Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume9 Chapter2 - Revision history

Zzhk at 09:28, 7 March 2016

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	--Within the Kingdom, the most elite team renowned as "Stahl Loewe."		--Within the Kingdom, the most elite team renowned as "Stahl Loewe."

	Their power rivaled the Knights of the Dragon Emperor from ~~Dracunia,~~ the Dragon ~~Empire~~. In terms of team strategies, they were well-matched against the Quina Empire's Four Gods.		Their power rivaled the Knights of the Dragon Emperor from the Dragon Duchy of Dracunia. In terms of team strategies, they were well-matched against the Quina Empire's Four Gods.

	"Well then, to assist the completion of the mission, I have something to give you all."		"Well then, to assist the completion of the mission, I have something to give you all."

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

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reformatting + consistency

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Zzhk at 09:35, 19 August 2014

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	As Kamito frowned, Claire turned around to face Kamito.		As Kamito frowned, Claire turned around to face Kamito.

	"That one, didn't you tell me about it at the theater? How you met the ~~Academy Director~~ four years ago, Kamito. Just tell me the continuation of that story. You promised then that you'd tell me later."		"That one, didn't you tell me about it at the theater? How you met the headmistress four years ago, Kamito. Just tell me the continuation of that story. You promised then that you'd tell me later."

	"..."		"..."

Zzhk at 04:26, 8 May 2014

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	"Th-That's right! Without Father's permission, that kind of thing..."		"Th-That's right! Without Father's permission, that kind of thing..."

	"But my lady, when I reported to ~~Earl~~ Laurenfrost the day before yesterday, he frequently praised Kamito-sama."		"But my lady, when I reported to Margrave Laurenfrost the day before yesterday, he frequently praised Kamito-sama."

	"Carol, y-you, w-what are you talking about~!?"		"Carol, y-you, w-what are you talking about~!?"

Royaloyalz: Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences

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Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences

Zzhk at 10:29, 11 March 2013

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	A nervous atmosphere began to spread amongst the young female knights.		A nervous atmosphere began to spread amongst the young female knights.

	The shining tips of sharp ~~spears~~ -- These were five ~~spears~~ with holy scripture engraved on their shaft.		The shining tips of sharp lances -- These were five lances with holy scripture engraved on their shaft.

	Specially crafted divine armaments -- the «Longinus Copies».		Specially crafted divine armaments -- the «Longinus Copies».

	Forged by top ~~crafters~~ of magical equipment<!--魔装具-->, these were replicas of a legendary class «Magical Equipment».		Forged by top craftsmen of magical equipment<!--魔装具-->, these were replicas of a legendary class «Magical Equipment».

	Due to being physical weapons forged from mithril, they were harder to use compared to «Elemental Waffen». But for experienced elementalists, as soon as divine power was infused into them, they became effective weapons.		Due to being physical weapons forged from mithril, they were harder to use compared to «Elemental Waffen». But for experienced elementalists, as soon as divine power was infused into them, they became effective weapons.
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	"Affirmative!"		"Affirmative!"

	The young female knights nodded simultaneously and gripped their respective «Holy ~~Spear»~~.		The young female knights nodded simultaneously and gripped their respective «Holy Lance».

	<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume9 Chapter1\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume9 Chapter3}}</noinclude>		<noinclude>{{SeireiDance Nav\|prev=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume9 Chapter1\|next=Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume9 Chapter3}}</noinclude>

Zzhk at 22:34, 10 March 2013

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	Lying on the bed in his pajamas, Kamito had already repeated this question to himself an uncountable number of times.		Lying on the bed in his pajamas, Kamito had already repeated this question to himself an uncountable number of times.

	The bed in the room was quite large but even so, squeezing all four young beauties on meant that they could not avoid being in close contact with one another.		The bed in the room was quite large but even so, squeezing all four young beauties on it meant that they could not avoid being in close contact with one another.

	"Ah, mmm... H-Hey, everyone is leaning too close to Kamito!"		"Ah, mmm... H-Hey, everyone is leaning too close to Kamito!"

65.66.158.19: /* Part 2 */

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Part 2

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	Lying on the bed in his pajamas, Kamito had already repeated this question to himself an uncountable number of times.		Lying on the bed in his pajamas, Kamito had already repeated this question to himself an uncountable number of times.

	The bed in the room was quite large but even so, squeezing all four young beauties meant that they could not avoid being in close contact with one another.		The bed in the room was quite large but even so, squeezing all four young beauties on meant that they could not avoid being in close contact with one another.

