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	Although being called the guest of honor, she was invited as an extra for an excuse.		Although being called the guest of honor, she was invited as an extra for an excuse.

	Falling out of the candidacy of ~~«Divine~~ Ritual ~~Institute»—~~ the Queens’ training organization, she was the imperial family's excess baggage.		Falling out of the candidacy of Divine Ritual Institute— the Queens’ training organization, she was the imperial family's excess baggage.

	She had nothing special other than the title of former second princess and the fact that she was just a mere thirteen year-old girl.		She had nothing special other than the title of former second princess and the fact that she was just a mere thirteen year-old girl.
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	Facing a boy like that, the girl pointed out her index finger.		Facing a boy like that, the girl pointed out her index finger.

	"'''Why is Ren Ashbell-sama a boy'''?"		"''Why is Ren Ashbell-sama a boy''?"

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	(Besides, that sword—)		(Besides, that sword—)

	The jet-black demon sword that was grasped in the boy's hand. That darkness-attribute elemental waffe— «{{Furigana\|the sword that pierces truth\|Vorpal Sword\|margin=13}}» and her companion, which, in the past, had brought down many of her opponents.		The jet-black demon sword that was grasped in the boy's hand. That darkness-attribute elemental waffe— {{Furigana\|the sword that pierces truth\|Vorpal Sword\|margin=13}} and her companion, which, in the past, had brought down many of her opponents.

	And then, above all else, there was that sword skill, which was displayed when he, with merely one blow, brought down the raging spirit.		And then, above all else, there was that sword skill, which was displayed when he, with merely one blow, brought down the raging spirit.
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	The girl's head was in a complete chaos. She was also surprised that the true identity of Ren Ashbell was a boy because, to begin with, it was hard for her to believe in the existence of a male elementalist.		The girl's head was in a complete chaos. She was also surprised that the true identity of Ren Ashbell was a boy because, to begin with, it was hard for her to believe in the existence of a male elementalist.

	Those who could contract a spirit were only pure maidens— that was the common sense taught to her from the ~~«Divine~~ Ritual ~~Institute»~~ from when she was young. Speaking of a male elementalist, there was nothing that came to mind, but that legendary Demon King, Solomon.		Those who could contract a spirit were only pure maidens— that was the common sense taught to her from the Divine Ritual Institute from when she was young. Speaking of a male elementalist, there was nothing that came to mind, but that legendary Demon King, Solomon.

	(This tournament's favorite, the famous Ren Ashbell-sama, is actually a boy—)		(This tournament's favorite, the famous Ren Ashbell-sama, is actually a boy—)
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	Honestly, the girl was bewildered. The blade dancer, whom she admired, was a boy— even if she suddenly said such a thing, there was no way that anyone could comprehend it immediately.		Honestly, the girl was bewildered. The blade dancer, whom she admired, was a boy— even if she suddenly said such a thing, there was no way that anyone could comprehend it immediately.

	Besides, though her throne inheritance rights had been erased, she was still the second princess of the Ordesia Empire and a pure princess maiden of the ~~«Divine~~ Ritual ~~Institute»~~. Was it alright for her to overlook this fact which would desecrate the ~~«Blade Dance»~~?		Besides, though her throne inheritance rights had been erased, she was still the second princess of the Ordesia Empire and a pure princess maiden of the Divine Ritual Institute. Was it alright for her to overlook this fact which would desecrate the Blade Dance?

	"..."		"..."
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	Even if her true identity was a boy, Ren Ashbell was still her admired blade dancer.		Even if her true identity was a boy, Ren Ashbell was still her admired blade dancer.

	Her ~~Blade Dance~~ gave the girl, who was always depressed since '''that day''', the courage. That understanding would not change. Besides, there was also the fact, that he had saved her life.		Her blade dance gave the girl, who was always depressed since ''that day'', the courage. That understanding would not change. Besides, there was also the fact, that he had saved her life.

