Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume9 Chapter5 - Revision history

Cthaeh: reformatting + consistency

2015-12-10T03:29:47Z

reformatting + consistency

Royaloyalz: Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences

2013-04-22T08:49:49Z

Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences

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	Readying chilled eggs and a bottle of milk, she used her familiar frying pan to make splendid pancakes with a «Fire» spirit crystal placed on the ground.		Readying chilled eggs and a bottle of milk, she used her familiar frying pan to make splendid pancakes with a «Fire» spirit crystal placed on the ground.

	Then she laid out napkins on the floor and prepared ~~tea ware~~.		Then she laid out napkins on the floor and prepared teaware.

	Always maintaining the composure to enjoy a good cup of tea under any circumstance -- this could be considered one of the Laurenfrost family's precepts.		Always maintaining the composure to enjoy a good cup of tea under any circumstance -- this could be considered one of the Laurenfrost family's precepts.
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	Her past self never considered matters of this sort before--		Her past self never considered matters of this sort before--

	Only recently did she ~~came~~ to realize the joys of having meals together with teammates.		Only recently did she come to realize the joys of having meals together with teammates.

	...Furthermore, cooking for Kamito was also a joy.		...Furthermore, cooking for Kamito was also a joy.

Zzhk: Undo revision 236975 by 208.87.137.231 (talk) do not reverse meanings without confirmation

2013-03-26T23:43:18Z

Undo revision 236975 by 208.87.137.231 (talk) do not reverse meanings without confirmation

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	It was not surprising for a demon tree spirit's poison to include symptoms of fever.		It was not surprising for a demon tree spirit's poison to include symptoms of fever.

	But in that case, although ~~she~~ was ~~bathing to neutralize~~ the poison, ~~this didn't in worsen~~ the symptoms.		But in that case, although bathing was necessary for neutralizing the poison, the symptoms were exacerbated as a result.

	"Do you want to get out first?"		"Do you want to get out first?"
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	"Ellis, what is going on!?"		"Ellis, what is going on!?"

	"D-Dunno why... M-My body, suddenly feels ~~like its~~ burning, huah..."		"D-Dunno why... M-My body, suddenly feels burning hot, huah..."

	"...Could it be that the slower-acting poison is now taking effect!?"		"...Could it be that the slower-acting poison is now taking effect!?"
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	...No emotions could be read from that kind of face.		...No emotions could be read from that kind of face.

	"Those ghosts should all have been famous spirits before they fell to such depravity. However, they are now ~~things~~ without sanity, relying on hatred to exist--"		"Those ghosts should all have been famous spirits before they fell to such depravity. However, they are now beings without sanity, relying on hatred to exist--"

	"..."		"..."

208.87.137.231: /* Chapter 5 - Spirit Weapon */

2013-03-26T19:12:01Z

Chapter 5 - Spirit Weapon

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	It was not surprising for a demon tree spirit's poison to include symptoms of fever.		It was not surprising for a demon tree spirit's poison to include symptoms of fever.

	But in that case, although she was bathing ~~for the sake of neutralizing~~ the poison, this ~~did result~~ in ~~worsening~~ the symptoms.		But in that case, although she was bathing to neutralize the poison, this didn't in worsen the symptoms.

	"Do you want to get out first?"		"Do you want to get out first?"
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	"Ellis, what is going on!?"		"Ellis, what is going on!?"

	"D-Dunno why... M-My body, suddenly feels burning, huah..."		"D-Dunno why... M-My body, suddenly feels like its burning, huah..."

	"...Could it be that the slower-acting poison is now taking effect!?"		"...Could it be that the slower-acting poison is now taking effect!?"
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	...No emotions could be read from that kind of face.		...No emotions could be read from that kind of face.

	"Those ghosts should all have been famous spirits before they fell to such depravity. However, they are now ~~beings~~ without sanity, relying on hatred to exist--"		"Those ghosts should all have been famous spirits before they fell to such depravity. However, they are now things without sanity, relying on hatred to exist--"

	"..."		"..."

Zzhk at 10:49, 14 March 2013

2013-03-14T10:49:26Z

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	"I originally hoped to make this for Kamito-san..."		"I originally hoped to make this for Kamito-san..."

	Readying chilled eggs and a bottle of milk, she used her familiar frying pan to make splendid ~~bacon~~ with a «Fire» spirit crystal placed on the ground.		Readying chilled eggs and a bottle of milk, she used her familiar frying pan to make splendid pancakes with a «Fire» spirit crystal placed on the ground.

	Then she laid out napkins on the floor and prepared tea ware.		Then she laid out napkins on the floor and prepared tea ware.
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	Finishing her after-meal tea, Rinslet breathed out a sigh.		Finishing her after-meal tea, Rinslet breathed out a sigh.

