Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume6 Chapter5 - Revision history

Rxls: Undo revision 576563 by 137.184.150.121 (talk)

2022-06-15T20:05:40Z

Undo revision 576563 by 137.184.150.121 (talk)

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	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

	Kamito and Milla ~~kissed and~~ left the cave and walked through the forest in the night.		Kamito and Milla left the cave and walked through the forest in the night.

	The area was completely dark. Without the spirit crystal for illumination, he would not have been able to see even his feet.		The area was completely dark. Without the spirit crystal for illumination, he would not have been able to see even his feet.

137.184.150.121: /* Part 2 */

2022-06-15T18:23:37Z

Part 2

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	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

	Kamito and Milla left the cave and walked through the forest in the night.		Kamito and Milla kissed and left the cave and walked through the forest in the night.

	The area was completely dark. Without the spirit crystal for illumination, he would not have been able to see even his feet.		The area was completely dark. Without the spirit crystal for illumination, he would not have been able to see even his feet.

127.0.0.1: /* Part 4 */

2016-08-19T21:36:13Z

Part 4

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	Wielding a great sword, Leonora Lancaster commanded her subordinates as she rushed forward.		Wielding a great sword, Leonora Lancaster commanded her subordinates as she rushed forward.

	As four dragon knights surrounded the black knight who melded with the darkness of the ~~knight~~, Leonora valiantly charged.		As four dragon knights surrounded the black knight who melded with the darkness of the night, Leonora valiantly charged.

	The acute impacts of blades rang out.		The acute impacts of blades rang out.

Zzhk at 01:33, 18 February 2015

2015-02-18T01:33:02Z

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	"Our elemental waffen should have pierced that armor...!"		"Our elemental waffen should have pierced that armor...!"

	Just as ~~the girls~~ captured by the chains ~~were about to lose~~ consciousness--		Just as one girl captured by the chains lost consciousness--

	"~~Damn it~~, ~~you~~ monster -- !"		"Curse you, monster -- !"

	Leonora severed the black chains using the Dragon Slayer.		Leonora severed the black chains using the Dragon Slayer.
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	"U-Understood -- !"		"U-Understood -- !"

	As the Dragon Princess, Leonora~~'s instincts were~~ truly excellent. Simply through several rounds of exchange, she had already realized the aberrant nature of the black knight before her.		As expected of the Dragon Princess, Leonora had truly excellent instincts. Simply through several rounds of exchange, she had already realized the aberrant nature of the black knight before her.

	Nepenthes Lore roared from beneath the armor.		Nepenthes Lore roared from beneath the armor.
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	The black knight's aura seemed far more powerful than before.		The black knight's aura seemed far more powerful than before.

	Yuri's fire dragon spirit Lindwyrm ~~carried~~ her unconscious ~~comrade~~ on its back. The two ~~other~~ dragon knights who were still conscious also mounted their own dragon spirits.		Yuri called her fire dragon spirit Lindwyrm to carry her unconscious teammate on its back. The two dragon knights who were still conscious also mounted their own dragon spirits.

	Seeing ~~them prepared~~, Leonora also ~~had~~ the Dragon Slayer ~~return~~ to the form of the black dragon Nidhogg and swiftly mounted its back.		Seeing they were ready, Leonora also returned the Dragon Slayer to the form of the black dragon Nidhogg and swiftly mounted its back.

	Nepenthes Lore's sweeping demon sword produced jet black lighting on its tip--		Nepenthes Lore's sweeping demon sword produced jet-black lighting on its tip--

	"--Retreat!"		"--Retreat!"
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	At Leonora's command, the Knights of the Dragon Emperor flew away in a well-trained formation.		At Leonora's command, the Knights of the Dragon Emperor flew away in a well-trained formation.

	Immediately, the jet black lightning exploded, destroying trees in the forest without leaving any trace behind.		Immediately, the jet-black lightning exploded, destroying trees in the forest without leaving any trace behind.

	--However, Leonora and her group were already gone.		--However, Leonora and her group were already gone.

AngelicMasterMind: /* Part 4 */

2015-02-17T23:30:22Z

Part 4

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	The black knight's aura seemed far more powerful than before.		The black knight's aura seemed far more powerful than before.

	Yuri's fire dragon spirit Lindwyrm carried her unconscious ~~comrades~~ on its back. The two dragon knights who were still conscious also mounted their own dragon spirits.		Yuri's fire dragon spirit Lindwyrm carried her unconscious comrade on its back. The two other dragon knights who were still conscious also mounted their own dragon spirits.

	Seeing them prepared, Leonora also had the Dragon Slayer return to the form of the black dragon Nidhogg and swiftly mounted its back.		Seeing them prepared, Leonora also had the Dragon Slayer return to the form of the black dragon Nidhogg and swiftly mounted its back.

