Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Prologue - Revision history

Rxls: Undo revision 536189 by Masterupc (talk)

2018-06-28T14:12:56Z

Undo revision 536189 by Masterupc (talk)

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	"Yes, grandfather."		"Yes, grandfather."

	Towards the old aged grandfather's, Duke Fahrengart's words, the little girl nodded and replied with a dignified voice.		Towards the old aged grandfather's — Duke Fahrengart's — words, the little girl nodded and replied with a dignified voice.

	She had auburn colored pupils blessed with strong light and beautiful eyebrows that were sharply angled.		She had auburn colored pupils blessed with strong light and beautiful eyebrows that were sharply angled.
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	Her soft breasts were touching and rubbing on the iron fence. Her recent worries were that compared to the other girls at the same age, her breasts were developing too much.		Her soft breasts were touching and rubbing on the iron fence. Her recent worries were that compared to the other girls at the same age, her breasts were developing too much.

	("Really...Things like breasts just posses as a nuisance to swinging a sword.)		("Really.....Things like breasts just posses as a nuisance to swinging a sword.)

	Regarding this topic, the girls around her were completely jealous, ~~however...~~		Regarding this topic, the girls around her were completely jealous, however—

	For Ellis, who had totally no interest regarding love affairs, having huge breasts was simply an obstruction.		For Ellis, who had totally no interest regarding love affairs, having huge breasts was simply an obstruction.

	("...Something like love is pointless, I will become a knight. A splendid knight just like my esteemed sister.")		("......Something like love is pointless, I will become a knight. A splendid knight just like my esteemed sister.")

	Ellis strongly closed her fist, at that moment.		Ellis strongly closed her fist, at that moment.
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	Having long black hair that extended to her hips, she had the foreign-styled attire with a large slit inserted at the edge of the pants.		Having long black hair that extended to her hips, she had the foreign-styled attire with a large slit inserted at the edge of the pants.

	Although having youthful features, she was so beautiful that even Ellis, despite being of the same gender, was taken ~~aback~~.		Although having youthful features, she was so beautiful that even Ellis, despite being of the same gender, was taken back.

	In her hands lay, contrary to her lovely appearance, an ominous darkness-colored sword.		In her hands lay, contrary to her lovely appearance, an ominous darkness-colored sword.
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	"Ren Ashbell, an independent elementalist."		"Ren Ashbell, an independent elementalist."

	"Independent... not belonging to any country or organization. Is that what you're implying?"		"Independent........not belonging to any country or organization. Is that what you're implying?"

	"Yeah. It seems like there was the influence of a powerful person. It also seems like she's the same age as you, 13 years old."		"Yeah. It seems like there was the influence of a powerful person. It also seems like she's the same age as you, 13 years old."

	"..."		"......."

	Ellis bit her lips. Although having the same age, the fact that the girl was participating in the Blade Dance, was truly mortifying.		Ellis bit her lips. Although having the same age, the fact that the girl was participating in the Blade Dance, was truly mortifying.
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	And then, the bell signaling the start of the match was rang.		And then, the bell signaling the start of the match was rang.

	The greatest kagura offered to the Five Great Elemental ~~Lords,~~ the Blade Dance, had begun.		The greatest kagura offered to the Five Great Elemental Lords— the Blade Dance had begun.

	Immediately Velsaria Eva's armor ~~activated~~ and instantly shifted into battle form.		Immediately Velsaria Eva's armor activated— and instantly shifted into battle form.

	Sparkling particles of light constructed her composite armor. From both shoulders large twin-main cannons emerged.		Sparkling particles of light constructed her composite armor. From both shoulders large twin-main cannons emerged.
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	That truly was the impregnable fortress that reigned over the lands.		That truly was the impregnable fortress that reigned over the lands.

	Velsaria Eva's elemental waffe~~, Silent~~ Fortress.		Velsaria Eva's elemental waffe —Silent Fortress.

