Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume7 Chapter6 - Revision history

Zzhk: Reverted edits by Masterupc (talk) to last revision by Cthaeh

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	Kamito was also very intrigued.		Kamito was also very intrigued.

	"This is called beancurd~~<!-- beancurd is tofu... why use the worst translation? -->~~. It's like pudding that's made from coagulated soybeans. I heard that it comes from Kamito's homeland, so I researched it in books and tried making it."		"This is called beancurd. It's like pudding that's made from coagulated soybeans. I heard that it comes from Kamito's homeland, so I researched it in books and tried making it."

	"This is a specialty from my homeland...?"		"This is a specialty from my homeland...?"
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	Thereby Fianna lost consciousness.		Thereby Fianna lost consciousness.

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Masterupc: notes

2018-03-31T20:05:14Z

notes

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	Kamito was also very intrigued.		Kamito was also very intrigued.

	"This is called beancurd. It's like pudding that's made from coagulated soybeans. I heard that it comes from Kamito's homeland, so I researched it in books and tried making it."		"This is called beancurd<!-- beancurd is tofu... why use the worst translation? -->. It's like pudding that's made from coagulated soybeans. I heard that it comes from Kamito's homeland, so I researched it in books and tried making it."

	"This is a specialty from my homeland...?"		"This is a specialty from my homeland...?"
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	Thereby Fianna lost consciousness.		Thereby Fianna lost consciousness.

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Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

2015-11-29T22:03:43Z

reformatting + consistency

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	(...Th-That's right. The first one to fall in love with Kamito-kun is me.)		(...Th-That's right. The first one to fall in love with Kamito-kun is me.)

	--Just at ~~that~~ moment.		--Just at this moment.

	"So you're here, Fianna."		"So you're here, Fianna."
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	"...? Hmm, yes, a little. Why?"		"...? Hmm, yes, a little. Why?"

	~~<noinclude><sub>Is this suppose to be a thought?</sub></noinclude>~~Did the wounds treated earlier this morning rupture again?		Did the wounds treated earlier this morning rupture again?

	"Let's take a walk for a while. Look over there. Isn't there a beautiful spring? When it's nighttime, glowing water spirits will gather."		"Let's take a walk for a while. Look over there. Isn't there a beautiful spring? When it's nighttime, glowing water spirits will gather."

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Part 5

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	"...? Hmm, yes, a little. Why?"		"...? Hmm, yes, a little. Why?"

	<noinclude>Is this suppose to be a thought?</noinclude>Did the wounds treated earlier this morning rupture again?		<noinclude><sub>Is this suppose to be a thought?</sub></noinclude>Did the wounds treated earlier this morning rupture again?

	"Let's take a walk for a while. Look over there. Isn't there a beautiful spring? When it's nighttime, glowing water spirits will gather."		"Let's take a walk for a while. Look over there. Isn't there a beautiful spring? When it's nighttime, glowing water spirits will gather."

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2013-03-04T02:18:56Z

Part 5

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	(...Th-That's right. The first one to fall in love with Kamito-kun is me.)		(...Th-That's right. The first one to fall in love with Kamito-kun is me.)

	--Just at ~~this~~ moment.		--Just at that moment.

	"So you're here, Fianna."		"So you're here, Fianna."
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	"...? Hmm, yes, a little. Why?"		"...? Hmm, yes, a little. Why?"

	Did the wounds treated earlier this morning rupture again?		<noinclude>Is this suppose to be a thought?</noinclude>Did the wounds treated earlier this morning rupture again?

	"Let's take a walk for a while. Look over there. Isn't there a beautiful spring? When it's nighttime, glowing water spirits will gather."		"Let's take a walk for a while. Look over there. Isn't there a beautiful spring? When it's nighttime, glowing water spirits will gather."

Royaloyalz: Term update

2013-03-03T13:51:16Z

Term update

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	This was Rinslet's specialty, Laurenfrost style hot pot cuisine.		This was Rinslet's specialty, Laurenfrost style hot pot cuisine.