Cthaeh: consistency + edit

2014-12-05T00:47:49Z

consistency + edit

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Royaloyalz: Term update

2013-03-03T13:44:25Z

Term update

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	Kamito and Milla left the cave and walked through the forest in the night.		Kamito and Milla left the cave and walked through the forest in the night.

	The area was completely dark. Without the spirit ~~ore~~ for illumination, he would not have been able to see even his feet.		The area was completely dark. Without the spirit crystal for illumination, he would not have been able to see even his feet.

	Terrifying spirits of the night were beginning to become active, and the cries of beasts could be heard from the distance.		Terrifying spirits of the night were beginning to become active, and the cries of beasts could be heard from the distance.

Royaloyalz: Some edits to help improve sentence structure

2013-03-01T10:19:35Z

Some edits to help improve sentence structure

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	"Wait a minute, what are you trying to do! You still can't move!"		"Wait a minute, what are you trying to do! You still can't move!"

	Seeing Claire attempting to get up from bed, Fianna scolded loudly ~~uncharacteristically~~.		Seeing Claire attempting to get up from bed, Fianna, uncharacteristically, scolded her loudly .

	"But Kamito fell down a waterfall because he was protecting me..."		"But Kamito fell down a waterfall because he was protecting me..."

Rizo536 at 08:56, 1 March 2013

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	"Guh... Ah..."		"Guh... Ah..."

	Until this point, he had always had the confidence to overcome ~~all~~ training no matter how harsh or deadly.		Until this point, he had always had the confidence to overcome any of his training no matter how harsh or deadly.

	In ~~actual~~ fact, there were many other children who had been brought to this place like him, but they had lost their lives instead.		In fact, there were many other children who had been brought to this place like him, but they had lost their lives instead.

	No one expressed any mourning, sympathy or commendation towards their deaths. To the elders of the «Instructional School», they were simply dismissed as disqualified then tragically abandoned like broken tools.		No one expressed any mourning, sympathy or commendation towards their deaths. To the elders of the «Instructional School», they were simply dismissed and disqualified, then tragically abandoned like broken tools.

	This was the kind of hell where the boy survived.		This was the kind of hell where the boy survived.

	~~And~~ even obtained the power to crush a group of skilled assassins with his bare hands.		He even obtained the power to crush a group of skilled assassins with his bare hands.

	Nevertheless, this was only child's play.		Nevertheless, this was only child's play.
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	"Are you insulting me? --I have no feelings. I am simply a tool for murder."		"Are you insulting me? --I have no feelings. I am simply a tool for murder."

	The boy forced his body to get up despite being covered with wounds.		The boy forced his body to get up despite it being covered with wounds.

	Contrary to his claim, his inner heart was in turmoil.		Contrary to his claim, his inner heart was in turmoil.
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	Kamito tried to reassure her.		Kamito tried to reassure her.

	In ~~actual fact~~, he had undergone combat training in a zero visibility space during his time at the «Instructional School». To a professional assassin, this could be considered a basic combat skill.		In reality, he had undergone combat training in a zero visibility space during his time at the «Instructional School». To a professional assassin, this could be considered a basic combat skill.

	"Blade dancing at night..."		"Blade dancing at night..."
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	Abandoning everything that made him human, a boy who was cultivated as a tool.		Abandoning everything that made him human, a boy who was cultivated as a tool.

	''In that case, this girl is very similar to the orphan at the «Instructional School» -- ''my past self.''''		''In that case, this girl is very similar to the orphan at the «Instructional School» -- 'my past self.' ''

	Perhaps this was one reason why he felt he could not abandon her no matter what.		Perhaps this was one reason why he felt he could not abandon her no matter what.
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	Fianna patted Claire on the head gently.		Fianna patted Claire on the head gently.

	"This is ~~specially prepared~~ sweet medicinal soup. Ah, your favorite, peaches were also added!"		"This is specialized sweet medicinal soup. Ah, your favorite, peaches were also added!"

	Rinslet handed over the hot soup ~~that was~~ still steaming.		Rinslet handed over the hot soup, still steaming.

	"...T-Thank you."		"...T-Thank you."

Morgi: /* Part 2 */

2013-02-24T20:07:55Z

Part 2

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	Kamito and Milla left the cave and walked through the forest in the night.		Kamito and Milla left the cave and walked through the forest in the night.

	The area was completely dark. Without the spirit ore for illumination, he would not have been able to see his feet ~~even~~.		The area was completely dark. Without the spirit ore for illumination, he would not have been able to see even his feet.

	Terrifying spirits of the night were beginning to become active, and the cries of beasts could be heard from the distance.		Terrifying spirits of the night were beginning to become active, and the cries of beasts could be heard from the distance.