Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Chapter10 - Revision history

Rxls at 15:30, 28 June 2018

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	==Chapter 10: Showdown with the Past==		==Chapter 10 - Showdown with the Past==
	===Part 1===		===Part 1===
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Rxls: Undo revision 537660 by Masterupc (talk)

2018-06-28T13:55:41Z

Undo revision 537660 by Masterupc (talk)

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Masterupc: punctuation

2018-03-20T01:59:04Z

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Cthaeh: consistency

2015-11-21T23:31:58Z

consistency

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	The three other young ladies also said as much with astonished expressions.		The three other young ladies also said as much with astonished expressions.

	"Y-~~you~~ guys......"		"Y-You guys......"

	"Listen well, Kamito."		"Listen well, Kamito."
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	Kamito jumped.		Kamito jumped.

	At the same time, Tiamat's ~~Fire Dragon~~ released a breath of flames!		At the same time, Tiamat's fire dragon released a breath of flames!

	He didn't avoid it — pouring divine power into his blade, he blew away the flames.		He didn't avoid it — pouring divine power into his blade, he blew away the flames.
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	"Ohhhhhh!"		"Ohhhhhh!"

	Aiming at Kamito, the ~~Wind Dragon~~ began chanting spirit magic.		Aiming at Kamito, the wind dragon began chanting spirit magic.

	Innumerable wind blades were released. His limbs would be lost if they even grazed him.		Innumerable wind blades were released. His limbs would be lost if they even grazed him.
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	A whirlwind gathered around him and protected his body. Ellis' specialty flying spirit. Kamito jumped and accelerated again — he dodged all the wind blades by jumping over them.		A whirlwind gathered around him and protected his body. Ellis' specialty flying spirit. Kamito jumped and accelerated again — he dodged all the wind blades by jumping over them.

	The gleaming white blade in the dark of night. With that, the ~~Wind Dragon~~'s head flew into the air.		The gleaming white blade in the dark of night. With that, the wind dragon's head flew into the air.

	(One—)		(One—)
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	Mad with anger, Tiamat broke free of her control and attacked Kamito fiercely.		Mad with anger, Tiamat broke free of her control and attacked Kamito fiercely.

	The ~~Earth Dragon~~ opened its rock-solid mouth filled with dull fangs. It dropped its head and in that instant, Kamito—		The earth dragon opened its rock-solid mouth filled with dull fangs. It dropped its head and in that instant, Kamito—

	—A blade flash drew an arc and the ~~Earth Dragon~~'s head fell like an iron hammer.		—A blade flash drew an arc and the earth dragon's head fell like an iron hammer.

	(Two—)		(Two—)
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	If each of the five heads was cut off one by one — it was not an unbeatable opponent.		If each of the five heads was cut off one by one — it was not an unbeatable opponent.

	The ~~Water Dragon~~ and ~~Fire Dragon~~ attacked at the same time from both directions. Kamito sunk his body — and flew using the power of the wind armor. Circling around behind the heads in an instant, he beheaded them both at once.		The water dragon and fire dragon attacked at the same time from both directions. Kamito sunk his body — and flew using the power of the wind armor. Circling around behind the heads in an instant, he beheaded them both at once.

	(That's four—)		(That's four—)
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	Kamito quickly corrected his stance — and just then.		Kamito quickly corrected his stance — and just then.

	The neck of the ~~Water Dragon~~ flapping in the air released a water breath.		The neck of the water dragon flapping in the air released a water breath.

	Cutting the head off was not enough to be a killing blow. With that, Kamito's body was blown into the ground.		Cutting the head off was not enough to be a killing blow. With that, Kamito's body was blown into the ground.
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	He tried to stand quickly but—		He tried to stand quickly but—

	In the mouth of the remaining ~~Holy Dragon~~, light gathered for its Holy Ray.		In the mouth of the remaining holy dragon, light gathered for its Holy Ray.

	It was an attack that would wipe away a human in an instant.		It was an attack that would wipe away a human in an instant.
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	The burning Flametounge drew a red line across the sky.		The burning Flametounge drew a red line across the sky.

	The flaming whip hit the ~~Holy Dragon~~'s neck and stopped its movements momentarily.		The flaming whip hit the holy dragon's neck and stopped its movements momentarily.

	With that—		With that—
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	No. It wasn't just a freezing arrow—		No. It wasn't just a freezing arrow—

	"~~—Wait naught~~ for winter ~~and bloom now~~, Ice Break!"		"—Blossoming without waiting for winter, Ice Break!"

	In concert with Rinslet's words, the demonic ice shattered.		In concert with Rinslet's words, the demonic ice shattered.
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	The giant dragon's body stopped moving and in a split-second—		The giant dragon's body stopped moving and in a split-second—

	Kamito's demon-slaying blade destroyed the remaining ~~Holy Dragon~~ head.		Kamito's demon-slaying blade destroyed the remaining holy dragon head.

