Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume7 Chapter8 - Revision history

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

2015-11-29T22:05:24Z

reformatting + consistency

Zzhk at 09:06, 10 September 2015

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	The elementalist who had stolen Ren Ashbell's name -- drew a magic circle in the air with flames burning on her fingertip.		The elementalist who had stolen Ren Ashbell's name -- drew a magic circle in the air with flames burning on her fingertip.

	"--Come forth from the furnace of conflagration, ~~«Hell Hound»~~."		"--Come forth from the furnace of conflagration, «Hellhound»."

	From the burning magic circle appeared a hunting hound enveloped in fire.		From the burning magic circle appeared a hunting hound enveloped in fire.

Futon Lord at 19:58, 21 April 2014

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	A certain name surfaced in his mind, one fraught with a complicated past		A certain name surfaced in his mind, one fraught with a complicated past

	The being whose existence was wiped out in the distant past, the Darkness ~~Elmental~~ Lord -- «Ren Ashdoll».		The being whose existence was wiped out in the distant past, the Darkness Elemental Lord -- «Ren Ashdoll».

	An existence whose veracity was still in doubt, why would its name now be--		An existence whose veracity was still in doubt, why would its name now be--

Jesse4lyfe340: /* Part 4 */ "Fufu, this ancient ruin was used in the ancient past as a «Gate» for summoning powerful spirits."... I just added ruin. I felt that the caster was referring the place a former location to bring out spirits.

2014-02-10T06:45:33Z

Part 4: "Fufu, this ancient ruin was used in the ancient past as a «Gate» for summoning powerful spirits."... I just added ruin. I felt that the caster was referring the place a former location to bring out spirits.

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	Fianna suddenly opened her eyes wide.		Fianna suddenly opened her eyes wide.

	"Fufu, this ancient was used in the ancient past as a «Gate» for summoning powerful spirits."		"Fufu, this ancient ruin was used in the ancient past as a «Gate» for summoning powerful spirits."

	Zuzuzu... Zu... Zuzu... Zuzuzuzu...!		Zuzuzu... Zu... Zuzu... Zuzuzuzu...!

81.108.156.65 at 08:23, 19 May 2013

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	Rinslet's eyes widened in a stare.		Rinslet's eyes widened in a stare.

	Ren ~~Asbhell~~ silently summoned a vortex of fire in her hands.		Ren Ashbell silently summoned a vortex of fire in her hands.

	"Let's go, Scarlet!"		"Let's go, Scarlet!"

Zzhk at 13:44, 12 March 2013

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	Suddenly, Ren Asbell exclaimed profoundly.		Suddenly, Ren Asbell exclaimed profoundly.

	"The Elstein's family's ~~«War Princess of the Burning Eyes»~~ eh? A spirit completely unsuited to you in your current state."		"The Elstein's family's «Scarlet Valkyrie» eh? A spirit completely unsuited to you in your current state."

	"...What?"		"...What?"

Carinderyeah: edited type at /* Part 2 */ of Vol. 7 Ch. 8

2013-03-04T07:21:48Z

edited type at Part 2: of Vol. 7 Ch. 8

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	Her tone of voice sounded almost like a teacher lecturing a student.		Her tone of voice sounded almost like a teacher lecturing a student.

	(Is that so, using flames to ~~diorient~~ light around the body--)		(Is that so, using flames to disorient light around the body--)

	Enveloped in fire, a fist landed on Claire's chest.		Enveloped in fire, a fist landed on Claire's chest.

Royaloyalz: Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences

2013-03-03T13:08:12Z

Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences

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	"No matter what, if I had to do it alone, defeating that witch is truly		"No matter what, if I had to do it alone, defeating that witch is truly
	a challenge. Furthermore, this guy here is not the atrocious immoral rogue king as rumored. Having engaged him in battle I have realized this fact."		a challenge. Furthermore, this guy here is not the atrocious immoral rogue king as rumored. Having engaged him in battle, I have realized this fact."

	"Hmm, if Shao says so."		"Hmm, if Shao says so."
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	"Carrying out «Elemental Waffe» releasing training on her own? That's way too dangerous!"		"Carrying out «Elemental Waffe» releasing training on her own? That's way too dangerous!"

	"That's right. However, it's not like I can't understand Fianna's impatience. Even myself, I once went through a period of anxiety when I sought power in order to participate in the «Blade Dance»."		"That's right. However, it's not like I can't understand Fianna's impatience. Even for myself, I once went through a period of anxiety when I sought power in order to participate in the «Blade Dance»."

	Claire recalled what happened two months earlier. Due to her excessive desire for power, the time when she made her bid for the dangerous sealed spirit.		Claire recalled what happened two months earlier. Due to her excessive desire for power, the time when she made her bid for the dangerous sealed spirit.
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	(...Did Kamito ever go through such a phase?)		(...Did Kamito ever go through such a phase?)

	During the blade dance ~~agains~~ the «Four Gods», he had exhibited overwhelming skills in blade dance.		During the blade dance against the «Four Gods», he had exhibited overwhelming skills in blade dance.

	Once that level of power had been achieved, there was probably no need for this sort of worrying?		Once that level of power had been achieved, there was probably no need for this sort of worrying?
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	Ren Ashbell nodded to herself as if she figured out something.		Ren Ashbell nodded to herself as if she figured out something.

	"Did the witch intend to steal a march -- or perhaps, it was under the orders of the Alphas ~~Empire~~'s «Snake»?"		"Did the witch intend to steal a march -- or perhaps, it was under the orders of the Alphas Theocracy's «Snake»?"

	"Stop pretending you're unaware of it!"		"Stop pretending you're unaware of it!"
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	With a barely audible voice, Claire spoke to her childhood friend, then immediately--		With a barely audible voice, Claire spoke to her childhood friend, then immediately--

	She turned to face the strongest blade dancer who emanated a ~~terrifying~~ oppressive aura simply by standing there.		She turned to face the strongest blade dancer who emanated a terrifyingly oppressive aura simply by standing there.

	No chance for victory. Also impossible to flee.		No chance for victory. Also impossible to flee.
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	"...Im... possible...!"		"...Im... possible...!"

	"Whether skill in spirit magic or the absolute amount of divine power, you two are both inferior. Even if you use the same magic, a difference in power is only inevitable."		"Whether it is the skill in spirit magic or the absolute amount of divine power, you two are both inferior. Even if you use the same magic, a difference in power is only inevitable."

	"Guh..."		"Guh..."
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	"..."		"..."

	Left behind, Kamito activated healing spirit ~~ores~~ and had the girls clasp them in their hands.		Left behind, Kamito activated healing spirit crystals and had the girls clasp them in their hands.

	As if trying to comfort her, Scarlet was licking Claire's severely burned hands.		As if trying to comfort her, Scarlet was licking Claire's severely burned hands.

All Nighter94: /* Part 4 */ "Caught wind" feels more natural then "Caught scent"

2013-03-02T20:53:43Z

Part 4: "Caught wind" feels more natural then "Caught scent"

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	===Part 4===		===Part 4===

	"Ufufu, looks like they have caught ~~scent~~ of this place."		"Ufufu, looks like they have caught wind of this place."

	In the cave sealed off by viscous darkness--		In the cave sealed off by viscous darkness--

174.3.57.83 at 19:07, 2 March 2013

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	"...Sigh, whatever. Let's hear the rest of your story."		"...Sigh, whatever. Let's hear the rest of your story."

	~~Kamtio~~ sighed deeply and urged Shao to continue.		Kamito sighed deeply and urged Shao to continue.

	Shao nodded.		Shao nodded.