Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume9 Chapter3 - Revision history

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

2015-12-10T03:27:20Z

reformatting + consistency

KuroiHikari: /* Part 4 */

2013-06-29T09:43:42Z

Part 4

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	Not a spirit. This was an elementalist's presence, emanating intense divine power.		Not a spirit. This was an elementalist's presence, emanating intense divine power.

	"I knew it, you have not recovered from the wounds you sustained ~~during the defeat at~~ Kazehaya Kamito~~'s hands~~, darkness spirit."		"I knew it, you have not recovered from the wounds you sustained when you were defeated by Kazehaya Kamito, darkness spirit."

	"..."		"..."

203.218.214.15: /* Part 4 */

2013-06-29T05:15:35Z

Part 4

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	Not a spirit. This was an elementalist's presence, emanating intense divine power.		Not a spirit. This was an elementalist's presence, emanating intense divine power.

	"I knew it, the wounds you sustained during my defeat at Kazehaya Kamito's hands ~~still have not recovered~~, darkness spirit."		"I knew it, you have not recovered from the wounds you sustained during the defeat at Kazehaya Kamito's hands, darkness spirit."

	"..."		"..."

Pjs312: /* Part 3 */

2013-05-14T05:59:10Z

Part 3

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	In a little alley in the abandoned city where trees grew twisted and misshapen, a girl's screams were heard.		In a little alley in the abandoned city where trees grew twisted and misshapen, a girl's screams were heard.

	Fianna was desperately fleeing from the swarming «Forsaken ~~Spirits>~~ that kept emerging.		Fianna was desperately fleeing from the swarming «Forsaken Spirits» that kept emerging.

	Terrifying shadowy arms were reaching towards her from all directions.		Terrifying shadowy arms were reaching towards her from all directions.

Zzhk at 11:36, 23 April 2013

2013-04-23T11:36:38Z

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	Here was a place completely devoid of life's presence.		Here was a place completely devoid of life's presence.

	Even the presence of spirits, which should be ~~normally~~ widespread throughout the world, was also--		Even the presence of spirits, which should normally be widespread throughout the world, was also--

	"...In any case, it looks like there aren't any enemy teams I'll run into straight away."		"...In any case, it looks like there aren't any enemy teams I'll run into straight away."

Morgi: /* Part 1 */

2013-04-23T10:06:33Z

Part 1

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	Here was a place completely devoid of life's presence.		Here was a place completely devoid of life's presence.

	Even the presence of spirits, which should be normally be widespread throughout the world, was also--		Even the presence of spirits, which should be normally widespread throughout the world, was also--

	"...In any case, it looks like there aren't any enemy teams I'll run into straight away."		"...In any case, it looks like there aren't any enemy teams I'll run into straight away."

Zzhk at 23:53, 26 March 2013

2013-03-26T23:53:57Z

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	Experiencing the dizziness unique to the aftereffects of «Leap», Kamito surveyed his surroundings.		Experiencing the dizziness unique to the aftereffects of «Leap», Kamito surveyed his surroundings.

	Entering his view were the scattered ruins of an ~~astounding,~~ vast city.		Entering his view were the scattered ruins of an astoundingly vast city.

	Monolithic structures resembling shrines stood tall everywhere, or rather, collapsed rubble and debris formed mountains. Strange trees were growing out of the ground, displacing stone tiles, creating a scene like a sea of trees.		Monolithic structures resembling shrines stood tall everywhere, or rather, collapsed rubble and debris formed mountains. Strange trees were growing out of the ground, displacing stone tiles, creating a scene like a sea of trees.
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	If one were to ask what kind of substance could react to an elementalist's divine power, only one answer came to mind.		If one were to ask what kind of substance could react to an elementalist's divine power, only one answer came to mind.

	(These ruins were originally built from ~~the raw material of~~ «Spirit Crystals»!?)		(These ruins were originally built from unrefined «Spirit Crystals»!?)

