Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter4 - Revision history

Rxls at 14:46, 28 June 2018

2018-06-28T14:46:13Z

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	==Chapter 4: The Wolf, the Cat and the Knight==		==Chapter 4 - The Wolf, the Cat and the Knight==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

Rxls: Undo revision 535318 by Masterupc (talk)

2018-06-28T14:30:28Z

Undo revision 535318 by Masterupc (talk)

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	"..."		"..."

	...Guu, suddenly his stomach growled.		....Guu, suddenly his stomach growled.

	Feeling exhausted, Kamito lowered his arm that was raised towards the roof.		Feeling exhausted, Kamito lowered his arm that was raised towards the roof.
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	As he started to seriously entertain that thought, from somewhere, the smell of delicious soup flowed in.		As he started to seriously entertain that thought, from somewhere, the smell of delicious soup flowed in.

	"...Hmm?"		"....Hmm?"

	Frowning, Kamito got up from the bed.		Frowning, Kamito got up from the bed.
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	"Are you alright, milady?"		"Are you alright, milady?"

	Worried about Rinslet, the ~~maid~~, Carol, asked.		Worried about Rinslet, the Maid, Carol, asked.

	Kamito had no choice but to open the door, Rinslet glared at him with tears in her eyes.		Kamito had no choice but to open the door, Rinslet glared at him with tears in her eyes.
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	"No, you... Hands of kindness?"		"No, you... Hands of kindness?"

	It appeared that she was serious. Slowly, Kamito's head ~~started~~ aching.		It appeared that she was serious. Slowly, Kamito's head starts aching.

	(Sheesh, all the princesses of this academy are so troublesome.)		(Sheesh, all the princesses of this academy are so troublesome.)
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	Kamito observed the fighting of the two spirits.		Kamito observed the fighting of the two spirits.

	(Eh? What? ...A burning smell?)		(Eh? What? ......A burning smell?)

	Kamito frowned and looked around.		Kamito frowned and looked around.
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	Rinslet stroked her long platinum blonde hair and puffed up her chest proudly.		Rinslet stroked her long platinum blonde hair and puffed up her chest proudly.

	"..."		"......"

	Kamito stood motionlessly with a dumbfounded stare.		Kamito stood motionlessly with a dumbfounded stare.
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	"Kohon." Rinslet let out a dry cough.		"Kohon", Rinslet let out a dry cough.

	"...Seems like I went a bit too far."		"...Seems like I went a bit too far."
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	Black smoke slowly rose from the charred rubble.		Black smoke slowly rose from the charred rubble.

	"This is... What on earth is this?!"		"This is...... What on earth is this?!"

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	"You dare to call me a countryside noble!"		"You dare to call me a countryside noble!"

	Rinslet's face suddenly ~~turned~~ livid.		Rinslet's face suddenly turns livid.

	It appeared that the girl stepped on a mine that should not have been stepped on.		It appeared that the girl stepped on a mine that should not have been stepped on.
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	"M-Milady. Please calm down—"		"M-Milady. Please calm down—"

	"Fu-Fufu-Fu... Carol, I am quite calm."		"Fu-Fufu-Fu, ...Carol, I am quite calm."

	Rinslet revealed a bright smile... Although she tried to be ladylike, her face was still quite scary.		Rinslet revealed a bright smile... Although she tried to be ladylike, her face was still quite scary.
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	"Huh? Who are you saying that to?"		"Huh? Who are you saying that to?"

	"...Why you two? After destroying the hut, now you are having a duel. Please take mercy on me."		"...Why you two. After destroying the hut, now you are having a duel. Please take mercy on me."

	Kamito sighed deeply. Then suddenly he realized.		Kamito sighed deeply. Then suddenly he realized.
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	===References and Translation Notes===		===References and Translation Notes===
	<references />		<references/>

	{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter3\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter5}}		{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter3\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter5}}</noinclude>
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Masterupc: grammar, punctuation

2018-02-19T02:21:21Z

grammar, punctuation

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	"..."		"..."

	....Guu, suddenly his stomach growled.		...Guu, suddenly his stomach growled.

	Feeling exhausted, Kamito lowered his arm that was raised towards the roof.		Feeling exhausted, Kamito lowered his arm that was raised towards the roof.
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	As he started to seriously entertain that thought, from somewhere, the smell of delicious soup flowed in.		As he started to seriously entertain that thought, from somewhere, the smell of delicious soup flowed in.