	To give a reward to a Knight's meritorious service was the imperial family's precept.		To give a reward to a Knight's meritorious service was the imperial family's precept.
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	In the middle of a dim forest, while listening to the sounds of them stepping on the fallen leaves, the girl inquired.		In the middle of a dim forest, while listening to the sounds of them stepping on the fallen leaves, the girl inquired.

	"Hey, why did you go so far as to fake being a girl and participate in the ~~«Blade Dance»~~?"		"Hey, why did you go so far as to fake being a girl and participate in the Blade Dance?"

	"..."		"..."
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	After a moment of silence—		After a moment of silence—

	"Because, I have a ~~«Wish»~~ I want to be granted."		"Because, I have a Wish I want to be granted."

	The boy answered that with a serious expression.		The boy answered that with a serious expression.

	A ~~«Wish»—~~ A miracle of the Elemental Lords that was bestowed upon the victor of the ~~blade dance~~.		A Wish— A miracle of the Elemental Lords that was bestowed upon the victor of the Blade Dance.

	At that moment, those words that the boy spoke of brought about an insight in the girl's mind.		At that moment, those words that the boy spoke of brought about an insight in the girl's mind.

	(I see, if it's for the Blade Dance ~~«Wish»~~, even my power...)		(I see, if it's for the Blade Dance Wish, even my power...)

	After coming to a place near the match area, the girl was gently let off from his back.		After coming to a place near the match area, the girl was gently let off from his back.
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	However, the girl never met him again.		However, the girl never met him again.

	Because he, who should have been granted his ~~«Wish»~~, suddenly disappeared.		Because he, who should have been granted his Wish, suddenly disappeared.
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	The boy was, for some reason, sneakily talking with the jet-black demon sword that was held in his hand.		The boy was, for some reason, sneakily talking with the jet-black demon sword that was held in his hand.

	The girl's head was in a complete chaos. She was also surprised that the true identity of Ren Ashbell was a boy because, to begin with, it was hard for her to believe in the existence of male elementalist.		The girl's head was in a complete chaos. She was also surprised that the true identity of Ren Ashbell was a boy because, to begin with, it was hard for her to believe in the existence of a male elementalist.

	Those who could contract a spirit were only pure maidens— that was the common sense taught to her from the «Divine Ritual Institute» from when she was young. Speaking of a male elementalist, there was nothing that came to mind, but that legendary Demon King, Solomon.		Those who could contract a spirit were only pure maidens— that was the common sense taught to her from the «Divine Ritual Institute» from when she was young. Speaking of a male elementalist, there was nothing that came to mind, but that legendary Demon King, Solomon.

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	If she were to describe him, she would call him slender and handsome.		If she were to describe him, she would call him slender and handsome.

	His eyes were so clear that, ~~depending on how one looked at him,~~ a girl of about the same age ~~could also be seen~~.		His eyes were so clear that, he could be easily mistaken for a girl of about the same age.

	At that very moment, she did not think of him as a person who brought down a spirit in the blink of an eye before her.		At that very moment, she did not think of him as a person who brought down a spirit in the blink of an eye before her.
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	"...?"		"...?"

	Seeing the girl's expression stiffen, the boy ~~was~~ puzzled ~~as if a miracle happened—~~		Seeing the girl's expression stiffen, the boy pauzed in his steps, puzzled.

	And then, as he ~~was taken aback~~, his eyes widened.		And then, as if he realized something, his eyes widened.

	"Gua... Damn it! Ahhh!"		"Gua... Damn it! Ahhh!"
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	(But I am not mistaken—)		(But I am not mistaken—)

	The boy's face was similar to the Blade Dancer's, who was currently winning through the tournament ~~with~~ overwhelming strength.		The boy's face was similar to the Blade Dancer's, who was currently winning through the tournament because of her overwhelming strength.

