Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter5 - Revision history

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	==Chapter 5: Claire's Feelings==		==Chapter 5 - Claire's Feelings==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

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	Transparent jelly-like water was twining itself slimily around her smooth, bare body!		Transparent jelly-like water was twining itself slimily around her smooth, bare body!
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	"What's wrong!? What the heck is—"		"What's wrong!? What the heck is—"

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	Transparent jelly-like water was twining itself slimily around her smooth, bare body!		Transparent jelly-like water was twining itself slimily around her smooth, bare body!
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	"What's wrong!? What the heck is—"		"What's wrong!? What the heck is—"

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	"...K...Ka...Kamito, he...lp me...!"		"...K...Ka...Kamito, he...lp me...!"
	~~[[File:STnBD V01 002-003.jpg\|400px\|thumbnail\|right]]~~

	In front of his eyes was Claire, who collapsed on the floor and was gasping in agony.		In front of his eyes was Claire, who collapsed on the floor and was gasping in agony.
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	In this large continent, there was no one who did not know about that incident.		In this large continent, there was no one who did not know about that incident.

	Four years ago, the Queen, serving under the ~~fire~~ Elemental Lord—Rubia Elstein, suddenly snatched the strongest flame spirit, Laevateinn from the shrine and disappeared.		Four years ago, the Queen, serving under the Fire Elemental Lord—Rubia Elstein, suddenly snatched the strongest flame spirit, Laevateinn from the shrine and disappeared.

	After learning of the Queen's treachery, the outraged ~~flame~~ Elemental Lord got fired up and went into a frenzy.		After learning of the Queen's treachery, the outraged Fire Elemental Lord got fired up and went into a frenzy.

	It burned everything related to Elstein duke's territory, including the Ordesia Empire's land, the empire took enormous damage. And that did not put the Elemental Lord's anger to peace, about a year after that, no matter what method was used, not a single fire could be lit within the Ordesia Empire.		It burned everything related to Elstein duke's territory, including the Ordesia Empire's land, the empire took enormous damage. And that did not put the Elemental Lord's anger to peace, about a year after that, no matter what method was used, not a single fire could be lit within the Ordesia Empire.
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	That blade dance was splendidly vivid. At the finals, even with Numbers<!-- 十二騎将«nanba-zu»--> candidates of elementalists, she overwhelmed them.		That blade dance was splendidly vivid. At the finals, even with Numbers<!-- 十二騎将«nanba-zu»--> candidates of elementalists, she overwhelmed them.

	Due to her dedicated blade dance, the ~~flame~~ Elemental Lord's rage was finally appeased.		Due to her dedicated blade dance, the Fire Elemental Lord's rage was finally appeased.

	"Three years ago, I saw her blade dance at the assembly hall. I also feel that I want to be like that, a noble, strong elementalist."		"Three years ago, I saw her blade dance at the assembly hall. I also feel that I want to be like that, a noble, strong elementalist."
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	==References and Translation Notes==		===References and Translation Notes===
	<references/>		<references/>

	{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter4\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter6}}</noinclude>		{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter4\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter6}}</noinclude>

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	It was a certain somebody's fault, Kamito glared scornfully at Claire.		It was a certain somebody's fault, Kamito glared scornfully at Claire.

	"Hmm, it can't be helped. Today, I'll specially ~~feed— treat~~ you."		"Hmm, it can't be helped. Today, I'll specially feed—treat you."

	"Did you say feed? Did you say that?"		"Did you say feed? Did you say that?"
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	The shower installed in the room was a type of spirit device, which used the power of the water spirit.		The shower installed in the room was a type of spirit device, which used the power of the water spirit.

	To be clean in both mind and body at any time ~~was— the~~ ironclad rule of elementalists.		To be clean in both mind and body at any time was—the ironclad rule of elementalists.

	Kamito, feeling relieved, ignited the fire once again—		Kamito, feeling relieved, ignited the fire once again—
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	Then, Kamito's hair froze.		Then, Kamito's hair froze.

