Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume6 Chapter9 - Revision history

Cthaeh: consistency

2014-12-06T17:13:16Z

consistency

209.129.49.65: /* Part 3 */

2013-07-30T15:59:43Z

Part 3

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	===Part 3===		===Part 4===

	--Those were lost memories.		--Those were lost memories.

Zzhk at 23:49, 15 July 2013

2013-07-15T23:49:52Z

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	"--Still not enough!"		"--Still not enough!"

	Double, triple -- ~~followed by two additional thrusts,~~ a five-hit combo.		Double, then triple -- a five-hit combo delivered with thrusts mixed in.

	Taking advantage of openings in the demon sword of darkness, Kamito attacked in rapid succession as if performing a dance.		Taking advantage of openings in the demon sword of darkness, Kamito attacked in rapid succession as if performing a dance.

99.19.93.10: /* Part 1 */

2013-07-15T17:48:36Z

Part 1

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	"--Still not enough!"		"--Still not enough!"

	Double, triple -- followed ~~with an~~ additional ~~thrust~~, a five-hit combo.		Double, triple -- followed by two additional thrusts, a five-hit combo.

	Taking advantage of openings in the demon sword of darkness, Kamito attacked in rapid succession as if performing a dance.		Taking advantage of openings in the demon sword of darkness, Kamito attacked in rapid succession as if performing a dance.

107.193.8.247: /* Chapter 9 - All-Out War */

2013-07-11T04:12:46Z

Chapter 9 - All-Out War

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	With a crisp shattering sound, a crack appeared on Milla's left eye.		With a crisp shattering sound, a crack appeared on Milla's left eye.

	"Gather upon my battlefield, to ~~swung~~ that sword without reservation -- «Crusaders»!"		"Gather upon my battlefield, to swing that sword without reservation -- «Crusaders»!"

	Then Milla hoarsely expelled this spirit releasing incantation from her throat.		Then Milla hoarsely expelled this spirit releasing incantation from her throat.

Royaloyalz: Some edits to help improve sentence structure

2013-03-01T12:25:00Z

Some edits to help improve sentence structure

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	Ellis and Rinslet screamed.		Ellis and Rinslet screamed.

	~~Complete~~ cut off from any escape route, Kamito's feet were just about to make contact with the darkness--		Completely cut off from any escape route, Kamito's feet were just about to make contact with the darkness--

	"Damn it...!"		"Damn it...!"
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	Kamito smiled fearlessly and swung the sacred sword in his hand.		Kamito smiled fearlessly and swung the sacred sword in his hand.

	"--Don't worry. Given Est and I currently, we ''can slice it apart''!"		"--Don't worry. Given the Est and I currently, we ''can slice it apart''!"

	As the «Demon Slayer» flashed with brilliance, the dark lightning was easily sliced in half.		As the «Demon Slayer» flashed with brilliance, the dark lightning was easily sliced in half.

Worker at 07:17, 23 February 2013

2013-02-23T07:17:14Z

Zzhk: /* Part 3 */

2013-02-20T10:33:21Z

Part 3

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	Still possessing one remaining arm, it swung the demon sword of darkness--		Still possessing one remaining arm, it swung the demon sword of darkness--

	"--You, ~~merciless~~ Queen of Steel, the demon slaying sacred sword!"		"--You, dispassionate Queen of Steel, the demon slaying sacred sword!"

	A spirit language incantation could be heard coming from above.		A spirit language incantation could be heard coming from above.

Zakashi at 14:23, 15 February 2013

2013-02-15T14:23:06Z

Cthaeh at 00:05, 7 February 2013

2013-02-07T00:05:00Z

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	Wielding the demon sword of darkness, Nepenthes Lore blocked this full powered attack.		Wielding the demon sword of darkness, Nepenthes Lore blocked this full powered attack.

	However, Kamito's movements did not end there. Using ~~the~~ the sword hilt as a pivot, he changed postures in midair, taking advantage of the deflection of Nepenthes Lore's blade to land a solid slash on the shoulder.		However, Kamito's movements did not end there. Using the sword hilt as a pivot, he changed postures in midair, taking advantage of the deflection of Nepenthes Lore's blade to land a solid slash on the shoulder.

	With a splatter of viscous dark matter, Nepenthes Lore's massive body shook slightly.		With a splatter of viscous dark matter, Nepenthes Lore's massive body shook slightly.
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	Seeing the massive number of knights filling the surroundings, Kamito muttered in amazement.		Seeing the massive number of knights filling the surroundings, Kamito muttered in amazement.