	Everyone gathered around and sat on the tree stumps around the table. The bubbling and boiling pot was heated by a burning red-hot spirit ~~ore~~ under it. Beside the pot were large amounts of vegetables gathered from the forest, diced and quartered fish, as well as meat from hunted prey.		Everyone gathered around and sat on the tree stumps around the table. The bubbling and boiling pot was heated by a burning red-hot spirit crystal under it. Beside the pot were large amounts of vegetables gathered from the forest, diced and quartered fish, as well as meat from hunted prey.

	"...Hot pot eh. Looks really tasty."		"...Hot pot eh. Looks really tasty."

Royaloyalz: Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences

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Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences

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	"A-Are you okay, Kamito-kun?"		"A-Are you okay, Kamito-kun?"

	Fianna opened ~~wide~~ her dusk-colored eyes and examined Kamito with a worried expression.		Fianna opened her dusk-colored eyes wide and examined Kamito with a worried expression.

	"...!?"		"...!?"
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	"Kamito-kun..."		"Kamito-kun..."

	Fianna spoke softly then she suddenly leaned herself tightly against Kamito.		Fianna spoke softly, then she suddenly leaned herself tightly against Kamito.

	"Fianna?"		"Fianna?"
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	"She's always been like this, as soon as it's hot pot time, she likes to show off..."		"She's always been like this, as soon as it's hot pot time, she likes to show off..."

	"Hot pot is indeed a simple ~~type~~ of cooking, but exactly because it is simple, it is profound. Do not look down on the Laurenfrost's traditional hot pot cuisine!"		"Hot pot is indeed a simple method of cooking, but exactly because it is simple, it is profound. Do not look down on the Laurenfrost's traditional hot pot cuisine!"

	Lady Rinslet crossed her arms and stared at everyone.		Lady Rinslet crossed her arms and stared at everyone.
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	All he knew was that his homeland was an island country on the eastern border, one that did not even have a name.		All he knew was that his homeland was an island country on the eastern border, one that did not even have a name.

	But no matter what, simply her well intentions in making this dish specially for Kamito were ~~very~~ gratifying.		But no matter what, simply from her well intentions in making this dish specially for Kamito were extremely gratifying for him.

	"Rinslet, thank you."		"Rinslet, thank you."
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	"Woah, this is really good!"		"Woah, this is really good!"

	With smooth texture and rich taste, it really was quite delicious.		With a smooth texture and rich taste, it really was quite delicious.

	"I will try it too... Ah, it really is!"		"I will try it too... Ah, it really is!"
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	"E-Eating hot pot together, umm... D-Does it not constitute as indirect kissing?"		"E-Eating hot pot together, umm... D-Does it not constitute as indirect kissing?"
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	"...!?"		"...!?"
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	Kamito made a wry expression as he waved his hand and spoke.		Kamito made a wry expression as he waved his hand and spoke.
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	"Y-Yeah, y-yes that's right, th-this level, i-i-indirect kiss whatever...!"		"Y-Yeah, y-yes that's right, th-this level, i-i-indirect kiss whatever...!"
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	"Just now, Claire went to pick some herbs which are very effective for eliminating fatigue."		"Just now, Claire went to pick some herbs which are very effective for eliminating fatigue."

	"That girl seems to become inexplicably hardworking whenever ~~some~~ gets sick or injured."		"That girl seems to become inexplicably hardworking whenever someone gets sick or injured."

	Claire was clearly ordering Kamito around like a slave all the time, but whenever he got hurt in school matches or anything like that, she always visited him and brought canned peaches.		Claire was clearly ordering Kamito around like a slave all the time, but whenever he got hurt in school matches or anything like that, she always visited him and brought canned peaches.
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	Then he immediately noticed a serious problem.		Then he immediately noticed a serious problem.

	(...Hmm? Then what am I ~~current~~ grabbing in my hand?)		(...Hmm? Then what am I currently grabbing in my hand?)

	Boing boing.		Boing boing.
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	(How childish of me to make matters like this. I must apologize to her later.)		(How childish of me to make matters like this. I must apologize to her later.)

	Just as Fianna thought to herself, she suddenly realized.		Just as Fianna thought this to herself, she suddenly realized.

