Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume8 Chapter1 - Revision history

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

2015-12-09T04:52:32Z

reformatting + consistency

Zzhk: /* Chapter 1 - Victory Celebration */

2014-08-19T09:27:19Z

Chapter 1 - Victory Celebration

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	Ash blonde hair that stretched down to her waist. Dressed in a jet black dress that seamed to have darkness interwoven, beauty like a carving, and eyes reminiscent of a falcon that shone sharply.		Ash blonde hair that stretched down to her waist. Dressed in a jet black dress that seamed to have darkness interwoven, beauty like a carving, and eyes reminiscent of a falcon that shone sharply.

	"---Greyworth!?" "~~Academy Director~~!?"		"---Greyworth!?" "Headmistress!?"

	Kamito and Claire yelled out at the same time and,		Kamito and Claire yelled out at the same time and,
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	As if happy with watching Kamito's panicked condition, Greyworth chuckled lightly and smiled.		As if happy with watching Kamito's panicked condition, Greyworth chuckled lightly and smiled.

	"It was a joke. As ~~academy director~~, isn't coming to see what my pupils are doing a given?"		"It was a joke. As headmistress, isn't my coming to see what my pupils are doing a given?"

	"I'm sure the «Blade Dance» is also being shown at the academy. What's going on with the academy?"		"I'm sure the «Blade Dance» is also being shown at the academy. What's going on with the academy?"
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	"H, hey!"		"H, hey!"

	"~~Academy Director~~!?"		"Headmistress!?"

	Claire's cheeks flushed red.		Claire's cheeks flushed red.
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	"Yeah?"		"Yeah?"

	"......Umm, what kind of relationship do you have with the ~~academy director~~?"		"......Umm, what kind of relationship do you have with the headmistress?"

	"Y, you wouldn't happen to still be suspicious about what she said about a lover's outing?"		"Y, you wouldn't happen to still be suspicious about what she said about a lover's outing?"

	"That's not it. Come on, you said it before. That you had learned the same sword techniques as Ren Ashbell from the ~~academy directory~~."		"That's not it. Come on, you said it before. That you had learned the same sword techniques as Ren Ashbell from the headmistress."

	"Ahh, that thing......"		"Ahh, that thing......"

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	"Exactly when did you come to know the ~~academy director~~?"		"Exactly when did you come to know the headmistress?"

	"Mm......"		"Mm......"

SirEatALot at 12:22, 4 July 2013

2013-07-04T12:22:01Z

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	==Victory Celebration==		==Chapter 1 - Victory Celebration==
	===Part 1===		===Part 1===
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Draconic: Rao and Hakua

2013-06-22T10:43:31Z

Rao and Hakua

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	"You're holding a party in a fairly cramped place......"		"You're holding a party in a fairly cramped place......"

	~~Lao~~ of «Seiryuu», ~~Haqua~~ of «Genbu» and Rion of «Suzaku» also appeared.		Rao of «Seiryuu», Hakua of «Genbu» and Rion of «Suzaku» also appeared.

	Each of them was carrying many bags of food.		Each of them was carrying many bags of food.
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	In order to face their respective battles, the two exchanged a solid handshake.		In order to face their respective battles, the two exchanged a solid handshake.



	===Part 3===		===Part 3===

Pjs312 at 05:59, 23 April 2013

2013-04-23T05:59:38Z

Show changes

Zzhk: in a self-contained fantasy setting, it makes little sense to use an idiom alluding to Takeda Shingen and Uesugi Kenshin who do not necessarily exist

2013-04-19T00:04:41Z

in a self-contained fantasy setting, it makes little sense to use an idiom alluding to Takeda Shingen and Uesugi Kenshin who do not necessarily exist

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	And then continuing on---		And then continuing on---

	"~~Sending salt~~ to the enemy is a Quina Empire tradition."		"Offering gestures of humanity to the enemy is a Quina Empire tradition."

	"We've brought a lot with us!"		"We've brought a lot with us!"