	The ~~rank~~ of these various knights were all vastly inferior to Fianna's «Georgios».		The ranks of these various knights were all vastly inferior to Fianna's «Georgios».

	However, their numbers were greatly inflated.		However, their numbers were greatly inflated.

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	--How disappointing. Clearly no matter how many more people you gather, none of them can even hold a candle to you alone.		--How disappointing. Clearly no matter how many more people you gather, none of them can even hold a candle to you alone.

	(--Well then, let's see, shall we?)		''--Well then, let's see, shall we?''

	Kamito declared to her in his heart.		Kamito declared to her in his heart.
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	Rumbling, tempestuous magical wind gathered a the tip of the spear -- then she softly chanted the words of release.		Rumbling, tempestuous magical wind gathered a the tip of the spear -- then she softly chanted the words of release.

	"Evil winds<!--凶ツ風 I don't really agree with calling Ellis' wind "evil" but whatever, it's in the terminology (I would suggest inauspicious, ominous, or simply deadly instead)--> -- Go and rampage!"		"Evil winds<!--凶ツ風 I don't really agree with calling Ellis' wind "evil" but whatever, it's in the terminology ''I would suggest inauspicious, ominous, or simply deadly instead''--> -- Go and rampage!"

	Instantly, innumerable blades of wind sliced the ground, blowing the mud of darkness away.		Instantly, innumerable blades of wind sliced the ground, blowing the mud of darkness away.
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	He could not back down from fear now. Even when the opponent was a terrifying monster--		He could not back down from fear now. Even when the opponent was a terrifying monster--

	(...After all, the young ladies are watching me!)		''...After all, the young ladies are watching me!''

	The onslaught of raging blades of wind approached, but Nepenthes Lore easily deflected them with a flash of the demon sword of darkness.		The onslaught of raging blades of wind approached, but Nepenthes Lore easily deflected them with a flash of the demon sword of darkness.

	(--Now is the moment!)		''--Now is the moment!''

	The instant before the mud of darkness invaded the ground again after being blown away...		The instant before the mud of darkness invaded the ground again after being blown away...
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	Nevertheless, his face displayed anxiety.		Nevertheless, his face displayed anxiety.

	(--This won't end if this continues!)		''--This won't end if this continues!''

	Like a mass of shape-shifting darkness, Nepenthes Lore's body immediately regenerated as soon as it was damaged.		Like a mass of shape-shifting darkness, Nepenthes Lore's body immediately regenerated as soon as it was damaged.

	(Furthermore, my divine power is reaching its limits--)		''Furthermore, my divine power is reaching its limits--''

	Terminus Est's brilliance was weakening as it flashed in the dark.		Terminus Est's brilliance was weakening as it flashed in the dark.
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	The repulsive darkness that stole divine power as soon as contact was made, was spreading with astounding speed.		The repulsive darkness that stole divine power as soon as contact was made, was spreading with astounding speed.

	This massive amount did not come simply from the ~~spirit contractors~~ Nepenthes Lore stole divine power from.		This massive amount did not come simply from the elementalists Nepenthes Lore stole divine power from.

	Rather, the monster had amplified its power after making contact with the leylines flowing in the ground.		Rather, the monster had amplified its power after making contact with the leylines flowing in the ground.
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	Kamito's surroundings had turned into a swamp of darkness. As things stood, Kamito's foothold would soon be engulfed as well.		Kamito's surroundings had turned into a swamp of darkness. As things stood, Kamito's foothold would soon be engulfed as well.

	(Even the «stronghold»...)		''Even the «stronghold»...''

	Kamito gnashed his teeth.		Kamito gnashed his teeth.
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	As the «Spirit Seal» on his left hand stung with pain, Kamito heard the transmission of Restia's sweet and beautiful voice.		As the «Spirit Seal» on his left hand stung with pain, Kamito heard the transmission of Restia's sweet and beautiful voice.

	(I...!)		''I...!''

	The approaching darkness surrounded Kamito.		The approaching darkness surrounded Kamito.
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	--Even if it breaks, I don't mind.		--Even if it breaks, I don't mind.

	(Only at this moment, so long as Kamito is protected...)		''Only at this moment, so long as Kamito is protected...''

	With a crisp shattering sound, a crack appeared on Milla's left eye.		With a crisp shattering sound, a crack appeared on Milla's left eye.
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	Via the leylines flowing underground, pure and sacred divine power was continuously poured into him.		Via the leylines flowing underground, pure and sacred divine power was continuously poured into him.