	(...But isn't this something that cannot be helped?)		(...But isn't this something that cannot be helped?)
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	If she missed this opportunity, another one might not arrive again.		If she missed this opportunity, another one might not arrive again.

	(...On occasion, it should be fine to act according to my feelings in forthright manner, right?)		(...On occasion, it should be fine to act according to my feelings in a forthright manner, right?)

	"Very well. Just for a little while should be okay."		"Very well. Just for a little while should be okay."
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	The youth's tone of voice -- no, the entire voice became completely different.		The youth's tone of voice -- no, the entire voice became completely different.

	"I even attempted to use a bit of mental manipulation magic... But the result is still failure."		"I even attempted to use a bit of mental manipulation magic... But the result is still a failure."

	Immediately, Kamito's figure distorted to take on a girl's appearance.		Immediately, Kamito's figure distorted to take on a girl's appearance.

Zzhk at 14:24, 26 February 2013

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	(If only I could use an «Elemental Waffe»--"		(If only I could use an «Elemental Waffe»--"

	If only she could release an elemental waffe that surpassed the «Seraphim Feathers» of the «Four Gods»'s imperial princess ~~Rinfa Shin Quinas~~, then Fianna would be able to contribute more to the team's combat potential.		If only she could release an elemental waffe that surpassed the «Seraphim Feathers» of the «Four Gods»'s imperial princess Linfa Sin Quina, then Fianna would be able to contribute more to the team's combat potential.

	Fianna resolved herself, shutting her eyes to perform the releasing chant of the elemental waffe.		Fianna resolved herself, shutting her eyes to perform the releasing chant of the elemental waffe.

Zzhk at 14:42, 25 February 2013

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	"I see..."		"I see..."

	Kamito tried clenching both fists and relaxing. Immediately, he felt sharp pain. In his current state, he was probably still ~~unable~~ to ~~use~~ the sword skills ~~back when he was still~~ Ren Ashbell.		Kamito tried clenching both fists and relaxing. Immediately, he felt sharp pain. In his current state, he was probably still unsuited to using the sword skills from his Ren Ashbell days.

	"Fianna, thank you for everything all this time."		"Fianna, thank you for everything all this time."
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	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

	It was ~~evening with~~ the sun ~~beginning~~ to set. The sound of cutlery colliding could be heard.		Night was falling as the sun began to set. The sound of cutlery colliding could be heard.

	Kamito tried to speak to Claire as he helped lay the table.		Kamito tried to speak to Claire as he helped lay the table.
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	"Since you're injured, Kamito-san, you can go take a break, it's fine."		"Since you're injured, Kamito-san, you can go take a break, it's fine."

	"~~If it~~'s just ~~doing the dishes, then~~ it'~~s not~~ a problem at all. As for you, Rinslet, wouldn't a classy lady like you get your beautiful hands wrinkled if you keep washing dishes like this?"		"It's just dish washing so it won't be a problem at all. As for you, Rinslet, wouldn't a classy lady like you get your beautiful hands wrinkled if you keep washing dishes like this?"

	"Fufu, don't worry. My skin won't be wrinkling. Do know that I am Rinslet the Ice Demon, the one with great relations with water spirits."		"Fufu, don't worry. My skin won't be wrinkling. Do know that I am Rinslet the Ice Demon, the one with great relations with water spirits."

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	His hazy field of view gradually expanded. This was apparently the interior of a tent.		His hazy field of view gradually expanded. This was apparently the interior of a tent.

	(Right, I lost consciousness after the blade dance against the ~~«Four Gods»~~...)		(Right, I lost consciousness after the blade dance against the Four Gods...)

	He was presumably carried back by Claire and the girls. In his hazy state of consciousness, Kamito thanked the girls in his heart.		He was presumably carried back by Claire and the girls. In his hazy state of consciousness, Kamito thanked the girls in his heart.
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	(Wait a minute, did my tent ever have a sofa?)		(Wait a minute, did my tent ever have a sofa?)

