Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume2 Chapter8 - Revision history

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	==Chapter 8: Fianna's confession==		==Chapter 8 - Fianna's confession==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

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	...He completely did not notice it. As expected, the technological level of the imperial capital couldn't be made light of.		...He completely did not notice it. As expected, the technological level of the imperial capital couldn't be made light of.

	"Although it was my plan to use that Blood Stone at the ~~«Blade Dance»~~ as a trump card."		"Although it was my plan to use that Blood Stone at the Blade Dance as a trump card."

	Greatly lowering her volume, Fianna clasped<!-- her hands? --> to her breasts, as she muttered.		Greatly lowering her volume, Fianna clasped<!-- her hands? --> to her breasts, as she muttered.
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	It was for this reason that while being expected as the Queen candidate next to Rubia Elstein— Fianna Ray Ordesia the second princess resigned from that position and was erased from the royal family.		It was for this reason that while being expected as the Queen candidate next to Rubia Elstein— Fianna Ray Ordesia the second princess resigned from that position and was erased from the royal family.

	That was '''because she could not use her contracted spirit'''.		That was ''because she could not use her contracted spirit''.

	"A princess maiden, who can't use a contracted spirit, doesn't have the qualifications to be a Queen worth serving the Elemental Lord."		"A princess maiden, who can't use a contracted spirit, doesn't have the qualifications to be a Queen worth serving the Elemental Lord."
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	"..."		"..."

	A elementalist that couldn't use her spirit was —literally— no longer an elementalist.		An elementalist that couldn't use her spirit was —literally— no longer an elementalist.

	And the situation, where an elementalist suddenly became unable to use her spirit, wasn't something that unusual.		And the situation, where an elementalist suddenly became unable to use her spirit, wasn't something that unusual.
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	It was the year that the Calamity Queen's— Rubia Elstein's mutiny occurred.		It was the year that the Calamity Queen's— Rubia Elstein's mutiny occurred.

	And then, Fianna was a princess maiden of the same ~~«Divine~~ Ritual ~~Institute»~~ as her.		And then, Fianna was a princess maiden of the same Divine Ritual Institute as her.

	She experienced that incident, which caused an emotional trauma that made her lose her spirit contract power.		She experienced that incident, which caused an emotional trauma that made her lose her spirit contract power.
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	Kamito passed exceptionally without an examination due to Greyworth's authority, but, originally, there was a strict practical examination in the academy. It was not that anyone possessing the ability of an elementalist could enter.		Kamito passed exceptionally without an examination due to Greyworth's authority, but, originally, there was a strict practical examination in the academy. It was not that anyone possessing the ability of an elementalist could enter.

	"I concealed several pieces of spirit crystals in my sleeves, and released them in sequence. To pretend that it was as if I was using a spirit. Since I had achievements when I was a Queen candidate of the ~~«Divine~~ Ritual ~~Institute»~~ once, they were easily deceived."		"I concealed several pieces of spirit crystals in my sleeves, and released them in sequence. To pretend that it was as if I was using a spirit. Since I had achievements when I was a Queen candidate of the Divine Ritual Institute once, they were easily deceived."

	"You used valuable spirit crystals for such a dishonest entry to the academy?"		"You used valuable spirit crystals for such a dishonest entry to the academy?"
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	Fianna saw Claire's eyebrow lifted up and giggled.		Fianna saw Claire's eyebrow lifted up and giggled.

	"It's a joke. My goal is to be victorious in the Blade dance and have my ~~«wish»~~ granted. To regain my lost spirit contract power."		"It's a joke. My goal is to be victorious in the Blade dance and have my Wish granted. To regain my lost spirit contract power."

	"Everyone is the same in aiming for the victory of the Blade Dance. However, why did you think of joining our team? It's also weird for me to say this but our team has the lowest rank."		"Everyone is the same in aiming for the victory of the Blade Dance. However, why did you think of joining our team? It's also weird for me to say this but our team has the lowest rank."
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	However, the true reason —unexpectedly— might be more like this.		However, the true reason —unexpectedly— might be more like this.

	Being lonely, being a fibber, the impish princess '''just wanted friends'''—		Being lonely, being a fibber, the impish princess ''just wanted friends''—

	"Well then, I've confessed my secret but—"		"Well then, I've confessed my secret but—"
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	"Don't tell me... {{Furigana\|the strategic-class militarized spirit\|Jormungandr\|margin=13}} is already about to wake up?"		"Don't tell me... {{Furigana\|the strategic-class militarized spirit\|Jormungandr\|margin=13}} is already about to wake up?"

	"It seems so. However, as long as Jio Inzagi hasn't found the ~~«true shrine»~~, he shouldn't be able to completely undo the seal."		"It seems so. However, as long as Jio Inzagi hasn't found the ''true shrine'', he shouldn't be able to completely undo the seal."

