Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Chapter6 - Revision history

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	==Chapter 6: Cracks==		==Chapter 6 - Cracks==
	===Part 1===		===Part 1===
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	"Wh-Why?"		"Wh-Why?"

	"......I don't like ~~the dance~~."		"......I don't like dances."

	Kamito had a little trauma concerning the dance.		Kamito had a little trauma concerning the dance.

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	Claire chewed her lip.		Claire chewed her lip.

	"Because you won't talk about yourself at all.		"Because you won't talk about yourself at all."

	"That's......"		"That's......"

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	Turning her back on Kamito, she left the room in silence.		Turning her back on Kamito, she left the room in silence.


	===Part 3===		===Part 3===

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	Not just the wound but even his whole body's fatigue being removed could be felt.		Not just the wound but even his whole body's fatigue being removed could be felt.

	Kamito stopped resisting and left his body in ~~the~~ her care.		Kamito stopped resisting and left his body in her care.

	"......But I'm always surprised by it. Kamito-kun's regenerative ability, I mean."		"......But I'm always surprised by it. Kamito-kun's regenerative ability, I mean."
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	For example, Claire's ability to have her hair stand on end was because of this. Because of Est's attribute being metal as a sword spirit, his body may have become robust as a result.		For example, Claire's ability to have her hair stand on end was because of this. Because of Est's attribute being metal as a sword spirit, his body may have become robust as a result.

	"But it doesn't seem to just be that."		"But it doesn't seem to be just that."

	Fianna tilted her head.		Fianna tilted her head.

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	Kamito muttered that name as he lay on the bed in the dim room.		Kamito muttered that name as he lay on the bed in the dim room.

	The number two of the ~~<Instructional School>~~ who had received the title ~~<Monster>~~.		The number two of the «Instructional School» who had received the title «Monster».

	(......Why is she here?)		''......Why is she here?''

	He thought that they would never meet again after that day.		He thought that they would never meet again after that day.
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	Muir Alenstarl is an expert military elementalist.		Muir Alenstarl is an expert military elementalist.

	What reason could that girl, an orphan from the ~~<Instructional School>~~, have for coming here—		What reason could that girl, an orphan from the «Instructional School», have for coming here—

	It's not like he couldn't guess. Just a few weeks prior, Kamito had fought with another orphan of the ~~<Instructional School>~~, Jio Inzagi.		It's not like he couldn't guess. Just a few weeks prior, Kamito had fought with another orphan of the «Instructional School», Jio Inzagi.

	The one behind the incident that time—		The one behind the incident that time—

	(......Does she have a connection to Restia?)		''......Does she have a connection to Restia?''

	His left hand under the leather glove ached.		His left hand under the leather glove ached.
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	Even if asked in this kind of situation, there was no way he could honestly reply.		Even if asked in this kind of situation, there was no way he could honestly reply.

	(......But it's definitely working. Fianna's ritual magic, that is.)		''......But it's definitely working. Fianna's ritual magic, that is.''

	As expected of a former elite princess maiden of the ~~<Divine~~ Ritual ~~Instititute>~~.		As expected of a former elite princess maiden of the «Divine Ritual Instititute».

	Even though it wasn't her specialty, her ability in it was top-class.		Even though it wasn't her specialty, her ability in it was top-class.
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	Fianna tilted her head.		Fianna tilted her head.

	The other possibility was a Cursed Armament Seal. Amongst the orphans at the ~~<Instructional School>~~ that received a Cursed Armament Seal, some possessed regenerative ability that far surpassed human limits.		The other possibility was a Cursed Armament Seal. Amongst the orphans at the «Instructional School» that received a Cursed Armament Seal, some possessed regenerative ability that far surpassed human limits.

	However, of course, there was no Cursed Armament Seal on Kamito.		However, of course, there was no Cursed Armament Seal on Kamito.
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	"......"		"......"

	(......Well, I guess it's expected.)		''......Well, I guess it's expected.''

	He had made his resolve for this.		He had made his resolve for this.
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	But Kamito averted his eyes from her and kept quiet.		But Kamito averted his eyes from her and kept quiet.

	(I......)		''I......''

	He felt that he should reveal his relationship with Muir Alenstarl. He knew that in his head.		He felt that he should reveal his relationship with Muir Alenstarl. He knew that in his head.

	But if he did that, he would also have to reveal that he was an escapee of the ~~<Instructional School>~~.		But if he did that, he would also have to reveal that he was an escapee of the «Instructional School».

	His childhood when he had battle techniques necessary for an assassin hammered into him.		His childhood when he had battle techniques necessary for an assassin hammered into him.
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	Something that he could never erase, that unpleasant past.		Something that he could never erase, that unpleasant past.

