Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume2 Chapter1 Draft - Revision history

KuroiHikari: updating draft to match updated edition. I had to change some either because I felt so or that my older translations resulted in incorrect interpretations.

2013-06-29T05:20:22Z

updating draft to match updated edition. I had to change some either because I felt so or that my older translations resulted in incorrect interpretations.

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			==Chapter 1: Team Battle==
	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

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	"...!?"		"...!?"

	It ~~took him completely by~~ surprise ~~and~~ lasted ~~only~~ several seconds. ~~Then, their~~ lips gently ~~separated. His~~ cheeks ~~turned~~ red.		It was a perfect surprise attack.

			Despite that noticing that he was kissed, it lasted several seconds.

			The sensation of her soft lips gently separating turned his cheeks red hot.

	"You... Wh...What are you doing all of a sudden?!"		"You... Wh...What are you doing all of a sudden?!"
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	After being approached like this, Kamito ~~couldn’t stop~~ his heart ~~from~~ beating faster~~, so instead he…~~		After being approached like this, Kamito thought that it couldn't be helped that his heart was beating faster.

	"He...Hey, Est..."		"He...Hey, Est..."
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	"Claire... Y...You're mistaken, this is...!"		"Claire... Y...You're mistaken, this is...!"

	~~The~~ flustered boy ~~chose that moment to stand~~ up and ~~try~~ to explain.		It was that moment when the flustered boy stood up and tried to explain.

	<nowiki></nowiki>Gogogogogogo...!		<nowiki></nowiki>Gogogogogogo...!
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	Kamito ~~saw it~~. He ~~saw it fully~~.		Kamito noticed something. He had wound up noticing something.

	"Wa...Wait...Claire, isn't that bad?"		"Wa...Wait...Claire, isn't that bad?"

	And then, as he ~~realized, what~~ it ~~was that he saw~~, he had to ~~say~~ it. For her own sake.		And then, as he had wound up noticing it, he had to voice it out. For her own sake.

	By the way, when it was about things like this, Kamito turned into a strangely honest and blunt person.		By the way, when it was about things like this, Kamito turned into a strangely honest and blunt person.
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	"Eh?"		"Eh?"

	Claire blinked as she ~~placed~~ her foot on Kamito's head.		Claire blinked as she had her foot on Kamito's head.

	That is when she finally realized it.		That is when she finally realized it.
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	<nowiki></nowiki>Gogogogogogogogogo...!		<nowiki></nowiki>Gogogogogogogogogo...!

	"Wa...Wait, this is a misunderstanding, relax! ~~Err…I~~ didn’t see all ~~of it?~~"		"Wa...Wait, this is a misunderstanding, relax! Err…'''I didn’t see all the way inside'''!"

	It seemed like Kamito's frantic excuse—		It seemed like Kamito's frantic excuse—
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	"After this, I'll give you two choices. You better answer honestly."		"After this, I'll give you two choices. You better answer honestly."

	Kamito swallowed nervously and nodded ~~after a moment~~.		Kamito swallowed nervously and nodded continuously.

	Here, he should choose his answer carefully. Depending on his reply, it was not unlikely that he would become cinders.		Here, he should choose his answer carefully. Depending on his reply, it was not unlikely that he would become cinders.
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	Three years ago, that boy, who had saved her in the forest of Astral Zero.		Three years ago, that boy, who had saved her in the forest of Astral Zero.

	Despite promising to meet again, he disappeared ~~immediately~~ after the Blade Dance.		Despite promising to meet again, it was unknown why he disappeared after the Blade Dance.

	(—However, I finally found him.)		(—However, I finally found him.)
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	"Do you know chess?"		"Do you know chess?"

	"Greyworth ~~taught~~ me. ~~Although she is a harsh opponent~~, so I had never won."		"Greyworth forcefully made me her playing partner. However, I had never won."

	"The queen is certainly a strong piece. In a one-on-one battle, there are hardly times when it will lose. However, depending on the situation, it is also possible for it to be taken down by a pawn, which is the weakest peace on the desk."		"The queen is certainly a strong piece. In a one-on-one battle, there are hardly times when it will lose. However, depending on the situation, it is also possible for it to be taken down by a pawn, which is the weakest peace on the desk."
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	Teacher Freya, who appeared quickly like a shadow, blew into the whistle announcing the end of the match.		Teacher Freya, who appeared quickly like a shadow, blew into the whistle announcing the end of the match.