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	(...What a contracted spirit. No, the one that should be praised is my esteemed sister, the one using it.)		(.........What a contracted spirit. No, the one that should be praised is my esteemed sister, the one using it.)

	Velsaria's contracted spirit was an ancient sealed spirit that was sealed under a certain old castle.		Velsaria's contracted spirit was an ancient sealed spirit that was sealed under a certain old castle.
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	Just thinking about the ability difference between her and her target, also being her sister, she succumbed to feelings of shame.		Just thinking about the ability difference between her and her target, also being her sister, she succumbed to feelings of shame.

	(W~~...~~ Will I be able to catch up to my esteemed sister...)		(W-Will I be able to catch up to my esteemed sister.......)

	Velsaria swung her hand up, ~~the~~ main cannons on both her shoulders fired once.		Velsaria swung her hand up, —the main cannons on both her shoulders fired once.

	She did not like a refined blade dance. She would always blast her utmost maximum firepower at her oncoming ~~opponent... it~~ was an extremely simple battle style.		She did not like a refined blade dance. She would always blast her utmost maximum firepower at her oncoming opponent—it was an extremely simple battle style.

	There was an ear-splitting thunderous sound. In the arena, countless of pillars of fire's rose up.		There was an ear-splitting thunderous sound. In the arena, countless of pillars of fire's rose up.

	It was ~~over,~~ not only Ellis, but thousands of the audience were sure about it.		It was over— not only Ellis, but thousands of the audience were sure about it.

	But.		But.
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	Ellis widely opened her eyes.		Ellis widely opened her eyes.

	The cloud of dust cleared up ~~and...~~		The cloud of dust cleared up and—

	That black-haired girl's figure wasn't there.		That black-haired girl's figure wasn't there.
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	In that instant, a high-pitched metal-sound echoed.		In that instant, a high-pitched metal-sound echoed.

	Before anyone knew~~, the~~ girl had moved to in front of Velsaria.		Before anyone knew —the girl had moved to in front of Velsaria.

	The demon sword of the girl with fluttering black hair stabbed through the Silent Fortress's composite armor.		The demon sword of the girl with fluttering black hair stabbed through the Silent Fortress's composite armor.
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	Silence arrived.		Silence arrived.

	And ~~then...~~		And then—

	When the audiences finally noticed the situation, a break of cheers arose from where they were.		When the audiences finally noticed the situation, a break of cheers arose from where they were.
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	It was an unbelievable outcome. From the military based family, the Fahrengart Duke's knight was beaten by a young unnamed elementalist.		It was an unbelievable outcome. From the military based family, the Fahrengart Duke's knight was beaten by a young unnamed elementalist.

	"..."		"......"

	While Ellis was bewildered, the black haired girl that has beaten Velsaria was bewitching.		While Ellis was bewildered, the black haired girl that has beaten Velsaria was bewitching.

	The elementalist that has beaten her respected ~~sister,~~ by all right, was supposed to be someone hated.		The elementalist that has beaten her respected sister— by all right, was supposed to be someone hated.

	But, at that time what Ellis was embracing in her chest was a feeling opposite of hatred.		But, at that time what Ellis was embracing in her chest was a feeling opposite of hatred.
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	She was 13 years old. Although the girl was of the same age, she had shown her overwhelming power.		She was 13 years old. Although the girl was of the same age, she had shown her overwhelming power.

	(Someday I too, just like ~~her...~~)		(Someday I too, just like her—)

	A faint bud of admiration eventually became Ellis' clear goal and was carved into her heart.		A faint bud of admiration eventually became Ellis' clear goal and was carved into her heart.

	Together with the name the Strongest Blade ~~Dancer,~~ Ren Ashbell.		Together with the name the Strongest Blade Dancer— Ren Ashbell.