TheLazyGuy: First change: Original wording was fine. Second change: Better flow, looked at Chinese source. Third change: have had!

2013-03-06T07:21:34Z

First change: Original wording was fine. Second change: Better flow, looked at Chinese source. Third change: have had!

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	~~The time where~~ Kamito and the others' return from that stage was already a while ago.		Kamito and the others' return from that stage was already a while ago.

	Being teleported to the <Divine Ritual Institute>'s grand shrine by means of transportation magic, the one who appeared before Kamito and the others was the <Fire Spirit Maiden> he had been under the care of previously, Reicha Alminas.		Being teleported to the <Divine Ritual Institute>'s grand shrine by means of transportation magic, the one who appeared before Kamito and the others was the <Fire Spirit Maiden> he had been under the care of previously, Reicha Alminas.
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	"This cream puff has raspberries in it. It will serve as a good reference."		"This cream puff has raspberries in it. It will serve as a good reference."

	Gathered in front of the sweet confections, ~~were~~ the girls ~~that were frolicking~~ innocently.		Gathered in front of the sweet confections, the girls frolicked innocently.

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	As Fianna raised a cup of black coffee, she smiled.		As Fianna raised a cup of black coffee, she smiled.

	Yes, thanks to the pro-level cook, Rinslet, the contents of their meals were overwhelmingly extravagant as compared to the other teams, but as expected, they had not been able to have an elegant tea party.		Yes, thanks to the pro-level cook, Rinslet, the contents of their meals were overwhelmingly extravagant compared to the other teams, but as expected, they had not been able to have an elegant tea party.

	"That's true. On top of that, it has been a while since we had a hot bath."		"That's true. On top of that, it has been a while since we have had a hot bath."

	"While in the blade dance field, we made do with purifying in only a small fountain."		"While in the blade dance field, we made do with purifying in only a small fountain."

Royaloyalz: Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences

2013-03-06T06:43:12Z

Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences

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	Kamito and the others' return from that stage was already a while ago.		The time where Kamito and the others' return from that stage was already a while ago.

	Being teleported to the <Divine Ritual Institute>'s grand shrine by means of transportation magic, the one who appeared before Kamito and the others was the <Fire Spirit Maiden> he had been under the care of previously, Reicha Alminas.		Being teleported to the <Divine Ritual Institute>'s grand shrine by means of transportation magic, the one who appeared before Kamito and the others was the <Fire Spirit Maiden> he had been under the care of previously, Reicha Alminas.
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	"This cream puff has raspberries in it. It will serve as a good reference."		"This cream puff has raspberries in it. It will serve as a good reference."

	Gathered in front of the sweet confections, the girls that were frolicking innocently.		Gathered in front of the sweet confections, were the girls that were frolicking innocently.

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	As Fianna raised a cup of black coffee, she smiled.		As Fianna raised a cup of black coffee, she smiled.

	Yes, thanks to the pro-level cook, Rinslet, the contents of their meals were ~~overwhelming~~ extravagant compared to the other teams, but as expected, they had not been able to have an elegant tea party.		Yes, thanks to the pro-level cook, Rinslet, the contents of their meals were overwhelmingly extravagant as compared to the other teams, but as expected, they had not been able to have an elegant tea party.

	"That's true. On top of that, it ~~had~~ been a while since we had a hot bath."		"That's true. On top of that, it has been a while since we had a hot bath."

	"While in the blade dance field, we made do with purifying in only a small fountain."		"While in the blade dance field, we made do with purifying in only a small fountain."
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	"......Is that so."		"......Is that so."

	Her shoulders sunken disappointment, the legendary sword spirit.		Her shoulders sunken with disappointment, the legendary sword spirit.

	"It's not cake, but if you want tofu ice cream, there's some here."		"It's not cake, but if you want tofu ice cream, there's some here."
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	"......So there ~~was~~ some!"		"......So there is some!"

	Est's eyes that had lost their light suddenly regained their brilliance.		Est's eyes that had lost their light suddenly regained their brilliance.
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	"However, we shouldn't be glad just yet. There's still the final battle."		"However, we shouldn't be glad just yet. There's still the final battle."

