Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter4 - Revision history

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	==Chapter 4: A Knight's Sincerity==		==Chapter 4 - A Knight's Sincerity==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

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Toshiya: Undo revision 528976 by 75.128.53.8 (talk) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Objet_d%27art

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	Incidentally, his eyes stopped on top of the writing desk.		Incidentally, his eyes stopped on top of the writing desk.

	A spirit crystal ~~object~~ art, which emitted a faint glow, had been placed near the desk.		A spirit crystal objet d'art, which emitted a faint glow, had been placed near the desk.

	(That's—)		(That's—)

75.128.53.8: /* Part 2 */

2017-10-16T03:44:54Z

Part 2

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	Incidentally, his eyes stopped on top of the writing desk.		Incidentally, his eyes stopped on top of the writing desk.

	A spirit crystal ~~objet d'~~art, which emitted a faint glow, had been placed near the desk.		A spirit crystal object art, which emitted a faint glow, had been placed near the desk.

	(That's—)		(That's—)

127.0.0.1: /* Part 2 */ added picture

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	"I-I'm now your exclusive-use maid from now. ...I-Is that alright?"		"I-I'm now your exclusive-use maid from now. ...I-Is that alright?"
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	Ellis, whose face turned bright red, held the hem of her long skirt and bowed.		Ellis, whose face turned bright red, held the hem of her long skirt and bowed.

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	Ellis immediately boiled hot water, and took out hot black tea and snacks.		Ellis immediately boiled hot water, and took out hot black tea and snacks.

	Despite being an ~~ojou~~-~~sama~~ of a great noble family, she was very capable in such areas. Since the Fahrengart family was of a military parentage, she might have received strict training from when she was young.		Despite being an high-class young lady of a great noble family, she was very capable in such areas. Since the Fahrengart family was of a military parentage, she might have received strict training from when she was young.

	"This is delicious. Ellis, did you make it?"		"This is delicious. Ellis, did you make it?"
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	(That reminds me, she had said that she admired Ren Ashbell...)		(That reminds me, she had said that she admired Ren Ashbell...)

	As he made a heavy sigh, he put back the memory-sealing spirit ~~ore~~ onto the desk.		As he made a heavy sigh, he put back the memory-sealing spirit crystal onto the desk.

	If Kamito did not make sure that at least his true identity was absolutely not exposed to her—		If Kamito did not make sure that at least his true identity was absolutely not exposed to her—
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	Ellis folded her arms and glared directly at Kamito with her reddish brown pupils.		Ellis folded her arms and glared directly at Kamito with her reddish brown pupils.

	"I-It's about the quest the other day. As the representative of the ~~Syphid~~ Knights, I had been thinking that I had to thank you for helping that time. ...Th-This is only as the representative of the ~~Syphid~~ Knights!"		"I-It's about the quest the other day. As the representative of the Sylphid Knights, I had been thinking that I had to thank you for helping that time. ...Th-This is only as the representative of the Sylphid Knights!"

	"No, I had said that I don't need things like thanks. It's natural to help my comrades."		"No, I had said that I don't need things like thanks. It's natural to help my comrades."
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	"Huh?"		"Huh?"

	"Y-~~'''~~You mean for me to put on an even sexier attire, right'''?!"		"''Y-You mean for me to put on an even sexier attire, right''?!"

	"What are you saying!"		"What are you saying!"
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	"...H-How's the taste? '''Master'''."		"...H-How's the taste? ''Master''."

	Just like that—		Just like that—
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	It ended up with Ellis preparing food for Kamito.		It ended up with Ellis preparing food for Kamito.

	As expected of having been trained for the sake of the gentleman she will be married to in the future, from the cooking to the arrangement of food, her skills were very good. ...She was the kind of person whose example he wanted a certain ~~hellcat ojou-sama~~ to follow.		As expected of having been trained for the sake of the gentleman she will be married to in the future, from the cooking to the arrangement of food, her skills were very good. ...She was the kind of person whose example he wanted a certain hell cat young lady to follow.