	She ~~was— not~~ nude.		She was—not nude.

	She was nude, but she was not exactly nude.		She was nude, but she was not exactly nude.
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	Claire murmured with her eyelashes slightly lowered.		Claire murmured with her eyelashes slightly lowered.

	~~Somehow— she~~ had an awfully lonely expression.		Somehow—she had an awfully lonely expression.

	After that, for a short while, there was only the sound of cutlery being used.		After that, for a short while, there was only the sound of cutlery being used.
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	At the very center, a shiny crimson red spirit crystal was inserted in it.		At the very center, a shiny crimson red spirit crystal was inserted in it.

	Kamito saw a crest engraved ~~there— and~~ raised his voice in surprise.		Kamito saw a crest engraved there—and raised his voice in surprise.

	"A flame lion... the crest of Elstein duke family!?"		"A flame lion... the crest of Elstein duke family!?"
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	It was the noblest of the nobles, turning out one of the five princess maidens, who stood at the top among all elementalists, — Queen, who served directly under the five great Elemental Lords. <!--精霊使いの頂点に立つ五人の姫巫女の一人——五大精霊王に直接仕える〈精霊姫〉を輩出している名門中の名門だ。-->		It was the noblest of the nobles, turning out one of the five princess maidens, who stood at the top among all elementalists, — Queen, who served directly under the five great Elemental Lords. <!--精霊使いの頂点に立つ五人の姫巫女の一人——五大精霊王に直接仕える〈精霊姫〉を輩出している名門中の名門だ。-->

	~~No— that~~ should have been so.		No—that should have been so.

	—Till four years ago, when that incident occurred.		—Till four years ago, when that incident occurred.
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	Rubia Elstein.		Rubia Elstein.

	The one who brought a great unprecedented calamity to the Ordesia ~~Empire— The~~ Calamity Queen.		The one who brought a great unprecedented calamity to the Ordesia Empire—The Calamity Queen.

	She too, same as the girl in front of him, had burning-like crimson red hair.		She too, same as the girl in front of him, had burning-like crimson red hair.
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	"Don't tell me, you're..."		"Don't tell me, you're..."

	"Yes, I am the Calamity ~~Queen —Rubia~~ Elstein'~~s— little~~ sister."		"Yes, I am the Calamity Queen—Rubia Elstein's—little sister."

	Claire looked straight into Kamito's eyes and nodded.		Claire looked straight into Kamito's eyes and nodded.
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	In this large continent, there was no one who did not know about that incident.		In this large continent, there was no one who did not know about that incident.

	Four years ago, the Queen, serving under the fire Elemental ~~Lord— Rubia~~ Elstein, suddenly snatched the strongest flame spirit, Laevateinn from the shrine and disappeared.		Four years ago, the Queen, serving under the fire Elemental Lord—Rubia Elstein, suddenly snatched the strongest flame spirit, Laevateinn from the shrine and disappeared.

	After learning of the Queen's treachery, the outraged flame Elemental Lord got fired up and went into a frenzy.		After learning of the Queen's treachery, the outraged flame Elemental Lord got fired up and went into a frenzy.
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	"...I see."		"...I see."

	Kamito looked at Claire with a complicated ~~expression— calmly~~ grasping his fist tightly.		Kamito looked at Claire with a complicated expression—calmly grasping his fist tightly.

	...After that, it was a strangely quiet time.		...After that, it was a strangely quiet time.
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	In the darkness illuminated by the blue ~~moon— a~~ black-winged angel gently alighted at the academy tower.		In the darkness illuminated by the blue moon—a black-winged angel gently alighted at the academy tower.

	It was a black haired girl, dressed in a jet black dress.		It was a black haired girl, dressed in a jet black dress.

Cthaeh at 18:02, 23 November 2014

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	"Don't make too much noise, because the dormitory secretary is super scary."		"Don't make too much noise, because the dormitory secretary is super scary."

	"A...~~aah~~...pardon my intrusion."		"Y...Yes...pardon my intrusion."