	"....Hmm?"		"...Hmm?"

	Frowning, Kamito got up from the bed.		Frowning, Kamito got up from the bed.
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	"Are you alright, milady?"		"Are you alright, milady?"

	Worried about Rinslet, the ~~Maid~~, Carol, asked.		Worried about Rinslet, the maid, Carol, asked.

	Kamito had no choice but to open the door, Rinslet glared at him with tears in her eyes.		Kamito had no choice but to open the door, Rinslet glared at him with tears in her eyes.
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	"No, you... Hands of kindness?"		"No, you... Hands of kindness?"

	It appeared that she was serious. Slowly, Kamito's head ~~starts~~ aching.		It appeared that she was serious. Slowly, Kamito's head started aching.

	(Sheesh, all the princesses of this academy are so troublesome.)		(Sheesh, all the princesses of this academy are so troublesome.)
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	Kamito observed the fighting of the two spirits.		Kamito observed the fighting of the two spirits.

	(Eh? What? ~~...~~...A burning smell?)		(Eh? What? ...A burning smell?)

	Kamito frowned and looked around.		Kamito frowned and looked around.
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	Rinslet stroked her long platinum blonde hair and puffed up her chest proudly.		Rinslet stroked her long platinum blonde hair and puffed up her chest proudly.

	"~~...~~..."		"..."

	Kamito stood motionlessly with a dumbfounded stare.		Kamito stood motionlessly with a dumbfounded stare.
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	"Kohon", Rinslet let out a dry cough.		"Kohon." Rinslet let out a dry cough.

	"...Seems like I went a bit too far."		"...Seems like I went a bit too far."
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	Black smoke slowly rose from the charred rubble.		Black smoke slowly rose from the charred rubble.

	"This is~~...~~... What on earth is this?!"		"This is... What on earth is this?!"

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	"You dare to call me a countryside noble!"		"You dare to call me a countryside noble!"

	Rinslet's face suddenly ~~turns~~ livid.		Rinslet's face suddenly turned livid.

	It appeared that the girl stepped on a mine that should not have been stepped on.		It appeared that the girl stepped on a mine that should not have been stepped on.
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	"M-Milady. Please calm down—"		"M-Milady. Please calm down—"

	"Fu-Fufu-Fu, ...Carol, I am quite calm."		"Fu-Fufu-Fu... Carol, I am quite calm."

	Rinslet revealed a bright smile... Although she tried to be ladylike, her face was still quite scary.		Rinslet revealed a bright smile... Although she tried to be ladylike, her face was still quite scary.
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	"Huh? Who are you saying that to?"		"Huh? Who are you saying that to?"

	"...Why you two. After destroying the hut, now you are having a duel. Please take mercy on me."		"...Why you two? After destroying the hut, now you are having a duel. Please take mercy on me."

	Kamito sighed deeply. Then suddenly he realized.		Kamito sighed deeply. Then suddenly he realized.
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	===References and Translation Notes===		===References and Translation Notes===
	<references/>		<references />

	{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter3\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter5}}</noinclude>		{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter3\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter5}}
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Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

2015-11-21T17:47:37Z

reformatting + consistency

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	"This is..."		"This is..."

	"It is the ~~contract~~ spirit of milady, the demon ice spirit Fenrir." Carol said with a smile.		"It is the contracted spirit of milady, the demon ice spirit Fenrir." Carol said with a smile.

	The imposing aura that white wolf carried, was definitely incomparable to a low level spirit.		The imposing aura that white wolf carried, was definitely incomparable to a low level spirit.
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	Kamito stood motionlessly with a dumbfounded stare.		Kamito stood motionlessly with a dumbfounded stare.

	By raining-down ice arrows, '''the hut was smashed into pieces'''.		By raining-down ice arrows, ''the hut was smashed into pieces''.

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	==References and Translation Notes==		===References and Translation Notes===
	<references/>		<references/>

	{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter3\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter5}}</noinclude>		{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter3\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter5}}</noinclude>

Cthaeh: mdash formatting only

2014-11-23T18:47:20Z

mdash formatting only

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	"Eh?"		"Eh?"

