Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume4 Chapter9 - Revision history

Rxls at 15:30, 28 June 2018

2018-06-28T15:30:05Z

2018-06-28T13:58:06Z

Undo revision 537659 by Masterupc (talk)

2018-03-19T23:39:01Z

punctuation

2017-10-16T22:58:54Z

Part 2

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	"Kamito-san's past?"		"Kamito-san's past?"

	Rinslet tilted her head ~~slight~~ to the side—		Rinslet tilted her head slighty to the side—

	"Well, it would be a lie to say I wasn't."		"Well, it would be a lie to say I wasn't."

2015-11-21T23:31:35Z

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	Muir Alenstarl's innocent voice resounded across the night sky.		Muir Alenstarl's innocent voice resounded across the night sky.

	Fire, earth, water, wind, holy — under the influence of Muir's ability Jester's Vise, each head released ~~forth their~~ breath.		Fire, earth, water, wind, holy — under the influence of Muir's ability Jester's Vise, each head released its breath.

	"—Thou, become the shield of my person, knight of the ancient pledge!"		"—Thou, become the shield of my person, knight of the ancient pledge!"
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	It could only withstand a few more seconds.		It could only withstand a few more seconds.

	The knight~~, whom~~ should-be overwhelming in defense, was blown into bits and disappeared into nothingness.		The knight with the should-be overwhelming defense was blown into bits and disappeared into nothingness.

	"......Georgios!"		"......Georgios!"

2014-12-16T19:30:51Z

Part 6

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	Claire and the others were blasted though the air and hit the ground harshly.		Claire and the others were blasted though the air and hit the ground harshly.

	The crater radiated outwards. The mixed in fragments of fire painted the air red.		The crater radiated outwards. The mixed-in fragments of fire painted the air red.

	"......To be able to control a militarized spirit like her hands and feet......"		"......To be able to control a militarized spirit like her hands and feet......"

2014-12-16T19:10:27Z

Part 6

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	Muir Alenstarl's innocent voice resounded across the night sky.		Muir Alenstarl's innocent voice resounded across the night sky.

	Fire, earth, water, wind, holy — under the influence of Muir's ability Jester's Vise, each head released breath.		Fire, earth, water, wind, holy — under the influence of Muir's ability Jester's Vise, each head released forth their breath.

	"—Thou, become the shield of my person, knight of the ancient pledge!"		"—Thou, become the shield of my person, knight of the ancient pledge!"
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	It could only withstand a few more seconds.		It could only withstand a few more seconds.

	The knight ~~with the~~ should-be overwhelming defense was blown into bits and disappeared into nothingness.		The knight, whom should-be overwhelming in defense, was blown into bits and disappeared into nothingness.

	"......Georgios!"		"......Georgios!"

2014-12-15T19:35:03Z

Part 4

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	That was — covered with countless ~~blades~~-like scales, a many-headed evil spirit dragon.		That was — covered with countless blade-like scales, a many-headed evil spirit dragon.

	The black giant far eclipsed Leonora Lancaster's dragon spirit Nidhogg.		The black giant far eclipsed Leonora Lancaster's dragon spirit Nidhogg.

2014-12-04T02:16:08Z

consistency + edits

2013-04-06T22:02:54Z

summoning chant

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	Kamito nodded and chanted the words of summoning.		Kamito nodded and chanted the words of summoning.

	~~—The cool-headed steel queen~~, the sacred sword that destroys evil!		"—Dispassionate Queen of Steel, the sacred sword that destroys evil!"

	—Now form a sword of steel and be the power in my hand!		"—Now form a sword of steel and be the power in my hand!"

	Est's form was covered in light and disappeared into nothingness.		Est's form was covered in light and disappeared into nothingness.