	<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Chapter9\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Epilogue}}</noinclude>		<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Chapter9\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Epilogue}}</noinclude>

Cthaeh: consistency + a few edits

2014-12-04T02:16:19Z

consistency + a few edits

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Monsterbandage: /* Part 1 */

2013-05-12T05:44:26Z

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	Ellis, Fianna and Rinslet all exchanged glances while collapsed on the ground.		Ellis, Fianna and Rinslet all exchanged glances while collapsed on the ground.

	«Instructional School» — if one were to ask the empire's people, there would be no one ~~that~~ had not heard that name.		«Instructional School» — if one were to ask the empire's people, there would be no one who had not heard that name.

	Four years ago. At the same time as the Calamity Queen's rebellion, the empire's dark side was revealed.		Four years ago. At the same time as the Calamity Queen's rebellion, the empire's dark side was revealed.
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	Claire swung her Flame Tongue in an attempt to burn the plants but—		Claire swung her Flame Tongue in an attempt to burn the plants but—

	The flames disappeared like smoke and were completely ~~eliminated~~.		The flames disappeared like smoke and were completely extinguished.

	''......I'm losing divine power!''		''......I'm losing divine power!''

Royaloyalz: Some edits to help improve sentence structure

2013-02-28T13:12:42Z

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	With just that, Kamito understood.		With just that, Kamito understood.

	They had learned his past.		They had learned about his past.

	"Kamito, is it true? That you were......"		"Kamito, is it true? That you were......"
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	Slight tears were present on the corners of her eyes.		Slight tears were present on the corners of her eyes.

	"If I knew about your past, you thought that I'd look at you with those ~~kinds~~ of eyes?"		"If I knew about your past, you thought that I'd look at you with those kind of eyes?"

	"N-No, because I came from that «Instructional School»......"		"N-No, because I came from that «Instructional School»......"
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	Kamito quickly corrected his stance — and just then.		Kamito quickly corrected his stance — and just then.

	The neck of the «Water Dragon» flapping in the air released water breath.		The neck of the «Water Dragon» flapping in the air released a water breath.

	Cutting the head off was not enough to be a killing blow. With that, Kamito's body was blown into the ground.		Cutting the head off was not enough to be a killing blow. With that, Kamito's body was blown into the ground.

Expers: /* Part 1 */

2013-02-24T20:13:12Z

Part 1

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	Ellis, Fianna and Rinslet all exchanged glances while collapsed on the ground.		Ellis, Fianna and Rinslet all exchanged glances while collapsed on the ground.

	«Instructional School» — if one were to ask the empire's people, there would be ~~none~~ that had not heard that name.		«Instructional School» — if one were to ask the empire's people, there would be no one that had not heard that name.

	Four years ago. At the same time as the Calamity Queen's rebellion, the empire's dark side was revealed.		Four years ago. At the same time as the Calamity Queen's rebellion, the empire's dark side was revealed.
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	The slimy plants tore the girls' dresses and touched their bare skin like tentacles.		The slimy plants tore the girls' dresses and touched their bare skin like tentacles.

	They struggled against the unpleasant feeling but were unable to put up any resistance.		They struggled against the unpleasant feeling, but were unable to put up any resistance.

	"Fufu, that's a good look. Onee-chans."		"Fufu, that's a good look. Onee-chans."
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	But there was no time to feel shy from showing an unladylike appearance as the plants dug into their limbs.		But there was no time to feel shy from showing an unladylike appearance as the plants dug into their limbs.

	Breathing ~~that~~ was becoming difficult~~. The~~ creaking sound of bones.		Breathing was becoming difficult with the creaking sound of their bones.

	"......Ah, guu......"		"......Ah, guu......"
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	"You're crying out in a nice voice. I'd like to let Nii-sama hear it as well."		"You're crying out in a nice voice. I'd like to let Nii-sama hear it as well."

	~~The~~ innocently laughing young girl's voice.		Said the innocently laughing young girl's voice.

	''Kami......to......''		''Kami......to......''
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	''—Save me, Kamito!''		''—Save me, Kamito!''

	Just then.		Just then, the flash of a sword.

	~~The~~ flash of a sword.

	''......Eh?''		''......Eh?''
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	Kamito stood there holding a gleaming silvery white sword.		Kamito stood there holding a gleaming silvery white sword.


	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

Rizo536 at 12:28, 23 February 2013

2013-02-23T12:28:24Z

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	They struggled against the unpleasant feeling but were unable to put up any resistance.		They struggled against the unpleasant feeling but were unable to put up any resistance.

	"Fufu, that's a good ~~appearance~~. Onee-chans."		"Fufu, that's a good look. Onee-chans."

	"N, fuaa......this......!"		"N, fuaa......this......!"
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	For some reason, he didn't feel like he would lose. There was no prediction that showed him collapsed on the ground.		For some reason, he didn't feel like he would lose. There was no prediction that showed him collapsed on the ground.

	Companions that trust in me are here — just that is making my body unbelievably light.		''Companions that trust in me are here — just that is making my body unbelievably light.''

	"Ohhhhhh!"		"Ohhhhhh!"

Worker at 07:09, 23 February 2013

2013-02-23T07:09:19Z

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