	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

	===References and Translation Notes===		===References and Translation Notes===
	<references />		<references/>

	{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Illustrations\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter1}}		{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Illustrations\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter1}}</noinclude>
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Masterupc: punctuation

2018-03-03T03:00:41Z

punctuation

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	"Yes, grandfather."		"Yes, grandfather."

	Towards the old aged grandfather's — Duke Fahrengart's — words, the little girl nodded and replied with a dignified voice.		Towards the old aged grandfather's, Duke Fahrengart's words, the little girl nodded and replied with a dignified voice.

	She had auburn colored pupils blessed with strong light and beautiful eyebrows that were sharply angled.		She had auburn colored pupils blessed with strong light and beautiful eyebrows that were sharply angled.
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	Her soft breasts were touching and rubbing on the iron fence. Her recent worries were that compared to the other girls at the same age, her breasts were developing too much.		Her soft breasts were touching and rubbing on the iron fence. Her recent worries were that compared to the other girls at the same age, her breasts were developing too much.

	("Really.....Things like breasts just posses as a nuisance to swinging a sword.)		("Really...Things like breasts just posses as a nuisance to swinging a sword.)

	Regarding this topic, the girls around her were completely jealous, ~~however—~~		Regarding this topic, the girls around her were completely jealous, however...

	For Ellis, who had totally no interest regarding love affairs, having huge breasts was simply an obstruction.		For Ellis, who had totally no interest regarding love affairs, having huge breasts was simply an obstruction.

	("~~...~~...Something like love is pointless, I will become a knight. A splendid knight just like my esteemed sister.")		("...Something like love is pointless, I will become a knight. A splendid knight just like my esteemed sister.")

	Ellis strongly closed her fist, at that moment.		Ellis strongly closed her fist, at that moment.
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	Having long black hair that extended to her hips, she had the foreign-styled attire with a large slit inserted at the edge of the pants.		Having long black hair that extended to her hips, she had the foreign-styled attire with a large slit inserted at the edge of the pants.

	Although having youthful features, she was so beautiful that even Ellis, despite being of the same gender, was taken ~~back~~.		Although having youthful features, she was so beautiful that even Ellis, despite being of the same gender, was taken aback.

	In her hands lay, contrary to her lovely appearance, an ominous darkness-colored sword.		In her hands lay, contrary to her lovely appearance, an ominous darkness-colored sword.
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	"Ren Ashbell, an independent elementalist."		"Ren Ashbell, an independent elementalist."

	"Independent~~.....~~...not belonging to any country or organization. Is that what you're implying?"		"Independent... not belonging to any country or organization. Is that what you're implying?"

	"Yeah. It seems like there was the influence of a powerful person. It also seems like she's the same age as you, 13 years old."		"Yeah. It seems like there was the influence of a powerful person. It also seems like she's the same age as you, 13 years old."

	"~~....~~..."		"..."

	Ellis bit her lips. Although having the same age, the fact that the girl was participating in the Blade Dance, was truly mortifying.		Ellis bit her lips. Although having the same age, the fact that the girl was participating in the Blade Dance, was truly mortifying.
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	And then, the bell signaling the start of the match was rang.		And then, the bell signaling the start of the match was rang.

	The greatest kagura offered to the Five Great Elemental ~~Lords—~~ the Blade Dance had begun.		The greatest kagura offered to the Five Great Elemental Lords, the Blade Dance, had begun.

	Immediately Velsaria Eva's armor ~~activated—~~ and instantly shifted into battle form.		Immediately Velsaria Eva's armor activated and instantly shifted into battle form.

	Sparkling particles of light constructed her composite armor. From both shoulders large twin-main cannons emerged.		Sparkling particles of light constructed her composite armor. From both shoulders large twin-main cannons emerged.
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	That truly was the impregnable fortress that reigned over the lands.		That truly was the impregnable fortress that reigned over the lands.

	Velsaria Eva's elemental waffe ~~—Silent~~ Fortress.		Velsaria Eva's elemental waffe, Silent Fortress.