	Beside her, Fenrir remained in proper sitting posture, having already finished eating the ~~bacon~~.		Beside her, Fenrir remained in proper sitting posture, having already finished eating the pancakes.

	"...Somehow it doesn't taste too delicious when eaten alone."		"...Somehow it doesn't taste too delicious when eaten alone."
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	"Huh?"		"Huh?"

	Lying by Rinslet's feet was the frying pan used for preparing ~~bacon~~ just earlier.		Lying by Rinslet's feet was the frying pan used for preparing pancakes just earlier.

	===Part 4===		===Part 4===

2.81.199.203 at 18:22, 13 March 2013

2013-03-13T18:22:20Z

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	Kamito picked up Ellis in his arms and carried her to a location a certain distance away from the center of the abandoned city.		Kamito picked up Ellis in his arms and carried her to a location a certain distance away from the center of the abandoned city.

	~~This~~ seemed to be the ruins of a massive shrine, where the ceiling was supported by stone columns on the verge of collapse.		These seemed to be the ruins of a massive shrine, where the ceiling was supported by stone columns on the verge of collapse.

	Assigning Simorgh to keep watch outside, they stepped into the premises, only to see a spring in the depths of the shrine that was used for divine purification. Although the spring itself had long dried up, a large amount of rainwater had accumulated.		Assigning Simorgh to keep watch outside, they stepped into the premises, only to see a spring in the depths of the shrine that was used for divine purification. Although the spring itself had long dried up, a large amount of rainwater had accumulated.

80.223.220.209 at 17:56, 13 March 2013

2013-03-13T17:56:02Z

80.223.220.209: Undo revision 233967 by Nukie (talk) "channeled" is correct, though "channelled" is also valid

2013-03-13T17:48:57Z

Undo revision 233967 by Nukie (talk) "channeled" is correct, though "channelled" is also valid

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	Because sleeping in wet clothes would catch a cold, she was now in her underwear with Kamito's jacket draped over her.		Because sleeping in wet clothes would catch a cold, she was now in her underwear with Kamito's jacket draped over her.

	Despite the immense difficulties faced when taking her clothes off just as she was falling asleep, Kamito ~~channelled~~ the superhuman self-control he had developed through the «Instructional School»'s training and managed to complete the task without distraction.		Despite the immense difficulties faced when taking her clothes off just as she was falling asleep, Kamito channeled the superhuman self-control he had developed through the «Instructional School»'s training and managed to complete the task without distraction.

	...That said, he did stare once or twice at the impressive contours of her cleavage.		...That said, he did stare once or twice at the impressive contours of her cleavage.

Nukie at 17:46, 13 March 2013

2013-03-13T17:46:14Z

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	Because sleeping in wet clothes would catch a cold, she was now in her underwear with Kamito's jacket draped over her.		Because sleeping in wet clothes would catch a cold, she was now in her underwear with Kamito's jacket draped over her.

	Despite the immense difficulties faced when taking her clothes off just as she was falling asleep, Kamito ~~channeled~~ the superhuman self-control he had developed through the «Instructional School»'s training and managed to complete the task without distraction.		Despite the immense difficulties faced when taking her clothes off just as she was falling asleep, Kamito channelled the superhuman self-control he had developed through the «Instructional School»'s training and managed to complete the task without distraction.

	...That said, he did stare once or twice at the impressive contours of her cleavage.		...That said, he did stare once or twice at the impressive contours of her cleavage.

Zzhk at 13:19, 13 March 2013

2013-03-13T13:19:29Z

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	Because sleeping in wet clothes would catch a cold, she was now in her underwear with Kamito's jacket draped over her.		Because sleeping in wet clothes would catch a cold, she was now in her underwear with Kamito's jacket draped over her.

	Despite the immense difficulties faced when taking her clothes off just as she was falling asleep, Kamito channeled the superhuman self-control he developed through the «Instructional School»'s training and managed to complete the task without distraction.		Despite the immense difficulties faced when taking her clothes off just as she was falling asleep, Kamito channeled the superhuman self-control he had developed through the «Instructional School»'s training and managed to complete the task without distraction.

	...That said, he did stare once or twice at the impressive contours of her cleavage.		...That said, he did stare once or twice at the impressive contours of her cleavage.

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	"--Water spirits, pure and clear, exorcise this filth."		"--Water spirits, pure and clear, exorcise this filth."

	Chanting a spirit language incantation and tossing in a «Purification» spirit crystal~~, this~~ caused the water to bubble instantly and turn clear.		Chanting a spirit language incantation and tossing in a «Purification» spirit crystal caused the water to bubble instantly and turn clear.

	Kamito laid down Ellis into the spring directly in her uniform.		Kamito laid down Ellis into the spring directly in her uniform.
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	Ellis panted painfully.		Ellis panted painfully.

