Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume13 Chapter3 - Revision history

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

2016-01-01T02:38:42Z

reformatting + consistency

← Older revision		Revision as of 02:38, 1 January 2016
Line 11:		Line 11:
	In front of a small house by the riverside, Claire pressed her hand against her chest, adjusting her breathing, trying to calm down.		In front of a small house by the riverside, Claire pressed her hand against her chest, adjusting her breathing, trying to calm down.

	It was already four years since she was separated from her parents. Four years ago, due to the ~~«Calamity Queen»~~'s betrayal, Claire's parents were stripped of their noble status and thrown into the imperial capital's Balsas Prison.		It was already four years since she was separated from her parents. Four years ago, due to the Calamity Queen's betrayal, Claire's parents were stripped of their noble status and thrown into the imperial capital's Balsas Prison.

	Due to having served the Ordesia imperial family for many years, they were not treated like other convicts of heavy crimes despite being imprisoned. With only their freedom restricted, it was a state more akin to house arrest.		Due to having served the Ordesia imperial family for many years, they were not treated like other convicts of heavy crimes despite being imprisoned. With only their freedom restricted, it was a state more akin to house arrest.
Line 21:		Line 21:
	The Empire's council was greatly divided over this matter, hence her wish did receive an official response. But due to the increased prestige and influence of the second princess, Fianna's words now held greater weight and finally under her efforts, Claire's parents finally regained their freedom.		The Empire's council was greatly divided over this matter, hence her wish did receive an official response. But due to the increased prestige and influence of the second princess, Fianna's words now held greater weight and finally under her efforts, Claire's parents finally regained their freedom.

	However, their noble title was not restored and their castle and lands were taken by the Empire. All that was left for the Elstein family was a small patch of land and this house.		However, their noble title was not restored, and their castle and lands were taken by the Empire. All that was left for the Elstein family was a small patch of land and this house.

	Compared to their former castle, this was a very modest house.		Compared to their former castle, this was a very modest house.
Line 47:		Line 47:
	Sitting around the table in the room, there were too many things to talk about after being separated for four years.		Sitting around the table in the room, there were too many things to talk about after being separated for four years.

	Life in the prep school, enrolling in Areishia Spirit Academy, entering the ~~«Blade Dance»~~, also about Kamito—		Life in the prep school, enrolling in Areishia Spirit Academy, entering the Blade Dance, also about Kamito—

	"Eating canned food all the time is not good for your health."		"Eating canned food all the time is not good for your health."
Line 79:		Line 79:
	Claire coughed lightly, hastily changing the subject.		Claire coughed lightly, hastily changing the subject.

	"I met Ren Ashbell in this time's ~~«Blade Dance»~~."		"I met Ren Ashbell in this time's Blade Dance."

	"...Ohoh, the girl who placated the ~~«Fire~~ Elemental ~~Lord»~~'s wrath."		"...Ohoh, the girl who placated the Fire Elemental Lord's wrath."

	"Yeah... I worship her very much. This time, I finally got to meet her."		"Yeah... I worship her very much. This time, I finally got to meet her."

	With great fervor, Claire kept telling her parents about her(him). Not the ~~«Strongest~~ Blade ~~Dancer»~~ she idolized from three years ago but the Ren Ashbell who had ~~fight~~ alongside her as a teammate.		With great fervor, Claire kept telling her parents about her(him). Not the Strongest Blade Dancer she idolized from three years ago but the Ren Ashbell who had fought alongside her as a teammate.

	"She(he) is stronger and kinder than anyone. A very gallant person—"		"She(he) is stronger and kinder than anyone. A very gallant person—"
Line 129:		Line 129:
	Like when she was young, Claire hugged her mother's arm.		Like when she was young, Claire hugged her mother's arm.