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	(~~......~~...What a contracted spirit. No, the one that should be praised is my esteemed sister, the one using it.)		(...What a contracted spirit. No, the one that should be praised is my esteemed sister, the one using it.)

	Velsaria's contracted spirit was an ancient sealed spirit that was sealed under a certain old castle.		Velsaria's contracted spirit was an ancient sealed spirit that was sealed under a certain old castle.
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	Just thinking about the ability difference between her and her target, also being her sister, she succumbed to feelings of shame.		Just thinking about the ability difference between her and her target, also being her sister, she succumbed to feelings of shame.

	(W-Will I be able to catch up to my esteemed sister~~....~~...)		(W... Will I be able to catch up to my esteemed sister...)

	Velsaria swung her hand up, ~~—the~~ main cannons on both her shoulders fired once.		Velsaria swung her hand up, the main cannons on both her shoulders fired once.

	She did not like a refined blade dance. She would always blast her utmost maximum firepower at her oncoming ~~opponent—it~~ was an extremely simple battle style.		She did not like a refined blade dance. She would always blast her utmost maximum firepower at her oncoming opponent... it was an extremely simple battle style.

	There was an ear-splitting thunderous sound. In the arena, countless of pillars of fire's rose up.		There was an ear-splitting thunderous sound. In the arena, countless of pillars of fire's rose up.

	It was ~~over—~~ not only Ellis, but thousands of the audience were sure about it.		It was over, not only Ellis, but thousands of the audience were sure about it.

	But.		But.
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	Ellis widely opened her eyes.		Ellis widely opened her eyes.

	The cloud of dust cleared up ~~and—~~		The cloud of dust cleared up and...

	That black-haired girl's figure wasn't there.		That black-haired girl's figure wasn't there.
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	In that instant, a high-pitched metal-sound echoed.		In that instant, a high-pitched metal-sound echoed.

	Before anyone knew ~~—the~~ girl had moved to in front of Velsaria.		Before anyone knew, the girl had moved to in front of Velsaria.

	The demon sword of the girl with fluttering black hair stabbed through the Silent Fortress's composite armor.		The demon sword of the girl with fluttering black hair stabbed through the Silent Fortress's composite armor.
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	Silence arrived.		Silence arrived.

	And ~~then—~~		And then...

	When the audiences finally noticed the situation, a break of cheers arose from where they were.		When the audiences finally noticed the situation, a break of cheers arose from where they were.
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	It was an unbelievable outcome. From the military based family, the Fahrengart Duke's knight was beaten by a young unnamed elementalist.		It was an unbelievable outcome. From the military based family, the Fahrengart Duke's knight was beaten by a young unnamed elementalist.

	"~~...~~..."		"..."

	While Ellis was bewildered, the black haired girl that has beaten Velsaria was bewitching.		While Ellis was bewildered, the black haired girl that has beaten Velsaria was bewitching.

	The elementalist that has beaten her respected ~~sister—~~ by all right, was supposed to be someone hated.		The elementalist that has beaten her respected sister, by all right, was supposed to be someone hated.

	But, at that time what Ellis was embracing in her chest was a feeling opposite of hatred.		But, at that time what Ellis was embracing in her chest was a feeling opposite of hatred.
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	She was 13 years old. Although the girl was of the same age, she had shown her overwhelming power.		She was 13 years old. Although the girl was of the same age, she had shown her overwhelming power.

	(Someday I too, just like ~~her—~~)		(Someday I too, just like her...)

	A faint bud of admiration eventually became Ellis' clear goal and was carved into her heart.		A faint bud of admiration eventually became Ellis' clear goal and was carved into her heart.

	Together with the name the Strongest Blade ~~Dancer—~~ Ren Ashbell.		Together with the name the Strongest Blade Dancer, Ren Ashbell.


