Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Chapter8 - Revision history

Rxls at 15:29, 28 June 2018

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	==Chapter 8: Ball Dance==		==Chapter 8 - Ball Dance==
	It was evening. The Blade Dance ceremony began at the castle serving as lodging for the representatives.		It was evening. The Blade Dance ceremony began at the castle serving as lodging for the representatives.

Rxls: Undo revision 537625 by Masterupc (talk)

2018-06-28T13:59:55Z

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Masterupc: punctuation

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Cthaeh: consistency

2015-11-21T23:31:18Z

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	Ellis lifted her head and nodded.		Ellis lifted her head and nodded.

	“This time, ~~Aneue~~ isn’t participating due to some circumstances, but I’ve heard that you’re a pure and selfless knight. I’m pleased to be able to cross swords with a knight like you.”		“This time, my esteemed sister isn’t participating due to some circumstances, but I’ve heard that you’re a pure and selfless knight. I’m pleased to be able to cross swords with a knight like you.”

	She faced Leonora and reached out her dominant hand.		She faced Leonora and reached out her dominant hand.

AngelicMasterMind: /* Chapter 8: Ball Dance */

2014-12-14T19:39:43Z

Chapter 8: Ball Dance

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	They were equally competent, top-notch elementalists selected by the major nations of the continent.		They were equally competent, top-notch elementalists selected by the major nations of the continent.

	These girls were about the same age as Kamito, and that was because the condition to partake in the Blade Dance was set that princess maidens had to be 20 years old and younger, following the oracle by the Elemental Lords..		These girls were about the same age as Kamito, and that was because the condition to partake in the Blade Dance was set that princess maidens had to be 20 years old and younger, following the oracle by the Elemental Lords.

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	He gently held Rinslet graceful hand covered by a white glove.		He gently held Rinslet's graceful hand covered by a white glove.

	“…Th-This is Kamito-san’s hand….”		“…Th-This is Kamito-san’s hand….”

Cthaeh: consistency + edits

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Futon Lord at 01:44, 21 April 2014

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	“She returned to the room just now. Kamito-san, you have not met up with her, have you?”		“She returned to the room just now. Kamito-san, you have not met up with her, have you?”

	~~“…Yea~~.”		“…Yeah.”

	It seemed like when Kamito went to look for her, they passed each other.		It seemed like when Kamito went to look for her, they passed each other.
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	“No, I’m happy that you invited me, but is it alright for it to be me?”		“No, I’m happy that you invited me, but is it alright for it to be me?”

	“Y-~~Yea~~, I’m a little afraid about dancing with the other men.”		“Y-Yes, I’m a little afraid about dancing with the other men.”

	“…I see. However, I only know the basic steps.”		“…I see. However, I only know the basic steps.”

Monsterbandage: /* Part 1 */

2013-05-11T17:07:28Z

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	==Chapter 8: Ball Dance==		==Chapter 8: Ball Dance==
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	It was evening. The Blade Dance ceremony began at the castle serving as lodging for the representatives.		It was evening. The Blade Dance ceremony began at the castle serving as lodging for the representatives.

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2013-05-11T17:06:43Z

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	“Y-You three! Don’t disrupt the public morals in the presence of the Elemental Lords!”		“Y-You three! Don’t disrupt the public morals in the presence of the Elemental Lords!”

	A gallant and serious voice came flying over.		A gallant and serious voice came flying over.
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	Ellis slightly blushed, and entwined her fingers bashfully in front of her chest.		Ellis slightly blushed, and entwined her fingers bashfully in front of her chest.

	“E-Erm, even a suit ~~suits<!--alternative to having two suits in a row?~~ fits~~-->~~ you, surprisingly. I guess that's what they mean by "the clothes make the man".”		“E-Erm, even a suit fits you, surprisingly. I guess that's what they mean by "the clothes make the man".”

	“Is that so? I’m not really comfortable with suits, but—”		“Is that so? I’m not really comfortable with suits, but—”
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	“This time, Aneue isn’t participating due to some circumstances, but I’ve heard that you’re a pure and selfless knight. I’m pleased to be able to cross swords with a knight like you.”		“This time, Aneue isn’t participating due to some circumstances, but I’ve heard that you’re a pure and selfless knight. I’m pleased to be able to cross swords with a knight like you.”

	She faced Leonora and reached out her ~~master~~ hand.		She faced Leonora and reached out her dominant hand.

	“It seems like splendid knights exist even in the empire.”		“It seems like splendid knights exist even in the empire.”
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	“That that conflagration-like red hair… Don’t tell me, she’s the daughter of that Duke Elstein family?”		“That that conflagration-like red hair… Don’t tell me, she’s the daughter of that Duke Elstein family?”

	“The sister of the Calamity Queen that brought about ~~calamity~~ to the Ordesia Empire?”		“The sister of the Calamity Queen that brought about disaster to the Ordesia Empire?”

	“…What an ill omen. She’s a devilish girl.”		“…What an ill omen. She’s a devilish girl.”

81.157.3.241: /* Part 1 */

2013-03-18T09:47:22Z

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	Her usual uniform appearance was indeed lovely, but—		Her usual uniform appearance was indeed lovely, but—

	This dressed-up Rinslet was sp beautiful that he almost let out a sigh.		This dressed-up Rinslet was so beautiful that he almost let out a sigh.

	“Rinslet, you’re pretty.”		“Rinslet, you’re pretty.”