Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume6 Chapter6 - Revision history

Cthaeh: consistency + edits

2014-12-05T00:47:56Z

consistency + edits

Royaloyalz: Terms update

2013-03-03T13:41:57Z

Terms update

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	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

	Buried in the ground, the fire spirit ~~ore~~ was glowing red.		Buried in the ground, the fire spirit crystal was glowing red.

	Kamito and Milla were hiding behind a rock, warming themselves. Unlike a campfire, a piece of spirit ~~ore~~ with a sealed fire spirit did not generate flames or smoke, conveniently avoiding detection by others.		Kamito and Milla were hiding behind a rock, warming themselves. Unlike a campfire, a piece of spirit crystal with a sealed fire spirit did not generate flames or smoke, conveniently avoiding detection by others.

	Normally they would have met up with Claire and the rest by now, but due to the dangers of the night forest, they could not continue marching recklessly.		Normally they would have met up with Claire and the rest by now, but due to the dangers of the night forest, they could not continue marching recklessly.
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	"Not a problem. Using a due to be scrapped military spirit to conquer a «stronghold» is worth it."		"Not a problem. Using a due to be scrapped military spirit to conquer a «stronghold» is worth it."

	"But that «Colossus» was provided by the military of the Alphas ~~Empire~~--"		"But that «Colossus» was provided by the military of the Alphas Theocracy--"

	"In any case, it is not a spirit those fellows can keep under control. Rather than expending effort to have it scrapped, we might as well break it through the use of the «Jester's Vise»."		"In any case, it is not a spirit those fellows can keep under control. Rather than expending effort to have it scrapped, we might as well break it through the use of the «Jester's Vise»."

Royaloyalz: Some edits to help improve sentence structure

2013-03-01T10:35:47Z

Some edits to help improve sentence structure

Worker at 07:16, 23 February 2013

2013-02-23T07:16:49Z

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Zzhk: /* Part 1 */

2013-02-19T13:21:01Z

Part 1

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	Kamito and Milla were hiding behind a rock, warming themselves. Unlike a campfire, a piece of spirit ore with a sealed fire spirit did not generate flames or smoke, conveniently avoiding detection by others.		Kamito and Milla were hiding behind a rock, warming themselves. Unlike a campfire, a piece of spirit ore with a sealed fire spirit did not generate flames or smoke, conveniently avoiding detection by others.

	Normally they ~~could~~ have met up with Claire and the rest by now but due to the dangers of the night forest, they could not continue marching recklessly.		Normally they would have met up with Claire and the rest by now, but due to the dangers of the night forest, they could not continue marching recklessly.

	Kamito would have been fine alone but ~~now~~ he was accompanied by a thirteen-year-old girl.		Kamito would have been fine alone but he was currently accompanied by a thirteen-year-old girl.

	"Kamito, aren't you cold?"		"Kamito, aren't you cold?"

	~~Returning~~ to the form of a girl, Est tightly gripped his arm.		Returned to the form of a girl, Est tightly gripped his arm.

	"Ah, I'm fine."		"Ah, I'm fine."

Zakashi at 14:21, 15 February 2013

2013-02-15T14:21:41Z

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	"Ahahaha, you call yourselves representatives participating in the «Blade Dance», and yet all you can do is this?"		"Ahahaha, you call yourselves representatives participating in the «Blade Dance», and yet all you can do is this?"

	On the shoulder of the giant -- the tactical class military~~-use~~ spirit<!--戰術級軍用精靈--> «Colossus», sat a girl with ash gray hair.		On the shoulder of the giant -- the tactical class military spirit<!--戰術級軍用精靈--> «Colossus», sat a girl with ash gray hair.

	The «Instructional School»'s second «Monster» -- Muir Alenstarl.		The «Instructional School»'s second «Monster» -- Muir Alenstarl.
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	Beside her, Lily Flame knelt on the ground, advising anxiously.		Beside her, Lily Flame knelt on the ground, advising anxiously.

	"Not a problem. Using a due to be scrapped military~~-use~~ spirit to conquer a «stronghold» is worth it."		"Not a problem. Using a due to be scrapped military spirit to conquer a «stronghold» is worth it."

	"But that «Colossus» was provided by the military of the Alphas Empire--"		"But that «Colossus» was provided by the military of the Alphas Empire--"

Zzhk at 07:03, 11 February 2013

2013-02-11T07:03:23Z

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	"...A spirit of ritual summoning type eh."		"...A spirit of ritual summoning type eh."

	Certain powerful spirits required summoning by ritual. For example, there was «Team Cernunnos»'s beast ~~pack~~<!--獣群--> spirit. Milla's contracted spirit seemed to be the same. In exchange for great power, much time and energy had to be expended and was therefore unsuited to blade dance duels between individuals.		Certain powerful spirits required summoning by ritual. For example, there was «Team Cernunnos»'s beast swarm<!--獣群--> spirit. Milla's contracted spirit seemed to be the same. In exchange for great power, much time and energy had to be expended and was therefore unsuited to blade dance duels between individuals.

	Illuminated by the glow of swords, the enemies' appearances became clear.		Illuminated by the glow of swords, the enemies' appearances became clear.

Cthaeh at 05:25, 4 February 2013

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	"...Delicious."		"...Delicious."

	"That's really ~~wondeful~~."		"That's really wonderful."

