Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume6 Chapter3 - Revision history

Cthaeh: consistency

2014-12-04T02:30:26Z

consistency

Royaloyalz: Some edits to help improve sentence structure

2013-03-01T09:45:07Z

Some edits to help improve sentence structure

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	''Uwahwah, seriously, what am I doing!?''		''Uwahwah, seriously, what am I doing!?''

	Due to her ~~unintentional~~ bold behavior, Claire's face went completely red.		Due to her unintentionally bold behavior, Claire's face went completely red.

	===Part 2===		===Part 2===
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	Taking a short break along the way, Kamito and Claire continued making their way through the forest and finally reached the destination.		Taking a short break along the way, Kamito and Claire continued making their way through the forest and finally reached the destination.

	The fire spirit guiding them began to circle in ~~ones~~ spot before some decrepit ruins.		The fire spirit guiding them began to circle in one spot before some decrepit ruins.

	These ruins probably dated back to the distant past, legendary times when the mainland and «Astral Zero» were still uniform -- the mythical age when this shrine was still in use. The walls had virtually all collapsed, and the only reason why it still managed to maintain some of its original shape was very likely thanks to those stone pillars embedded in the ground.		These ruins probably dated back to the distant past, legendary times when the mainland and «Astral Zero» were still uniform -- the mythical age when this shrine was still in use. The walls had virtually all collapsed, and the only reason why it still managed to maintain some of its original shape was very likely thanks to those stone pillars embedded in the ground.
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	Her red hair looked exceptionally seductive when wet.		Her red hair looked exceptionally seductive when wet.

	Illuminated by the glow of the campfire, her supple body displayed ~~beautiful~~ gentle contours.		Illuminated by the glow of the campfire, her supple body displayed beautifully gentle contours.

	As her drenched uniform clung tightly to her skin, the lace patterns of her underwear became vaguely visible.		As her drenched uniform clung tightly to her skin, the lace patterns of her underwear became vaguely visible.
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	"...Wha!?"		"...Wha!?"

	Appearing before his eyes was a scene far too excessively stimulating for boy of his age.		Appearing before his eyes was a scene far too excessively stimulating for a boy of his age.

	Stripped of her uniform, Claire was only wearing a single article of underwear.		Stripped of her uniform, Claire was only wearing a single article of underwear.
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	"A-Ah right, I got it..."		"A-Ah right, I got it..."

	Glared at sharply, Kamito had no choice but nod and agree.		Glared at sharply, Kamito had no choice but to nod and agree.

	Perhaps due to Claire's seductive appearance, his mind was probably in a total state of shock.		Perhaps due to Claire's seductive appearance, his mind was probably in a total state of shock.
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	"Kamito, stop taking action all on your own!"		"Kamito, stop taking action all on your own!"

	Using Flametongue to burn away the ~~tree~~ in the forest, Claire arrived at the battlefield. She shuddered at the sight of the black knight, but instantly she understood the situation and circled around to a position where she could launch a pincer attack in concert with Kamito.		Using Flametongue to burn away the trees in the forest, Claire arrived at the battlefield. She shuddered at the sight of the black knight, but instantly she understood the situation and circled around to a position where she could launch a pincer attack in concert with Kamito.

	"Cough... The male elementalist, as well as the sister of the Calamity Queen..."		"Cough... The male elementalist, as well as the sister of the Calamity Queen..."
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	Intense pain attacked his entire body. Unable to endure for but an instant, he lost consciousness in less than a second.		Intense pain attacked his entire body. Unable to endure for but an instant, he lost consciousness in less than a second.

	Blown flying by the exploding thunder and lightning, Kamito fell down the waterfall.		Blown away flying by the exploding thunder and lightning, Kamito fell down the waterfall.

	"--Kamito!"		"--Kamito!"

Worker at 07:16, 23 February 2013

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Zzhk: /* Part 3 */

2013-02-20T10:32:47Z

Part 3

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	Kamito made his decision. He believed in the power of his most excellent partner, Est.		Kamito made his decision. He believed in the power of his most excellent partner, Est.

	"--~~Merciless~~ Queen of Steel, may you crush all enemies before you!"		"--Dispassionate Queen of Steel, may you crush all enemies before you!"

	"What are you trying to do, Kamito!? Hurry and evade!"		"What are you trying to do, Kamito!? Hurry and evade!"

Cthaeh at 03:59, 4 February 2013

2013-02-04T03:59:03Z

Florza at 12:22, 2 February 2013

2013-02-02T12:22:00Z

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	But to Kamito, Restia was a special existence not only because she was his contracted spirit.		But to Kamito, Restia was a special existence not only because she was his contracted spirit.

	(She gave me light... Or rather, to me back then, she was the ~~incarnation of~~ light itself.)		(She gave me light... Or rather, to me back then, she was the very light itself.)

	Claire did not seem satisfied with Kamito's answer.		Claire did not seem satisfied with Kamito's answer.

Keisanichi at 23:39, 1 February 2013

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	"Eh?"		"Eh?"