	She had been hesitant whether she should tell her parents about her sister. But if she did that, it would involve the matter of the ~~«Elemental Lords»~~ going insane. About the ~~«Otherworldly Darkness»~~ eating away at this world, the water elemental lord had forbid them to tell anyone else.		She had been hesitant whether she should tell her parents about her sister. But if she did that, it would involve the matter of the Elemental Lords going insane. About the Otherworldly Darkness eating away at this world, the water elemental lord had forbid them to tell anyone else.

	(...Mother, I will surely bring Nee-sama back.)		(...Mother, I will surely bring Nee-sama back.)
Line 155:		Line 155:
	The woman who replied had crimson eyes and jade-green hair.		The woman who replied had crimson eyes and jade-green hair.

	Vivian Melosa. A merchant belonging to ~~«Murders»~~ who had infiltrated the Academy Town several months earlier to sell Cursed ~~Seal Armaments~~ to students. Condemned with a death sentence, she finally managed to avoid death thanks to the ~~«Dusk Witch»~~'s help. However, having committed atrocious crimes, she was probably never going to see the light of day again.		Vivian Melosa. A merchant belonging to Murders who had infiltrated the Academy Town several months earlier to sell Cursed Armament Seals to students. Condemned with a death sentence, she finally managed to avoid death thanks to the Dusk Witch's help. However, having committed atrocious crimes, she was probably never going to see the light of day again.

	"I was too foolish. To think I could get away with doing such things right under the witch's nose—"		"I was too foolish. To think I could get away with doing such things right under the witch's nose—"
Line 173:		Line 173:
	Visible under the faint lighting was a face branded with seals.		Visible under the faint lighting was a face branded with seals.

	Jio Inzagi. The former ~~«Instructional School»~~ assassin who was imprisoned by the Empire after his defeat at Kamito's hands in the battle at the Academy Town's abandoned mine. With one arm amputated and the power of the Cursed ~~Seal Armaments~~ lost, only the flames of hatred still burned violently, flashing in his eyes.		Jio Inzagi. The former Instructional School assassin who was imprisoned by the Empire after his defeat at Kamito's hands in the battle at the Academy Town's abandoned mine. With one arm amputated and the power of the Cursed Armament Seals lost, only the flames of hatred still burned violently, flashing in his eyes.

	"—I'll kill him, kill him, kill him, kill him!"		"—I'll kill him, kill him, kill him, kill him!"
Line 197:		Line 197:
	"Oahhhhhhhh.... That really hurts!"		"Oahhhhhhhh.... That really hurts!"

	The sound of finger bones breaking seemed to have sounded. The bars had been strengthened using spirit magic, not something an ~~«Instructional School»~~ assassin could break barehanded.		The sound of finger bones breaking seemed to have sounded. The bars had been strengthened using spirit magic, not something an Instructional School assassin could break barehanded.

	"...Oh my, watching your stupidity makes me want to cry."		"...Oh my, watching your stupidity makes me want to cry."
Line 239:		Line 239:
	The soldiers guarding the prison screamed pitifully one after another. For the central region of the imperial capital to be attacked, it was totally unthinkable.		The soldiers guarding the prison screamed pitifully one after another. For the central region of the imperial capital to be attacked, it was totally unthinkable.

	"Haha, kick them all away—~~«Ungoliant»~~!"		"Haha, kick them all away—Ungoliant!"

	A girl's adorable voice resounded in the underground darkness. The giant spider spirit waved its eight legs, sending the surrounding walls and soldiers flying like cut grass, creating a total mess.		A girl's adorable voice resounded in the underground darkness. The giant spider spirit waved its eight legs, sending the surrounding walls and soldiers flying like cut grass, creating a total mess.
Line 249:		Line 249:
	Gray hair tied as twintails on the sides of her head. Blue eyes as clear as ice.		Gray hair tied as twintails on the sides of her head. Blue eyes as clear as ice.

	"You, aren't you the ~~«Instructional School»~~'s number two—Muir Alenstarl!?"		"You, aren't you the Instructional School's number two—Muir Alenstarl!?"