	Besides, that sort of thing could not possibly have been brought into the ~~«Blade Dance»~~ grounds.		Besides, that sort of thing could not possibly have been brought into the Blade Dance grounds.

	(This sensation is actually...)		(This sensation is actually...)
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	"...!?"		"...!?"

	Before his eyes was a ~~«Divine~~ Ritual ~~Institute»~~ uniform with a bold low-cut design.		Before his eyes was a Divine Ritual Institute uniform with a bold low-cut design.

	Kamito could not tear his gaze from the cleavage between those quivering breasts.		Kamito could not tear his gaze from the cleavage between those quivering breasts.
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	"This is a specialty from my homeland...?"		"This is a specialty from my homeland...?"

	Kamito's childhood memories were very hazy. Because ever since he could remember, he was receiving assassin training at the ~~«Instructional School»~~.		Kamito's childhood memories were very hazy. Because ever since he could remember, he was receiving assassin training at the Instructional School.

	All he knew was that his homeland was an island country on the eastern border, one that did not even have a name.		All he knew was that his homeland was an island country on the eastern border, one that did not even have a name.
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	Claire quietly put down her spoon, cleared her throat and spoke up.		Claire quietly put down her spoon, cleared her throat and spoke up.

	"Everyone should already know, there are only two days left in the ~~«Blade Dance»~~. If you don't want any regrets, then let's fight by giving it all we've got."		"Everyone should already know, there are only two days left in the Blade Dance. If you don't want any regrets, then let's fight by giving it all we've got."

	"Hmm, yes."		"Hmm, yes."
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	"Yeah, we definitely won't give up on winning."		"Yeah, we definitely won't give up on winning."

	Indeed, the endgame was about to begin. In order to seize the initiative in the competition for the few remaining ~~«Magic Stones»~~, they needed to attack teams who were holing up defensively in their ~~«strongholds»~~.		Indeed, the endgame was about to begin. In order to seize the initiative in the competition for the few remaining magic stones, they needed to attack teams who were holing up defensively in their strongholds.

	Furthermore, this applied to other teams as well.		Furthermore, this applied to other teams as well.
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	Despite quarreling with Fianna earlier, Claire now offered care and concern.		Despite quarreling with Fianna earlier, Claire now offered care and concern.

	On further thought, Fianna's exhaustion was only natural. After the ritual dance performance at the blade dance against the ~~«Four Gods»~~, she had to use up divine power to heal Kamito.		On further thought, Fianna's exhaustion was only natural. After the ritual dance performance at the blade dance against the Four Gods, she had to use up divine power to heal Kamito.

	Magic for recovering fatigue did indeed exist, but it was only a temporary effect obtained from the blessing of spirits. Hence, the fundamental solution was still restful sleep.		Magic for recovering fatigue did indeed exist, but it was only a temporary effect obtained from the blessing of spirits. Hence, the fundamental solution was still restful sleep.
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	"Rubia Elstein."		"Rubia Elstein."

	The ~~«Calamity Queen»~~ who betrayed the Fire Elemental Lord and disappeared without trace.		The Calamity Queen who betrayed the Fire Elemental Lord and disappeared without trace.

	Claire hoped to realize through the Blade Dance festival her ~~«Wish»~~ to find out the truth of what happened four years ago.		Claire hoped to realize through the Blade Dance festival her Wish to find out the truth of what happened four years ago.

	Also, there was the question of where her elder sister had vanished to--		Also, there was the question of where her elder sister had vanished to--
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	Beneath the moonlit forest, Fianna was standing all alone.		Beneath the moonlit forest, Fianna was standing all alone.

	Recalling the blade dance against the ~~«Four Gods»~~ this morning, Fianna could not help but sigh.		Recalling the blade dance against the Four Gods this morning, Fianna could not help but sigh.

	(...I must become stronger. I don't want to be everyone's burden any longer.)		(...I must become stronger. I don't want to be everyone's burden any longer.)
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	Bathed under moonlight, the silver-white armor shone brilliantly. The knight bowed his head as if serving a queen.		Bathed under moonlight, the silver-white armor shone brilliantly. The knight bowed his head as if serving a queen.