	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

	===References and Translation Notes===		===References and Translation Notes===
	<references/>		<references />

	{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Illustrations\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter1}}</noinclude>		{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Illustrations\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter1}}
			</noinclude>

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

2015-11-21T18:59:44Z

reformatting + consistency

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	Ellis Fahrengart.		Ellis Fahrengart.

	Her talent as an elementalist was revealed since childhood. It had been determined that starting as of next spring, she would attend the only elementalist training institute in the Ordesia Empire, the Areishia ~~Elementalist~~ Academy.		Her talent as an elementalist was revealed since childhood. It had been determined that starting as of next spring, she would attend the only elementalist training institute in the Ordesia Empire, the Areishia Spirit Academy.

	She was an elite candidate as a promising Empire Spirit Knight.		She was an elite candidate as a promising Empire Spirit Knight.
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	For Ellis, who had totally no interest regarding love affairs, having huge breasts was simply an obstruction.		For Ellis, who had totally no interest regarding love affairs, having huge breasts was simply an obstruction.

	("......Something like love is pointless, I will become a knight. A splendid knight just like ~~Aneue~~.")		("......Something like love is pointless, I will become a knight. A splendid knight just like my esteemed sister.")

	Ellis strongly closed her fist, at that moment.		Ellis strongly closed her fist, at that moment.
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	Ellis bit her lips. Although having the same age, the fact that the girl was participating in the Blade Dance, was truly mortifying.		Ellis bit her lips. Although having the same age, the fact that the girl was participating in the Blade Dance, was truly mortifying.

	And then, the bell ~~signalling~~ the start of the match was rang.		And then, the bell signaling the start of the match was rang.

	The greatest ~~Kagura~~ offered to the Five Great Elemental Lords— the Blade Dance had begun.		The greatest kagura offered to the Five Great Elemental Lords— the Blade Dance had begun.

	Immediately Velsaria Eva's armor activated— and instantly shifted into battle form.		Immediately Velsaria Eva's armor activated— and instantly shifted into battle form.
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	(.........What a contracted spirit. No, the one that should be praised is ~~Aneue<ref>The japanese term for an elder~~ sister~~. However~~, this term also carries a '''great''' amount of respect and thus, cannot be fully translated. Therefore, it has been left as is. For more details see [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_honorifics Japanese honorifics].</ref> the one using it.)		(.........What a contracted spirit. No, the one that should be praised is my esteemed sister, the one using it.)

	Velsaria's contracted spirit was an ancient sealed spirit that was sealed under a certain old castle.		Velsaria's contracted spirit was an ancient sealed spirit that was sealed under a certain old castle.
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	Just thinking about the ability difference between her and her target, also being her sister, she succumbed to feelings of shame.		Just thinking about the ability difference between her and her target, also being her sister, she succumbed to feelings of shame.

	(W-Will I be able to catch up ~~behind Aneue~~.......)		(W-Will I be able to catch up to my esteemed sister.......)

	Velsaria swung her hand up, —the main cannons on both her shoulders fired once.		Velsaria swung her hand up, —the main cannons on both her shoulders fired once.

Draconic: /* Prologue */

2013-06-01T21:39:42Z

Prologue

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	That truly was the impregnable fortress that reigned over the lands.		That truly was the impregnable fortress that reigned over the lands.

	Velsaria ~~Iva~~'s elemental waffe —Silent Fortress.		Velsaria Eva's elemental waffe —Silent Fortress.

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Monsterbandage: /* Prologue */

2013-03-28T05:22:48Z

Prologue

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	Ellis Fahrengart.		Ellis Fahrengart.

	Her talent as an elementalist was revealed since childhood. It had been determined that starting as of next spring, she would attend the only elementalist training institute in Ordesia Empire, the Areishia Elementalist Academy.		Her talent as an elementalist was revealed since childhood. It had been determined that starting as of next spring, she would attend the only elementalist training institute in the Ordesia Empire, the Areishia Elementalist Academy.