	"...Hmm?"		"...Hmm?"
Line 269:		Line 269:
	Jio angrily hammered the iron bars but of course, the bars remained unmoving.		Jio angrily hammered the iron bars but of course, the bars remained unmoving.

	"Hey, get me out right now, ~~«Monster»~~!"		"Hey, get me out right now, Monster!"

	The instant he yelled at Muir—		The instant he yelled at Muir—
Line 283:		Line 283:
	Amidst the screaming and shouting, another girl jumped down from the spider.		Amidst the screaming and shouting, another girl jumped down from the spider.

	"Once the ~~«Numbers»~~ arrive, it'll be troublesome."		"Once the Numbers arrive, it'll be troublesome."

	"Hmph, Muir got it, Lily—"		"Hmph, Muir got it, Lily—"

	The spider-shaped militarized spirit spewed out a great amount of silk, wiping out the soldiers guarding the prison. Having gotten off the spider, Lily walked past Jio's cell, coming in front of ~~Vivan~~'s.		The spider-shaped militarized spirit spewed out a great amount of silk, wiping out the soldiers guarding the prison. Having gotten off the spider, Lily walked past Jio's cell, coming in front of Vivian's.

	"Hey hey. Stop ignoring me, bitch!"		"Hey hey. Stop ignoring me, bitch!"
Line 295:		Line 295:
	A spirit crystal's light shone on Vivian who was sitting in a corner of the cell.		A spirit crystal's light shone on Vivian who was sitting in a corner of the cell.

	"—~~«Murders»~~ merchant, Vivian Melosa."		"—Murders merchant, Vivian Melosa."

	"..."		"..."
Line 303:		Line 303:
	"...Give me a break. Just let me continue to stay here."		"...Give me a break. Just let me continue to stay here."

	Sitting there, Vivian Melosa answered emptily. Apparently, her fear of the ~~«Dusk Witch»~~ had completely crushed her mind.		Sitting there, Vivian Melosa answered emptily. Apparently, her fear of the Dusk Witch had completely crushed her mind.

	"You don't want to regain your freedom?"		"You don't want to regain your freedom?"
Line 327:		Line 327:
	"...What now?"		"...What now?"

	"You need power, right? Then take me. I am the ~~«Instructional School»~~'s only successor of the ~~«Demon King»~~—"		"You need power, right? Then take me. I am the Instructional School's only successor of the Demon King—"

	"Successor of the ~~«Demon King»~~, you say?"		"Successor of the Demon King, you say?"

	Cardinal stopped walking and looked back.		Cardinal stopped walking and looked back.

Zzhk: /* Part 3 */

2015-05-30T08:10:58Z

Part 3

← Older revision		Revision as of 08:10, 30 May 2015
Line 167:		Line 167:
	"...I will surely escape from here."		"...I will surely escape from here."

	The grinning youth's ~~left~~ arm was hanging loosely. Although the wounds had healed, it was impossible to swing a sword properly without trouble.		The grinning youth's arm was hanging loosely. Although the wounds had healed, it was impossible to swing a sword properly without trouble.

	"—Then ''I'll kill that guy''."		"—Then ''I'll kill that guy''."

Zzhk: Undo revision 445077 by 72.26.69.84 (talk) the text says 左腕

2015-05-29T23:29:48Z

Undo revision 445077 by 72.26.69.84 (talk) the text says 左腕

← Older revision		Revision as of 23:29, 29 May 2015
Line 187:		Line 187:
	To prevent Jio from seeking revenge? Or to avoid trouble arising if Jio told the Imperial Knights about that boy—		To prevent Jio from seeking revenge? Or to avoid trouble arising if Jio told the Imperial Knights about that boy—

	"I'll definitely find you, the guy who took away my ~~right~~ arm..."		"I'll definitely find you, the guy who took away my left arm..."

	"...Futile. No one can escape from this prison!"		"...Futile. No one can escape from this prison!"

