Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter5 - Revision history

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	==Chapter 5: Sylphid Knights==		==Chapter 5 - Sylphid Knights==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

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	"—Well then, I have to go to Ellis' place."		"—Well then, I have to go to Ellis' place."

	The academy also had a day off today because of ~~«Valentia~~ Holy ~~Festival»~~ but there was a meeting being held.		The academy also had a day off today because of Valentia Holy Festival but there was a meeting being held.

	Kamito had just decided to join the Knights, but it seemed like he had to work immediately from today.		Kamito had just decided to join the Knights, but it seemed like he had to work immediately from today.
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	...It was understandable. Due to the incident just now, the impression Kamito made was the worst.		...It was understandable. Due to the incident just now, the impression Kamito made was the worst.

	"Is that the rumored ~~demon king~~ of the ~~night~~?" "I can't believe it, he made such a small girl into his lover..."		"Is that the rumored Demon King of the Night?" "I can't believe it, he made such a small girl into his lover..."

	"However, isn't he a little good-looking?" "Don't be deceived, despite his appearance, he's a terrible pervert." "Even just now, he was looking at us like he ran his tongue all over our underwear."		"However, isn't he a little good-looking?" "Don't be deceived, despite his appearance, he's a terrible pervert." "Even just now, he was looking at us like he ran his tongue all over our underwear."
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	The Knights' general meeting started.		The Knights' general meeting started.

	What ~~was being told from~~ Ellis~~' mouth~~ was ~~about~~ the special quest for the Valentia Holy Festival.		What Ellis spoke about was the special quest for the Valentia Holy Festival.

	"Today, the academy lectures are cancelled. Many academy students would end up flocking to the town because of the Valentia Holy Festival. In order to prevent dueling incidents from occurring in front of ordinary townspeople, all members, be cautious and take on the quest."		"Today, the academy lectures are cancelled. Many academy students would end up flocking to the town because of the Valentia Holy Festival. In order to prevent dueling incidents from occurring in front of ordinary townspeople, all members, be cautious and take on the quest."
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	Velsaria made a sound with her hard iron shoes and slowly walked over.		Velsaria made a sound with her hard iron shoes and slowly walked over.

	"~~Aneue~~, why are you here...!"		"Esteemed sister, why are you here...!"

	"It seems that the pawns have decreased considerably in numbers during the time I was absent."		"It seems that the pawns have decreased considerably in numbers during the time I was absent."

	"~~Aneue~~... did you say something just now?"		"Esteemed sister... did you say something just now?"

	"I said the pawns have decreased. That's all."		"I said the pawns have decreased. That's all."
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	"~~Aneue~~, what on earth are you planning?!"		"Esteemed sister, what on earth are you planning?!"

	Enraged, Ellis drew closer to Velsaria.		Enraged, Ellis drew closer to Velsaria.
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	"You surprised me— you had the time to cover for your contracted spirit with that distance. How about it, won't you join my team too. You seem to be able to at least be my outrider."		"You surprised me— you had the time to cover for your contracted spirit with that distance. How about it, won't you join my team too. You seem to be able to at least be my outrider."

	"I refuse. I'm with the ~~hellcat ojou-sama~~'s team."		"I refuse. I'm with the hell cat girl's team."

	Kamito glared back at Velsaria.		Kamito glared back at Velsaria.

	"~~«Team Scarlet»—~~ Calamity Queen's sister's team that is currently in sixth place? Well, that's fine, if you won't be my pawn, then I'll just have to crush you."		"Team Scarlet— Calamity Queen's sister's team that is currently in sixth place? Well, that's fine, if you won't be my pawn, then I'll just have to crush you."

	Velsaria averted her line of sight as she lost interest—		Velsaria averted her line of sight as she lost interest—
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	Velsaria, who left the Sylphid Knights building, distorted her expression in pain.		Velsaria, who left the Sylphid Knights building, distorted her expression in pain.

	The throbbing was fast. The ~~«Heart»~~ was pounding like it went crazy.		The throbbing was fast. The 'heart' was pounding like it went crazy.

	(I thought that I had already gotten used to this ~~«Heart»~~ but—)		(I thought that I had already gotten used to this 'heart' but—)

	She had not yet reached the point of fully controlling it.		She had not yet reached the point of fully controlling it.
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	(However, that's fine. If it wasn't like that, it would be meaningless—)		(However, that's fine. If it wasn't like that, it would be meaningless—)

	What was important was the infinite divine power that the ~~«Heart»~~ brought about with it.		What was important was the infinite divine power that the 'heart' brought about with it.