	Kamito exclaimed wryly.		Kamito exclaimed wryly.
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	"A long long time ago, there was a spirit sealed in a lamp at a certain place--"		"A long long time ago, there was a spirit sealed in a lamp at a certain place--"

	Just like the time when Claire hassled him, Kamito began reciting the story he heard from Restia. Instantly, Milla's eyes widened with interest.		Just like the time when Claire hassled him, Kamito began reciting the story he had heard from Restia. Instantly, Milla's eyes widened with interest.

	"...Umm, you don't find this boring?"		"...Umm, you don't find this boring?"
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	A girl's voice came from behind the rock.		A girl's voice came from behind the rock.

	"Even though your team is third, you are representatives from ~~Areisha~~ Spirit Academy after all."		"Even though your team is third, you are representatives from Areishia Spirit Academy after all."

	At the same time, other sounds came from the opposite side. Based on the footsteps there were two people.		At the same time, other sounds came from the opposite side. Based on the footsteps there were two people.
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	"You're not summoning your contracted spirit?"		"You're not summoning your contracted spirit?"

	"My contracted ~~spiirt~~ requires a special summoning ritual. It cannot be performed here."		"My contracted spirit requires a special summoning ritual. It cannot be performed here."

	"...A spirit of ritual summoning type eh."		"...A spirit of ritual summoning type eh."

Chancs at 11:26, 3 February 2013

2013-02-03T11:26:49Z

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	"Est, you don't need to know that sort of term!"		"Est, you don't need to know that sort of term!"

	"Rather than through words, you will teach her using your ~~bodies~~?"		"Rather than through words, you will teach her using your body?"

	"Milla, what on earth are you saying!?"		"Milla, what on earth are you saying!?"

Zzhk: /* Part 1 */

2013-02-03T11:22:24Z

Part 1

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	Kamito served the steaming bread before her.		Kamito served the steaming bread before her.

	"...I will not be bought by food."		"...I will not be bought with food."

	"I'm not buying you with food. This is just thanks for healing me."		"I'm not buying you with food. This is just thanks for healing me."
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	"Clearly the rumors of Kamito's teammates offering their bodies in service to him is true."		"Clearly the rumors of Kamito's teammates offering their bodies in service to him is true."

	"Wait a minute, don't ~~misundertand~~!"		"Wait a minute, don't misunderstand!"

	"Kamito, what does offering their bodies in service mean?"		"Kamito, what does offering their bodies in service mean?"
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	"Est, you don't need to know that sort of term!"		"Est, you don't need to know that sort of term!"

	"Rather than through words, you will teach her ~~with~~ your bodies?"		"Rather than through words, you will teach her using your bodies?"

	"Milla, what on earth are you saying!?"		"Milla, what on earth are you saying!?"

	As Milla's gaze ~~turned~~ more and more severe, Kamito ruefully clutched his head.		As Milla's gaze grew more and more severe, Kamito ruefully clutched his head.

	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

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	"What do you actually mean by that?"		"What do you actually mean by that?"

	"Exactly as the word implies. Because that is existence known as the elementalist."		"Exactly as the word implies. Because that is an existence known as the elementalist."

	"Spirit contractors are not tools. At least, not at the Academy where I go to."		"Spirit contractors are not tools. At least, not at the Academy where I go to."
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	A girl's voice came from behind the rock.		A girl's voice came from behind the rock.

	"Even though your team is third, you are representatives from Areishia Spirit Academy after all."		"Even though your team is third, you are still representatives from Areishia Spirit Academy after all."

	At the same time, other sounds came from the opposite side. Based on the footsteps there were two people.		At the same time, other sounds came from the opposite side. Based on the footsteps there were two people.
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	In the middle of the chaotic and violent swarm of spirits, Kamito was immobilized.		In the middle of the chaotic and violent swarm of spirits, Kamito was immobilized.

	"Those who attempt escape the legion will be caught by the «Shackles of the Criminal». The Sacred Spirit Knights' coordinated attacks are flawless."		"Those who attempt to escape the legion will be caught by the «Shackles of the Criminal». The Sacred Spirit Knights' coordinated attacks are flawless."

	Another knight jeered victoriously.		Another knight jeered victoriously.
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	''I see. As expected of a strong and renowned team--''		''I see. As expected of a strong and renowned team--''

	Kamito silently cursed his dire situation. Using the legion to obscure his view while hiding the capturing type elemental waffe «Shackles of the Criminal» inside -- this was a coordinated attack ~~make~~ use of the compatibility between their contracted spirits.		Kamito silently cursed his dire situation. Using the legion to obscure his view while hiding the capturing type elemental waffe «Shackles of the Criminal» inside -- this was a coordinated attack that made use of the compatibility between their contracted spirits.

	The legion mercilessly attacked Kamito as he stood there unable to move--		The legion mercilessly attacked Kamito as he stood there unable to move--
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	It was the left hand in the jet black leather glove. He could feel a stinging pain from Restia's spirit seal.		It was the left hand in the jet black leather glove. He could feel a stinging pain from Restia's spirit seal.

	"--Very unfortunate for you, ''I am ambidextrous''."		"--Very unfortunate for you, ''but I am ambidextrous''."

	With one arm snagged by the «Shackles», Kamito kicked the ground.		With one arm snagged by the «Shackles», Kamito kicked the ground.
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	"What is it?"		"What is it?"

	"What kind of person is Nepenthes Lore?"		"What kind of a person is Nepenthes Lore?"

	She was well aware that the monster of a black knight was no ordinary human.		She was well aware that the monster of a black knight was no ordinary human.