	Without a doubt, it was the face of that person— Ren Ashbell!		Without a doubt, it was the face of that person— Ren Ashbell!
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	(Besides, that sword—)		(Besides, that sword—)

	The jet-black demon sword that was grasped in the boy's hand. That darkness-attribute elemental waffe— «{{Furigana\|the sword that pierces truth\|Vorpal Sword\|margin=13}}» is her ~~synonym~~, ~~who~~ brought down many opponents before.		The jet-black demon sword that was grasped in the boy's hand. That darkness-attribute elemental waffe— «{{Furigana\|the sword that pierces truth\|Vorpal Sword\|margin=13}}» and her companion, which brought down many of her opponents before.

	And then, above all else, there was that sword skill, which was displayed when he brought down the spirit ~~that was in a rage with merely one blow~~.		And then, above all else, there was that sword skill, which was displayed when he, with merely one blow, brought down the raging spirit.

	"Ah, this is, err, how do I put it ..."		"Ah, this is, err, how do I put it ..."
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	(This tournament's favorite, the famous Ren Ashbell-sama, is actually a boy—)		(This tournament's favorite, the famous Ren Ashbell-sama, is actually a boy—)

	If that became known, it would be a big ~~scandal~~ that would ~~shake~~ the Blade Dance.		If that became known, the scandal would be so big, that it would affect the Blade Dance greatly.

	Scratching his hair ~~in a manner like he gave~~ up, the boy gazed at the girl in resignation.		Scratching his, hair as if gaving up, the boy gazed at the girl in resignation.

	"Er...err, erm, there are circumstances to this. So, I am a boy but, without asking anything, could you keep this a secret from everyone?"		"Er...err, erm, there are circumstances to this. So, I am a boy but, without asking anything, could you keep this a secret from everyone?"

	~~With~~ his troubled~~-looking black pupils gazing~~, the girl's chest ~~throbbed~~ spontaneously.		Receiving his troubled and pleading look, the girl felt her chest throb spontaneously.

	(Eerr, what do I do...)		(Eerr, what do I do...)
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	Even if her true identity was a boy, Ren Ashbell was still her admired blade dancer.		Even if her true identity was a boy, Ren Ashbell was still her admired blade dancer.

	Her Blade Dance gave the girl~~'s heart courage~~, who was always depressed since '''that day'''. That would not change. Besides, the fact that he had saved her life ~~would not change~~.		Her Blade Dance gave the girl, who was always depressed since '''that day''' courage, That would not change. Besides, there was also the fact, that he had saved her life.

	To give a reward to a Knight's meritorious service was the imperial family's precept.		To give a reward to a Knight's meritorious service was the imperial family's precept.
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	"Your shoes... they seemed to have slipped off. Come on, hold on to my back."		"Your shoes... they seemed to have slipped off. Come on, hold on to my back."

	The boy noticed that the girl's feet were covered in injuries and ~~gave~~ her ~~a lift~~ on his back.		The boy noticed that the girl's feet were covered in injuries and helped her climb on his back.

	"Er...Erm, my breasts are touching your back~~, however~~."		"Er...Erm, my breasts are touching your back."

	Embarrassed, the girl whispered at the side of his ear.		Embarrassed, the girl whispered at the side of his ear.
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	The boy answered that with a serious expression.		The boy answered that with a serious expression.

	A «Wish»— A miracle of the Elemental Lords that was bestowed to the victor of the blade dance.		A «Wish»— A miracle of the Elemental Lords that was bestowed upon the victor of the blade dance.

	At that moment, those words that the boy spoke of brought about an insight in the girl's mind.		At that moment, those words that the boy spoke of brought about an insight in the girl's mind.

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	Although called the guest of honor, she was only an extra invited as an excuse.		Although called the guest of honor, she was only an extra invited as an excuse.

	Fallen out of the candidacy of «Divine Ritual Institute»— the Queen training organization, she was the ~~royal~~ family's excess baggage.		Fallen out of the candidacy of «Divine Ritual Institute»— the Queen training organization, she was the imperial family's excess baggage.