	As long as she had this ~~«Heart»—~~ she could win.		As long as she had this 'heart'— she could win.

	Against that girl— {{Furigana\|The Strongest Blade Dancer\|Ren Ashbell\|margin=12}}, who defeated her.		Against that girl— {{Furigana\|The Strongest Blade Dancer\|Ren Ashbell\|margin=12}}, who defeated her.
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	Kazehaya Kamito turned his hostility-filled gaze at Velsaria.		Kazehaya Kamito turned his hostility-filled gaze at Velsaria.

	(—She's different. '''She wasn't even looking at me'''.)		(—She's different. ''She wasn't even looking at me''.)

	She thought nothing about Velsaria, who was her competitor.		She thought nothing about Velsaria, who was her competitor.
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	"Just wait, Ren Ashbell—"		"Just wait, Ren Ashbell—"

	As Velsaria felt the throbbing of the raging ~~«Heart»~~, she ground her molars.		As Velsaria felt the throbbing of the raging 'heart', she ground her molars.

	<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter4\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter6}}</noinclude>		<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter4\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter6}}</noinclude>

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	Velsaria quickly released her hand from Ellis' chin.		Velsaria quickly released her hand from Ellis' chin.

	"You're the male elementalist, who's said to have been admitted here with ~~Lord~~ Greyworth's recommendation, right?"		"You're the male elementalist, who's said to have been admitted here with Lady Greyworth's recommendation, right?"

	"Yes, so what of it?"		"Yes, so what of it?"

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	Cold sweat surfaced on Kamito's forehead.		Cold sweat surfaced on Kamito's forehead.

	...No, that couldn't be it. The time he met her was three years ago. Kamito's current looks should be very different from ~~that~~ time, when he was ~~acting as~~ an innocent ~~girl~~.		...No, that couldn't be it. The time he met her was three years ago. Kamito's current looks should be very different from the time, when he was an innocent boy.

	Velsaria—		Velsaria—

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	Cold sweat surfaced on Kamito's forehead.		Cold sweat surfaced on Kamito's forehead.

	...No, that couldn't be it. The time he met her was three years ago. Kamito's current looks should be very different from ~~the~~ time, when he was an innocent ~~boy~~.		...No, that couldn't be it. The time he met her was three years ago. Kamito's current looks should be very different from that time, when he was acting as an innocent girl.

	Velsaria—		Velsaria—

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	"Just wait, Ren Ashbell—"		"Just wait, Ren Ashbell—"

	As Velsaria felt the throbbing of the raging «Heart», she ~~grounded~~ her molars.		As Velsaria felt the throbbing of the raging «Heart», she ground her molars.

	<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter4\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter6}}</noinclude>		<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter4\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter6}}</noinclude>

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	"Just wait, Ren Ashbell—"		"Just wait, Ren Ashbell—"

	As Velsaria felt the throbbing of the raging «Heart», she ~~ground~~ her molars.		As Velsaria felt the throbbing of the raging «Heart», she grounded her molars.

	<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter4\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter6}}</noinclude>		<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter4\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter6}}</noinclude>

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	"When Jio Inzagi attacked the academy, Ellis rushed over there the ~~earliest~~ and fought. You don't have the right to condemn Ellis."		"When Jio Inzagi attacked the academy, Ellis rushed over there the fastest and fought. You don't have the right to condemn Ellis."

	"Ka-Kamito..."		"Ka-Kamito..."
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	"The one who captured that assailant was you, is that right?"		"The one who captured that assailant was you, is that right?"

	"It wasn't just me. The reason I won was because I fought together with my team ~~comrades~~."		"It wasn't just me. The reason I won was because I fought together with the comrades of my team."

	"Don't be modest. I can't understand why you're hiding your strength, but—"		"Don't be modest. I can't understand why you're hiding your strength, but—"
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	To be admitted into the team of the academy's strongest elementalist —ranking number one, Velsaria— was almost the same as ~~certainly~~ obtaining a ticket into the Blade Dance.		To be admitted into the team of the academy's strongest elementalist —ranking number one, Velsaria— was almost the same as obtaining a guaranteed ticket into the Blade Dance.

	That temptation was too great, certainly because they were powerful people.		That temptation was too great, certainly because they were powerful people.