	The knight spirit, ~~«Georgios»~~, was of course a very powerful spirit. However, in order to fully harness the spirit's power, it was necessary to release the spirit in the form of an ~~«Elemental Waffe»~~.		The knight spirit, Georgios, was of course a very powerful spirit. However, in order to fully harness the spirit's power, it was necessary to release the spirit in the form of an elemental waffe.

	(If only I could use an ~~«Elemental Waffe»~~--"		(If only I could use an elemental waffe--"

	If only she could release an elemental waffe that surpassed the ~~«Seraphim Feathers»~~ of the ~~«Four Gods»~~'s imperial princess Linfa Sin Quina, then Fianna would be able to contribute more to the team's combat potential.		If only she could release an elemental waffe that surpassed the Seraphim Feathers of the Four Gods's imperial princess Linfa Sin Quina, then Fianna would be able to contribute more to the team's combat potential.

	Fianna resolved herself, shutting her eyes to perform the releasing chant of the elemental waffe.		Fianna resolved herself, shutting her eyes to perform the releasing chant of the elemental waffe.
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	"..."		"..."

	"I was puzzling over what you were trying to do -- So it turns out you're forcing a release of an ~~«Elemental Waffe»~~. Are you aware of how dangerous that is?"		"I was puzzling over what you were trying to do -- So it turns out you're forcing a release of an elemental waffe. Are you aware of how dangerous that is?"

	Claire rushed over to her and spoke with a severe expression.		Claire rushed over to her and spoke with a severe expression.

	"The ~~«Elemental Waffe»~~ isn't something that can be trained to use overnight. Forcibly trying to use a spirit according to your will doesn't work because the elemental waffe is supposed to be the optimal equipment manifested after the contracted spirit has completely opened its heart to the elementalist. Plus the fact that you only recovered the power of your spirit contract not too long ago, you should be trying to gradually strengthen your bonds with your spirit instead!"		"The elemental waffe isn't something that can be trained to use overnight. Forcibly trying to use a spirit according to your will doesn't work because the elemental waffe is supposed to be the optimal equipment manifested after the contracted spirit has completely opened its heart to the elementalist. Plus the fact that you only recovered the power of your spirit contract not too long ago, you should be trying to gradually strengthen your bonds with your spirit instead!"

	As members of the nobility who served the imperial family, Ellis and Rinslet were bound by etiquette to hold back on what they could say to Fianna the imperial princess. But since Claire's family had been stripped of their title, she could afford to speak with complete candidness and lack of tact.		As members of the nobility who served the imperial family, Ellis and Rinslet were bound by etiquette to hold back on what they could say to Fianna the imperial princess. But since Claire's family had been stripped of their title, she could afford to speak with complete candidness and lack of tact.
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	(Come to think of it, the first time I met Kamito-kun, it was also in a forest like this...)		(Come to think of it, the first time I met Kamito-kun, it was also in a forest like this...)

	At the time, Kamito had saved Fianna from a berserk dryad's assault, back when he was active as Ren Ashbell, the ~~«Strongest~~ Blade ~~Dancer»~~.		At the time, Kamito had saved Fianna from a berserk dryad's assault, back when he was active as Ren Ashbell, the Strongest Blade Dancer.

	(...That was my first love.)		(...That was my first love.)
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	Fianna instantly calmed down and shook her head.		Fianna instantly calmed down and shook her head.

	"No, it would be dangerous to leave the ~~«Barrier»~~. Even though it's quite a shame--"		"No, it would be dangerous to leave the Barrier. Even though it's quite a shame--"

	After all, the ~~«Blade Dance»~~ was currently in progress. No amount of risk was worth taking no matter how small.		After all, the Blade Dance was currently in progress. No amount of risk was worth taking no matter how small.

	"It's okay, I'm here with you."		"It's okay, I'm here with you."
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	"...!?"		"...!?"

	"--I have come to welcome you, ~~«Darkness Queen»~~."		"--I have come to welcome you, Darkness Queen."

	In that instant, the girl released a flash of lightning from her fingertips--		In that instant, the girl released a flash of lightning from her fingertips--