	(This young lady, by any chance)——		(This young lady, by any chance)—

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	"What's that? Isn't your family crest a dog?"		"What's that? Isn't your family crest a dog?"

	"Why ~~you— Laurenfrost~~'s family crest is a proud White Wolf!"		"Why you—Laurenfrost's family crest is a proud White Wolf!"

	"White Wolf? Changing it into a Chihuahua fits you better."		"White Wolf? Changing it into a Chihuahua fits you better."
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	"My home—"		"My home—"

	"Calm down. A fire of this scale, I'll put it out in no ~~time— Fenrir~~!"		"Calm down. A fire of this scale, I'll put it out in no time—Fenrir!"

	Rinslet cried out, the ice demon white wolf instantly came back to her side.		Rinslet cried out, the ice demon white wolf instantly came back to her side.
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	Just as one thought that, the white wolf suddenly disappeared in the air, and in Rinslet's hands, a huge Ice Longbow appeared.		Just as one thought that, the white wolf suddenly disappeared in the air, and in Rinslet's hands, a huge Ice Longbow appeared.

	Elemental ~~waffe — the~~ second purified form of the spirit.		Elemental waffe—the second purified form of the spirit.

	"Oh freezing ice fang, pierce your target! Freezing Arrow!"		"Oh freezing ice fang, pierce your target! Freezing Arrow!"

Cthaeh at 18:02, 23 November 2014

2014-11-23T18:02:21Z

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	Although he had not been turned into cinders after receiving a hit from that flame whip, maybe Claire had held back some of her power. Still, it didn't change the fact that it was quite painful.		Although he had not been turned into cinders after receiving a hit from that flame whip, maybe Claire had held back some of her power. Still, it didn't change the fact that it was quite painful.

	Claire must be harshly admonished by ~~Madam~~ Freya in the punishment room.		Claire must have been getting harshly admonished by Ms. Freya in the punishment room.

	Having eluded those female classmates who had enthusiastically pursued him, Kamito finally obtained a moment of peace.		Having eluded those female classmates who had enthusiastically pursued him, Kamito finally obtained a moment of peace.
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	Unlike other students, he had no classes for the afternoon. After all, he had entered the school just now and had not registered for the courses.		Unlike other students, he had no classes for the afternoon. After all, he had entered the school just now and had not registered for the courses.

	~~Areishiya~~ Spirit Academy operated on a credit system in which the students could freely choose their preferred courses so long as they could meet the requirements. Because of the enormous diversity of the contracted spirits of the students, a uniform curriculum wouldn't be able to fully develop the potential of each and every princess maiden.		Areishia Spirit Academy operated on a credit system in which the students could freely choose their preferred courses so long as they could meet the requirements. Because of the enormous diversity of the contracted spirits of the students, a uniform curriculum wouldn't be able to fully develop the potential of each and every princess maiden.

	"For the time being, I'll make some preparations for school life starting tomorrow."		"For the time being, I'll make some preparations for school life starting tomorrow."
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	Once again the bowl was raised.		Once again the bowl was raised.

	Then in front of the Kamito was the face of that princess with platinum-~~blond~~ hair.		Then in front of the Kamito was the face of that princess with platinum-blonde hair.

	Her name should be Rinslet Laurenfrost if he remembered correctly.		Her name should be Rinslet Laurenfrost if he remembered correctly.
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	That looked painful... What the hell was she here for anyway?		That looked painful... What the hell was she here for anyway?

	"Are you alright, ~~my lady~~?"		"Are you alright, milady?"

	Worried about Rinslet, the Maid, Carol, asked.		Worried about Rinslet, the Maid, Carol, asked.
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	"Rather than living in a condition like this, you should come to my house. I'll specially hire you as a servant."		"Rather than living in a condition like this, you should come to my house. I'll specially hire you as a servant."

	"Ah, ~~my lady~~, I believe he will look great if we dress him as a maid."		"Ah, milady, I believe he will look great if we dress him as a maid."

	Carol showed her support with a big smile. (This girl is troublesome as well.)		Carol showed her support with a big smile. (This girl is troublesome as well.)
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	Rinslet suddenly blushed and turned her face away.		Rinslet suddenly blushed and turned her face away.

	"Fufu, ~~my lady~~ is so..."		"Fufu, milady is so..."