	"Ah, mmm... H-Hey, everyone is leaning too close to Kamito!"		"Ah, mmm... H-Hey, everyone is leaning too close to Kamito!"
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	Kamito tensed his entire body and yelled out.		Kamito tensed his entire body and yelled out.

	According to Claire, this was apparently a type of ritual magic for ~~recovery~~ Kamito's energy.		According to Claire, this was apparently a type of ritual magic for recovering Kamito's energy.

	Something about being in contact with the bodies of princess maidens would stimulate the circulation of divine power.		Something about being in contact with the bodies of princess maidens would stimulate the circulation of divine power.

Zzhk at 13:15, 10 March 2013

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	This was identical to the ones used in the previous survival battle -- the «Tempest».		This was identical to the ones used in the previous survival battle -- the «Tempest».

	Since the field was surrounded by an ~~absolute~~ barrier established by the «Elemental Lords», there was no way to leave through ordinary means.		Since the field was surrounded by an isolation barrier established by the «Elemental Lords», there was no way to leave through ordinary means.

	Once transported inside, an elementalist could only exit the field if their «Magic Stone» was taken or damaged -- in other words, a defeat in the blade dance.		Once transported inside, an elementalist could only exit the field if their «Magic Stone» was taken or damaged -- in other words, a defeat in the blade dance.

Zzhk at 11:45, 10 March 2013

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	...In theory, it was basically something like that.		...In theory, it was basically something like that.

	Of course, ~~relying on theory alone~~ it was impossible to learn a sword technique.		Of course, it was impossible to learn a sword technique by relying on theory alone.

	Even though Kamito was born with exceptional talent in analyzing combat techniques, trying to master overnight an understanding of ritual kagura movements was too much of a stretch.		Even though Kamito was born with exceptional talent in analyzing combat techniques, trying to master overnight an understanding of ritual kagura movements was too much of a stretch.

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	(...That letter, what did it actually contain?)		(...That letter, what did it actually contain?)

	Driven out of by the young ladies and having returned to his room, Kamito leaned Est against the wall and laid himself down on the bed, still wearing his uniform.		Driven out of the room by the young ladies and having returned to his room, Kamito leaned Est against the wall and laid himself down on the bed, still wearing his uniform.

	(...Oh well, whatever. Speaking of which, today sure was tiring.)		(...Oh well, whatever. Speaking of which, today sure was tiring.)
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	Of course, it was impossible to learn a sword technique by relying on theory alone.		Of course, it was impossible to learn a sword technique by relying on theory alone.

	Even though Kamito was born with exceptional talent in analyzing combat techniques, trying to master ~~overnight~~ an understanding of ritual kagura movements was too much of a stretch.		Even though Kamito was born with exceptional talent in analyzing combat techniques, trying to master an understanding of ritual kagura movements overnight was too much of a stretch.

	Greyworth had also mentioned that the sword technique was a double-edged sword. Depending on the situation, it would be best to avoid using it as much as possible--		Greyworth had also mentioned that the sword technique was a double-edged sword. Depending on the situation, it would be best to avoid using it as much as possible--
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	The masked elementalist who called herself «Ren Ashbell», just like Kamito three years ago.		The masked elementalist who called herself «Ren Ashbell», just like Kamito three years ago.

	Kamito had faced her in direct combat only once, that time in the forest when he rescued Claire and rest. In just a few rounds of clashing, she had clearly displayed overwhelming strength.		Kamito had faced her in direct combat only once, that time in the forest when he rescued Claire and the rest. In just a few rounds of clashing, she had clearly displayed overwhelming strength.

	Furthermore, she had not even released her «Elemental Waffe» back then.		Furthermore, she had not even released her «Elemental Waffe» back then.
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	Kamito gulped.		Kamito gulped.

	He was currently alone in the same room as a beauty in a nightgown.		He was currently alone in the same room with a beauty in a nightgown.

	...No wait, although they shared a room back in the Academy residence, there was never a time when they sat on the same bed like this.		...No wait, although they shared a room back in the Academy residence, there was never a time when they sat on the same bed like this.
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	"...I'd better go take a shower and purify myself as well."		"...I'd better go take a shower and purify myself as well."

	...In any case, this sort of situation was really terrible for mental health.		...In any case, this sort of situation was really terrible for his mental health.

	In order not to wake Claire and the girls, Kamito quietly got out of bed.		In order not to wake Claire and the girls, Kamito quietly got out of bed.