Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Chapter1 - Revision history

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	== Chapter 1: Travel Preparation ==		== Chapter 1 - Travel Preparation ==
	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

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Cthaeh: consistency

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	Perhaps because of her sense of responsibility as the team leader, Claire had recently been reading a large number of tactical books and documents related to spirits, which she had borrowed from the library, until the dead of the night.		Perhaps because of her sense of responsibility as the team leader, Claire had recently been reading a large number of tactical books and documents related to spirits, which she had borrowed from the library, until the dead of the night.

	"Don't push yourself too hard. We won't know the ~~battle system~~ until an oracle of the Elemental Lords is issued."		"Don't push yourself too hard. We won't know the regulation until an oracle of the Elemental Lords is issued."

	"Yes, I know. Still, it's necessary to prepare countermeasures in advance. Those who participate in the Blade Dance are the most elite elementalists representing each country― It won't be so easy that you can win without countermeasures. Besides, that the strongest blade dancer is also taking part in this tournament after all."		"Yes, I know. Still, it's necessary to prepare countermeasures in advance. Those who participate in the Blade Dance are the most elite elementalists representing each country― It won't be so easy that you can win without countermeasures. Besides, that the strongest blade dancer is also taking part in this tournament after all."
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	Fianna Ray Ordesia.		Fianna Ray Ordesia.

	She was the second princess of the Ordesia Empire, and also the princess maiden ranked second at the Divine Ritual ~~School~~, a training institution for Queens who served the Five Great Elemental Lords.		She was the second princess of the Ordesia Empire, and also the princess maiden ranked second at the Divine Ritual Institue, a training institution for Queens who served the Five Great Elemental Lords.

	A genuine princess, who was once even chosen as a candidate for the Queen of the Elemental Lord of Flame.		A genuine princess, who was once even chosen as a candidate for the Queen of the Elemental Lord of Flame.
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	This historic ruin itself was something that had been in existence long before the academy was built, but it was by no means part of the Empire's technology. The status quo was that the technology which preserved the Gates which opened to this world, had been lost completely, excluding such ruins, which remained at various places around the continent.		This historic ruin itself was something that had been in existence long before the academy was built, but it was by no means part of the Empire's technology. The status quo was that the technology which preserved the Gates which opened to this world, had been lost completely, excluding such ruins, which remained at various places around the continent.

	From now on, representative fighters would be moving to Astral Zero and then boarding a ship prepared by the Divine Ritual ~~School~~, which administered the Blade Dance.		From now on, representative fighters would be moving to Astral Zero and then boarding a ship prepared by the Divine Ritual Institute, which administered the Blade Dance.

	In front of the Gate, the other two teams that had been selected from the academy had also gathered already.		In front of the Gate, the other two teams that had been selected from the academy had also gathered already.
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	It was something which Ellis' elder foster-sister entrusted to her before leaving the academy.		It was something which Ellis' elder foster-sister entrusted to her before leaving the academy.

	"Now that I'm wearing this, I feel like ~~Aneue~~ is watching over me."		"Now that I'm wearing this, I feel like my esteemed sister is watching over me."

	Ellis suddenly smiled.		Ellis suddenly smiled.
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	An outline of a ship was floating in the sky casting its huge shadow on the lake.		An outline of a ship was floating in the sky casting its huge shadow on the lake.

	"That's... the Belphal-class flying ship of the Divine Ritual ~~School~~..."<!--�-->		"That's... the Belphal-class flying ship of the Divine Ritual Institute..."<!--�-->

	Kamito opened his eyes and groaned.		Kamito opened his eyes and groaned.
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	===Part 5===		===Part 5===

	"―Looks like the ~~boy~~ has already headed over there."		"―Looks like the lad has already headed over there."

	Areishia Spirit Academy, office room.		Areishia Spirit Academy, office room.
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	"His fighting skills are certainly overwhelming, but the Blade Dance isn't something as lenient as to allow someone to win with just that. You should be the one who knows that best."		"His fighting skills are certainly overwhelming, but the Blade Dance isn't something as lenient as to allow someone to win with just that. You should be the one who knows that best."

	"Yeah, it's just as you said. The ~~boy~~ still can't win against the strongest blade dancer as he is now. At the very least, I would like to have him awaken before the real war starts, but―"		"Yeah, it's just as you said. The lad still can't win against the strongest blade dancer as he is now. At the very least, I would like to have him awaken before the real war starts, but―"

	"What do you mean?"		"What do you mean?"
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	Greyworth shrugged her shoulders, and then Freya rudely threw down the report.		Greyworth shrugged her shoulders, and then Freya rudely threw down the report.

	"That's the data about the incident four years ago. After the collapse of the institution in question― the Instructional School, there were 14 orphans taken into protection by the order of imperial knights. Rumors say that five of them have been admitted into the special forces of the ~~knight order~~. The remaining nine died several years later under the effect of the Cursed Armament Seals given to them by the institution, or so they say."		"That's the data about the incident four years ago. After the collapse of the institution in question― the Instructional School, there were 14 orphans taken into protection by the order of imperial knights. Rumors say that five of them have been admitted into the special forces of the knights. The remaining nine died several years later under the effect of the Cursed Armament Seals given to them by the institution, or so they say."

