Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter2 - Revision history

Rxls at 14:53, 28 June 2018

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	==Chapter 2: Team Scarlet's Dash==		==Chapter 2 - Team Scarlet's Dash==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

Rxls: Undo revision 536239 by Masterupc (talk)

2018-06-28T14:13:47Z

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2018-03-03T23:33:41Z

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Zzhk: Reverted edits by 127.0.0.1 (talk) to last revision by Cthaeh

2016-08-24T15:18:06Z

Reverted edits by 127.0.0.1 (talk) to last revision by Cthaeh

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	Its wet shiny semi-transparent body turned over Fianna's skirt, and was tightly twining around her slender body. Her tender breasts were squeezed out and a gasping-like breath leaked out from her throat.		Its wet shiny semi-transparent body turned over Fianna's skirt, and was tightly twining around her slender body. Her tender breasts were squeezed out and a gasping-like breath leaked out from her throat.
	~~[[image:STnBD V03 004-005.jpg\|thumb]]~~

	Fianna was suspended in midair as she writhed, but she was helpless against the spirit opponent.		Fianna was suspended in midair as she writhed, but she was helpless against the spirit opponent.

127.0.0.1: /* Chapter 2: Team Scarlet's Dash */ added picture

2016-08-24T15:11:30Z

Chapter 2: Team Scarlet's Dash: added picture

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	Its wet shiny semi-transparent body turned over Fianna's skirt, and was tightly twining around her slender body. Her tender breasts were squeezed out and a gasping-like breath leaked out from her throat.		Its wet shiny semi-transparent body turned over Fianna's skirt, and was tightly twining around her slender body. Her tender breasts were squeezed out and a gasping-like breath leaked out from her throat.
			[[image:STnBD V03 004-005.jpg\|thumb]]

	Fianna was suspended in midair as she writhed, but she was helpless against the spirit opponent.		Fianna was suspended in midair as she writhed, but she was helpless against the spirit opponent.

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

2015-11-21T19:00:24Z

reformatting + consistency

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	That was a water spirit in a giant serpent form.		That was a water spirit in a giant serpent form.
	~~[[File:STnBD V03 004-005.jpg\|thumbnail]]~~
	"Fianna!"		"Fianna!"

07n156: /* Chapter 2: Team Scarlet's Dash */

2014-07-16T20:23:51Z

Chapter 2: Team Scarlet's Dash

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	That was a water spirit in a giant serpent form.		That was a water spirit in a giant serpent form.
			[[File:STnBD V03 004-005.jpg\|thumbnail]]
	"Fianna!"		"Fianna!"

Levant08: /* Chapter 2: Team Scarlet's Dash */

2014-06-14T07:17:51Z

Chapter 2: Team Scarlet's Dash

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	They were the demon mirror elementalist<!--Zero2001:Wouldn't "demonic" be a better choice?--> and the adamantine elementalist.		They were the demon mirror elementalist<!--Zero2001:Wouldn't "demonic" be a better choice?--> and the adamantine elementalist.

	A few weeks ago, they were the same upperclassmen, who had participated in the contract ritual of the militarized spirit in ~~Mine~~ Town.		A few weeks ago, they were the same upperclassmen, who had participated in the contract ritual of the militarized spirit in Academy Town.

	They were the ones, who had relentlessly tormented Claire, who could not use her contracted spirit.		They were the ones, who had relentlessly tormented Claire, who could not use her contracted spirit.

Monsterbandage: /* Part 2 */

2013-04-08T04:31:49Z

Part 2

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	"This makes it our third consecutive victory in our battles, this is all thanks to my wonderful commands."		"This makes it our third consecutive victory in our battles, this is all thanks to my wonderful commands<!-- maybe it'll sound better if we used something like 'leadership' or 'instructions'-->."

	Brushing her red twin-tails, Claire muttered in a good mood.		Brushing her red twin-tails, Claire muttered in a good mood.
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	If it was her, he was sure that he could surely fight feeling good.		If it was her, he was sure that he could surely fight feeling good.

	Claire somehow pouted her lips, seemingly displeased, at Kamito's such ~~muttering~~.		Claire somehow pouted her lips, seemingly displeased, at Kamito muttering such things.

	"Wh-What, you want to see Ellis' breasts shaking so much?"		"Wh-What, you want to see Ellis' breasts shaking so much?"
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	The one, who was slowly walking from the other side of the corridor, was a blond haired beautiful girl overflowing with elegance.		The one, who was slowly walking from the other side of the corridor, was a blond haired beautiful girl overflowing with elegance.

	She was the eldest daughter of the ~~pedigree and~~ honorable Laurenfrost family, and also the self-~~called~~ Claire~~'s rival~~.		She was the eldest daughter with the lineage of the honorable Laurenfrost family, and also the self-declared rival of Claire.

	She was Miss Rinslet Laurenfrost.		She was Miss Rinslet Laurenfrost.
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	"Rinslet, you..."		"Rinslet, you..."

	"Oh, this is not something you have to feel indebted for, Claire Rouge. I really hate those sort of ~~pride-less~~ nobles."		"Oh, this is not something you have to feel indebted for, Claire Rouge. I really hate those sort of prideless nobles."

	"I-It's not like I feel indebted or something!"		"I-It's not like I feel indebted or something!"
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	"Claire, don't be bothered by those kind of people."		"Claire, don't be bothered by those kind of people."

	"I-I'm not... That sort of thing is ~~something usual~~."		"I-I'm not... That sort of thing is normal."

	Claire rubbed her eyes, and quickly turned away.		Claire rubbed her eyes, and quickly turned away.