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Asiorx22 at 12:10, 16 June 2013

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Asiorx22 at 17:25, 3 June 2013

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Asiorx22 at 07:56, 2 June 2013

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			===Part 2===

			Areishia Spirit Academy.

			Princess maidens from all over the empire gathered at this training school and learned how to become proper elementalists.

			Its vast territory included the «Spirit Forest» and the Academy Town. The academy also had residential teachers who possessed strength equal to that of the imperial capital's spirit knights. It was just like an independent small country.

			At the same time the morning mist cleared up and the bell of lectures commencing sounded, there was a particular one-horse carriage visiting the academy.

			Its coachman, an old butler in a suit, got down from the horse in front of the gate and opened the door of the carriage in a respectful manner.

			"We have arrived, Fianna-sama."

			"Thank you for your efforts, old man."

			Coming out of the carriage was a beautiful girl about fifteen, sixteen years old.

			Her glossy black hair fluttered in the gentle breeze. Her cold looking eyes emitted a strong will. Her clear white skin could be compared to the virgin snow of the area of Laurenfrost and her uniform designed as a black dress was gorgeous.

			The girl, called Fianna, alighted from the carriage and looked up at the building of the Academy. The sight of the school dazzled her.

			"This is Areishia Spirit Academy. The place where elementalists from all over the empire gather."

			"Please be very careful, Fianna-sama. It’s impossible to fool the eyes of that Dusk Witch with poor tricks."

			"I understand."

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			With a nod, the girl gently grasped a spirit crystal, concealed by the sleeve of her uniform.

			In the empire's currency, it was a good-for-nothing article of 20 million rood<!--ルード-->.

			"Rubia Elstein's sister seems to be in this academy."

			"Princess, that name is a taboo. You had better not say it here."

			"That’s right."

			The Calamity Queen, who once brought about an unprecedented great disaster to the empire.

			As a taboo, that person's true name was even prohibited from being spoken.

			It was said that just by muttering that name a pure girl's sacred nature would be tainted.

			She considered it to be a ridiculous superstition. Nevertheless, the people, who saw her up close in the past, felt that there was a slice of accuracy in those words. They believed in the jinx.

			(...That's right. The truth is, the fear of her has yet to affect me.)

			The girl cleared her throat, then she lowered her voice and whispered.

			"Besides, I am also concerned about the elementalist called Kazehaya Kamito."

			"Hmm, is it that male elementalist? There was a talk, that a few days ago he defeated a frenzied militarized spirit in Academy Town."

			"Yes, based on all the eye-witnesses' words, it seemed to be a splendid blade dance of close resemblance to that of the strongest blade dancer — Ren Ashbell."

			Fianna's voice became lively as she got a little excited.

			The old butler gave her a stern look for that.

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			"Princess, don't tell me, you fell in love with that boy"

			"Fe...fell in love...!?"

			Fianna's voice trembled from embarrassment. Her cheeks turned red.

			"Th...that can't be it, right? After all, I have never met him before... it's just that I have an interest in what kind of person this male elementalist is."

			It was a lie.

			The male elementalist, who defeated the frenzied militarized spirit in Academy Town.

			The moment Fianna heard that boy's name, she immediately realized.

			It was him.

			Three years ago, that boy, who had saved her in the forest of Astral Zero.

			Despite promising to meet again, he disappeared for some reason after the Blade Dance.

			(—However, I finally found him.)

			When she heard the report on that day, Fianna decided to enter the Areishia Spirit Academy.

			If that boy announced his candidacy to the Blade Dance again—

			For her that was a once in lifetime opportunity.

			"Kamito, I'll forgive you for breaking our promise."

			Fianna glared at the school building of the academy and an impish smile surfaced.

			"However, I'm not letting you escape again♪"

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			===Part 1===

	"U...h..."		"U...h..."

Asiorx22: Finished the first part.

2013-06-01T11:48:07Z

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	<nowiki></nowiki>Funyuu.		<nowiki></nowiki>Funyuu.

	~~... feel~~ them touch something soft.		Feel them touch something soft.

