Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume5 Chapter8 - Revision history

Rxls at 15:34, 28 June 2018

2018-06-28T15:34:58Z

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	==Chapter 8: The Temptation of Darkness==		==Chapter 8 - The Temptation of Darkness==
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Zzhk: Reverted edits by Masterupc (talk) to last revision by Cthaeh

2018-03-28T15:14:46Z

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Masterupc: punctuation

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Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

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Royaloyalz: Some edits to help improve sentence structure

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	Walking to the riverside where there was a table built from the trees, he found a luxurious evening meal on it.		Walking to the riverside where there was a table built from the trees, he found a luxurious evening meal on it.

	Smoked fish from the river, seasoned risotto, and soup made with dried vegetables. These were from opening some of the many canned ~~foods~~ Claire had brought.		Smoked fish from the river, seasoned risotto, and soup made with dried vegetables. These were from opening some of the many canned food that Claire had brought.

	"Is it okay to eat this extravagantly from the first day?"		"Is it okay to eat this extravagantly from the first day?"
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	''What an ominous presence......''		''What an ominous presence......''

	A oppressive feeling that could even be felt on one's skin.		An oppressive feeling that could even be felt on one's skin.

	"......What a rude greeting for a knight. Leonora."		"......What a rude greeting for a knight. Leonora."

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2013-02-27T23:29:43Z

Part 6

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	Restia shook her head sadly.		Restia shook her head sadly.

	"But I wonder if you can defeat her ~~with~~ a contracted spirit."		"But I wonder if you can defeat her without a contracted spirit."

	"Her?"		"Her?"

Resinoid: /* Part 3 */

2013-02-25T21:11:57Z

Part 3

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	"Haa, haa, haa......"		"Haa, haa, haa......"

	Basked ~~the~~ in the demon king's black blood, the girl collapsed to the ground.		Basked in the demon king's black blood, the girl collapsed to the ground.

	"Master?"		"Master?"
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	In the next instant, the girl fingers made a stiff sound and shattered.		In the next instant, the girl fingers made a stiff sound and shattered.



	===Part 4===		===Part 4===

Denormative: Fixing headers

2013-02-23T16:38:05Z

Fixing headers

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	=Chapter 8: The Temptation of Darkness=		==Chapter 8: The Temptation of Darkness==
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	The night before leading the continent's combined military force to attack the maou's castle—		The night before leading the continent's combined military force to attack the maou's castle—
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	==Part 2==		===Part 2===

	And thus the sacred maiden and legendary sword went to meet the end of the story.		And thus the sacred maiden and legendary sword went to meet the end of the story.
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	==Part 3==		===Part 3===

	"Haa, haa, haa......"		"Haa, haa, haa......"
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	==Part 4==		===Part 4===

	"—Kamito. Hey, Kamito."		"—Kamito. Hey, Kamito."
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	==Part 5==		===Part 5===

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	Claire sunk under the water surface and blew bubbles.		Claire sunk under the water surface and blew bubbles.

	==Part 6==		===Part 6===

	He could hear the girls' excited voices from afar.		He could hear the girls' excited voices from afar.

Worker at 07:12, 23 February 2013

2013-02-23T07:12:26Z

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2013-02-21T20:52:16Z

Part 5

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	"......S, sorry."		"......S, sorry."

	A little away from the camp site, the girls undressing.		A little away from the camp site, the girls were undressing.

	Next to them was an open air bath with dense steam.		Next to them was an open air bath with dense steam.
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	Claire sunk under the water surface and blew bubbles.		Claire sunk under the water surface and blew bubbles.



	==Part 6==		==Part 6==

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	At Est's puzzled gaze, the girl continued.		At Est's puzzled gaze, the girl continued.

	"If I'm not here anymore, Est has to make sure to find a new ~~spirit contractor~~ to contract with, okay."		"If I'm not here anymore, Est has to make sure to find a new elementalist to contract with, okay."

	"I don't want to."		"I don't want to."
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	Drawing a breath, he looked down at the spirit seal engraved on his right hand.		Drawing a breath, he looked down at the spirit seal engraved on his right hand.

	(Est......)		''Est......''

	The past memories of Est he had caught a glimpse of.		The past memories of Est he had caught a glimpse of.
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	Kamito stood up on reflex and entered a battle stance.		Kamito stood up on reflex and entered a battle stance.

	(......Don't tell me they broke Fianna's barrier!?)		''......Don't tell me they broke Fianna's barrier!?''

	A barrier that let them know when a person or beast got near was supposed to have been erected.		A barrier that let them know when a person or beast got near was supposed to have been erected.
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	Because of that, he didn't know what to say next.		Because of that, he didn't know what to say next.

	(I've always gotten caught up in her pace......)		''I've always gotten caught up in her pace......''

	Restia came just in front of him and gazed up at his face with her twilight-colored eyes.		Restia came just in front of him and gazed up at his face with her twilight-colored eyes.
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	It was true that he still had Restia's spirit seal on his left hand but—		It was true that he still had Restia's spirit seal on his left hand but—

	The ~~<Gate>~~ had never opened even once since that day.		The «Gate» had never opened even once since that day.

	"That's because you didn't have the requirements, Kamito. But with your latest power that awakened — you can use me again just like before."		"That's because you didn't have the requirements, Kamito. But with your latest power that awakened — you can use me again just like before."
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	Kamito stared at his leather-gloved left hand.		Kamito stared at his leather-gloved left hand.

	The Elemental Waffe he had used three years ago as Ren Ashbell — ~~<Vorpal Sword>~~.		The Elemental Waffe he had used three years ago as Ren Ashbell — «Vorpal Sword».

	The power of that demon sword to cut everything was comparable to Terminus Est.		The power of that demon sword to cut everything was comparable to Terminus Est.
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	He had lived the past three years for the sake of getting Restia back.		He had lived the past three years for the sake of getting Restia back.

	The reason he had participated in this ~~<Blade Dance>~~ was for the same reason.		The reason he had participated in this «Blade Dance» was for the same reason.

	But he could not sever the contract with Est for that.		But he could not sever the contract with Est for that.
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	The earth and sand that flew collapsed the forest's trees.		The earth and sand that flew collapsed the forest's trees.

	(What......the......!?)		''What......the......!?''

	While groaning, Kamito lifted his face.		While groaning, Kamito lifted his face.
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	Her red eyes penetrated the night.		Her red eyes penetrated the night.

	(What an ominous presence......)		''What an ominous presence......''

	A oppressive feeling that could even be felt on one's skin.		A oppressive feeling that could even be felt on one's skin.
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	"The dragons of Dracunia hunt lions with all their strength."		"The dragons of Dracunia hunt lions with all their strength."

	The dragon spirit ~~<Nidhogg>~~ opened its mouth and released an inferno.		The dragon spirit «Nidhogg» opened its mouth and released an inferno.

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