Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume9 Chapter1 - Revision history

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

2015-12-10T03:24:24Z

reformatting + consistency

Zzhk: /* Chapter 1 - Entrusted Promise */

2014-08-19T09:34:43Z

Chapter 1 - Entrusted Promise

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	"This is?"		"This is?"

	"After returning to the castle residence, please hand this over to those young ladies in your team. As ~~the Director of~~ the Academy, there are words I'd like to tell those adorable students."		"After returning to the castle residence, please hand this over to those young ladies in your team. As the Academy's headmistress, there are words I'd like to tell those adorable students."

	"...Got it. I will pass it along to them."		"...Got it. I will pass it along to them."
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	"P-Putting that aside, what are you doing here?"		"P-Putting that aside, what are you doing here?"

	"I came to visit the ~~Academy Director~~... So, is she okay?"		"I came to visit the headmistress... So, is she okay?"

	"Yeah, her life is not in danger. But she's currently asleep so don't make too much noise. Oh well, since the healer from the «Numbers» came to treat her, there's nothing to worry about."		"Yeah, her life is not in danger. But she's currently asleep so don't make too much noise. Oh well, since the healer from the «Numbers» came to treat her, there's nothing to worry about."
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	Sitting around the table, the other three teammates called out all at the same time.		Sitting around the table, the other three teammates called out all at the same time.

	"Kamito, how is the ~~Director~~'s condition--"		"Kamito, how is the headmistress' condition--"

	"It's okay. Her life is not in danger."		"It's okay. Her life is not in danger."
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	After waiting for Kamito to catch a bit of a breather, Claire spoke up.		After waiting for Kamito to catch a bit of a breather, Claire spoke up.

	"So, now that Kamito has returned, let us continue our strategy meeting. Although we are greatly worried about the ~~Director~~'s condition, we must now focus our attention on handling tomorrow's final round."		"So, now that Kamito has returned, let us continue our strategy meeting. Although we are greatly worried about the headmistress' condition, we must now focus our attention on handling tomorrow's final round."

	"Yes, that is correct indeed."		"Yes, that is correct indeed."
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	Taking out the sealed envelope from his uniform, Kamito handed it over to Claire.		Taking out the sealed envelope from his uniform, Kamito handed it over to Claire.

	"The ~~Director~~ sent this to us?"		"The headmistress sent this to us?"

	"Yeah. It's probably for mental preparation before the finals or something like that."		"Yeah. It's probably for mental preparation before the finals or something like that."
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	"But, if we don't do it then Kamito-kun will--"		"But, if we don't do it then Kamito-kun will--"

	"Th-That's right, since the ~~Director~~ has said so..."		"Th-That's right, since the headmistress has said so..."

	The group of girls chattered away quietly in discussion.		The group of girls chattered away quietly in discussion.

Royaloyalz: Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences

2013-04-22T06:49:42Z

Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences

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	The location prescribed by the Elemental Lords' oracle was the abandoned city «Megidoa».		The location prescribed by the Elemental Lords' oracle was the abandoned city «Megidoa».

	Even for Fianna who was from the «Divine Ritual Institute», it was her first time ~~to hear~~ of such a place--		Even for Fianna who was from the «Divine Ritual Institute», it was her first time hearing of such a place--

	"The abandoned city «Megidoa» was formerly named the «City of Ivory». Far in the ancient past, it was a city constructed by spirits--"		"The abandoned city «Megidoa» was formerly named the «City of Ivory». Far in the ancient past, it was a city constructed by spirits--"

Rizo536: One word edit, GO!

2013-03-26T18:09:03Z

One word edit, GO!

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	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

	It was late the night before the final round.		It was late in the night before the final round.

	Kamito was sitting in a chair by the sickbed with a grave expression.		Kamito was sitting in a chair by the sickbed with a grave expression.

Zzhk at 08:23, 10 March 2013

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	"There are several hypotheses circulating but most believe there was an exceptionally powerful existence leading the spirits."		"There are several hypotheses circulating but most believe there was an exceptionally powerful existence leading the spirits."

	"A powerful existence ~~stronge~~ enough to oppose the «Five Great Elemental Lords» eh..."		"A powerful existence strong enough to oppose the «Five Great Elemental Lords» eh..."

	Hearing that, the first thing that surfaced in Kamito's mind was--		Hearing that, the first thing that surfaced in Kamito's mind was--

Zzhk at 07:23, 10 March 2013

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	...As expected of the Academy's honors student?		...As expected of the Academy's honors student?

	"One more thing. This ~~is a rumor I heard~~ from the wind earlier--"		"One more thing. This came from whispers of the wind I heard earlier--"

	Ellis spoke up at this point.		Ellis spoke up at this point.

	By "~~rumor from~~ the wind," Ellis was referring to intelligence gathered by wind spirits just as the words implied. Wind spirits had vast movement ranges and amongst the five great attributes they were the most suitable for gathering intelligence.		By "whispers of the wind," Ellis was referring to intelligence gathered by wind spirits just as the words implied. Wind spirits had vast movement ranges and amongst the five great attributes they were the most suitable for gathering intelligence.

	"The representative from the Holy Kingdom of Lugia, Luminaris Saint Leisched of the «Sacred Spirit Knights», has obtained a «Divine ~~Armament»~~ from her home country."		"The representative from the Holy Kingdom of Lugia, Luminaris Saint Leisched of the «Sacred Spirit Knights», has obtained «Divine Armaments» from her home country."