	"...O-Of course I'm referring to kissing. How many ~~names~~?"		"...O-Of course I'm referring to kissing. How many times?"

	"W-Why are you asking a question like that!?"		"W-Why are you asking a question like that!?"

Keisanichi at 23:15, 1 February 2013

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	(However, being able to team up with Kamito, truly is...)		(However, being able to team up with Kamito, truly is...)

	In actual fact, the only time when Claire monopolized Kamito ~~were~~ the first few days after they met.		In actual fact, the only time when Claire monopolized Kamito was the first few days after they met.

	Disregarding Kamito's contracted spirit Est, there was Fianna who moved in as Claire's roommate in the female dorms not long after that. On top of that, Kamito was also recruited by the «Sylphid Knights» which meant he had to participate in the Knights' work in addition to their morning meetings, further reducing the time he had for Claire.		Disregarding Kamito's contracted spirit Est, there was Fianna who moved in as Claire's roommate in the female dorms not long after that. On top of that, Kamito was also recruited by the «Sylphid Knights» which meant he had to participate in the Knights' work in addition to their morning meetings, further reducing the time he had for Claire.
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	"Kamito, stop taking action all on your own!"		"Kamito, stop taking action all on your own!"

	Using Flametongue to burn away the tree in the forest, Claire arrived at the battlefield. She shuddered at ~~the~~ the sight of the black knight, but instantly she understood the situation and circled around to a position where she could launch a pincer attack in concert with Kamito.		Using Flametongue to burn away the tree in the forest, Claire arrived at the battlefield. She shuddered at the sight of the black knight, but instantly she understood the situation and circled around to a position where she could launch a pincer attack in concert with Kamito.

	"Cough... The male spirit contractor, as well as the sister of the Calamity Queen..."		"Cough... The male spirit contractor, as well as the sister of the Calamity Queen..."

Koakuma: /* Part 3 */

2013-02-01T19:11:58Z

Part 3

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	However, accompanied by a terrifying roar, the black knight easily snapped Flametongue in two.		However, accompanied by a terrifying roar, the black knight easily snapped Flametongue in two.

	Even though Claire's elemental waffe was capable of ensnaring first class military-use spirits, under this pouring rain, spirits of ~~with~~ the flame attribute could not unleash their full power here.		Even though Claire's elemental waffe was capable of ensnaring first class military-use spirits, under this pouring rain, spirits of the flame attribute could not unleash their full power here.

	Naturally, Claire herself was well aware of that fact. Her efforts were fully intended to play a support role for Kamito.		Naturally, Claire herself was well aware of that fact. Her efforts were fully intended to play a support role for Kamito.

220.255.2.123 at 19:08, 1 February 2013

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	--Suddenly Kamito felt a terrifying sense of chill from behind.		--Suddenly Kamito felt a terrifying sense of chill from behind.

	The girl was pointing to the other side of f the trees -- where a most ominous and frightening presence could be sensed.		The girl was pointing to the other side of the trees -- where a most ominous and frightening presence could be sensed.

	"Kamito..."		"Kamito..."

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	In actual fact, the only time when Claire monopolized Kamito was the first few days after they met.		In actual fact, the only time when Claire monopolized Kamito was the first few days after they met.

	Disregarding Kamito's contracted spirit Est, there was Fianna who moved in as Claire's roommate in the female dorms not long after that. On top of that, Kamito ~~was~~ also recruited by the «Sylphid Knights» which meant he had to participate in the Knights' work in addition to their morning meetings, further reducing the time he had for Claire.		Disregarding Kamito's contracted spirit Est, there was Fianna who had moved in as Claire's roommate in the female dorms not long after that. On top of that, Kamito had also been recruited by the «Sylphid Knights» which meant he had to participate in the Knights' work in addition to their morning meetings, further reducing the time he had for Claire.

	Furthermore, at dinner time every day, Rinslet would "accidentally cook too much" and bring the food to the room to share with everyone.		Furthermore, at dinner time every day, Rinslet would "accidentally cook too much" and bring the food to the room to share with everyone.

	--Ever since the «Blade Dance» festival began, Claire and Kamito's time alone ~~was~~ reduced more and more.		--Ever since the «Blade Dance» festival began, Claire and Kamito's time alone had been reduced more and more.

	(B-But, only now it is different...)		(B-But, only now it is different...)
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	===Part 3===		===Part 3===

	Kamito and Claire equipped their elemental ~~waffe~~ as they ran.		Kamito and Claire equipped their elemental waffen as they ran.

	In this storm, the sound of blades clashing was gradually getting closer.		In this storm, the sound of blades clashing was gradually getting closer.
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	"Your help is not needed!"		"Your help is not needed!"

	"...I see. Oh well, think of this as we starting a blade dance on our own then."		"...I see. Oh well, think of this as us starting a blade dance on our own then."

	As he faced off against the black knight, Kamito calmly assessed the surrounding terrain.		As he faced off against the black knight, Kamito calmly assessed the surrounding terrain.