	She had nothing other than the title of former second princess and was just a mere thirteen year-old girl.		She had nothing other than the title of former second princess and was just a mere thirteen year-old girl.

	Her noble colleagues, who should have pledged allegiance to the ~~royal~~ family by right, were sending her gazes of contempt.		Her noble colleagues, who should have pledged allegiance to the imperial family by right, were sending her gazes of contempt.

	Even the retainer court ladies were ridiculing her behind her back.		Even the retainer court ladies were ridiculing her behind her back.
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	Her Blade Dance gave the girl's heart courage, who was always depressed since '''that day'''. That would not change. Besides, the fact that he had saved her life would not change.		Her Blade Dance gave the girl's heart courage, who was always depressed since '''that day'''. That would not change. Besides, the fact that he had saved her life would not change.

	To give a reward to a Knight's meritorious service was the ~~Royal Family~~'s ~~Precept~~.		To give a reward to a Knight's meritorious service was the imperial family's precept.

	"T...Thank you! You saved me some trouble!"		"T...Thank you! You saved me some trouble!"

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	(Eerr, what do I do...)		(Eerr, what do I do...)

	Honestly, the girl was bewildered. The blade dancer, ~~who~~ she admired, was a boy— even if she suddenly said such a thing, there was no way that anyone could comprehend it immediately.		Honestly, the girl was bewildered. The blade dancer, whom she admired, was a boy— even if she suddenly said such a thing, there was no way that anyone could comprehend it immediately.

	Besides, though, her throne inheritance rights had been erased, she was the second princess of the Ordesia Empire and a pure princess maiden of the «Divine Ritual Institute». Was it alright for her to overlook this fact that would desecrate the «Blade Dance»?		Besides, though, her throne inheritance rights had been erased, she was the second princess of the Ordesia Empire and a pure princess maiden of the «Divine Ritual Institute». Was it alright for her to overlook this fact that would desecrate the «Blade Dance»?
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	"I won't tell anyone, I won't ask anything. You are the one who saved my life."		"I won't tell anyone, I won't ask anything. You are the one who saved my life."

	Even if her true identity was a boy, Ren Ashbell was her admired blade dancer.		Even if her true identity was a boy, Ren Ashbell was still her admired blade dancer.

	Her Blade Dance gave the girl's heart courage, who was always depressed since '''that day'''. That would not change. Besides, the fact that he had saved her life would not change.		Her Blade Dance gave the girl's heart courage, who was always depressed since '''that day'''. That would not change. Besides, the fact that he had saved her life would not change.
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	With her cheeks dyed red, the girl quickly turned her face away.		With her cheeks dyed red, the girl quickly turned her face away.

	In the middle of a dim forest, while listening to the ~~sound~~ of stepping on the fallen leaves, the girl inquired.		In the middle of a dim forest, while listening to the sounds of stepping on the fallen leaves, the girl inquired.

	"Hey, why did you go so far as to fake being a girl and participate in the «Blade Dance»?"		"Hey, why did you go so far as to fake being a girl and participate in the «Blade Dance»?"

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	She had nothing other than the title of former second princess and was just a mere thirteen year-old girl.		She had nothing other than the title of former second princess and was just a mere thirteen year-old girl.

	Her noble colleagues, who should have pledged allegiance to the imperial family by right, were sending her ~~gazes~~ of contempt.		Her noble colleagues, who should have pledged allegiance to the imperial family by right, were sending her looks of contempt.

	Even the retainer court ladies were ridiculing her behind her back.		Even the retainer court ladies were ridiculing her behind her back.
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	Despair surfaced on the girl's face.		Despair surfaced on the girl's face.

	Dryad let out a roar and swung its log-like ~~spirit~~ arm—		Dryad let out a roar and swung its log-like arm—

	At that moment, a blinding light flashed.		At that moment, a blinding light flashed.
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	The girl opened her eyes reflexively.		The girl opened her eyes reflexively.