	For Claire, who is ideally pictured as arrogant, to be afraid of the dormitory secretary, his interest got piqued a little.		For Claire, who is ideally pictured as arrogant, to be afraid of the dormitory secretary, his interest got piqued a little.

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	==References and Translation Notes==		==References and Translation Notes==
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	{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter4\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter6}}</noinclude>		{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter4\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter6}}</noinclude>

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	(...Sigh, I have totally gotten myself into something troublesome.)		(...Sigh, I have totally gotten myself into something troublesome.)

	While walking on the stone pavement of the academy, Kamito sighed quite the number of times today. In front of his eyes was the culprit with her red ~~twin-tailed~~ hair swaying about.		While walking on the stone pavement of the academy, Kamito sighed quite the number of times today. In front of his eyes was the culprit with her red twintailed hair swaying about.

	As before he had an empty stomach, he had lost his house and to make matters worse that was the outcome from a duel by fellow elementalists.		As before he had an empty stomach, he had lost his house and to make matters worse that was the outcome from a duel by fellow elementalists.
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	As it was the right moment, Kamito blatantly sighed.		As it was the right moment, Kamito blatantly sighed.

	"Oh boy, the homeless me will have to sleep out in the ~~«Spirit Forest»~~."		"Oh boy, the homeless me will have to sleep out in the Spirit Forest."

	"......"		"......"
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	"Huh?"		"Huh?"

	...What did she suddenly propose, this ~~ojou~~-~~sama<ref>Ojou-sama is the Japanese term for a high born~~ lady~~, one who is well refined and often lives a sheltered life.</ref>~~.		...What did she suddenly propose, this high-class lady.

	"After all, if I left you outside, Rinslet would come meddling. And because you are my slave spirit, it is natural for me, the elementalist, to take care of you."		"After all, if I left you outside, Rinslet would come meddling. And because you are my slave spirit, it is natural for me, the elementalist, to take care of you."
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	There was a collapsed mountain of a large number of books. Clothes were left crumpled, plush toys and small items and so on, were scattered here and there till there was no place left to stand.		There was a collapsed mountain of a large number of books. Clothes were left crumpled, plush toys and small items and so on, were scattered here and there till there was no place left to stand.

	It did not look like a room of a pedigree ~~ojou~~-~~sama~~.		It did not look like a room of a pedigree high-class lady.

	"...You should at least do some cleaning."		"...You should at least do some cleaning."
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	He thought with such ability, she could ignore any team, however.		He thought with such ability, she could ignore any team, however.

	"But without gathering 5 people, you can't enter into the ~~«Blade Dance»~~."		"But without gathering 5 people, you can't enter into the Blade Dance."

	"...I... I'll manage it somehow. If I have to, I'll somehow gather up just that number of people."		"...I... I'll manage it somehow. If I have to, I'll somehow gather up just that number of people."
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	Canned tuna. Yakitori. Salted cod. Vegetables boiled in soy sauce. Beef stew....etc.		Canned tuna. Yakitori. Salted cod. Vegetables boiled in soy sauce. Beef stew....etc.

	Kamito was dumbfounded and looked down on the pyramid of cans. Canned foods ~~are~~ preserved foods that soldiers carry with them on a long campaign. It was at least not dinner for ~~an ojou~~-~~sama~~ attending the academy.		Kamito was dumbfounded and looked down on the pyramid of cans. Canned foods were preserved foods that soldiers carry with them on a long campaign. It was at least not dinner for a high-class young lady attending the academy.

	"...W...Why is it nothing but canned food? It is definitely bad for the body, you know."		"...W...Why is it nothing but canned food? It is definitely bad for the body, you know."
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	"D...Don't speak so lewdly, idiot!"		"D...Don't speak so lewdly, idiot!"

	"To misinterpret a very normal speech, I think that you're the lewd one. You read too much of those novels. Claire is a lewd ~~ojou-sama~~."		"To misinterpret a very normal speech, I think that you're the lewd one. You read too much of those novels. Claire is a lewd young lady."

