Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume2 Chapter9 - Revision history

Rxls at 14:50, 28 June 2018

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	==Chapter 9: Team Scarlet==		==Chapter 9 - Team Scarlet==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

Rxls: Undo revision 536183 by Masterupc (talk)

2018-06-28T14:26:05Z

Undo revision 536183 by Masterupc (talk)

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Masterupc: punctuation

2018-03-02T23:05:06Z

punctuation

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Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

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reformatting + consistency

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KuroiHikari: Google the word plz... Undo revision 237492 by 112.202.17.251 (talk)

2013-03-29T01:04:10Z

Google the word plz... Undo revision 237492 by 112.202.17.251 (talk)

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	"What...was that...!"		"What...was that...!"

	"Listen, your body that housed sealed spirits is something like a shrine that ~~defies~~ many spirits."		"Listen, your body that housed sealed spirits is something like a shrine that deifies many spirits."

	He shrugged his shoulders as he told him.		He shrugged his shoulders as he told him.

112.202.17.251: /* Part 4 */

2013-03-29T00:50:25Z

Part 4

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	"What...was that...!"		"What...was that...!"

	"Listen, your body that housed sealed spirits is something like a shrine that ~~deifies~~ many spirits."		"Listen, your body that housed sealed spirits is something like a shrine that defies many spirits."

	He shrugged his shoulders as he told him.		He shrugged his shoulders as he told him.

Monsterbandage: /* Chapter 9: Team Scarlet */ crazily just doesn't really fit well with the sentence

2013-03-28T19:46:50Z

Chapter 9: Team Scarlet: crazily just doesn't really fit well with the sentence

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	Holding her iron-ribbed fan in both hands, Fianna Ray Ordesia danced the Kagura.		Holding her iron-ribbed fan in both hands, Fianna Ray Ordesia danced the Kagura.

	—(Dance, you many spirits, be released from that binding body, and dance ~~crazily~~ together with me!)		—(Dance, you many spirits, be released from that binding body, and dance wildly together with me!)

	She was the second ranked princess maiden of the only Queen training institution in the continent— «Divine Ritual Institute».		She was the second ranked princess maiden of the only Queen training institution in the continent— «Divine Ritual Institute».

Zakashi: can't seem to find the word "ferverously"

2013-03-28T13:10:26Z

can't seem to find the word "ferverously"

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	Holding her iron-ribbed fan in both hands, Fianna Ray Ordesia danced the Kagura.		Holding her iron-ribbed fan in both hands, Fianna Ray Ordesia danced the Kagura.

	—(Dance, you many spirits, be released from that binding body, and dance ~~ferverously~~ together with me!)		—(Dance, you many spirits, be released from that binding body, and dance crazily together with me!)

	She was the second ranked princess maiden of the only Queen training institution in the continent— «Divine Ritual Institute».		She was the second ranked princess maiden of the only Queen training institution in the continent— «Divine Ritual Institute».

Monsterbandage: /* Part 5 */

2013-03-27T06:47:12Z

Part 5

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	It was the back of the boy, who she first fell in love with— And it was right in front of her eyes!		It was the back of the boy, who she first fell in love with— And it was right in front of her eyes!

	(This time I~~'ve~~ to protect—)		(This time I have to protect—)

	<nowiki></nowiki>Ba-thump. A hot emotion was filling Fianna's chest.		<nowiki></nowiki>Ba-thump. A hot emotion was filling Fianna's chest.
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	Without being needed by anyone, without anyone accompanying her, she was the Lost Queen.		Without being needed by anyone, without anyone accompanying her, she was the Lost Queen.

	Without anything to expect to, she had given up on everything.		Without anything to expect, she had given up on everything.

	(—However, it's different now.)		(—However, it's different now.)
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	And then, now she was looking at Kazehaya Kamito's back.		And then, now she was looking at Kazehaya Kamito's back.

	(—I've changed! After all, I have a wish I want ~~to be~~ granted ~~with~~!)		(—I've changed! After all, I have a wish I want granted!)

	She wanted to aim for the «Blade Dance» together with Kamito.		She wanted to aim for the «Blade Dance» together with Kamito.
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	Fianna, cloaked with the majesty of a queen, placed her hand at her waist and ordered it.		Fianna, cloaked with the majesty of a queen, placed her hand at her waist and ordered it.

	The holy knight spirit nodded without a word and brandished its large sword, which was ~~even~~ approximately as long as its height.		The holy knight spirit nodded without a word and brandished its large sword, which was approximately as long as its height.

	Making an underground rumbling, like the ground was shaking, it rushed into the raging black lightning attack.		Making an underground rumbling, like the ground was shaking, it rushed into the raging black lightning attack.

Monsterbandage: /* Part 4 */

2013-03-27T06:40:38Z

Part 4

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	Kamito groaned like he was squeezing it out from the inside of his throat.		Kamito groaned like he was squeezing it out from the inside of his throat.

	She was his former contracted spirit— that lovely appearance of hers, which had not a single ~~thing changed~~ from three years ago.		She was his former contracted spirit— that lovely appearance of hers, which had not changed in a single way from three years ago.

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	Despite that Kamito had ~~even~~ changed so much.		Despite that Kamito had changed so much.

	"You, you're the darkness spirit from that day."		"You, you're the darkness spirit from that day."