	Carol covered her mouth and giggled.		Carol covered her mouth and giggled.
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	A voice, with which had become familiar to Kamito, suddenly passed into his ears.		A voice, with which had become familiar to Kamito, suddenly passed into his ears.

	Claire was walking towards them, her red ~~pigtails~~ swaying.		Claire was walking towards them, her red twintails swaying.

	It appeared that ~~Madam~~ Freya's admonishing session was finally over.		It appeared that Ms. Freya's admonishing session was finally over.

	"Don't feed my contracted spirit without permission, you thieving dog."		"Don't feed my contracted spirit without permission, you thieving dog."
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	"This is..."		"This is..."

	"It is the contract spirit of ~~my lady~~, the demon ice spirit ~~«Fenrir»~~." Carol said with a smile.		"It is the contract spirit of milady, the demon ice spirit Fenrir." Carol said with a smile.

	The imposing aura that white wolf carried, was definitely incomparable to a low level spirit.		The imposing aura that white wolf carried, was definitely incomparable to a low level spirit.
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	"Well, your dog is still the same, with its coat color barely meritable."		"Well, your dog is still the same, with its coat color barely meritable."

	Claire shook her ~~pigtails~~ in disdain.		Claire shook her twintails in disdain.

	"You... You called it a dog again, You flat chest! I absolutely will not forgive your insult to the family of Laurenfrost!"		"You... You called it a dog again, You flat chest! I absolutely will not forgive your insult to the family of Laurenfrost!"
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	Covered with the chilling air, the white wolf roared, and dashed toward Claire.		Covered with the chilling air, the white wolf roared, and dashed toward Claire.

	"Who are you calling flat chest!? Come, ~~«Scarlet»~~!"		"Who are you calling flat chest!? Come, Scarlet!"

	Claire lashed at the ground with her whip. A scorching hell cat immediately appeared from the twirling rising flames.		Claire lashed at the ground with her whip. A scorching hell cat immediately appeared from the twirling rising flames.
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	Rinslet cried out, the ice demon white wolf instantly came back to her side.		Rinslet cried out, the ice demon white wolf instantly came back to her side.

	Just as one thought that, the white wolf suddenly disappeared in the air, and in Rinslet's hands, a huge ~~«Ice Longbow»~~ appeared.		Just as one thought that, the white wolf suddenly disappeared in the air, and in Rinslet's hands, a huge Ice Longbow appeared.

	~~Spirit~~ waffe — the second purified form of the spirit.		Elemental waffe — the second purified form of the spirit.

	"Oh freezing ice fang, pierce your target! ~~«Freezing Arrow»~~!"		"Oh freezing ice fang, pierce your target! Freezing Arrow!"

	Rinslet drew an ice arrow and shot.		Rinslet drew an ice arrow and shot.
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	"Well, with me here it is a piece of cake!"		"Well, with me here it is a piece of cake!"

	Rinslet stroked her long platinum ~~blond~~ hair and puffed up her chest proudly.		Rinslet stroked her long platinum blonde hair and puffed up her chest proudly.

	"......"		"......"
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	"Wait, this guy is my slave spirit that I caught!"		"Wait, this guy is my slave spirit that I caught!"

	"I tamed ~~Kazahaya~~ Kamito: he is my servant!"		"I tamed Kazehaya Kamito: he is my servant!"

	Claire and Rinslet arbitrarily declared their ownership of Kamito at the same time.		Claire and Rinslet arbitrarily declared their ownership of Kamito at the same time.
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	"You... You... You...!"		"You... You... You...!"

	"My-~~My lady~~. Please calm down—"		"M-Milady. Please calm down—"

	"Fu-Fufu-Fu, ...Carol, I am quite calm."		"Fu-Fufu-Fu, ...Carol, I am quite calm."
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	"You went too far." Ellis chided the two, then turned to Claire.		"You went too far." Ellis chided the two, then turned to Claire.

	She cleared her throat and said: "In short, I will report this instance to the knight headquarters. The charge will be using spirits to start a small fire ~~and~~ and causing property damage. We'll give you notice for the specifics of the punishment at a later time. Please refrain from doing such stupid things again. We are busy, you know?"		She cleared her throat and said: "In short, I will report this instance to the knight headquarters. The charge will be using spirits to start a small fire and causing property damage. We'll give you notice for the specifics of the punishment at a later time. Please refrain from doing such stupid things again. We are busy, you know?"

