Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume6 Chapter2 - Revision history

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2017-10-18T02:20:37Z

Part 3

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	This was the guide spirit that was released from the seal.		This was the guide spirit that was released from the seal.

	Belonging to the lowest class of spirit, it was only able to perform simple tasks such as leading the way. But due their convenience as ease of use, these spirits were widely used for communications between elementalists.		Belonging to the lowest class of spirit, it was only able to perform simple tasks such as leading the way. But due to their convenience and ease of use, these spirits were widely used for communications between elementalists.

	"The negotiation site is two hours away on foot."		"The negotiation site is two hours away on foot."

Cthaeh: consistency

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consistency

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	"Ellis, give it up. Scarlet doesn't like it when you do that."		"Ellis, give it up. Scarlet doesn't like it when you do that."

	"Mmm... N-~~nothing~~ of that sort! Look, Scarlet and I are really close!"		"Mmm... N-Nothing of that sort! Look, Scarlet and I are really close!"

	"Meow--Meow--!"		"Meow--Meow--!"

Zzhk: Reverted edits by 71.189.214.58 (talk) to last revision by Cthaeh

2015-10-07T05:27:32Z

Reverted edits by 71.189.214.58 (talk) to last revision by Cthaeh

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	"No, Est is a spirit so she's not going to grow up..."		"No, Est is a spirit so she's not going to grow up..."

	As Rinslet caressed Est's head gently, ~~Claire~~ ridiculed her comment.		As Rinslet caressed Est's head gently, Kamito ridiculed her comment.

	"Well I must admit, your cooking skills are commendable. When I restore the Elstein family to greatness once more, I might consider having you as a maid."		"Well I must admit, your cooking skills are commendable. When I restore the Elstein family to greatness once more, I might consider having you as a maid."

71.189.214.58: /* Part 1 */

2015-10-07T04:39:38Z

Part 1

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	"No, Est is a spirit so she's not going to grow up..."		"No, Est is a spirit so she's not going to grow up..."

	As Rinslet caressed Est's head gently, ~~Kamito~~ ridiculed her comment.		As Rinslet caressed Est's head gently, Claire ridiculed her comment.

	"Well I must admit, your cooking skills are commendable. When I restore the Elstein family to greatness once more, I might consider having you as a maid."		"Well I must admit, your cooking skills are commendable. When I restore the Elstein family to greatness once more, I might consider having you as a maid."

Cthaeh: consistency

2014-12-04T02:30:05Z

consistency

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Draconic: changed Rugia to Lugia

2013-06-21T09:42:47Z

changed Rugia to Lugia

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	The «Blade Dance» festival's main battle event -- the «Tempest» had a total of twenty-four teams participating. Based on the reports of the wind spirits sent out to scout, teams were already being eliminated on the first day.		The «Blade Dance» festival's main battle event -- the «Tempest» had a total of twenty-four teams participating. Based on the reports of the wind spirits sent out to scout, teams were already being eliminated on the first day.

	On the other hand, the Quina Empire's «Four Gods», the Holy Kingdom of ~~Rugia~~'s «Sacred Spirit Knights», and various other strong teams had already established secure «strongholds».		On the other hand, the Quina Empire's «Four Gods», the Holy Kingdom of Lugia's «Sacred Spirit Knights», and various other strong teams had already established secure «strongholds».

	Due to failing their nocturnal assault on the first night, Dracunia's «Knights of the Dragon Emperor», one of the major candidate teams for victory, was currently slightly behind. But given their level of power, it did not really count as any major setback.		Due to failing their nocturnal assault on the first night, Dracunia's «Knights of the Dragon Emperor», one of the major candidate teams for victory, was currently slightly behind. But given their level of power, it did not really count as any major setback.

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2013-03-06T12:57:53Z

Part 2

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	Suddenly, Kamito recalled the girl with jade-colored hair he saw at the opening ceremony.		Suddenly, Kamito recalled the girl with jade-colored hair he saw at the opening ceremony.

	Her face had been hidden by a hooded garment, but those pointy ears were definitely the telltale signs of the ~~Elphim~~ race. Born with exceptional skills in presence concealment, many of the ~~Elphim~~ who became elementalists took on espionage duties.		Her face had been hidden by a hooded garment, but those pointy ears were definitely the telltale signs of the Elfim race. Born with exceptional skills in presence concealment, many of the Elfim who became elementalists took on espionage duties.

	"However, we did obtain noteworthy information related to «Team Inferno»."		"However, we did obtain noteworthy information related to «Team Inferno»."

