Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume5 Chapter6 - Revision history

Rxls at 15:33, 28 June 2018

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	==Chapter 6: The Sacred Sword's Memories==		==Chapter 6 - The Sacred Sword's Memories==
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	In the bottomless darkness, Kamito fell endlessly.		In the bottomless darkness, Kamito fell endlessly.

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Monsterbandage: /* Part 4 */

2013-08-25T07:25:57Z

Part 4

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	"... The curse-breaking ritual was more exhausting than I had imagined."		"... The curse-breaking ritual was more exhausting than I had imagined."

	Not caring that he was still dressed in his uniform, Kamito collapsed ~~into~~ his bed.		Not caring that he was still dressed in his uniform, Kamito collapsed onto his bed.

	"And the «Brand of ~~Darkness~~?»"		"And the «Brand of Darkness»?"

	"Mmmm... All thanks to Fianna's princess maiden friend, the curse was successfully broken."		"Mmmm... All thanks to Fianna's princess maiden friend, the curse was successfully broken."

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	There were a total of twenty-four teams contesting in the Blade Dance. Generally speaking, every country could enter one team, but countries such as the Ordesia Empire, which were large and had many outstanding elementalists, could field several teams.		There were a total of twenty-four teams contesting in the Blade Dance. Generally speaking, every country could enter one team, but countries such as the Ordesia Empire, which were large and had many outstanding elementalists, could field several teams.

	The ~~Kuina~~ Empire in the east and the Island Nation of Robica had two teams each, and the only country other than Ordesia to be represented by three teams was the Holy Kingdom of Lugia.		The Quina Empire in the east and the Island Nation of Robica had two teams each, and the only country other than Ordesia to be represented by three teams was the Holy Kingdom of Lugia.

	Of the teams from these countries, the ones they most needed to watch out for were the «Four Gods» of ~~Kuina~~, the «Sacred Knights» of the Holy Kingdom of Lugia, and Milla Bassett – the most talented young elementalist in this iteration of the Blade Dance was representing the Principality of Rossvale as part of the «Rupture Division».		Of the teams from these countries, the ones they most needed to watch out for were the «Four Gods» of Quina, the «Sacred Knights» of the Holy Kingdom of Lugia, and Milla Bassett – the most talented young elementalist in this iteration of the Blade Dance was representing the Principality of Rossvale as part of the «Rupture Division».

	And then there was –		And then there was –

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2013-03-01T01:50:06Z

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	=Chapter 6: The Sacred Sword's Memories=		==Chapter 6: The Sacred Sword's Memories==
	==Part 1==		===Part 1===
	In the bottomless darkness, Kamito fell endlessly.		In the bottomless darkness, Kamito fell endlessly.

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	''... A-Are these Est's memories?''		''... A-Are these Est's memories?''

	==Part 2==		===Part 2===

	This was a story that had happened in the distant past.		This was a story that had happened in the distant past.
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	She had no choice but to bear witness to the entire series of events – including the tragic conclusion about to unfold.		She had no choice but to bear witness to the entire series of events – including the tragic conclusion about to unfold.

	==Part 3==		===Part 3===

	"– to... Kamito!"		"– to... Kamito!"
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	"All right. Although I cannot cheer for teams representing specific countries at the opening ceremony, you can be sure I will be supporting sempai's team in my heart."		"All right. Although I cannot cheer for teams representing specific countries at the opening ceremony, you can be sure I will be supporting sempai's team in my heart."

	==Part 4==		===Part 4===

	Inside the bag that the messenger from the school had sent to Claire's room were the latest updates about their enemies.		Inside the bag that the messenger from the school had sent to Claire's room were the latest updates about their enemies.
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	"... Huh? Waaaahhhh! Stupid... You're so stupid! Pervert!"		"... Huh? Waaaahhhh! Stupid... You're so stupid! Pervert!"

	==Part 5==		===Part 5===

	The tower resonated with the music of the ball. Meanwhile, in the garden...		The tower resonated with the music of the ball. Meanwhile, in the garden...
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	Leonora then lost consciousness.		Leonora then lost consciousness.

	==Part 6==		===Part 6===

	In the darkness – Est sat, holding her knees, her head bowed, silent and deep in thought.		In the darkness – Est sat, holding her knees, her head bowed, silent and deep in thought.
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	In the unknown darkness, Est began to cry.		In the unknown darkness, Est began to cry.

	==Part 7==		===Part 7===

	The Savior Queen stood for a long while on the vast mountainous plains, her sword plunged into the ground.		The Savior Queen stood for a long while on the vast mountainous plains, her sword plunged into the ground.

Worker at 07:12, 23 February 2013

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Drowzycow: /* Chapter 6: The Sacred Sword's Memories */

2013-02-20T13:30:26Z

Chapter 6: The Sacred Sword's Memories

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	=Chapter 6: The Sacred Sword's Memories=		=Chapter 6: The Sacred Sword's Memories=
			==Part 1==
	In the bottomless darkness, Kamito fell endlessly.		In the bottomless darkness, Kamito fell endlessly.

