Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume5 Chapter5 - Revision history

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	==Chapter 5: The Princess Maiden of the Grand Shrine==		==Chapter 5 - The Princess Maiden of the Grand Shrine==
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	"I never imagined that... under the Sanctuary, there are actually such enormous caves!"		"I never imagined that... under the Sanctuary, there are actually such enormous caves!"

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Part 4

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	Fianna shrugged her shoulders at Kamito naughtily.		Fianna shrugged her shoulders at Kamito naughtily.

	"I've no choice... Which other princess maidens are of a higher status than I am ~~are~~ there, other than these ladies?"		"I've no choice... Which other princess maidens are of a higher status than I am out there, other than these ladies?"

	"Are you serious?"		"Are you serious?"

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	The box was marked with a seal that Claire was very familiar with.		The box was marked with a seal that Claire was very familiar with.

	"This is from ~~the Academy Director~~ Greyworth... What could it be?"		"This is from Headmistress Greyworth... What could it be?"

	Claire opened the box. Inside were huge quantities of books and documents.		Claire opened the box. Inside were huge quantities of books and documents.

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	At Fianna's pouting expression, Kamito could not help but laugh.		At Fianna's pouting expression, Kamito could not help but laugh.

	Although she liked to tease Kamito mercilessly, once this princess was given a taste of her own medicine, she would immediately reveal her pure shy original side.		Although she liked to tease Kamito mercilessly, once this princess was given a taste of her own medicine, she would immediately reveal her pure and shy original side.

	"Oh, that's right... Why would you know such a place?"		"Oh, that's right... Why would you know of such a place?"

	"When I was still studying at the Institute, I came to this floating island as part of a ritual for the Wind Elemental Lord. A senior told me of this place."		"When I was still studying at the Institute, I came to this floating island as part of a ritual for the Wind Elemental Lord. A senior told me of this place."
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	For some unknown reason, at that moment, an image of Kamito floated into Claire's mind. The imaginary Kamito was even looking at her with an expression like in her favorite romance novels... a cool, cruel, haughty expression.		For some unknown reason, at that moment, an image of Kamito floated into Claire's mind. The imaginary Kamito was even looking at her with an expression like in her favorite romance novels... a cool, cruel, haughty expression.

	"O-Of course! Stupid... Stop now, don't go on any more!"		"O-Of course not! Stupid... Stop now, don't go on any more!"

	"Oh... You really wish for me to stop?"		"Oh... You really wish for me to stop?"
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	"This is from the Academy Director Greyworth... What could it be?"		"This is from the Academy Director Greyworth... What could it be?"

	Claire opened the box. Inside were a huge quantities of books and documents.		Claire opened the box. Inside were huge quantities of books and documents.

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	In the pitch-black cave –		In the pitch-black cave –

	Kamito walked along while telling ~~Fianna~~ of his dream earlier that day.		Kamito walked along with Fianna while telling her of his dream earlier that day.

	That dream – in which Sacred Queen Areishia used the «Demon Slaying Sacred Sword» to vanquish the Demon King.		That dream – in which Sacred Queen Areishia used the «Demon Slaying Sacred Sword» to vanquish the Demon King.
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	"Mmm, forget it... If I caused someone's dream to be ruined, I would never be able to live with myself."		"Mmm, forget it... If I caused someone's dream to be ruined, I would never be able to live with myself."

	For a longed-for dream ~~that~~ always ~~remained~~ a dream was the most perfect of all.		For a longed-for dream to always remain as a dream was the most perfect situation of all.

	The strongest blade dancer three years ago was long gone now.		The strongest blade dancer three years ago was long gone now.

	It would be better for "her"to remain merely in the imaginations of Claire and her friends.		It would be better for "her" to remain merely in the imaginations of Claire and her friends.

	"Furthermore... If they were to find out about my habit of dressing as a girl, they would surely laugh at me to no end."		"Furthermore... If they were to find out about my habit of dressing as a girl, they would surely laugh at me to no end."
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	Her adorable response made Kamito's heart quicken.		Her adorable response made Kamito's heart quicken.

	"My dear princess, stop joking around with me."		"My dear princess, please stop joking around with me."

	"... I hate you, I wasn't joking."		"... I hate you, I wasn't joking."
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	Fianna shrugged her shoulders at Kamito naughtily.		Fianna shrugged her shoulders at Kamito naughtily.

