Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume6 Chapter4 - Revision history

Cthaeh: consistency + a few edits

2014-12-05T00:47:42Z

consistency + a few edits

Futon Lord: Grammar

2014-04-21T05:46:02Z

Grammar

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	However, what was unbelievable was that they were not actually angry with him.		However, what was unbelievable was that they were not actually angry with him.

	"Oh my, this ~~smell~~ really good."		"Oh my, this smells really good."

	Fianna arrived and peered at the soup in the boiling pot.		Fianna arrived and peered at the soup in the boiling pot.

99.19.93.10: /* Part 3 */

2013-07-15T16:37:01Z

Part 3

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	"Let me be clear, naked kneesocks is definitely not my fetish!"		"Let me be clear, naked kneesocks is definitely not my fetish!"

	"~~Be rest~~ assured. I will service you in kneesocks as well."		"Rest assured, I will service you in kneesocks as well."

	"...Eh?"		"...Eh?"

Royaloyalz: Term update

2013-03-03T13:44:10Z

Term update

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	Due to Est and Kamito's contract being in an incomplete state, Kamito was unable to summon her at will from a distance unlike other elementalists.		Due to Est and Kamito's contract being in an incomplete state, Kamito was unable to summon her at will from a distance unlike other elementalists.

	Just as he was about to take out a spirit ~~ore~~ from his uniform's pocket for illumination--		Just as he was about to take out a spirit crystal from his uniform's pocket for illumination--

	"--Did you wake up? Kazehaya Kamito."		"--Did you wake up? Kazehaya Kamito."
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	Instantly, dazzling light filled the interior of the cave.		Instantly, dazzling light filled the interior of the cave.

	Over there was a girl holding a piece of spirit ~~ore~~ for lighting.		Over there was a girl holding a piece of spirit crystal for lighting.

	Her knightly uniform was made of white fabric decorated with red linear designs. Her dark brown hair wavered in the wind.		Her knightly uniform was made of white fabric decorated with red linear designs. Her dark brown hair wavered in the wind.
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	Meanwhile, within the forest «stronghold», Ellis and Rinslet were preparing food.		Meanwhile, within the forest «stronghold», Ellis and Rinslet were preparing food.

	In the stone pile on the riverside, a spirit ~~ore~~ with a sealed flame spirit was glowing red.		In the stone pile on the riverside, a spirit crystal with a sealed flame spirit was glowing red.

	Even though it was raining, thanks to Ellis' barrier of wind, there was no worry of the food getting wet from the rain.		Even though it was raining, thanks to Ellis' barrier of wind, there was no worry of the food getting wet from the rain.

Royaloyalz: Some edits to help improve sentence structure

2013-03-01T10:01:47Z

Some edits to help improve sentence structure

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	"There can be no doubt. He must be the promised child."		"There can be no doubt. He must be the promised child."

	"Unmistakably, he is one who inherited the Demon King's power."		"Unmistakably, he is the one who inherited the Demon King's power."

	All the men fallen on the ground were fairly accomplished assassins with substantial reputations in the underground circuit.		All the men fallen on the ground were fairly accomplished assassins with substantial reputations in the underground circuit.
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	No mistake about it. That was Kamito's partner.		No mistake about it. That was Kamito's partner.

	"This is your sword. Fallen into the riverbed I fished it out of the water--"		"This is your sword. Fallen into the riverbed, I fished it out of the water--"

	Before she finished her sentence, Kamito ~~instant~~ tried to run over--		Before she finished her sentence, Kamito instantly tried to run over--

	"Gwaaaaah!"		"Gwaaaaah!"
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	An alliance with «Team Scarlet» to oppose Nepenthes Lore.		An alliance with «Team Scarlet» to oppose Nepenthes Lore.

	"...Let me consider this a for a bit."		"...Let me consider this for a bit."

	"No problem."		"No problem."
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	"Let me be clear, naked kneesocks is definitely not my fetish!"		"Let me be clear, naked kneesocks is definitely not my fetish!"