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	''... A-Are these Est's memories?''		''... A-Are these Est's memories?''

	◇		==Part 2==

	This was a story that had happened in the distant past.		This was a story that had happened in the distant past.
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	She had no choice but to bear witness to the entire series of events – including the tragic conclusion about to unfold.		She had no choice but to bear witness to the entire series of events – including the tragic conclusion about to unfold.

	◇		==Part 3==

	"– to... Kamito!"		"– to... Kamito!"
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	"All right. Although I cannot cheer for teams representing specific countries at the opening ceremony, you can be sure I will be supporting sempai's team in my heart."		"All right. Although I cannot cheer for teams representing specific countries at the opening ceremony, you can be sure I will be supporting sempai's team in my heart."

	◇		==Part 4==

	Inside the bag that the messenger from the school had sent to Claire's room were the latest updates about their enemies.		Inside the bag that the messenger from the school had sent to Claire's room were the latest updates about their enemies.
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	"... Huh? Waaaahhhh! Stupid... You're so stupid! Pervert!"		"... Huh? Waaaahhhh! Stupid... You're so stupid! Pervert!"

	◇		==Part 5==

	The tower resonated with the music of the ball. Meanwhile, in the garden...		The tower resonated with the music of the ball. Meanwhile, in the garden...
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	Leonora then lost consciousness.		Leonora then lost consciousness.

	◇		==Part 6==

	In the darkness – Est sat, holding her knees, her head bowed, silent and deep in thought.		In the darkness – Est sat, holding her knees, her head bowed, silent and deep in thought.
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	In the unknown darkness, Est began to cry.		In the unknown darkness, Est began to cry.

	◇		==Part 7==

	The Savior Queen stood for a long while on the vast mountainous plains, her sword plunged into the ground.		The Savior Queen stood for a long while on the vast mountainous plains, her sword plunged into the ground.

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	On the other hand, the blade spirit had no feelings, and knew only to loyally serve its contracted master, the girl.		On the other hand, the blade spirit had no feelings, and knew only to loyally serve its contracted master, the girl.

	She was not an typical spirit, but a spirit weapon crafted for use in the war during the Archeozoic Era.		She was not a typical spirit, but a spirit weapon crafted for use in the war during the Archeozoic Era.

	So I have no use for feelings – said the blade spirit coldly.		So I have no use for feelings – said the blade spirit coldly.
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	"Ellis will find it too hard to attack at the frontline by herself, should I also remain at the front or not..?"		"Ellis will find it too hard to attack at the frontline by herself, should I also remain at the front or not..?"

	Up until now, the plan had been for Kamito to use his overwhelming force to attack at the forefront, while the other four would assist him from the side. However, with Kamito unable to summon Est, this plan could ~~simply~~ not be used.		Up until now, the plan had been for Kamito to use his overwhelming force to attack at the forefront, while the other four would assist him from the side. However, with Kamito unable to summon Est, this plan simply could not be used.

	The alternative she thought of now was to move Claire, who would originally have been in the middle orchestrating the entire assault, to the front, and have her attack alongside Ellis. While this arrangement was nowhere near as likely to penetrate an enemy's defenses as the one with Kamito attacking alone, fire and wind elements naturally complemented each other very well, which gave them much offensive potential.		The alternative she thought of now was to move Claire, who would originally have been in the middle orchestrating the entire assault, to the front, and have her attack alongside Ellis. While this arrangement was nowhere near as likely to penetrate an enemy's defenses as the one with Kamito attacking alone, fire and wind elements naturally complemented each other very well, which gave them much offensive potential.
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	"... In conclusion, it is just a rough guideline."		"... In conclusion, it is just a rough guideline."

	Leonora Lancaster ~~was~~ a very outstanding elementalist; that was the undeniable truth.		Leonora Lancaster is a very outstanding elementalist; that was the undeniable truth.

	But here in the «Blade Dance», in a gathering of the best elementalists, there was actually nothing exceptional about her.		But here in the «Blade Dance», in a gathering of the best elementalists, there was actually nothing exceptional about her.
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	"Come... Strongest blade dancer, draw your sword!"		"Come... Strongest blade dancer, draw your sword!"

	Leonora grasped her sword tightly preparing herself to meet an attack. Her conscious mind tried to temper her impulsivity with logic and reason, but her body gave off an aura that made one think that she was liable to attack them at any moment.		Leonora grasped her sword tightly, preparing herself to meet an attack. Her conscious mind tried to temper her impulsivity with logic and reason, but her body gave off an aura that made one think that she was liable to attack them at any moment.

	"Think of your own standard and reconsider. A rookie like you isn't even worth using my Godslaying Flame on."		"Think of your own standard and reconsider. A rookie like you isn't even worth using my Godslaying Flame on."
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	"Are you willing to stay by my side always?"		"Are you willing to stay by my side always?"

	The girl broke into a smile reserved only for her best friend – the tender smile of a innocent shepherd girl.		The girl broke into a smile reserved only for her best friend – the tender smile of an innocent shepherd girl.

	"I am your sword; I will protect you until the end of your life."		"I am your sword; I will protect you until the end of your life."