Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter3 - Revision history

Zzhk at 00:00, 6 September 2018

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	===Part 5===		===Part 5===

	The diner, called ~~Japanese Bluefish~~ Pavilion and recommended by Carol, was a very stylish building of red bricks.		The diner, called Sablefish Pavilion and recommended by Carol, was a very stylish building of red bricks.

	He sat on an inner table that sits six people and promptly opened the menu.		He sat on an inner table that sits six people and promptly opened the menu.

Rxls at 14:53, 28 June 2018

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	==Chapter 3: Claire's Birthday==		==Chapter 3 - Claire's Birthday==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

Rxls: Undo revision 536262 by Masterupc (talk)

2018-06-28T14:14:09Z

Undo revision 536262 by Masterupc (talk)

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Masterupc: punctuation, minor changes

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Hiro Hayase: /* Part 5 */ subhuman -> demihuman

2017-01-28T21:49:01Z

Part 5: subhuman -> demihuman

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	(...The Elfim race?)		(...The Elfim race?)

	They were ~~subhumans~~ that were reported to have crossed over from Astral Zero during the distant mythic age.		They were demihumans that were reported to have crossed over from Astral Zero during the distant mythic age.

	It seemed that the pure Elfim race did not exist anymore now, but— their physical trait of having long ears was famous. They were often seen in the urban areas of the empire, there were also Elfim race students in the academy, but one working as a waitress in a diner was rare.		It seemed that the pure Elfim race did not exist anymore now, but— their physical trait of having long ears was famous. They were often seen in the urban areas of the empire, there were also Elfim race students in the academy, but one working as a waitress in a diner was rare.

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

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reformatting + consistency

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Monsterbandage: /* Part 6 */

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Part 6

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	The risk of those girls as someone to trade with was a little high.		The risk of those girls as someone to trade with was a little high.

	Those, who reached out for her goods— were always princess maidens who lost their confidence and were obsessed in strong delusions and a sense of duty.		Those, who reached out for her goods— were always princess maidens who lost their confidence and were obsessed with strong delusions and a sense of duty.

	(...Although, that red haired girl seemed to be of a little hope.)		(...Although, that red haired girl seemed to be of a little hope.)

Monsterbandage: /* Part 5 */

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	They were subhumans that were reported to have crossed over from Astral Zero during the distant mythic age.		They were subhumans that were reported to have crossed over from Astral Zero during the distant mythic age.

	It seemed that the pure Elfim race did not exist anymore now, but— their physical trait of having long ears was famous. They were often seen in the urban areas of the empire, there are also Elfim race ~~academy~~ students in the academy, but one working as a waitress in a diner was rare.		It seemed that the pure Elfim race did not exist anymore now, but— their physical trait of having long ears was famous. They were often seen in the urban areas of the empire, there are also Elfim race students in the academy, but one working as a waitress in a diner was rare.

	What she had carried over was— a gigantic chocolate parfait.		What she had carried over was— a gigantic chocolate parfait.

Monsterbandage: /* Part 4 */

2013-04-09T00:03:49Z

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	Its outer edge was encircled by the spirit forest and ramparts, and the town was divided into five areas associated with the five grand spirits.		Its outer edge was encircled by the spirit forest and ramparts, and the town was divided into five areas associated with the five grand spirits.

	The part that academy students used as a breather after examinations was primarily the «Water» area. Rivaling the imperial capital, entertainment facilities, such as jewelry shops, restaurants and large public baths, were gathered here.		The part that academy students used for a breather after examinations was primarily the «Water» area. Rivaling the imperial capital, entertainment facilities, such as jewelry shops, restaurants and large public baths, were gathered here.

	On the other hand, the «Wind» area, which Kamito and the others were heading to, was an area that ordinary townspeople lived in.		On the other hand, the «Wind» area, which Kamito and the others were heading to, was an area that ordinary townspeople lived in.
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	"It's awfully busy. It still has a different ambiance compared to the austere Imperial Empire's grand spirit festival."		"It's awfully busy. It still has a different ambiance compared to the austere Imperial Empire's grand spirit festival."

	Being brought up in the imperial capital, Fianna ~~said~~ her thoughts.		Being brought up in the imperial capital, Fianna voiced her thoughts.

	"That's because the Valentia Holy Festival is a festival by ordinary townspeople. Its nuance is a little different from the ritual that princess maidens dedicate to spirits in."		"That's because the Valentia Holy Festival is a festival by ordinary townspeople. Its nuance is a little different from the ritual that princess maidens dedicate to spirits in."
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	Kamito raised his voice in a fluster.		Kamito raised his voice in a fluster.

	He was probably not suspected by Claire, and when he turned ~~behind~~.		He was probably not suspected by Claire, and when he turned around.

	"Hn?"		"Hn?"
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	"I-I said it's nothing, right! I'm completely not interested in this sort of things!"		"I-I said it's nothing, right! I'm completely not interested in this sort of things!"

	"I see. I thought it ~~specially~~ suits you."		"I see. I thought it especially suits you."

	"... A-Ar-Aren't you being an idiot! Le-Let's get going, I'm hungry!"		"... A-Ar-Aren't you being an idiot! Le-Let's get going, I'm hungry!"

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	Ellis, who was pointed out from the platform, clearly answered.		Ellis, who was pointed out from the platform, clearly answered.

	"That's right. It is said that the number of people, whose body are compatible with the Cursed Armament Seal, is only less than ten percent even among the elementalists. However, in spite of the fact that that risk is evident, even now, the fact that illegal researches are continuing means that there are that many people who seek easy power."		"That's right. It is said that the number of people, whose body are compatible with the Cursed Armament Seal, is only less than ten percent even among the elementalists. However, in spite of the fact that that risk is evident, even now, the fact that illegal researches are continuing means that there are that many people who seek for easy power."

	Teacher Freya informed in a strict voice, and swung her cane.		Teacher Freya informed in a strict voice, and swung her cane.