Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume5 Chapter3 - Revision history

Rxls at 15:32, 28 June 2018

2018-06-28T15:32:06Z

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	==Chapter 3: Dragon Princess's Allurement==		==Chapter 3 - Dragon Princess's Allurement==
	===Part 1===		===Part 1===
	After leaving the cafe, Kamito and the others took a stroll near the port.		After leaving the cafe, Kamito and the others took a stroll near the port.

2018-03-28T15:13:42Z

Reverted edits by Masterupc (talk) to last revision by Cthaeh

2018-03-23T03:32:14Z

punctuation

2015-11-29T03:50:59Z

reformatting + consistency

2014-12-20T07:19:37Z

Part 5

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	The picture on the book was a portrait of a princess maiden in a very indecent position.		The picture on the book was a portrait of a princess maiden in a very indecent position.

	The taboo ritual magic—this content ~~of book~~ was so explicitly realistic that even Claire, who had a soft spot for provocative romance novels, could not help but take three steps backwards.		The taboo ritual magic—this book's content was so explicitly realistic that even Claire, who had a soft spot for provocative romance novels, could not help but take three steps backwards.

	"N-Nasty... this is simply too obscene!"		"N-Nasty... this is simply too obscene!"

2013-08-15T20:06:24Z

Part 4

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	Fortunate to have avoided being burnt to a crisp, Kamito let out a sigh of relief.		Fortunate to have avoided being burnt to a crisp, Kamito let out a sigh of relief.

	"Ho ho, looks like you bought something revealing on accident."		"Ho ho, looks like you bought something revealing by accident."

	"W-What's the matter with me, why would I go so far as to buy such provocative underwear..."		"W-What's the matter with me, why would I go so far as to buy such provocative underwear..."

2013-05-20T03:49:46Z

Part 3

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	"K-Keep it down! Do you want to be blasted into crabmeat butter croquettes?!"		"K-Keep it down! Do you want to be blasted into crabmeat butter croquettes?!"

	Ellis unsheathed her sword with a hiss, leaving Kamito no choice but to raise both his hands and nod in submission.		Ellis unsheathed her sword with a hiss, leaving Kamito with no choice but to raise both his hands and nod in submission.

	"... But, why are you bringing me into a dressing room?"		"... But, why are you bringing me into a dressing room?"

2013-05-19T23:54:55Z

Undo revision 252528 by Monsterbandage (talk) possessive pronouns do not have apostrophes

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	To think that at first she held prejudices against him just because he was a male elementalist.		To think that at first she held prejudices against him just because he was a male elementalist.

	She had thought he would destroy the strict discipline of the Academy, and that he was an enemy of ~~her's~~.		She had thought he would destroy the strict discipline of the Academy, and that he was an enemy of hers.

	However, things had changed.		However, things had changed.

2013-05-19T23:34:07Z

Part 2

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	To think that at first she held prejudices against him just because he was a male elementalist.		To think that at first she held prejudices against him just because he was a male elementalist.

	She had thought he would destroy the strict discipline of the Academy, and that he was an enemy of ~~hers~~.		She had thought he would destroy the strict discipline of the Academy, and that he was an enemy of her's.

	However, things had changed.		However, things had changed.

2013-03-03T13:40:22Z

Term update

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	"Given the nature of that curse, it might be something similar to the curse-bearing seal."		"Given the nature of that curse, it might be something similar to the curse-bearing seal."

	"That is a possibility... Furthermore, there are also signs that Ren Ashbell's Alphas ~~Empire~~ is secretly conducting research on the curse-bearing seal –"		"That is a possibility... Furthermore, there are also signs that Ren Ashbell's Alphas Theocracy is secretly conducting research on the curse-bearing seal –"

	"While we're at it, it might be better if we investigated the Alphas ~~Empire~~ as well."		"While we're at it, it might be better if we investigated the Alphas Theocracy as well."

	One by one, Claire and the others began flipping through the forbidden books displayed on the shelves.		One by one, Claire and the others began flipping through the forbidden books displayed on the shelves.