Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume5 Chapter9 - Revision history

Rxls at 15:35, 28 June 2018

2018-06-28T15:35:22Z

2018-03-28T15:15:40Z

Reverted edits by Masterupc (talk) to last revision by Uncreative

2018-03-25T23:24:49Z

punctuation... the changes make more sense than the original translation and there's no change in the interpretation.

2017-08-14T05:54:32Z

Part 6

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	The hot tears dropped onto Est's cheek.		The hot tears dropped onto Est's cheek.

	"Honestly, didn't want to become anything like a sacred maiden."		"Honestly, I didn't want to become anything like a sacred maiden."

	"---Areishia!"		"---Areishia!"

2015-11-29T04:15:40Z

reformatting + consistency

2014-12-23T03:45:46Z

Part 8

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	His chest wound opened and a large amount of blood splattered across the ground.		His chest wound opened and a large amount of blood splattered across the ground.

	His arm's joints were dislocated his ribs were broken.		His arm's joints were dislocated, his ribs were broken.

	It was a condition that could only be described as covered in wounds.		It was a condition that could only be described as covered in wounds.

2014-12-23T03:02:37Z

Part 4

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	"The technique of a knight without a sword --- alias «Sword Break». A heretical skill. To begin with though, this was the old hag Greyworth's and not the «Instructional School»'s."		"The technique of a knight without a sword --- alias «Sword Break». A heretical skill. To begin with though, this was the old hag Greyworth's and not the «Instructional School»'s."

	"---I see. So this was the technique of the strongest spirit knight in the continent, ~~Sir~~ Greyworth.		"---I see. So this was the technique of the strongest spirit knight in the continent, Lady Greyworth."

	The red eyes looked down at Kamito.		The red eyes looked down at Kamito.

2014-02-28T21:29:03Z

Part 3

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	"As expected, if it's a direct attack --- ehh!?"		"As expected, if it's a direct attack --- ehh!?"

	"It's a pity but flame ~~attribute~~ attribute spirit magic won't work against this «Lindwyrm»!"		"It's a pity but flame attribute spirit magic won't work against this «Lindwyrm»!"

	Breaking through the wall of flames, a giant dragon with red scales charged towards her.		Breaking through the wall of flames, a giant dragon with red scales charged towards her.
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	"This is the end. Claire Rouge."		"This is the end. Claire Rouge."



	===Part 4===		===Part 4===

2013-07-15T13:54:30Z

Part 4

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	His vision shook. As soon as he realized he was flying in the air, he smacked into the ground.		His vision shook. As soon as he realized he was flying in the air, he smacked into the ground.

	''~~God, damn~~......throwing that huge sword one-handedly? It's too unreasonable......''		''Goddamn......throwing that huge sword one-handedly? It's too unreasonable......''

	The point he had been wounded at. He cursed while confirming what parts could still move.		The point he had been wounded at. He cursed while confirming what parts could still move.
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	More than before, the flames from the riverside had grown more vicious and black smoke rose from it.		More than before, the flames from the riverside had grown more vicious and black smoke rose from it.

	''Claire~~......~~Ellis, Fianna, Rinslet......''		''Claire, Ellis, Fianna, Rinslet......''

	He gripped his numbed fingers at the regret of not being able to protect them.		He gripped his numbed fingers at the regret of not being able to protect them.

2013-04-06T22:03:26Z

summoning chant

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	From the right hand of Kamito who should've been knocked out, a strong light was shining.		From the right hand of Kamito who should've been knocked out, a strong light was shining.

	"---~~The cool-headed steel queen~~, the sacred sword that destroys evil!"		"---Dispassionate Queen of Steel, the sacred sword that destroys evil!"

	His quivering lips chanted the summoning spirit words.		His quivering lips chanted the summoning spirit words.