Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Chapter2 - Revision history

Rxls at 15:27, 28 June 2018

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2018-06-28T14:11:31Z

Undo revision 537133 by Masterupc (talk)

2018-03-12T04:41:43Z

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	Rinslet spoke with puzzlement and Claire concurred.		Rinslet spoke with puzzlement and Claire concurred.

	The Alphas Theocracy was a small country sandwiched between two great nations: the Ordesia Empire and the Dragon ~~Empire~~ of Dracunia on the east and west respectively. Although its main exports were spirit crystals excavated from mines, the Theocracy actually made its massive fortune through the excavation and trade of artifacts from ancient ruins.		The Alphas Theocracy was a small country sandwiched between two great nations: the Ordesia Empire and the Dragon Duchy of Dracunia on the east and west respectively. Although its main exports were spirit crystals excavated from mines, the Theocracy actually made its massive fortune through the excavation and trade of artifacts from ancient ruins.

	Among the ancient artifacts unearthed by the Alphas Theocracy, there were many that held extremely powerful sealed spirits inside them. It was said that during the past Ranbal War, the Theocracy made astronomical profits as the only neutral nation by supplying various countries with militarized spirits.		Among the ancient artifacts unearthed by the Alphas Theocracy, there were many that held extremely powerful sealed spirits inside them. It was said that during the past Ranbal War, the Theocracy made astronomical profits as the only neutral nation by supplying various countries with militarized spirits.

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	The one answering was Claire, lying on the sofa... It was no big deal, but her current posture was hiking up her skirt and on the verge of exposing her panties. Hence, Kamito frantically shifted his gaze away.		The one answering was Claire, lying on the sofa... It was no big deal, but her current posture was hiking up her skirt and on the verge of exposing her panties. Hence, Kamito frantically shifted his gaze away.

	"Oh right, the competition's opening ceremony will be held tonight at the castle ~~hotel~~. Did you bring formal clothes for a ball?"		"Oh right, the competition's opening ceremony will be held tonight at the castle hall. Did you bring formal clothes for a ball?"

	"No I didn't. I'd rather be excused from balls."		"No I didn't. I'd rather be excused from balls."

2014-12-06T04:13:55Z

Chapter 2: Sky Voyage

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	Facing angry glares from the three high-class ladies, Kamito had no choice but to apologize frantically.		Facing angry glares from the three high-class ladies, Kamito had no choice but to apologize frantically.

	(...It's not like I can tell them that the real one is standing right ~~her~~ before their eyes.)		(...It's not like I can tell them that the real one is standing right here before their eyes.)

	Fearing that he would collapse from the girls ganging up on him, Kamito suddenly rose up and left his place at the table.		Fearing that he would collapse from the girls ganging up on him, Kamito suddenly rose up and left his place at the table.

2014-12-03T01:22:48Z

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2014-04-20T23:49:17Z

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	"Hmph, he fled..."		"Hmph, he fled..."

	"Fufu, Kamito-kun is such as poor dear."		"Fufu, Kamito-kun is such a poor dear."

	As the only one privy to Kamito's true identity here, Fianna giggled secretly to herself.		As the only one privy to Kamito's true identity here, Fianna giggled secretly to herself.

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	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

	Four thousand ~~kilometers~~ up in the air...		Four thousand meters up in the air...

	A small combat vessel had appeared directly underneath the flying ship that the Blade Dance participants were traveling on.		A small combat vessel had appeared directly underneath the flying ship that the Blade Dance participants were traveling on.
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	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

	~~== Translator's notes and References ==~~

	~~<references/>~~

	{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Chapter1\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Chapter3}}</noinclude>		{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Chapter1\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Chapter3}}</noinclude>

2014-02-09T15:22:35Z

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	"Hmm?"		"Hmm?"

	"If possible, please fresh cream and honey with floating marshmallows on top..."		"If possible, please add fresh cream and honey with floating marshmallows on top..."

	"W-What is with your demands!?"		"W-What is with your demands!?"