	"Well then, if we could find the true shrine first—"		"Well then, if we could find the true shrine first—"
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	This time it was Rinslet, who was leaning against the wall, raising her voice.		This time it was Rinslet, who was leaning against the wall, raising her voice.

	"Fianna, even if you lost your spirit contract power, can you dance the ritual ~~Kagura~~?"		"Fianna, even if you lost your spirit contract power, can you dance the ritual kagura?"

	"Yes, it isn't like when I was in the ~~«Divine~~ Ritual ~~Ceremony»~~, but I can roughly enhance the resealing.<!--ええ、«神儀院»にいたころのようにはいかないけれど、再封印を強化することくらいはできるわ。--> As expected, I wouldn't accept a quest that I can't even do."		"Yes, it isn't like when I was in the Divine Ritual Institute, but I can roughly enhance the resealing.<!--ええ、«神儀院»にいたころのようにはいかないけれど、再封印を強化することくらいはできるわ。--> As expected, I wouldn't accept a quest that I can't even do."

	Fianna nodded and softly placed her hand on her chin.		Fianna nodded and softly placed her hand on her chin.
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	"Let's go Kamito, Fianna."		"Let's go Kamito, Fianna."

	Claire raised her ~~Flame Tongue~~ over her head, and blew away the mountain of rubble blocking the path.		Claire raised her Flametounge over her head, and blew away the mountain of rubble blocking the path.

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	"—Where are they heading?"		"—Where are they heading?"

	"Probably to the ~~«true shrine»~~ that governs the control of {{Furigana\|strategic-class militarized spirit\|Jormungandr\|margin=13}}. As I am still tied with the bond of the contract to him, I somehow know roughly where he is."		"Probably to the ''true shrine'' that governs the control of {{Furigana\|strategic-class militarized spirit\|Jormungandr\|margin=13}}. As I am still tied with the bond of the contract to him, I somehow know roughly where he is."

	The jet black girl preciously stroked the spirit seal that was engraved on her own left hand.		The jet black girl preciously stroked the spirit seal that was engraved on her own left hand.
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	"Let it go. He is the real Demon King— After all, you, who's no more than a fake, could absolutely not win. Besides, {{Furigana\|Strongest Blade Dancer\|Ren Ashbell\|margin=13}} has never lost to an opponent he fought once."		"Let it go. He is the real Demon King— After all, you, who's no more than a fake, could absolutely not win. Besides, {{Furigana\|Strongest Blade Dancer\|Ren Ashbell\|margin=13}} has never lost to an opponent he fought once."

	"Watch your mouth, darkness spirit. '''I can even make you mine right here and now'''."		"Watch your mouth, darkness spirit. ''I can even make you mine right here and now''."

	Jio's red eyes glared at her.		Jio's red eyes glared at her.
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	"Sh-She's just a childhood acquaintance, it's not like she's a friend!"<!-- acquaintance differentiates better from friends --chancs.-->		"Sh-She's just a childhood acquaintance, it's not like she's a friend!"<!-- acquaintance differentiates better from friends --chancs.-->

	"Ah, what a coincidence. I was also always alone while eating my meals when I was in the ~~«Divine~~ Ritual ~~Institute»~~."		"Ah, what a coincidence. I was also always alone while eating my meals when I was in the Divine Ritual Institute."

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	It wasn't something engraved during these several hundred years— it seemed that it was a historic ruin from the mythical age.		It wasn't something engraved during these several hundred years— it seemed that it was a historic ruin from the mythical age.

	"This is the carving of the ~~«Five~~ Great Elemental ~~Lords»~~... or looks like it."		"This is the carving of the Five Great Elemental Lords... or looks like it."

	The motif of the carving was quite a typical thing.		The motif of the carving was quite a typical thing.
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	Compared to the grand shrine above ground, it was quite small, but its solemnity was the highlight.		Compared to the grand shrine above ground, it was quite small, but its solemnity was the highlight.

	"—There's no doubt. Here is where this mine's ~~«true shrine»~~ is."		"—There's no doubt. Here is where this mine's ''true shrine'' is."

	"All Fianna has to do is to dedicate a resealing ritual ~~Kagura~~ here, right?"		"All Fianna has to do is to dedicate a resealing ritual kagura here, right?"

	"Yes. However, before that—"		"Yes. However, before that—"
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	"...? What do you mean?"		"...? What do you mean?"

	"Kamito is the Demon King of the ~~night~~."		"Kamito is the Demon King of the Night."

	"Est, that's different."		"Est, that's different."

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	"Dispassionate Queen of Steel, the sacred sword that destroys evil — now form a sword ~~of steel and be the power in my hand!~~"		"Dispassionate Queen of Steel, the sacred sword that destroys evil — now form my sword"

	The appearance of the lovely girl turned into particles of light and disappeared into an empty space—		The appearance of the lovely girl turned into particles of light and disappeared into an empty space—

Cthaeh: summoning chant

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summoning chant

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	"~~The cool-headed steel queen~~, the sacred sword that destroys evil — ~~become my~~ sword ~~here~~ and ~~now~~!"		"Dispassionate Queen of Steel, the sacred sword that destroys evil — now form a sword of steel and be the power in my hand!"