Royaloyalz: Some edits to help improve sentence structure

2013-03-01T05:56:02Z

Some edits to help improve sentence structure

Worker at 07:16, 23 February 2013

2013-02-23T07:16:16Z

Zzhk at 12:12, 1 February 2013

2013-02-01T12:12:04Z

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	Kamito and his group were having breakfast by the riverside.		Kamito and his group were having breakfast by the riverside.

	"Seriously, you should have told us ~~faster~~ that you were just doing sword training."		"Seriously, you should have told us sooner that you were just doing sword training."

	"T-That is so true! I thought, surely..."		"T-That is so true! I thought, surely..."
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	That said, other than the vicinity of their «Stronghold» enclosed by the barrier, virtually everywhere else was blank.		That said, other than the vicinity of their «Stronghold» enclosed by the barrier, virtually everywhere else was blank.

	For example, they still had no idea of the size of the entire grounds.		For example, they still had no idea about the size of the entire grounds.

	"So, let's organize and sum up the information we have on hand."		"So, let's organize and sum up the information we have on hand."
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	Following Claire's question, all eyes were on Kamito.		Following Claire's question, all eyes were on Kamito.

	"Indeed, the probability of a trap is quite high. However, there is value to gained in responding to the offer. In any case, our plans are not set in stone -- whether it's a trap or not, let's just wing it and act according to the situation."		"Indeed, the probability of a trap is quite high. However, there is value to be gained in responding to the offer. In any case, our plans are not set in stone -- whether it's a trap or not, let's just wing it and act according to the situation."

	"If Kamito-san thinks so, I will not object."		"If Kamito-san thinks so, I will not object."
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	"Then Est and I will be enough--"		"Then Est and I will be enough--"

	Kamito placed his hand on Est's head and patted.		Kamito placed his hand on Est's head and patted her.

	"Yes, Kamito. I will protect Kamito."		"Yes, Kamito. I will protect Kamito."
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	Kamito frantically yelled.		Kamito frantically yelled.

	''...Seriously, ~~what~~ are these young ladies always so eager to fight?''		''...Seriously, why are these young ladies always so eager to fight?''

	"...Ah-- Could you girls listen to a little opinion of mine?"		"...Ah-- Could you girls listen to a little opinion of mine?"

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	Rinslet retorted furiously.		Rinslet retorted furiously.

	(...By the way, isn't she getting furious in a rather atypical manner?)		''...By the way, isn't she getting furious in a rather atypical manner?''

	Kamito tilted his head in puzzlement as he watched the two childhood friends quarrel.		Kamito tilted his head in puzzlement as he watched the two childhood friends quarrel.
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	"What I want to know most is information about «Team Inferno», but sadly we don't even know where their «stronghold» is located."		"What I want to know most is information about «Team Inferno», but sadly we don't even know where their «stronghold» is located."

	"Looks like their team harbors ~~a spirit contractor~~ skilled in espionage techniques. All the wind spirits we sent out to scout were struck down."		"Looks like their team harbors an elementalist skilled in espionage techniques. All the wind spirits we sent out to scout were struck down."

	Ellis reported softly with regret.		Ellis reported softly with regret.

	"~~A spirit contractor~~ skilled in espionage techniques, eh..."		"An elementalist skilled in espionage techniques, eh..."

	Suddenly, Kamito recalled the girl with jade-colored hair he saw at the opening ceremony.		Suddenly, Kamito recalled the girl with jade-colored hair he saw at the opening ceremony.

	Her face had been hidden by a hooded garment, but those pointy ears were definitely the telltale signs of the Elphim race. Born with exceptional skills in presence concealment, many of the Elphim who became ~~spirit contractors~~ took on espionage duties.		Her face had been hidden by a hooded garment, but those pointy ears were definitely the telltale signs of the Elphim race. Born with exceptional skills in presence concealment, many of the Elphim who became elementalists took on espionage duties.

	"However, we did obtain noteworthy information related to «Team Inferno»."		"However, we did obtain noteworthy information related to «Team Inferno»."
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	Kamito's gaze fell upon the leather glove covering his left hand.		Kamito's gaze fell upon the leather glove covering his left hand.

	(Restia... What exactly are you planning?)		''Restia... What exactly are you planning?''

