mireille—"		"...Sorry for not remembering you, uh, and Mireille—"

	"Memory loss?"		"Memory loss?"
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	Ellis exclaimed in surprise.		Ellis exclaimed in surprise.

	"With something like that ~~happened~~, the neighboring states are not going to remain silent—"		"With something like that happening, the neighboring states are not going to remain silent—"

	"...Assuredly so. This could very well spark a war."		"...Assuredly so. This could very well spark a war."
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	Hearing Kamito's mutterings, Greyworth glared at him.		Hearing Kamito's mutterings, Greyworth glared at him.

	"Talking like it unrelated to you. This meeting will also discuss whether to authorize an investigation of the underground facility mentioned last time. Whether you can retrieve your sword spirit or not will depend on this."		"Talking like it is unrelated to you. This meeting will also discuss whether to authorize an investigation of the underground facility mentioned last time. Whether you can retrieve your sword spirit or not will depend on this."

	"...Will they authorize it?"		"...Will they authorize it?"
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	A whirlwind swirled and started to blow her clothes dry. As a result, her skirt fluttered and exposed white panties, causing Kamito to hastily turn his gaze away.		A whirlwind swirled and started to blow her clothes dry. As a result, her skirt fluttered and exposed white panties, causing Kamito to hastily turn his gaze away.

	"~~Did~~ that spring's spirit ~~anger~~ because I'm male?"		"Was that spring's spirit angry because I'm male?"

	"No, I think it is likely that the spirit was intending to grant my wish."		"No, I think it is likely that the spirit was intending to grant my wish."

Zzhk at 12:27, 15 December 2013

2013-12-15T12:27:01Z

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	Only then did Kamito react.		Only then did Kamito react.

	This was a school where ~~maidens~~ attended. Holding hands with a boy was completely inconceivable.		This was a school where rich girls attended. Holding hands with a boy was completely inconceivable.

	Claire getting surprised was unavoidable.		Claire getting surprised was unavoidable.

Nhanbread at 12:18, 15 December 2013

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	Kamito looked at the young girl again.		Kamito looked at the young girl again.

	...They did ~~not~~ look quite similar.		...They did look quite similar.

	She was probably going to grow up into a beauty like her sister.		She was probably going to grow up into a beauty like her sister.

Nhanbread: /* Part 3 */ Not sure if Translator meant "rich" as in aristocrat but "maidens" felt more suitable in this context

2013-12-15T12:14:19Z

Part 3: Not sure if Translator meant "rich" as in aristocrat but "maidens" felt more suitable in this context

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	Only then did Kamito react.		Only then did Kamito react.

	This was a school where ~~rich girls~~ attended. Holding hands with a boy was completely inconceivable.		This was a school where maidens attended. Holding hands with a boy was completely inconceivable.

	Claire getting surprised was unavoidable.		Claire getting surprised was unavoidable.