	Truly incredible -- but based on what he witnessed, it was the only conclusion.		Truly incredible -- but based on what he witnessed, it was the only conclusion.
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	"Indeed, wind elementalists are excellent for gathering intelligence and searching for the enemy. However, whether in the use of spirits or concealment of your presence, you are rather amateur."		"Indeed, wind elementalists are excellent for gathering intelligence and searching for the enemy. However, whether in the use of spirits or concealment of your presence, you are rather amateur."

	(...So my location was ~~tracked down instead~~...!)		(...So my location was found by a reverse trace...!)

	As a knight, Ellis was not an expert in intelligence in the first place. Even though she had undergone training for the sake of the «Blade Dance», it was true that she could improve her flexibility in the usage of wind.		As a knight, Ellis was not an expert in intelligence in the first place. Even though she had undergone training for the sake of the «Blade Dance», it was true that she could improve her flexibility in the usage of wind.

208.87.137.231: More minor edits

2013-03-26T18:46:18Z

More minor edits

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	"Indeed, wind elementalists are excellent for gathering intelligence and searching for the enemy. However, whether in the use of spirits or concealment of your presence, you are rather amateur."		"Indeed, wind elementalists are excellent for gathering intelligence and searching for the enemy. However, whether in the use of spirits or concealment of your presence, you are rather amateur."

	(...So my location was tracked down ~~in reverse~~ instead...!)		(...So my location was tracked down instead...!)

	As a knight, Ellis was not an expert in intelligence in the first place. Even though she had undergone training for the sake of the «Blade Dance», it was true that she could improve her flexibility in the usage of wind.		As a knight, Ellis was not an expert in intelligence in the first place. Even though she had undergone training for the sake of the «Blade Dance», it was true that she could improve her flexibility in the usage of wind.

208.87.137.231: /* Part 1 */

2013-03-26T18:43:08Z

Part 1

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	Experiencing the dizziness unique to the aftereffects of «Leap», Kamito surveyed his surroundings.		Experiencing the dizziness unique to the aftereffects of «Leap», Kamito surveyed his surroundings.

	Entering his view were the scattered ruins of an astounding vast city.		Entering his view were the scattered ruins of an astounding, vast city.

	Monolithic structures resembling shrines stood tall everywhere, or rather, collapsed rubble and debris formed mountains. Strange trees were growing out of the ground, displacing stone tiles, creating a scene like a sea of trees.		Monolithic structures resembling shrines stood tall everywhere, or rather, collapsed rubble and debris formed mountains. Strange trees were growing out of the ground, displacing stone tiles, creating a scene like a sea of trees.
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	If one were to ask what kind of substance could react to an elementalist's divine power, only one answer came to mind.		If one were to ask what kind of substance could react to an elementalist's divine power, only one answer came to mind.

	(These ruins were originally built from the raw ~~stone~~ of «Spirit Crystals»!?)		(These ruins were originally built from the raw material of «Spirit Crystals»!?)

	Truly incredible -- but based on what he witnessed, ~~that~~ was the only conclusion.		Truly incredible -- but based on what he witnessed, it was the only conclusion.

	This abandoned city could have been a massive mine for spirit crystals.		This abandoned city could have been a massive mine for spirit crystals.
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	As if trying to smother Est's words--		As if trying to smother Est's words--

	The «Forsaken ~~Spirits»~~ swarm attacked once again.		The «Forsaken Spirit» swarm attacked once again.

	"...Tsk!"		"...Tsk!"

Zzhk: Undo revision 233956 by 143.167.11.36 (talk) thanks for the cosmetic changes, but unless you do it for all chapters, starting in the middle of a volume is simply out of place

2013-03-13T22:45:53Z

Undo revision 233956 by 143.167.11.36 (talk) thanks for the cosmetic changes, but unless you do it for all chapters, starting in the middle of a volume is simply out of place

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