	"...«Divine ~~Armament»~~?"		"...«Divine Armaments»?"

	Claire asked with great surprise. Kamito also felt intrigued.		Claire asked with great surprise. Kamito also felt intrigued.

	Unlike «Elemental ~~Waffes»~~ which ~~are formed~~ from contracted spirits, divine armaments were physical weapons at best.		Unlike «Elemental Waffen» which took form from contracted spirits, divine armaments were physical weapons at best.

	Even if it were a special weapon imbued with the divine attribute, it was still just a weapon.		Even if it were a special weapon imbued with the divine attribute, it was still just a weapon.

Krait at 23:33, 9 March 2013

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	"I came to visit the Academy Director... So, is she okay?"		"I came to visit the Academy Director... So, is she okay?"

	"Yeah, her life is not in danger. But she's currently asleep so don't ~~wake~~ make too much noise. Oh well, since the healer from the «Numbers» came to treat her, there's nothing to worry about."		"Yeah, her life is not in danger. But she's currently asleep so don't make too much noise. Oh well, since the healer from the «Numbers» came to treat her, there's nothing to worry about."

	"...I see, I'm glad to hear that."		"...I see, I'm glad to hear that."

Zzhk: /* Chapter 1 - Entrusted Promise */

2013-03-09T08:46:42Z

Chapter 1 - Entrusted Promise

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	"..."		"..."

	However, Kamito's expression remained unchanged. After all, the only reason why she collapsed was that she exhausted her own power for the sake of letting Kamito inherit the ~~mystic~~ technique of the Absolute Blade Arts.		However, Kamito's expression remained unchanged. After all, the only reason why she collapsed was that she exhausted her own power for the sake of letting Kamito inherit the secret technique of the Absolute Blade Arts.

	After that, Kamito instantly brought the unconscious Greyworth to the «Divine Ritual Institute»'s treatment facility.		After that, Kamito instantly brought the unconscious Greyworth to the «Divine Ritual Institute»'s treatment facility.

Zzhk at 08:46, 9 March 2013

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	Kamito was sitting in a chair by the sickbed with a grave expression.		Kamito was sitting in a chair by the sickbed with a grave expression.

	The current location was the «Divine Ritual Institute»'s treatment facility. Lying on the sickbed was the person once renowned as the strongest elementalist on the continent, Greyworth ~~Cielmais~~.		The current location was the «Divine Ritual Institute»'s treatment facility. Lying on the sickbed was the person once renowned as the strongest elementalist on the continent, Greyworth Ciel Mais.

	"...It's not your fault. Don't look so depressed."		"...It's not your fault. Don't look so depressed."
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	"This is?"		"This is?"

	"After returning to the castle residence, please hand this over to those young ladies in your team. As the ~~principal~~ of the Academy, there are words I'd like to tell those adorable students."		"After returning to the castle residence, please hand this over to those young ladies in your team. As the Director of the Academy, there are words I'd like to tell those adorable students."

	"...Got it. I will pass it along to them."		"...Got it. I will pass it along to them."
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	"P-Putting that aside, what are you doing here?"		"P-Putting that aside, what are you doing here?"

	"I came to visit the Academy ~~Principal~~... So, is she okay?"		"I came to visit the Academy Director... So, is she okay?"

	"Yeah, her life is not in danger. But she's currently asleep so don't wake make too much noise. Oh well, since the healer from the «Numbers» came to treat her, there's nothing to worry about."		"Yeah, her life is not in danger. But she's currently asleep so don't wake make too much noise. Oh well, since the healer from the «Numbers» came to treat her, there's nothing to worry about."
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	Sitting around the table, the other three teammates called out all at the same time.		Sitting around the table, the other three teammates called out all at the same time.

	"Kamito, how is the ~~principal~~'s condition--"		"Kamito, how is the Director's condition--"

	"It's okay. Her life is not in danger."		"It's okay. Her life is not in danger."
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	After waiting for Kamito to catch a bit of a breather, Claire spoke up.		After waiting for Kamito to catch a bit of a breather, Claire spoke up.

	"So, now that Kamito has returned, let us continue our strategy meeting. Although we are greatly worried about the ~~principal~~'s condition, we must now focus our attention on handling tomorrow's final round."		"So, now that Kamito has returned, let us continue our strategy meeting. Although we are greatly worried about the Director's condition, we must now focus our attention on handling tomorrow's final round."

	"Yes, that is correct indeed."		"Yes, that is correct indeed."
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	Taking out the sealed envelope from his uniform, Kamito handed it over to Claire.		Taking out the sealed envelope from his uniform, Kamito handed it over to Claire.

	"The ~~principal~~ sent this to us?"		"The Director sent this to us?"

	"Yeah. It's probably for mental preparation before the finals or something like that."		"Yeah. It's probably for mental preparation before the finals or something like that."
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	"But, if we don't do it then Kamito-kun will--"		"But, if we don't do it then Kamito-kun will--"

	"Th-That's right, since the ~~principal~~ has said so..."		"Th-That's right, since the Director has said so..."

	The group of girls chattered away quietly in discussion.		The group of girls chattered away quietly in discussion.

Zzhk at 03:48, 9 March 2013

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