Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume6 Chapter1 - Revision history

Zzhk: Reverted edits by Masterupc (talk) to last revision by Cthaeh

2018-03-28T15:28:47Z

Reverted edits by Masterupc (talk) to last revision by Cthaeh

2018-03-26T02:26:43Z

punctuation

2014-12-04T02:29:18Z

consistency + a few edits

2014-02-13T22:38:58Z

Part 4

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	Accompanied by vigorous shouts, the sound of slicing wind could be heard.		Accompanied by vigorous shouts, the sound of slicing wind could be heard.

	Peering out by from the side of the cliff, he found a girl swinging a sword, her hair in a ponytail.		Peering out from the side of the cliff, he found a girl swinging a sword, her hair in a ponytail.

	Her body was clad in light armor. Her dark-brown eyes were stern.		Her body was clad in light armor. Her dark-brown eyes were stern.

2014-02-13T22:37:51Z

Part 4

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	Walking along the riverbank, Kamito found a towering cliff.		Walking along the riverbank, Kamito found a towering cliff.

	This was where Claire and the ~~other~~ had battled the «Knights of the Dragon Emperor». The cliff was still littered with the destruction caused by the fight against the dragon spirit.		This was where Claire and the others had battled the «Knights of the Dragon Emperor». The cliff was still littered with the destruction caused by the fight against the dragon spirit.

	"...To think an outdoor bath that could not have been easy to construct, would be virtually destroyed."		"...To think an outdoor bath that could not have been easy to construct, would be virtually destroyed."

2013-08-30T06:23:21Z

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	"Ahhhh..."		"Ahhhh..."

	~~Sliding her <!--shouldn't it be kamito's finger?-->~~finger lightly across her chin, Claire made a cute scream.		As Kamito slid his finger lightly across her chin, Claire made a cute scream.

	"I-If you dare do such a thing, don't expect me to forgiiii... Uwah!"		"I-If you dare do such a thing, don't expect me to forgiiii... Uwah!"

2013-08-29T22:09:43Z

Part 1

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	"Ahhhh..."		"Ahhhh..."

	Sliding her finger lightly across her chin, Claire made a cute scream.		Sliding her <!--shouldn't it be kamito's finger?-->finger lightly across her chin, Claire made a cute scream.

	"I-If you dare do such a thing, don't expect me to forgiiii... Uwah!"		"I-If you dare do such a thing, don't expect me to forgiiii... Uwah!"

2013-06-21T09:41:33Z

changed name from Gio Inzaghi to Jio Inzagi

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	Smiling, Restia casually retrieving the «Rupture Division»'s «Magic Stones»<!--魔石-->.		Smiling, Restia casually retrieving the «Rupture Division»'s «Magic Stones»<!--魔石-->.

	The «Instructional School's Assassin» ~~Gio Inzaghi~~<!--ジオインザーギ-->, the «Academy's Strongest Spirit Contractor» Velsaria Eva Fahrengart, «Monster» Muir Alenstarl, as well as the «Dragon Knight» Leonora Lancaster... Within a mere month, Kamito had already fought several formidable foes.		The «Instructional School's Assassin» Jio Inzagi<!--ジオインザーギ-->, the «Academy's Strongest Spirit Contractor» Velsaria Eva Fahrengart, «Monster» Muir Alenstarl, as well as the «Dragon Knight» Leonora Lancaster... Within a mere month, Kamito had already fought several formidable foes.

	The experiences of these battles should probably awaken the dormant existence hidden in his body.		The experiences of these battles should probably awaken the dormant existence hidden in his body.

2013-03-04T15:36:44Z

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	...Apparently she called out Kamito's name from her dreams.		...Apparently she called out Kamito's name from her dreams.

	"I am your sword... Your ~~will be done~~..."		"I am your sword... Your wish is my command..."

	Kiss~		Kiss~

2013-03-04T05:29:10Z

Part 1

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	...Apparently she called out Kamito's name from her dreams.		...Apparently she called out Kamito's name from her dreams.

	"I am your sword... ~~Make your wish freely~~..."		"I am your sword... Your will be done..."

	Kiss~		Kiss~