	After arriving at this «Ragna Ys», she had contacted Kamito twice.		After arriving at this «Ragna Ys», she had contacted Kamito twice.
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	Currently, the only «Magic Stones» acquired by «Team Scarlet» were the two they took from the Kingdom of Balstan's team. Even if all the members of «Team Scarlet» survived these seven days, lacking sufficient «Magic Stones» would prevent them from advancing to the finals.		Currently, the only «Magic Stones» acquired by «Team Scarlet» were the two they took from the Kingdom of Balstan's team. Even if all the members of «Team Scarlet» survived these seven days, lacking sufficient «Magic Stones» would prevent them from advancing to the finals.

	Gathering a certain number of «Magic Stones» in the opening stage, then rely on the «stronghold»'s defense and wait for the other teams to weaken one another before venturing out to rob them of their «Magic Stones» -- this strategy only sounded good in theory. As for attacking ~~a spirit contractor~~ defending behind a sturdy stronghold, that would be as poor a strategy as trying to besiege a castle with inadequate troops.		Gathering a certain number of «Magic Stones» in the opening stage, then rely on the «stronghold»'s defense and wait for the other teams to weaken one another before venturing out to rob them of their «Magic Stones» -- this strategy only sounded good in theory. As for attacking an elementalist defending behind a sturdy stronghold, that would be as poor a strategy as trying to besiege a castle with inadequate troops.

	"Without any exceptions, none of the teams should be attacking on their own before their «stronghold» is established--"		"Without any exceptions, none of the teams should be attacking on their own before their «stronghold» is established--"
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	"Stirring the most sensation of all is their ace, Milla Bassett."		"Stirring the most sensation of all is their ace, Milla Bassett."

	"...If I remember correctly, participating at the young age of thirteen, she must be the youngest ~~spirit contractor~~ in this festival?"		"...If I remember correctly, participating at the young age of thirteen, she must be the youngest elementalist in this festival?"

	Kamito's question was met with Claire's pouting face.		Kamito's question was met with Claire's pouting face.
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	As expected of the knight hailing from a family of military tradition, Ellis' mindset was immensely practical.		As expected of the knight hailing from a family of military tradition, Ellis' mindset was immensely practical.

	"Furthermore, the «Rupture Division»'s ~~spirit contractors~~ are all reputed to be masters of strong holy spirits. If we manage to forge an alliance, they should prove to be a reliable ally against the darkness spirit mentioned earlier."		"Furthermore, the «Rupture Division»'s elementalists are all reputed to be masters of strong holy spirits. If we manage to forge an alliance, they should prove to be a reliable ally against the darkness spirit mentioned earlier."

	Kamito could not help but cast a glance at his left hand.		Kamito could not help but cast a glance at his left hand.

	Three years ago, Kamito had been caught in a difficult fight against a holy spirit. Indeed, forming an alliance with a team that consisted only of holy ~~spirit contractors~~ would definitely be the most effective way to oppose Restia's machinations.		Three years ago, Kamito had been caught in a difficult fight against a holy spirit. Indeed, forming an alliance with a team that consisted only of holy elementalists would definitely be the most effective way to oppose Restia's machinations.

	"What do you think, Kamito?"		"What do you think, Kamito?"
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	This was the guide spirit that was released from the seal.		This was the guide spirit that was released from the seal.

	Belonging to the lowest class of spirit, it was only able to perform simple tasks such as leading the way. But due their convenience as ease of use, these spirits were widely used for communications between ~~spirit contractors~~.		Belonging to the lowest class of spirit, it was only able to perform simple tasks such as leading the way. But due their convenience as ease of use, these spirits were widely used for communications between elementalists.

	"The negotiation site is two hours away on foot."		"The negotiation site is two hours away on foot."
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	...Indeed, perhaps it really was time to reflect.		...Indeed, perhaps it really was time to reflect.

	(After all, I'm still stuck in the mindset of fighting alone.)		''After all, I'm still stuck in the mindset of fighting alone.''

	Unlike three years ago, Kamito now had comrades who could fight alongside with him.		Unlike three years ago, Kamito now had comrades who could fight alongside with him.
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	Kamito frantically yelled.		Kamito frantically yelled.

	(...Seriously, what are these young ladies always so eager to fight?)		''...Seriously, what are these young ladies always so eager to fight?''

	"...Ah-- Could you girls listen to a little opinion of mine?"		"...Ah-- Could you girls listen to a little opinion of mine?"
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	For some reason, Claire began to sulk and pout.		For some reason, Claire began to sulk and pout.

	(Well, there happens to be one more reason...)		''Well, there happens to be one more reason...''

	Most importantly -- there was the suitability as a negotiator.		Most importantly -- there was the suitability as a negotiator.