	The appearance of the lovely girl turned into particles of light and disappeared into an empty space—		The appearance of the lovely girl turned into particles of light and disappeared into an empty space—

Zakashi: "of national level" does not require "a" in front, since the term is more general, the past participle of "become" is still "become"

2013-03-28T13:04:27Z

"of national level" does not require "a" in front, since the term is more general, the past participle of "become" is still "become"

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	When Kamito said that, Claire shrugged her shoulders in disappointment and gave an explanation.		When Kamito said that, Claire shrugged her shoulders in disappointment and gave an explanation.

	"Blood Stone isn't an ordinary spirit crystal. It can seal a part of a high ranking spirit's power with a special spirit crystal that was mined at a sacred ground of Astral Zero. Of course, it isn't something that you can buy with money or power. It is a genuine treasure of a national-level, after all."		"Blood Stone isn't an ordinary spirit crystal. It can seal a part of a high ranking spirit's power with a special spirit crystal that was mined at a sacred ground of Astral Zero. Of course, it isn't something that you can buy with money or power. It is a genuine treasure of national-level, after all."

	"Is that so..."		"Is that so..."
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	The out-of-place feeling's true identity was... Fianna's pushed out chest.		The out-of-place feeling's true identity was... Fianna's pushed out chest.

	...Small. It had obviously ~~became~~ small.		...Small. It had obviously become small.

	(That reminds me, just now Fianna...)		(That reminds me, just now Fianna...)

Monsterbandage: /* Part 6 */

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Part 6

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	Leaning in front of the closed wall, Kamito scratched his cheeks.		Leaning in front of the closed wall, Kamito scratched his cheeks.

	The tunnels caused more echoes than he had thought. It did not mean that he caught their conversation, but the sweet voices of the girls he heard at times were ~~too~~ bad for his heart.		The tunnels caused more echoes than he had thought. It did not mean that he caught their conversation, but the sweet voices of the girls he heard at times were very bad for his heart.

	"Kamito, are you eavesdropping on their voices, and getting excited?"		"Kamito, are you eavesdropping on their voices, and getting excited?"
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	Kamito retorted without a moment's delay.		Kamito retorted without a moment's delay.

	...Honestly, where did this sword spirit learn ~~this~~ kind of things?		...Honestly, where did this sword spirit learn these kind of things?

	"—We've got to stop the frivolous talk here, huh?"		"—We've got to stop the frivolous talk here, huh?"
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	Kamito separated his body from the wall, and grasped Est's small hand.		Kamito separated his body from the wall, and grasped Est's small hand.

	"Kamito is a rough master of ~~the~~ elementalists."		"Kamito is a rough master of an elementalists."

	"Sorry. I will treat you to some parfait the next time at the Academy Town."		"Sorry. I will treat you to some parfait the next time at the Academy Town."

Monsterbandage: /* Part 5 */

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Part 5

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	"You're definitely sisters."		"You're definitely sisters."

	As Fianna stifled her laughter, she wiped the tears that surfaced at her eyes.		As Fianna stifled her laughter, she wiped the tears that surfaced on her eyes.

	On that subject, it had been a while since she really laughed naturally like that.		On that subject, it had been a while since she really laughed naturally like that.

Monsterbandage: /* Part 4 */

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Part 4

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	The three of them were going deep down underground with Est, who was walking silently, in the lead.		The three of them were going deep down underground with Est, who was walking silently, in the lead.

	It was as if the mine, which once flourished as a place for mining spirit ~~crystal~~, was a giant maze. It was an excessively large passage for people to use. Large sized spirits might have been used for the digging of the bedrock.		It was as if the mine, which once flourished as a place for mining spirit crystals, was a giant maze. It was an excessively large passage for people to use. Large sized spirits might have been used for the digging of the bedrock.

	There were many doors that used to be sealed, but they had all been opened.		There were many doors that used to be sealed, but they had all been opened.
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	"No, it's nothing..."		"No, it's nothing..."

	Kamito shook his head at Claire, who was peering at him ~~worriedly~~.		Kamito shook his head at Claire, who was peering at him anxiously.

	Claire pouted her lips, dissatisfied with such a response from Kamito.		Claire pouted her lips, dissatisfied with such a response from Kamito.
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	It was as unnatural as if the existence of the thing over there was erased.		It was as unnatural as if the existence of the thing over there was erased.

	Est went ~~straight~~ forward and placed her hand softly on that torn-off part.		Est went forward and placed her hand softly on that torn-off part.

	"This is the carving of the mythical age— In the later times, Ren Ashdoll had its existence erased."		"This is the carving of the mythical age— In the later times, Ren Ashdoll had its existence erased."