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	Bandages wrapped his injuries here and there. The clumsily wrapped portions were likely Claire's handiwork.		Bandages wrapped his injuries here and there. The clumsily wrapped portions were likely Claire's handiwork.

	''......It looks like the ~~ojou-samas~~ were safe.''		(......It looks like the ladies were safe.)

	Just as he breathed a sigh of relief and got up---		Just as he breathed a sigh of relief and got up---
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	If it were the regular Kamito, this would be where he would scold her,		If it were the regular Kamito, this would be where he would scold her,

	''Well, I'll forgive her for today......''		(Well, I'll forgive her for today......)

	Kamito hugged Est to himself.		Kamito hugged Est to himself.

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	"Fuwa......Ka, Kamito!?"		"Fuwa......Ka-Kamito!?"

	Est's shoulders shook.		Est's shoulders shook.
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	Under the blanket, Est told him various things about what happened after she vanished.		Under the blanket, Est told him various things about what happened after she vanished.

	About the single moment when her ~~«True Body»~~ had connected with Kamito. But soon after that, the ~~«Gate»~~ had closed again so she now had a personality separate from that of the legendary ~~«Demon Slayer»~~.		About the single moment when her true body had connected with Kamito. But soon after that, the Gate had closed again so she now had a personality separate from that of the legendary Demon Slayer.

	Unexpectedly, the ~~sacred maiden~~ Areishia~~, which~~ was a lost memory to the current Est ~~--- is what it meant~~.		Unexpectedly, it meant that the Sacred Maiden Areishia was a lost memory to the current Est.

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	Her memory was fragmented, so her memory only really started from when they'd met about two months ago.		Her memory was fragmented, and her memory only really started from when they'd met about two months ago.

	Kamito was confused for a while but---		Kamito was confused for a while but---
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	Kamito interrupted.		Kamito interrupted.

	"Est right now only has about a tenth of the past ~~«Demon Slayer»~~, right?"		"Est right now only has about a tenth of the past Demon Slayer, right?"

	"Yes, Kamito."		"Yes, Kamito."
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	Kamito stroked Est's hair.		Kamito stroked Est's hair.

	"I didn't join the Blade Dance to have a ~~«Wish»~~ granted by the ~~spirit king~~. But I have found a ~~«Wish»~~ I want to fulfill."		"I didn't join the Blade Dance to have a Wish granted by the Elemental Lords. But I have found a Wish I want to fulfill."

	That was to remove Est's curse and make her into a true sacred sword.		That was to remove Est's curse and make her into a true sacred sword.
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	Then---		Then---

	"Y~~, you~~, whwhwh, what are you doing!"		"Y-You, whwhwh-what are you doing!"

	Gogogogogogogogogo......!		Gogogogogogogogogo......!

	Claire approached with her ~~Flame Tongue~~ in hand.		Claire approached with her Flametounge in hand.

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	"W~~, wait~~, Claire, this is......"		"W-Wait, Claire, this is......"

	Kamito quickly tried to make an excuse---		Kamito quickly tried to make an excuse---
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	The fully-naked-except-for-knee-socks Est stood up in front of Claire.		The fully-naked-except-for-knee-socks Est stood up in front of Claire.

	"Wh~~, what~~ is it......"		"Wh-What is it......"

	Claire faltered in front of her oppressive force.		Claire faltered in front of her oppressive force.
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	"Kamito is my master."		"Kamito is my master."

	"......E~~, even~~ so, ~~this~~ is a problem ~~about you sleeping together~~!"		"......E-Even so, you sleeping together is a problem!"

	"Claire also sleeps with Scarlet."		"Claire also sleeps with Scarlet."

	"S~~, she~~'s a cat so it's fine!"		"S-She's a cat so it's fine!"

	"I am a cat."		"I am a cat."
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	[[File:STnBD V05 259.jpg\|thumbnail\|right]]		[[File:STnBD V05 259.jpg\|thumbnail\|right]]

	"Fuaaa......a t, toy......wh, what are you saying!"		"Fuaaa......a t-toy......wh-what are you saying!"

	Claire yelled with a red face and teary eyes.		Claire yelled with a red face and teary eyes.
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	"Kamito said he would accept all of me."		"Kamito said he would accept all of me."

	"Wha, what is that......Ka, Kamito is my slave spirit!"		"Wha-what is that......Ka-Kamito is my slave spirit!"

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	"Kamito-san, as I thought, you really like small girls!"		"Kamito-san, as I thought, you really like small girls!"

	"To lay your hands on young girls, th, that needs to be fixed! Become neapolitan!"		"To lay your hands on young girls, th-that needs to be fixed! Become neapolitan!"

	The glaring Rinslet and Ellis who had drawn her sword both looked at Kamito with cold eyes.		The glaring Rinslet and Ellis who had drawn her sword both looked at Kamito with cold eyes.
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	"Please spare me the blade dancing......"		"Please spare me the blade dancing......"

	---The first night of the ~~«Blade Dance»~~ passed.		---The first night of the Blade Dance passed.

	<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume5 Chapter9\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume5 Afterword}}</noinclude>		<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume5 Chapter9\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume5 Afterword}}</noinclude>

Magiceraser: Undo revision 233643 by ArchmageXin (talk) Mizuho retranslated if you looked at the differences.

2013-03-11T22:24:23Z

Undo revision 233643 by ArchmageXin (talk) Mizuho retranslated if you looked at the differences.

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ArchmageXin: 353 bytes is not an entire translation-I fully respect him/her for translating entire volumes far more than I did, but you can't count that particular change as a entire re-translation. Anyway, (s)he can re-do the entire thing anytime (s)he likes.

2013-03-11T22:13:04Z

353 bytes is not an entire translation-I fully respect him/her for translating entire volumes far more than I did, but you can't count that particular change as a entire re-translation. Anyway, (s)he can re-do the entire thing anytime (s)he likes.

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Breeze: Undo revision 233623 by ArchmageXin (talk) If you look at the history, this chapter has been retranslated by Mizuho

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Undo revision 233623 by ArchmageXin (talk) If you look at the history, this chapter has been retranslated by Mizuho

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ArchmageXin: /* Epilogue */

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Epilogue

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ArchmageXin: /* Epilogue */

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	About the single moment when her «True Body» had connected with Kamito. But soon after that, the «Gate» had closed again so she now had a personality separate from that of the legendary «Demon Slayer».		About the single moment when her «True Body» had connected with Kamito. But soon after that, the «Gate» had closed again so she now had a personality separate from that of the legendary «Demon Slayer».

	Unexpectedly, the sacred maiden Areishia was a lost memory to the current Est --- is what it meant.		Unexpectedly, the sacred maiden Areishia, which was a lost memory to the current Est --- is what it meant.

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Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume5 Epilogue - Revision history

Zzhk: Reverted edits by Masterupc (talk) to last revision by Cthaeh

Masterupc: punctuation

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

Magiceraser: Undo revision 233643 by ArchmageXin (talk) Mizuho retranslated if you looked at the differences.

ArchmageXin: 353 bytes is not an entire translation-I fully respect him/her for translating entire volumes far more than I did, but you can't count that particular change as a entire re-translation. Anyway, (s)he can re-do the entire thing anytime (s)he likes.

Breeze: Undo revision 233623 by ArchmageXin (talk) If you look at the history, this chapter has been retranslated by Mizuho

ArchmageXin: /* Epilogue */

220.255.2.56: Undo revision 233568 by ArchmageXin (talk)

ArchmageXin: /* Epilogue */

Royaloyalz: Small edits