	"U..uuuu!"		"U..uuuu!"
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	Claire placed pasta on the plate and said that with a nonchalant face. Certainly, using spirits consumed physical strength, so it was true that there were a lot of ladies with a slender figure.		Claire placed pasta on the plate and said that with a nonchalant face. Certainly, using spirits consumed physical strength, so it was true that there were a lot of ladies with a slender figure.

	"Hey, don't eat the dessert early. Despite being ~~an ojou~~-~~sama~~, you have bad manners."		"Hey, don't eat the dessert early. Despite being a high-class lady, you have bad manners."

	"Unh, shut up! That's up to me, right, you panty thief!"		"Unh, shut up! That's up to me, right, you panty thief!"
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	It was a simple question.		It was a simple question.

	Despite using a spirit such as Scarlet, she still risked harming her body to reach out to a ~~«sealed spirit»~~. He wanted to know the reason for that.		Despite using a spirit such as Scarlet, she still risked harming her body to reach out to a sealed spirit. He wanted to know the reason for that.

	"..."		"..."
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	In this large continent, there was no one who did not know about that incident.		In this large continent, there was no one who did not know about that incident.

	Four years ago, the Queen, serving under the fire Elemental Lord— Rubia Elstein, suddenly snatched the strongest flame spirit, ~~«Laevateinn»~~ from the shrine and disappeared.		Four years ago, the Queen, serving under the fire Elemental Lord— Rubia Elstein, suddenly snatched the strongest flame spirit, Laevateinn from the shrine and disappeared.

	After learning of the Queen's treachery, the outraged flame Elemental Lord got fired up and went into a frenzy.		After learning of the Queen's treachery, the outraged flame Elemental Lord got fired up and went into a frenzy.
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	With the reward given to the winner of the Blade Dance—		With the reward given to the winner of the Blade Dance—

	For the sake of obtaining the right of granting just one desired ~~'wish'~~.		For the sake of obtaining the right of granting just one desired Wish.

	Claire's expression was filled with a tragic determination.		Claire's expression was filled with a tragic determination.
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	Claire slightly looked down and muttered.		Claire slightly looked down and muttered.

	"This round's ~~Blade Dance~~ has that Ren Ashbell participating."		"This round's blade dance has that Ren Ashbell participating."

	"...!? Kehoo, kehoo—"		"...!? Kehoo, kehoo—"
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	She suddenly appeared three years ago, the strongest blade dancer.		She suddenly appeared three years ago, the strongest blade dancer.

	That ~~Blade Dance~~ was splendidly vivid. At the finals, even with Numbers<!-- 十二騎将«nanba-zu»--> candidates of elementalists, she overwhelmed them.		That blade dance was splendidly vivid. At the finals, even with Numbers<!-- 十二騎将«nanba-zu»--> candidates of elementalists, she overwhelmed them.

	Due to her dedicated ~~Blade Dance~~, the flame Elemental Lord's rage was finally appeased.		Due to her dedicated blade dance, the flame Elemental Lord's rage was finally appeased.

	"Three years ago, I saw her ~~Blade Dance~~ at the assembly hall. I also feel that I want to be like that, a noble, strong elementalist."		"Three years ago, I saw her blade dance at the assembly hall. I also feel that I want to be like that, a noble, strong elementalist."

	Claire blushed and looked down a little embarrassed.		Claire blushed and looked down a little embarrassed.
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	While looking at the face, making the gentle sleeping noise, Kamito smiled bitterly.		While looking at the face, making the gentle sleeping noise, Kamito smiled bitterly.

	When he put Claire to the bed, her cherry ~~blossom~~ lips faintly moved.		When he put Claire to the bed, her cherry lips faintly moved.

	"Elder Sister<!--Nee-sama-->....Father<!--Otou-sama-->...Mother<!--Okaa-sama-->..."		"Elder Sister<!--Nee-sama-->....Father<!--Otou-sama-->...Mother<!--Okaa-sama-->..."