72.26.69.84: /* Part 3 */

2015-05-29T19:28:26Z

Part 3

← Older revision		Revision as of 19:28, 29 May 2015
Line 187:		Line 187:
	To prevent Jio from seeking revenge? Or to avoid trouble arising if Jio told the Imperial Knights about that boy—		To prevent Jio from seeking revenge? Or to avoid trouble arising if Jio told the Imperial Knights about that boy—

	"I'll definitely find you, the guy who took away my ~~left~~ arm..."		"I'll definitely find you, the guy who took away my right arm..."

	"...Futile. No one can escape from this prison!"		"...Futile. No one can escape from this prison!"

Cthaeh: Undo revision 396752 by 117.2.224.58 (talk)

2014-10-23T01:58:46Z

Undo revision 396752 by 117.2.224.58 (talk)

← Older revision	Revision as of 01:58, 23 October 2014
Line 1:	Line 1:
		==Chapter 3 - Team Inferno Reborn==

		===Part 1===

		—A few days prior to Kamito and Rinslet's departure from the Academy...

		Claire returned to her homeland by herself—The former territory of Elstein.

		"Father and Mother are here, right..."

		In front of a small house by the riverside, Claire pressed her hand against her chest, adjusting her breathing, trying to calm down.

		It was already four years since she was separated from her parents. Four years ago, due to the «Calamity Queen»'s betrayal, Claire's parents were stripped of their noble status and thrown into the imperial capital's Balsas Prison.

		Due to having served the Ordesia imperial family for many years, they were not treated like other convicts of heavy crimes despite being imprisoned. With only their freedom restricted, it was a state more akin to house arrest.

		However, these long years of prison life finally came to an end recently. During the Blade Dance held earlier, the Ordesia Empire's team had obtained victory. As the leader of the winning team, Claire Rouge was rewarded by the Empire.

		Naturally, Claire's wish was a pardon for her parents.

		The Empire's council was greatly divided over this matter, hence her wish did receive an official response. But due to the increased prestige and influence of the second princess, Fianna's words now held greater weight and finally under her efforts, Claire's parents finally regained their freedom.

		However, their noble title was not restored and their castle and lands were taken by the Empire. All that was left for the Elstein family was a small patch of land and this house.

		Compared to their former castle, this was a very modest house.

		Standing at the door to the house, Claire looked around nervously.

		She pressed

117.2.224.58: /* Chapter 3 - nhóm Inferno hồi sinh

2014-10-23T01:49:29Z

/* Chapter 3 - nhóm Inferno hồi sinh

← Older revision		Revision as of 01:49, 23 October 2014
Line 1:		Line 1:
	~~==Chapter 3 - Team Inferno Reborn==~~

	~~===Part 1===~~

	~~—A few days prior to Kamito and Rinslet's departure from the Academy...~~

	~~Claire returned to her homeland by herself—The former territory of Elstein.~~

	~~"Father and Mother are here, right..."~~

	~~In front of a small house by the riverside, Claire pressed her hand against her chest, adjusting her breathing, trying to calm down.~~

	It was already four years since she was separated from her parents. Four years ago, due to the «Calamity Queen»'s betrayal, Claire's parents were stripped of their noble status and thrown into the imperial capital's Balsas Prison.

	Due to having served the Ordesia imperial family for many years, they were not treated like other convicts of heavy crimes despite being imprisoned. With only their freedom restricted, it was a state more akin to house arrest.

	However, these long years of prison life finally came to an end recently. During the Blade Dance held earlier, the Ordesia Empire's team had obtained victory. As the leader of the winning team, Claire Rouge was rewarded by the Empire.

	~~Naturally, Claire's wish was a pardon for her parents.~~

	The Empire's council was greatly divided over this matter, hence her wish did receive an official response. But due to the increased prestige and influence of the second princess, Fianna's words now held greater weight and finally under her efforts, Claire's parents finally regained their freedom.