	"Yes. Moreover, each of the opposing teams' rankings were ~~overwhelming~~ above us."		"Yes. Moreover, each of the opposing teams' rankings were overwhelmingly above us."

	"......That's true."		"......That's true."
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	The one who opened the door and entered was---		The one who opened the door and entered was---

	Platinum blonde hair that shone as it was basked with sunlight. Glassy emerald eyes.		Platinum blonde hair that shone as though it was basked with sunlight. Glassy emerald eyes.

	With a blue ribbon that suited her well, a lovely girl.		With a blue ribbon, that suited her well, a lovely girl.

	Rinslet's youngest sister, Mireille Laurenfrost.		Rinslet's youngest sister, Mireille Laurenfrost.
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	"We've brought a lot with us!"		"We've brought a lot with us!"

	"You're holding a party is a fairly cramped place......"		"You're holding a party in a fairly cramped place......"

	Lao of <Seiryuu>, Haqua of <Genbu> and Rion of <Suzaku> also appeared.		Lao of <Seiryuu>, Haqua of <Genbu> and Rion of <Suzaku> also appeared.
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	Each of them was carrying many bags of food.		Each of them was carrying many bags of food.

	"There's deep fried pork buns and skewered bird. They're famed products of Quina Empire."		"There's deep fried pork buns and skewered bird. They're famed products of the Quina Empire."

	The many foods being heaped upon the table. All of a sudden, the interior of "La Parfait" was permeated with the fragrant smell of grilled meat.		The many foods being heaped upon the table. All of a sudden, the interior of "La Parfait" was permeated with the fragrant smell of grilled meat.
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	"It's the middle of a party, so don't say such uptight stuff."		"It's the middle of a party, so don't say such uptight stuff."

	Linfa's group ~~became~~ sitting down without reservation.		Linfa's group started sitting down without reservation.

	"......~!"		"......~!"
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	"......Whew, I'm stuffed."		"......Whew, I'm stuffed."

	"Even though it was a food from a stall, it was pretty good."		"Even though it was food bought from a stall, it was pretty good."

	Claire who was rubbing her stomach and Fianna who was elegantly wiping her lips with a hankerchief.		Claire who was rubbing her stomach and Fianna who was elegantly wiping her lips with a hankerchief.
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	Maybe because holding hands was immensely embarrassing, Claire's face was beet red.		Maybe because holding hands was immensely embarrassing, Claire's face was beet red.

	But it was necessary with this crowd. If they let go, they end up separated without a doubt.		But it was necessary with this crowd. If they let go, they would end up separated without a doubt.

	(Now then, what to do......)		(Now then, what to do......)
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	Certainly, suddenly touching a girl's cheek might be a breach of manners.		Certainly, suddenly touching a girl's cheek might be a breach of manners.

	Claire puffed in cheeks in an angry manner.		Claire puffed her cheeks in an angry manner.

	......That action was strangely cute.		......That action was strangely cute.

TheLazyGuy: Shao isn't part of the harem!

2013-03-06T03:39:29Z

Shao isn't part of the harem!

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	With that, Shao came over and sat on Kamito~~'s lap~~.		With that, Shao came over and sat next to Kamito.

	The <Four Gods>' ace thrust a grilled chicken skewer into the table and smiled wryly.		The <Four Gods>' ace thrust a grilled chicken skewer into the table and smiled wryly.

All Nighter94: 1 letter :3

2013-03-06T03:14:18Z

1 letter :3

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	And then continuing on---		And then continuing on---

	"Sending salt to the enemy in a Quina Empire tradition."		"Sending salt to the enemy is a Quina Empire tradition."

	"We've brought a lot with us!"		"We've brought a lot with us!"
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	"I met with the <Dusk Witch> four years ago --- immediately after the destruction of the <Instructional School>."		"I met with the <Dusk Witch> four years ago --- immediately after the destruction of the <Instructional School>."


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