	She was an elite candidate as a promising Empire Spirit Knight.		She was an elite candidate as a promising Empire Spirit Knight.

Royaloyalz: Minor edits

2013-02-27T15:02:08Z

Minor edits

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	Currently, Ellis could not even release the elemental waffe of her contracted spirit.		Currently, Ellis could not even release the elemental waffe of her contracted spirit.

	Just thinking of the ability difference of her target being her sister, she succumbed to feelings of shame.		Just thinking about the ability difference between her and her target, also being her sister, she succumbed to feelings of shame.

	(W-Will I be able to catch up behind Aneue.......)		(W-Will I be able to catch up behind Aneue.......)

KuroiHikari at 10:00, 23 February 2013

2013-02-23T10:00:16Z

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	Her soft breasts were touching and rubbing on the iron fence. Her recent worries were that compared to the other girls at the same age, her breasts were developing too much.		Her soft breasts were touching and rubbing on the iron fence. Her recent worries were that compared to the other girls at the same age, her breasts were developing too much.

	''"Really.....Things like breasts just posses as a nuisance to swinging a sword.''		("Really.....Things like breasts just posses as a nuisance to swinging a sword.)

	Regarding this topic, the girls around her were completely jealous, however—		Regarding this topic, the girls around her were completely jealous, however—
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	For Ellis, who had totally no interest regarding love affairs, having huge breasts was simply an obstruction.		For Ellis, who had totally no interest regarding love affairs, having huge breasts was simply an obstruction.

	''"......Something like love is pointless, I will become a knight. A splendid knight just like Aneue."''		("......Something like love is pointless, I will become a knight. A splendid knight just like Aneue.")

	Ellis strongly closed her fist, at that moment.		Ellis strongly closed her fist, at that moment.
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	''.........What a contracted spirit. No, the one that should be praised is Aneue<ref>The japanese term for an elder sister. However, this term also carries a '''great''' amount of respect and thus, cannot be fully translated. Therefore, it has been left as is. For more details see [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_honorifics Japanese honorifics].</ref> the one using it.''		(.........What a contracted spirit. No, the one that should be praised is Aneue<ref>The japanese term for an elder sister. However, this term also carries a '''great''' amount of respect and thus, cannot be fully translated. Therefore, it has been left as is. For more details see [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_honorifics Japanese honorifics].</ref> the one using it.)

	Velsaria's contracted spirit was an ancient sealed spirit that was sealed under a certain old castle.		Velsaria's contracted spirit was an ancient sealed spirit that was sealed under a certain old castle.
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	Just thinking of the ability difference of her target being her sister, she succumbed to feelings of shame.		Just thinking of the ability difference of her target being her sister, she succumbed to feelings of shame.

	''W-Will I be able to catch up behind Aneue.......''		(W-Will I be able to catch up behind Aneue.......)

	Velsaria swung her hand up, —the main cannons on both her shoulders fired once.		Velsaria swung her hand up, —the main cannons on both her shoulders fired once.
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	That black-haired girl's figure wasn't there.		That black-haired girl's figure wasn't there.

	''No way!?''		(No way!?)

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	She was 13 years old. Although the girl was of the same age, she had shown her overwhelming power.		She was 13 years old. Although the girl was of the same age, she had shown her overwhelming power.

	''Someday I too, just like her—''		(Someday I too, just like her—)

	A faint bud of admiration eventually became Ellis' clear goal and was carved into her heart.		A faint bud of admiration eventually became Ellis' clear goal and was carved into her heart.
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	===References and Translation Notes===		===References and Translation Notes===
	<references />		<references/>

	{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Illustrations\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter1}}</noinclude>		{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Illustrations\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter1}}</noinclude>

KuroiHikari: term re-updating

2013-02-22T22:48:33Z

term re-updating

KuroiHikari: It was a rough tlc though

2013-02-16T11:37:26Z

It was a rough tlc though

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	Velsaria Iva's elemental waffe —Silent Fortress.		Velsaria Iva's elemental waffe —Silent Fortress.