	~~However, their noble title was not restored and their castle and lands were taken by the Empire. All that was left for the Elstein family was a small patch of land and this house.~~

	~~Compared to their former castle, this was a very modest house.~~

	~~Standing at the door to the house, Claire looked around nervously.~~

	~~She pressed~~

Zzhk: /* Part 3 */

2014-08-11T08:20:19Z

Part 3

← Older revision		Revision as of 08:20, 11 August 2014
Line 187:		Line 187:
	To prevent Jio from seeking revenge? Or to avoid trouble arising if Jio told the Imperial Knights about that boy—		To prevent Jio from seeking revenge? Or to avoid trouble arising if Jio told the Imperial Knights about that boy—

	"I'll definitely find you, the guy who took away my left ~~hand~~..."		"I'll definitely find you, the guy who took away my left arm..."

	"...Futile. No one can escape from this prison!"		"...Futile. No one can escape from this prison!"
Line 197:		Line 197:
	"Oahhhhhhhh.... That really hurts!"		"Oahhhhhhhh.... That really hurts!"

	The sound of finger bones breaking seemed to have sounded. The bars had been strengthened using spirit magic, not something an «Instructional School»~~'s assassins~~ could break barehanded.		The sound of finger bones breaking seemed to have sounded. The bars had been strengthened using spirit magic, not something an «Instructional School» assassin could break barehanded.

	"...Oh my, watching your stupidity makes me want to cry."		"...Oh my, watching your stupidity makes me want to cry."
Line 223:		Line 223:
	Crash—		Crash—

	Accompanied by a deafening sound, the ~~cell~~'s ceiling crashed down.		Accompanied by a deafening sound, the prison's ceiling crashed down.

	"...Wha!?"		"...Wha!?"
Line 381:		Line 381:
	Looking at the inmate in the cell, the masked girl sighed.		Looking at the inmate in the cell, the masked girl sighed.

	"Atonement huh? However, the more you act like this the more I want you."		"Atonement huh? However, the more you act like this, the more I want you."

	"...What are you talking about?"		"...What are you talking about?"

Zzhk: Reverted edits by Veritatis cupitor (talk) to last revision by Zzhk

2014-07-20T02:10:06Z

Reverted edits by Veritatis cupitor (talk) to last revision by Zzhk

← Older revision		Revision as of 02:10, 20 July 2014
Line 89:		Line 89:
	"She(he) is stronger and kinder than anyone. A very gallant person—"		"She(he) is stronger and kinder than anyone. A very gallant person—"

	Only when talking about Ren Ashbell was she able to express the feelings in her heart with honesty and forthrightness.		Only when talking about Ren Ashbell was she the most able to express the feelings in her heart with honesty and forthrightness.

	(W-What should I do, these feelings in my heart are suddenly surging forth...)		(W-What should I do, these feelings in my heart are suddenly surging forth...)

Veritatis cupitor at 00:28, 20 July 2014

2014-07-20T00:28:33Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 00:28, 20 July 2014
Line 89:		Line 89:
	"She(he) is stronger and kinder than anyone. A very gallant person—"		"She(he) is stronger and kinder than anyone. A very gallant person—"

	Only when talking about Ren Ashbell was she ~~the most~~ able to express the feelings in her heart with honesty and forthrightness.		Only when talking about Ren Ashbell was she able to express the feelings in her heart with honesty and forthrightness.

	(W-What should I do, these feelings in my heart are suddenly surging forth...)		(W-What should I do, these feelings in my heart are suddenly surging forth...)

Zzhk at 20:52, 12 May 2014

2014-05-12T20:52:02Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 20:52, 12 May 2014
Line 125:		Line 125:
	"Y-Yes!"		"Y-Yes!"

	After having dinner, Claire went to sleep, ~~embracing her mother on~~ the same bed.		After having dinner, Claire went to sleep, squeezing onto the same bed as her mother.

	Like when she was young, Claire hugged her mother's arm.		Like when she was young, Claire hugged her mother's arm.