	~~The log-like spirit~~ arm had cleanly vanished before her eyes.		Dryad's arm had cleanly vanished before her eyes.

	It was as if time had stopped.		It was as if time had stopped.
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	Before the girl's eyes, a single boy was standing.		Before the girl's eyes, a single boy was standing.

	~~It was a~~ black ~~haired boy, who~~ wore a black vest with a pair of navy blue trousers.		He had black hair and wore a black vest with a pair of navy blue trousers.

	~~In the~~ boy~~'s hand was one swinging sword. He~~ was grasping a jet-black demon sword that emitted black fog.		The boy was grasping a jet-black demon sword that emitted black fog.

	"Stay still there, it's dangerous."		"Stay still there, it's dangerous."

	~~The boy bluntly~~ told her and turned towards the spirit before him.		He told her bluntly and turned towards the spirit before him.

	Dryad, who had its arm cut off, let out an angry roar and attacked the boy.		Dryad, who had its arm cut off, let out an angry roar and attacked the boy.
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	The girl was dumbfounded and the boy turned around.		The girl was dumbfounded and the boy turned around.

	If she ~~had~~ to ~~say it~~, ~~then the boy was of a~~ slender, handsome ~~look~~.		If she were to describe him, she would call him slender and handsome.

	His eyes were so clear that, depending on how one looked at him, a girl of about the same age could also be seen.		His eyes were so clear that, depending on how one looked at him, a girl of about the same age could also be seen.

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	It was painful for her to be at the match venue where she would be exposed to many people's gazes.		It was painful for her to be at the match venue where she would be exposed to many people's gazes.

	The match with Ren Ashbell, which she wanted to see, was later on in the afternoon, and, even if she was gone, there was no one who would be particularly worried.		The match with Ren Ashbell, which she wanted to see, was later on in the afternoon and, even if she was gone, there was no one who would be particularly worried.

	Therefore, she came to the middle of a forest like this alone.		Therefore, she came to the middle of a forest like this alone.
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	The girl's head was in complete chaos. She was also surprised that the true identity of Ren Ashbell was a boy because, to begin with, it was hard for her to believe in the existence of male elementalist.		The girl's head was in complete chaos. She was also surprised that the true identity of Ren Ashbell was a boy because, to begin with, it was hard for her to believe in the existence of male elementalist.

	Those who could contract a spirit were pure maidens only— that was the common sense taught to her from the «Divine Ritual Institute» from when she was young. Speaking of a male elementalist, there was nothing that came to mind but that legendary Demon King, Solomon.		Those who could contract a spirit were pure maidens only— that was the common sense taught to her from the «Divine Ritual Institute» from when she was young. Speaking of a male elementalist, there was nothing that came to mind, but that legendary Demon King, Solomon.

	(This tournament's favorite, the famous Ren Ashbell-sama, is actually a boy—)		(This tournament's favorite, the famous Ren Ashbell-sama, is actually a boy—)
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	After a moment of silence—		After a moment of silence—

	"Because, I have a ~~«wish»~~ I want to be granted."		"Because, I have a «Wish» I want to be granted."

	The boy answered that with a serious expression.		The boy answered that with a serious expression.

	A ~~«wish»—~~ A miracle of the Elemental Lords that was bestowed to the victor of the blade dance.		A «Wish»— A miracle of the Elemental Lords that was bestowed to the victor of the blade dance.

	At that moment, those words that the boy spoke of brought about an insight in the girl's mind.		At that moment, those words that the boy spoke of brought about an insight in the girl's mind.

	(I see, if it's for the Blade Dance ~~«wish»~~, even my power...)		(I see, if it's for the Blade Dance «Wish», even my power...)

	After coming to a place near the match area, the girl was gently let off from his back.		After coming to a place near the match area, the girl was gently let off from his back.
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	However, the girl never met him again.		However, the girl never met him again.

	Because he, who should have been granted his ~~«wish»~~, suddenly disappeared.		Because he, who should have been granted his «Wish», suddenly disappeared.