	(What is this? It's small, tender... a little cold, but feels good.)		(What is this? It's small, tender... a little cold, but feels good.)
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	<nowiki></nowiki>Funyuu. Funyuu.		<nowiki></nowiki>Funyuu. Funyuu.

	Half awake, he played with the mysterious soft thing within the palms of his hands, when~~...~~		Half awake, he played with the mysterious soft thing within the palms of his hands, when-

	"You finally woke up, Kamito."		"You finally woke up, Kamito."
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	"..."		"..."

	a voice made him freeze.		A voice made him freeze.

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	While the beautiful silver haired girl stayed expressionless, she bashfully rubbed her knees.		While the beautiful silver haired girl stayed expressionless, she bashfully rubbed her knees.

	He did not understand why she ~~was embarrassed about~~ that but, somehow, to this spirit, showing her bare feet seemed more embarrassing.		He did not understand why she reacted like that but, somehow, to this spirit, showing her bare feet seemed more embarrassing.

	Yes. This snow fairy like beautiful girl was not human.		Yes. This snow fairy like beautiful girl was not human.
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	She was squirming on the sheet. ...The sensation of her soft thighs was bad for his heart.		She was squirming on the sheet. ...The sensation of her soft thighs was bad for his heart.

	While scratching his bed ~~head<!--~~ hair~~? -->~~ in relief, Kamito finally got up and at that moment.		While scratching his bed hair in relief, Kamito finally got up and at that moment.

	<nowiki></nowiki>Chuu.		<nowiki></nowiki>Chuu.

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2013-05-31T18:13:46Z

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"U...h..."

Areishia Spirit Academy, Raven Class dormitory.

In a room, illuminated by the morning sun, Kazehaya Kamito woke up.

(Hn, If I remember correctly, there will be a team battle in the morning.)

Usually, he would enjoy a bit more time dozing off, however, today he could not do so.

He had enough of being late and getting lectured by the teacher, Freya.

Planning to fold the sheets and get up, he reached out both hands, only to—

<nowiki>*</nowiki>Funyuu*.

... feel them touch something soft.

(What is this? It's small, tender... a little cold, but feels good.)

<nowiki>*</nowiki>Funyuu*. *Funyuu*.

Half awake, he played with the mysterious soft thing within the palms of his hands, when...

"You finally woke up, Kamito."

"..."

a voice made him freeze.


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A beautiful, nude girl was sitting on his chest.

Her silver hair glittered in the morning sun. Her tight bare skin was white like milk.

She was small, but had all the necessary curves. The girl's figure was ideal.

She looked at Kamito with her mysterious violet eyes, her face expressionless.

"What's the matter? You're not going to play with my breasts anymore?"

"... Owaaaaa!"

Kamito straightened flustered and pointed at the beautiful girl before him,

"Wh...Wh...What are you doing!? Or rather why are you nude?!"

"I'm not nude, I'm properly wearing knee socks."

Straddling Kamito's abdomen she raised her knees to show him.

Startled by that, mysteriously erotic, action, Kamito looked away flustered.

"No, that's worse! Because compared to nude, knee socks nude is even, err, ...that!"

"Do you want me to take off my knee socks? Kamito... pervert."

While the beautiful silver haired girl stayed expressionless, she bashfully rubbed her knees.

He did not understand why she was embarrassed about that but, somehow, to this spirit, showing her bare feet seemed more embarrassing.

Yes. This snow fairy like beautiful girl was not human.

She was the Sword Spirit Est.



'She was an extremely powerful 'Sealed Spirit' that made a spirit contract with Kamito a few days ago.

But in her current condition, she could not exhibit even around a tenth of her original strength.

Within his sub consciousness, Kamito was rejecting the spirit contract with her and as a result, she became unable to return to Astral Zero where her real form was.

"A...Anyway, move aside Est!"

"Roger, Kamito."

Although Est seemed a little dissatisfied, she obediently moved.

She was squirming on the sheet. ...The sensation of her soft thighs was bad for his heart.

While scratching his bed head in relief, Kamito finally got up and at that moment.

<nowiki>*</nowiki>Chuu*.

"...!?"

It took him completely by surprise and lasted only several seconds. Then, their lips gently separated. His cheeks turned red.

"You... Wh...What are you doing all of a sudden?!"

"A wake up kiss, Kamito."

Est answered expressionlessly.

"Why do such—"