	Although elementalists had better poison resistance than ordinary people due their ~~advance~~ circulatory systems, unfortunately, the demon tree spirit's poison was far too powerful.		Although elementalists had better poison resistance than ordinary people due to their advanced circulatory systems, unfortunately, the demon tree spirit's poison was far too powerful.

	"Ooh... Ka... mito..."		"Ooh... Ka... mito..."
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	"N-No, I should apologize instead. It is just that, I am not used to it, holding a boy's hand..."		"N-No, I should apologize instead. It is just that, I am not used to it, holding a boy's hand..."

	The skin on her hand was as delicate and tender as ladies of nobility. However, due to constant martial training, there were some calluses on her palm.		The skin on her hand was as delicate and tender as that of ladies of nobility. However, due to constant martial training, there were some calluses on her palm.

	"Ah, sob sob... I-I cannot believe I have done something so shameless..."		"Ah, sob sob... I-I cannot believe I have done something so shameless..."
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	It seemed like the aphrodisiac's effects had ended.		It seemed like the aphrodisiac's effects had ended.

	Because sleeping in wet clothes would ~~catch~~ a cold, she was now in her underwear with Kamito's jacket draped over her.		Because sleeping in wet clothes would result in catching a cold, she was now in her underwear with Kamito's jacket draped over her.

	Despite the immense difficulties faced when taking her clothes off just as she was falling asleep, Kamito channeled the superhuman self-control he had developed through the «Instructional School»'s training and managed to complete the task without distraction.		Despite the immense difficulties faced when taking her clothes off just as she was falling asleep, Kamito channeled the superhuman self-control he had developed through the «Instructional School»'s training and managed to complete the task without distraction.
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	...No emotions could be read from that kind of face.		...No emotions could be read from that kind of face.

	"Those ghosts should all be famous spirits before they fell to such depravity. However, they are now beings without sanity, relying on hatred to exist--"		"Those ghosts should all have been famous spirits before they fell to such depravity. However, they are now beings without sanity, relying on hatred to exist--"

	"..."		"..."
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	In any case, she had already walked for several hours.		In any case, she had already walked for several hours.

	Even ~~for~~ a trained elementalist, her stamina was reaching a limit.		Even though she was a trained elementalist, her stamina was reaching a limit.

	Fenrir caressed its master's feet with its furry tail.		Fenrir caressed its master's feet with its furry tail.
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	Finishing her after-meal tea, Rinslet breathed out a sigh.		Finishing her after-meal tea, Rinslet breathed out a sigh.

	Beside her, Fenrir remained in proper sitting posture, already finished eating the bacon.		Beside her, Fenrir remained in proper sitting posture, having already finished eating the bacon.

	"...Somehow it doesn't taste too delicious when eaten alone."		"...Somehow it doesn't taste too delicious when eaten alone."
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	Even though the words on the stone wall differed from contemporary script, it was still readable.		Even though the words on the stone wall differed from contemporary script, it was still readable.

	Were it written in «High Ancient» that was taught only to high ranking princess maidens, it would have been a completely matter. But this degree of difficulty was still within Rinslet's ability to manage.		Were it written in «High Ancient» that was taught only to high ranking princess maidens, it would have been a completely different matter. But this degree of difficulty was still within Rinslet's ability to manage.

	"Fenrir, take out the spirit language dictionary."		"Fenrir, take out the spirit language dictionary."
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	Lily Flame nodded as she answered the gray-haired girl's question.		Lily Flame nodded as she answered the gray-haired girl's question.

	~~This was~~ the same ruins where she had battled Ellis earlier.		These were the same ruins where she had battled Ellis earlier.

	There were still several large holes dug out by the demon tree spirit in the ground.		There were still several large holes dug out by the demon tree spirit in the ground.
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	Muir Alenstarl lightly jumped off a collapsed wall of stone.		Muir Alenstarl lightly jumped off a collapsed wall of stone.

	"Then let me turn this area in a wasteland, then he'll be found."		"Then let me turn this area into a wasteland, then he'll be found."

	"Muir!"		"Muir!"
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	However, «Valaraukar» had a major shortcoming -- or rather, flaw.		However, «Valaraukar» had a major shortcoming -- or rather, flaw.

	The astounding power released by the spirit ~~will~~ attract «Forsaken Spirits» from the area.		The astounding power released by the spirit would attract «Forsaken Spirits» from the area.

	Ghosts appearing from all over the abandoned city rushed forth and attacked recklessly as if attracted by «Valaraukar», perishing in the crimson flames.		Ghosts appearing from all over the abandoned city rushed forth and attacked recklessly as if attracted by «Valaraukar», perishing in the crimson flames.