	"Let's go." Ellis said and was about to lead the other two away.		"Let's go." Ellis said and was about to lead the other two away.
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	Ignoring Kamito who was tilting his head, Ellis turned to Claire.		Ignoring Kamito who was tilting his head, Ellis turned to Claire.

	"The time will be 2am tonight, in front of the ~~«Gate»~~. I'll leave it to you to decide the format."		"The time will be 2am tonight, in front of the Gate. I'll leave it to you to decide the format."

	"...One-on-one is too much trouble. How about a three-man match."		"...One-on-one is too much trouble. How about a three-man match."

Yune: /* Chapter 4: The Wolf, the Cat and the Knight */

2014-09-07T08:30:22Z

Chapter 4: The Wolf, the Cat and the Knight

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	"Wait, this guy is my slave spirit that I caught!"		"Wait, this guy is my slave spirit that I caught!"

	"I tamed Kamito ~~Kazahaya~~: he is my servant!"		"I tamed Kazahaya Kamito: he is my servant!"

	Claire and Rinslet arbitrarily declared their ownership of Kamito at the same time.		Claire and Rinslet arbitrarily declared their ownership of Kamito at the same time.

Yune: /* Chapter 4: The Wolf, the Cat and the Knight */

2014-09-07T08:29:57Z

Chapter 4: The Wolf, the Cat and the Knight

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	Kamito asked with half-closed eyes<ref>An expression one shows when humoring another especially when it is too bothersome to go against the other.</ref>.		Kamito asked with half-closed eyes<ref>An expression one shows when humoring another especially when it is too bothersome to go against the other.</ref>.

	"Fuu, you must be hungry, right? Kamito ~~Kazehaya~~?"		"Fuu, you must be hungry, right? Kazehaya Kamito?"

	"Yeah."		"Yeah."

Zzhk at 09:25, 18 August 2014

2014-08-18T09:25:54Z

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	~~(Yare, Yare~~.~~<ref>The term '''Yare, yare''' can be loosely translated as '''Oh dear''', basically it's like an exclamation of slight weariness.</ref>~~ I have suffered quite a lot since coming here.)		Good grief. I have suffered quite a lot since coming here.

	One hour had passed since then. Slowly rubbing the pain in his back away, Kamito walked through the courtyard of the academy.		One hour had passed since then. Slowly rubbing the pain in his back away, Kamito walked through the courtyard of the academy.
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	The cold wind swirled. Rinslet's hair flew up, rippling.		The cold wind swirled. Rinslet's hair flew up, rippling.

	~~'''~~—Oh freezing beast with Ice-teeth, merciless hunter of the forest.~~'''~~		—Oh freezing beast with Ice-teeth, merciless hunter of the forest.

	~~'''~~—Now is the time to abide the contract of blood, hasten to my side as commanded!~~'''~~		—Now is the time to abide the contract of blood, hasten to my side as commanded!

	As soon as Rinslet finished chanting the summoning spirit spell, a gust of ice storm engulfed all of the surroundings.		As soon as Rinslet finished chanting the summoning spirit spell, a gust of ice storm engulfed all of the surroundings.
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	"Ahhh... I knew this is how it would be..."		"Ahhh... I knew this is how it would be..."

	In front of rubble heap that was his former home, Kamito ~~reluctantly dropped~~ his ~~shoulder~~.		In front of rubble heap that was his former home, Kamito slumped his shoulders in dejection.

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Wololo: /* Part 1 */

2014-08-18T02:12:03Z

Part 1

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	Yare, Yare.<ref>The term '''Yare, yare''' can be loosely translated as '''Oh dear''', basically it's like an exclamation of slight weariness.</ref> I have suffered quite a lot since coming here.		(Yare, Yare.<ref>The term '''Yare, yare''' can be loosely translated as '''Oh dear''', basically it's like an exclamation of slight weariness.</ref> I have suffered quite a lot since coming here.)

	One hour had passed since then. Slowly rubbing the pain in his back away, Kamito walked through the courtyard of the academy.		One hour had passed since then. Slowly rubbing the pain in his back away, Kamito walked through the courtyard of the academy.