	"~~Rest be~~ assured. I will service you in kneesocks as well."		"Be rest assured. I will service you in kneesocks as well."

	"...Eh?"		"...Eh?"
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	"...Wha! Y-You, just now--"		"...Wha! Y-You, just now--"

	"A kiss is necessary to establish ~~and~~ «Oath». You can't possibly not know that, right?"		"A kiss is necessary to establish an «Oath». You can't possibly not know that, right?"

	Milla continued to speak in monotone.		Milla continued to speak in monotone.
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	In the stone pile on the riverside, a spirit ore with a sealed flame spirit was glowing red.		In the stone pile on the riverside, a spirit ore with a sealed flame spirit was glowing red.

	Even though it was raining, thanks to Ellis' barrier of wind, there was no worry of the food getting wet from rain.		Even though it was raining, thanks to Ellis' barrier of wind, there was no worry of the food getting wet from the rain.

	"...It's getting dark."		"...It's getting dark."
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	The trio rushed over to the hell cat spirit who was about to disappear.		The trio rushed over to the hell cat spirit who was about to disappear.

	With the last of its strength, Scarlet pointed its burning tail towards the thicket. Completely exhausted, it dispelled its material body and disappeared in thin air.		With the last of its strength, Scarlet pointed its burning tail towards the thicket. Completely exhausted, it dispelled its material body and disappeared into thin air.

	The three girls hastily pushed aside the shrubbery and found--		The three girls hastily pushed aside the shrubbery and found--

Rizo536: /* Chapter 4 - Milla Bassett */

2013-03-01T08:49:07Z

Chapter 4 - Milla Bassett

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	Calmly, he went over his memories.		Calmly, he went over his memories.

	Rather than the strongest blade dancer of three years ago -- the power of his ~~current~~ weakened state.		Rather than the strongest blade dancer of three years ago --Kamito only had the power of his currently weakened state.

	Claire, Ellis, Fianna, Rinslet... He recalled the faces of these four young ladies.		Claire, Ellis, Fianna, Rinslet... He recalled the faces of these four young ladies.

Resinoid: /* Part 3 */

2013-02-25T22:13:16Z

Part 3

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	Milla's heterochromic eyes blinked repeatedly.		Milla's heterochromic eyes blinked repeatedly.

	"That's right. So don't that anymore. Don't use your body as a tool."		"That's right. So don't do that anymore. Don't use your body as a tool."

	"..."		"..."

Worker at 07:16, 23 February 2013

2013-02-23T07:16:33Z

Show changes

Zzhk: /* Part 4 */

2013-02-13T02:55:47Z

Part 4

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	"B-But even if Kamito is known as the King of Lust, he cannot possibly make a move on a thirteen-year-old, right?"		"B-But even if Kamito is known as the King of Lust, he cannot possibly make a move on a thirteen-year-old, right?"

	"Let me tell you a secret, a few days ago, Kamito-san, he did indeed say he wanted to try a sister ~~threesome~~ with me and my nine-year-old little sister Mireille!"		"Let me tell you a secret, a few days ago, Kamito-san, he did indeed say he wanted to try a sister sandwich with me and my nine-year-old little sister Mireille!"

	...Although this ~~had~~ not actually ~~occurred~~, these delusions were as good as true from Rinslet's perspective.		...Although this did not actually occur, these delusions were as good as true from Rinslet's perspective.

	"W-What did you say!? I am so jeal... Must condemn such indecency!"		"W-What did you say!? I am so jeal... Must condemn such indecency!"

Zzhk at 11:02, 4 February 2013

2013-02-04T11:02:32Z

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	"--Is that so? How I look forward to your performance."		"--Is that so? How I look forward to your performance."

	He did miss the slightly hurt expression that only flashed across the girl's face momentarily--		He did not miss the slightly hurt expression that only flashed across the girl's face momentarily--

	The boy felt a mysterious sense of turmoil stirring within himself.		The boy felt a mysterious sense of turmoil stirring within himself.