	"I've no choice... Which other princess maidens of higher status than I are there, other than these ladies?"		"I've no choice... Which other princess maidens are of a higher status than I am are there, other than these ladies?"

	"Are you serious?"		"Are you serious?"

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Part 6

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	''– Could it be... Est's spirit mark...!?''		''– Could it be... Est's spirit mark...!?''

	Just as he saw, from the corner of his eye, his spirit mark radiating a bright light—		Just as he saw, from the corner of his eye, his spirit mark began radiating a bright light—

	Kamito lost consciousness, and plunged into darkness.		Kamito lost consciousness, and plunged into darkness.

	<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume5 Chapter4\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume5 Chapter6}}</noinclude>		<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume5 Chapter4\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume5 Chapter6}}</noinclude>

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Part 2

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	"This is from the Academy Director Greyworth... What could it be?"		"This is from the Academy Director Greyworth... What could it be?"

	Claire opened the box. Inside were huge quantities of books and documents.		Claire opened the box. Inside were a huge quantities of books and documents.

	===Part 3===		===Part 3===

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	"Yes, I don't think even the princess maidens at the «Divine Ritual Institute» know that these caves exist."		"Yes, I don't think even the princess maidens at the «Divine Ritual Institute» know that these caves exist."

	Holding in one hand the spirit ~~ore~~ to light their path, Kamito made his way through the gigantic underground caves.		Holding in one hand the spirit crystal to light their path, Kamito made his way through the gigantic underground caves.

	These caves, made by unknown men, were practically big enough to contain the entire Grand Shrine.		These caves, made by unknown men, were practically big enough to contain the entire Grand Shrine.
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	She cleared her throat and removed a small stone from her bag.		She cleared her throat and removed a small stone from her bag.

	A low-level «Thunder Spirit» was sealed within that spirit ~~ore~~. Although this type of spirit ~~ore~~ was expensive, it was also not especially rare; its original purpose was to scare away wild forest creatures.		A low-level «Thunder Spirit» was sealed within that spirit crystal. Although this type of spirit crystal was expensive, it was also not especially rare; its original purpose was to scare away wild forest creatures.

	Claire put it on her white underclothes, and through the cloth gently massaged her chest.		Claire put it on her white underclothes, and through the cloth gently massaged her chest.
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	The sharp tip of the stone rubbed against her chest painfully, but Claire told herself to be brave and bear it.		The sharp tip of the stone rubbed against her chest painfully, but Claire told herself to be brave and bear it.

	She focused on her fingers, concentrating her Divine Power in the spirit ~~ore~~.		She focused on her fingers, concentrating her Divine Power in the spirit crystal.

	The normal way of using it would be to summon a burst of Divine Power into it, releasing the spirit sealed within. The trick to this method seemed to be to input Divine Power in a slow, more controlled manner, which would need much more skill – however, this was child's play for an elementalist as talented as Claire.		The normal way of using it would be to summon a burst of Divine Power into it, releasing the spirit sealed within. The trick to this method seemed to be to input Divine Power in a slow, more controlled manner, which would need much more skill – however, this was child's play for an elementalist as talented as Claire.
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	Claire twisted about making noises, pressing the still-sparking spirit ~~ore~~ against her chest.		Claire twisted about making noises, pressing the still-sparking spirit crystal against her chest.

	"Aaaa-aaah, mmm, aah-ha, aah... oooh..."		"Aaaa-aaah, mmm, aah-ha, aah... oooh..."
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	– The pair reached the end of the lengthy corridor, where there were a set of grand doors decorated with intricate carvings.		– The pair reached the end of the lengthy corridor, where there were a set of grand doors decorated with intricate carvings.

	The decor of this door was noticeably different to the other doors: inlaid on the frame of the door were several very pure and valuable spirit ~~ores~~.		The decor of this door was noticeably different to the other doors: inlaid on the frame of the door were several very pure and valuable spirit crystals.

	"... Uh... Fianna, may I ask a question?"		"... Uh... Fianna, may I ask a question?"
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	The sight that greeted them was—		The sight that greeted them was—

	A red carpet that stretched out straight before them, and brightly glittering spirit ~~ores~~.		A red carpet that stretched out straight before them, and brightly glittering spirit crystals.

	This was a holy space, filled with the aura of somber tranquility.		This was a holy space, filled with the aura of somber tranquility.