	(If she knew the truth about me, Claire would—)		''If she knew the truth about me, Claire would—''

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	He was scared of that.		He was scared of that.

	(My becoming weak might be because of this......)		''My becoming weak might be because of this......''

	He derided himself while avoiding Claire's gaze.		He derided himself while avoiding Claire's gaze.
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	That said, there was no way he could discuss his past with her.		That said, there was no way he could discuss his past with her.

	(If she knew my past, she would......)		''If she knew my past, she would......''

	At that moment, Ellis and the others entered his room.		At that moment, Ellis and the others entered his room.
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	Grudgingly agreed to go.		Grudgingly agreed to go.

	(......The dance, huh.)		''......The dance, huh.''

	Claire would also wear a dress — that thought popped into his head.		Claire would also wear a dress — that thought popped into his head.

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	Kamito muttered that name as he lay on the bed in the dim room.		Kamito muttered that name as he lay on the bed in the dim room.

	The number two of the ~~«Instructional School»~~ who had received the title ~~«Monster»~~.		The number two of the <Instructional School> who had received the title <Monster>.

	''......Why is she here?''		(......Why is she here?)

	He thought that they would never meet again after that day.		He thought that they would never meet again after that day.
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	Muir Alenstarl is an expert military elementalist.		Muir Alenstarl is an expert military elementalist.

	What reason could that girl, an orphan from the ~~«Instructional School»~~, have for coming here—		What reason could that girl, an orphan from the <Instructional School>, have for coming here—

	It's not like he couldn't guess. Just a few weeks prior, Kamito had fought with another orphan of the ~~«Instructional School»~~, Jio Inzagi.		It's not like he couldn't guess. Just a few weeks prior, Kamito had fought with another orphan of the <Instructional School>, Jio Inzagi.

	The one behind the incident that time—		The one behind the incident that time—

	''......Does she have a connection to Restia?''		(......Does she have a connection to Restia?)

	His left hand under the leather glove ached.		His left hand under the leather glove ached.
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	Even if asked in this kind of situation, there was no way he could honestly reply.		Even if asked in this kind of situation, there was no way he could honestly reply.

	''......But it's definitely working. Fianna's ritual magic, that is.''		(......But it's definitely working. Fianna's ritual magic, that is.)

	As expected of a former elite princess maiden of the ~~«Divine~~ Ritual ~~Instititute»~~.		As expected of a former elite princess maiden of the <Divine Ritual Instititute>.

	Even though it wasn't her specialty, her ability in it was top-class.		Even though it wasn't her specialty, her ability in it was top-class.
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	Fianna tilted her head.		Fianna tilted her head.

	The other possibility was a Cursed Armament Seal. Amongst the orphans at the ~~«Instructional School»~~ that received a Cursed Armament Seal, some possessed regenerative ability that far surpassed human limits.		The other possibility was a Cursed Armament Seal. Amongst the orphans at the <Instructional School> that received a Cursed Armament Seal, some possessed regenerative ability that far surpassed human limits.

	However, of course, there was no Cursed Armament Seal on Kamito.		However, of course, there was no Cursed Armament Seal on Kamito.
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	"......"		"......"

	''......Well, I guess it's expected.''		(......Well, I guess it's expected.)

	He had made his resolve for this.		He had made his resolve for this.
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	But Kamito averted his eyes from her and kept quiet.		But Kamito averted his eyes from her and kept quiet.

	''I......''		(I......)

	He felt that he should reveal his relationship with Muir Alenstarl. He knew that in his head.		He felt that he should reveal his relationship with Muir Alenstarl. He knew that in his head.

	But if he did that, he would also have to reveal that he was an escapee of the ~~«Instructional School»~~.		But if he did that, he would also have to reveal that he was an escapee of the <Instructional School>.

	His childhood when he had battle techniques necessary for an assassin hammered into him.		His childhood when he had battle techniques necessary for an assassin hammered into him.
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	Something that he could never erase, that unpleasant past.		Something that he could never erase, that unpleasant past.

	''If she knew the truth about me, Claire would—''		(If she knew the truth about me, Claire would—)

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	He was scared of that.		He was scared of that.

	''My becoming weak might be because of this......''		(My becoming weak might be because of this......)

	He derided himself while avoiding Claire's gaze.		He derided himself while avoiding Claire's gaze.
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	That said, there was no way he could discuss his past with her.		That said, there was no way he could discuss his past with her.

	''If she knew my past, she would......''		(If she knew my past, she would......)

	At that moment, Ellis and the others entered his room.		At that moment, Ellis and the others entered his room.
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	Grudgingly agreed to go.		Grudgingly agreed to go.

	''......The dance, huh.''		(......The dance, huh.)

	Claire would also wear a dress — that thought popped into his head.		Claire would also wear a dress — that thought popped into his head.