	"Still, that means the number doesn't match. It conflicts with the data found at the institution."		"Still, that means the number doesn't match. It conflicts with the data found at the institution."

	"Apparently it was not the case that all orphans were taken into protection by the ~~knight order~~. Jio Inzagi, who broke into our academy the other day, was also one of the institution's orphans whom the ~~knight order~~ has little information about. It probably wouldn't be strange for there to be other unconfirmed orphans besides him out there."		"Apparently it was not the case that all orphans were taken into protection by the knights. Jio Inzagi, who broke into our academy the other day, was also one of the institution's orphans whom the knights has little information about. It probably wouldn't be strange for there to be other unconfirmed orphans besides him out there."

	"I see..."		"I see..."
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	== Translator's notes and References ==		=== Translator's notes and References ===

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	{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Prologue\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Chapter2}}</noinclude>		{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Prologue\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Chapter2}}</noinclude>

Cthaeh: consistency + some edits

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Zzhk at 09:20, 19 August 2014

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	She approached Greyworth's office desk, and then spoke without hesitation.		She approached Greyworth's office desk, and then spoke without hesitation.

	"Still, I cannot understand ~~the reason~~ why you~~, the academy director,~~ would go that far to support that boy."		"Still, Headmistress, I cannot understand why you would go that far to support that boy."

	"What do you mean?"		"What do you mean?"
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	Though they were also elementalists, they were basically different from noble girls who grew up at the academy.		Though they were also elementalists, they were basically different from noble girls who grew up at the academy.

	"~~Academy director~~?"		"Headmistress?"

	"It's nothing. You did a good job. Please continue your investigation as is."		"It's nothing. You did a good job. Please continue your investigation as is."

Zzhk: Reverted edits by 07n156 (talk) to last revision by Draconic

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	"Hya...a-n..."		"Hya...a-n..."
	~~[[File:STnBD V04 002-003.jpg\|thumbnail]]~~
	Twisting her body, Est was in agony, seemingly tickled.		Twisting her body, Est was in agony, seemingly tickled.

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	"Hya...a-n..."		"Hya...a-n..."
			[[File:STnBD V04 002-003.jpg\|thumbnail]]
	Twisting her body, Est was in agony, seemingly tickled.		Twisting her body, Est was in agony, seemingly tickled.

Draconic: changed spelling according to other books

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	Areisia Spirit Academy, office room.		Areisia Spirit Academy, office room.

	Greyworth ~~Shelmice~~ faced the wall of the room and spoke.		Greyworth Ciel Mais faced the wall of the room and spoke.

	There was no response――However, immediately from inside the wall, a person's shadow emerged as if it was seeping out.		There was no response――However, immediately from inside the wall, a person's shadow emerged as if it was seeping out.
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	"I've been feeling sorry about that, you know."		"I've been feeling sorry about that, you know."

	Greyworth shrugged her shoulders, and then ~~Freiya~~ rudely threw down the report.		Greyworth shrugged her shoulders, and then Freya rudely threw down the report.

	"That's the data about the incident four years ago. After the collapse of the institution in question―― 〈Instructional School〉, there were 14 orphans taken into protection by the order of imperial knights. Rumors say that five of them had been admitted into the special forces of the knight order. The remaining nine died several years later under the effect of the Cursed Armament Seals given to them by the institution, or so they say."		"That's the data about the incident four years ago. After the collapse of the institution in question―― 〈Instructional School〉, there were 14 orphans taken into protection by the order of imperial knights. Rumors say that five of them had been admitted into the special forces of the knight order. The remaining nine died several years later under the effect of the Cursed Armament Seals given to them by the institution, or so they say."
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	"Still, that means the number doesn't match. It conflicts with the data found at the institution."		"Still, that means the number doesn't match. It conflicts with the data found at the institution."

	"Apparently it was not the case that all orphans were taken into protection by the knight order. Jio ~~Inzaghi~~, who broke into our academy the other day, was also one of the institution's orphans whom the knight order has little information about. It probably won't be strange even if there are still unconfirmed orphans besides him out there."		"Apparently it was not the case that all orphans were taken into protection by the knight order. Jio Inzagi, who broke into our academy the other day, was also one of the institution's orphans whom the knight order has little information about. It probably won't be strange even if there are still unconfirmed orphans besides him out there."

	"I see..."		"I see..."

Monsterbandage: /* Part 3 */

2013-05-04T00:07:24Z

Part 3

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	Members of Team Scarlet gathered in front of the〈Stone Circle〉, which was their rally point.		Members of Team Scarlet gathered in front of the〈Stone Circle〉, which was their rally point.

	It was ~~a〈Gate〉to~~ Astral Zero located within the premises of Areisia Spirit Academy.		It was a〈gate〉to Astral Zero located within the premises of Areisia Spirit Academy.

	This historic ruin itself was something that had been in existence long before the academy was built, but it was by no means part of the Empire's technology. The status quo was that the technology which preserved the〈gates〉which opened to this world, had been lost completely, excluding such ruins, which remained at various places around the continent.		This historic ruin itself was something that had been in existence long before the academy was built, but it was by no means part of the Empire's technology. The status quo was that the technology which preserved the〈gates〉which opened to this world, had been lost completely, excluding such ruins, which remained at various places around the continent.