	Although the «stronghold» built by Fianna already carried the function of refilling the divine power of ~~spirit contractors~~, the amount flowing into Kamito from the ground was massive divine power several dozen times that of normal.		Although the «stronghold» built by Fianna already carried the function of refilling the divine power of elementalists, the amount flowing into Kamito from the ground was massive divine power several dozen times that of normal.

	Soon after--		Soon after--
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	Kamito's high speed attacks overwhelmed Nepenthes Lore's regeneration rate, causing the humanoid dark matter to begin collapsing.		Kamito's high speed attacks overwhelmed Nepenthes Lore's regeneration rate, causing the humanoid dark matter to begin collapsing.

	(...This is the end!)		''...This is the end!''

	Gripping Terminus Est tightly, Kamito entered a low attack stance.		Gripping Terminus Est tightly, Kamito entered a low attack stance.
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	Having leapt, Kamito was pushed by the wind released by Ellis' spirit magic.		Having leapt, Kamito was pushed by the wind released by Ellis' spirit magic.

	(...''The way I am now, will I be able to perform the sixteen hit combo''?)		''...''The way I am now, will I be able to perform the sixteen hit combo''?''

	Slashing at Nepenthes Lore's massive body, Kamito smiled fearlessly.		Slashing at Nepenthes Lore's massive body, Kamito smiled fearlessly.

	Not intended to be used against ~~spirit contractors~~, this was a destructive sword technique for destroying massive spirits.		Not intended to be used against elementalists, this was a destructive sword technique for destroying massive spirits.

	Three years ago, taught by the «Dusk Witch» Greyworth, an ultimate secret technique.		Three years ago, taught by the «Dusk Witch» Greyworth, an ultimate secret technique.
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	It was originally a dual wielding sword skill -- nevertheless, Kamito in his current state was able to imitate it.		It was originally a dual wielding sword skill -- nevertheless, Kamito in his current state was able to imitate it.

	(I was only able to master this technique thanks to you, Restia...)		''I was only able to master this technique thanks to you, Restia...''

	The «Demon Slayer» in Kamito's hand gave off light which overwhelmed darkness--		The «Demon Slayer» in Kamito's hand gave off light which overwhelmed darkness--
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	Then she changed -- that was indisputable.		Then she changed -- that was indisputable.

	(But...)		''But...''

	--He could feel it without a doubt.		--He could feel it without a doubt.

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	As an outstanding princess maiden, she could keenly sense the spirit's power through her skin.		As an outstanding princess maiden, she could keenly sense the spirit's power through her skin.

	The tactical class military~~-use~~ spirit -- «Crusaders». The spirit summoned by Milla Bassett was definitely a norm-defying existence.		The tactical class military spirit -- «Crusaders». The spirit summoned by Milla Bassett was definitely a norm-defying existence.

	"Milla, what do you see?"		"Milla, what do you see?"
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	This was for the purpose of using the stronghold's leylines to release the power of the spirit residing in her «Demon Sealing Eye».		This was for the purpose of using the stronghold's leylines to release the power of the spirit residing in her «Demon Sealing Eye».

	Once the «Demon Sealing Eye»'s power was connected to the «stronghold», perhaps the powerful tactical-class military~~-use~~ spirit's power could be drawn out -- that was what Milla considered.		Once the «Demon Sealing Eye»'s power was connected to the «stronghold», perhaps the powerful tactical-class military spirit's power could be drawn out -- that was what Milla considered.

	However, the transfer of a «stronghold»'s control rights was normally not possible. The only reason why the connection succeeded was due to the merits of the former Queen candidate, Fianna.		However, the transfer of a «stronghold»'s control rights was normally not possible. The only reason why the connection succeeded was due to the merits of the former Queen candidate, Fianna.
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	Milla's tiny hand gave off the light of blue-white lightning.		Milla's tiny hand gave off the light of blue-white lightning.

	Transmitting a military~~-use~~ spirit's power through leylines was already an outrageous notion. If this continued, her «Demon Sealing Eye» was at risk of damage.		Transmitting a military spirit's power through leylines was already an outrageous notion. If this continued, her «Demon Sealing Eye» was at risk of damage.

	"...Guh... N-Noble-minded knights of the sacred king--"		"...Guh... N-Noble-minded knights of the sacred king--"
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	"W-What the heck, this is...!"		"W-What the heck, this is...!"

	"Unbelievable, a legion type tactical-class military~~-use~~ spirit...!"		"Unbelievable, a legion type tactical-class military spirit...!"

	Seeing the massive number of knights filling the surroundings, Kamito muttered in amazement.		Seeing the massive number of knights filling the surroundings, Kamito muttered in amazement.