	Nevertheless—		Nevertheless—
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	Kamito—		Kamito—

	"...I got it. It'll just be until those two come back, right?"		"...I got it. It's just be until those two come back, right?"

	"I-Is that alright? ...Really?"		"I-Is that alright? ...Really?"
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	"Fuaa, Ka-Kamito!?"		"Fuaa, Ka-Kamito!?"

	<nowiki></nowiki>Pyon, her red ~~twin-tailed~~ hair sprung up.		<nowiki></nowiki>Pyon, her red twintailed hair sprung up.

	"Id-Idiot, don't startle me! I'll turn you into cinders!"		"Id-Idiot, don't startle me! I'll turn you into cinders!"
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	Claire's slender shoulders trembled.		Claire's slender shoulders trembled.

	She tightly bit her cherry-~~blossom color~~ lips, tears were slightly appearing on her ruby pupils.		She tightly bit her cherry-colored lips, tears were slightly appearing on her ruby pupils.

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	"Eh?"		"Eh?"

	"Despite that you said— '''<nowiki>'</nowiki>I'll be your contracted spirit<nowiki>'</nowiki>'''."		"Despite that you said— ''<nowiki>'</nowiki>I'll be your contracted spirit<nowiki>'</nowiki>''."

	Claire raised her face, and drops of tears overflowed from her pupils.		Claire raised her face, and drops of tears overflowed from her pupils.
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	A nicely wrapped-up chocolate was lying there.		A nicely wrapped-up chocolate was lying there.

	Tomorrow was the ~~«Valentia~~ Holy ~~Festival»~~.		Tomorrow was the Valentia Holy Festival.

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	She had shiny blonde hair and cool-headed ice-blue pupils.		She had shiny blonde hair and cool-headed ice-blue pupils.

	"Ah, ~~Aneue<ref>A highly honorable term for one's older~~ sister~~. This term of referring to one's older sister carries an extreme amount of respect that cannot be properly converted to English. Thus it has been left as is.</ref>~~...!"		"Ah, esteemed sister...!"

	"What kind of cowardly face are you making? And yet you call yourself a knight of the Fahrengart family?"<!--「なにを腑抜けた顔をしている。それでもファーレンガルト家の騎士か」-->		"What kind of cowardly face are you making? And yet you call yourself a knight of the Fahrengart family?"<!--「なにを腑抜けた顔をしている。それでもファーレンガルト家の騎士か」-->
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	==References and Translation Notes==		===References and Translation Notes===
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	{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter3\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter5}}</noinclude>		{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter3\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter5}}</noinclude>

186.18.98.5: /* Part 3 */ "...It's just be until..." corrected to "...It'll just be until..."

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Part 3: "...It's just be until..." corrected to "...It'll just be until..."

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	Kamito—		Kamito—

	"...I got it. It's just be until those two come back, right?"		"...I got it. It'll just be until those two come back, right?"

	"I-Is that alright? ...Really?"		"I-Is that alright? ...Really?"

Zzhk: Undo revision 373524 by 186.18.98.5 (talk) "more special" does not mean the same as "most special"

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Undo revision 373524 by 186.18.98.5 (talk) "more special" does not mean the same as "most special"

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	She understood the reason.		She understood the reason.

	She had been thinking that she was the ~~most~~ special being to Kamito.		She had been thinking that she was the more special being to Kamito.

	(After all, he had said that he would be my contracted spirit.)		(After all, he had said that he would be my contracted spirit.)

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Part 5

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	She understood the reason.		She understood the reason.

	She had been thinking that she was the ~~more~~ special being to Kamito.		She had been thinking that she was the most special being to Kamito.

	(After all, he had said that he would be my contracted spirit.)		(After all, he had said that he would be my contracted spirit.)