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	''.........What a contracted elemental. No, the one that should be praised is Aneue<ref>The japanese term for an elder sister. However, this term also carries a '''great''' amount of respect and thus, cannot be fully translated. Therefore, it has been left as is. For more details see [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_honorifics Japanese honorifics].</ref> the one using it.''		''.........What a contracted elemental. No, the one that should be praised is Aneue<ref>The japanese term for an elder sister. However, this term also carries a '''great''' amount of respect and thus, cannot be fully translated. Therefore, it has been left as is. For more details see [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_honorifics Japanese honorifics].</ref> the one using it.''

KuroiHikari: I actually finally tlc this.

2013-02-16T11:36:29Z

I actually finally tlc this.

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	Her talent as an elementalist was revealed since childhood. It had been determined that starting as of next spring, she would attend the only elementalist training institute in Ordesia Empire, the Areishia Elementalist Academy.		Her talent as an elementalist was revealed since childhood. It had been determined that starting as of next spring, she would attend the only elementalist training institute in Ordesia Empire, the Areishia Elementalist Academy.

	She was an elite candidate as a promising Empire ~~Elemental~~ Knight.		She was an elite candidate as a promising Empire Spirit Knight.

	Ellis leaned forward from her seat and looked down at the arena right below.		Ellis leaned forward from her seat and looked down at the arena right below.
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	She came from a lower noble family that went into ruins in the Ranbal war. Anticipating her talent as an elementalist, she was adopted into the Fahrengart house, and became Ellis's two year older step-sister.		She came from a lower noble family that went into ruins in the Ranbal war. Anticipating her talent as an elementalist, she was adopted into the Fahrengart house, and became Ellis's two year older step-sister.

	Even though she was a freshman from the Areishia ~~Elemental~~ Academy, she was chosen from among the elites gathered from many nations as a representative at the Blade Dance.		Even though she was a freshman from the Areishia Spirit Academy, she was chosen from among the elites gathered from many nations as a representative at the Blade Dance.

	The fact that a freshman was chosen as the Blade Dance representative was unprecedented in the long history of the Areishia ~~Elemental~~ Academy.		The fact that a freshman was chosen as the Blade Dance representative was unprecedented in the long history of the Areishia Spirit Academy.

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	''.........What a contracted ~~elemental~~. No, the one that should be praised is Aneue<ref>The japanese term for an elder sister. However, this term also carries a '''great''' amount of respect and thus, cannot be fully translated. Therefore, it has been left as is. For more details see [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_honorifics Japanese honorifics].</ref> the one using it.''		''.........What a contracted spirit. No, the one that should be praised is Aneue<ref>The japanese term for an elder sister. However, this term also carries a '''great''' amount of respect and thus, cannot be fully translated. Therefore, it has been left as is. For more details see [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_honorifics Japanese honorifics].</ref> the one using it.''

	Velsaria's contracted ~~elemental~~ was an ancient sealed ~~elemental~~ that was sealed under a certain old castle.		Velsaria's contracted spirit was an ancient sealed spirit that was sealed under a certain old castle.

	On top of its ferocity, it was a sealed ~~elemental~~ that was said to be impossible for a normal elementalist to make a contract with.		On top of its ferocity, it was a sealed spirit that was said to be impossible for a normal elementalist to make a contract with.

	And, she was able to perfectly control it.		And, she was able to perfectly control it.

	Currently, Ellis could not even release the elemental waffe of her contracted ~~elemental~~.		Currently, Ellis could not even release the elemental waffe of her contracted spirit.

	Just thinking of the ability difference of her target being her sister, she succumbed to feelings of shame.		Just thinking of the ability difference of her target being her sister, she succumbed to feelings of shame.